人教版Book 4 unit 1 writing 人物介绍
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 Writing (共22张PPT)
近视眼的 near- sighted
高的
tall
矮的 short
漂亮的 pretty
淘气的 naughty
可爱的 lovely 温和宽容的 easy - going
精明的 smart
明智的 wise
聪明的 clever
勤奋的 diligent
健康的 healthy
幽默的 humorous
滑稽的 funny
I suggest that you visit the Great Wall which has a history of more than two thousand years.
五、美文赏析 文章介绍了: 恰当使用同位语结构，使文章简洁通顺 钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一
Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.
2.总结: 巧用with做定语或状语
Welcome to our class
Writing
人物介绍
人物介绍
一、介绍内容 1.概况age, sex, birthday, birthplace 2.外貌性格appearance and character 3.教育 education 4.生平big events in his or her time (in order of time) 5.成就评价achievement and evaluation
李红是个漂亮的女孩，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发
Li Hong is a beautiful girl with two big eyes and long hair.
新人教必修4 Unit1 Writing
训练案
写作练习：
假如你是班长, 根据下列提示写一篇人物介绍,向即 将到来的一个美国代表团介绍你的化学老师 Hanson 要点如下:1.这位老师名叫 Hanson, 50 岁左右, 又矮又瘦,戴着一副深度近视眼镜; 2.对 学生要求严格,认真备课,认真批改作业 3.教学 方法不同于别人,课上得很生动. 鼓励学生思考, 培养学生自学能力. 4.常和学生一起进行体育活 动,和蔼可亲,深受学生的爱戴和尊重. 要求: 1. 要有标题. 2.介绍必须包括所给要点,但 不要逐条译成英语. 3. 词数110 左右.
常见可运用句型：
1.sb. is considered to be one of the greatest ... 2.Well known as ..., he ... 3.Born in a poor family, he had to ... 4.When he was a small boy, he showed a great interest in ... 5.Thanks to the help of ..., he was able to continue his education.
Homework
Finish the exercises in USING
STRUCTURES on Page 43.
one possible version: Our chemistry teacher---Hanson Hanson is our chemistry teacher. He is about 50 years old. He is short and thin withs on his nose. He is strict with us in our study. He prepares his lessons well. He corrects our homework very carefully. His teaching style is quite different from that of the others. He always makes his class interesting and lively. He often encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own. He often helps and cares for us. He is very kind to us. In his spare time, he has sports with us. We all love and respect him.
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 writing (共19张PPT)
She is a warm-hearted doctor, who delivered baby for poor family. She phildren first when she became a doctor, and devoted all her life to medical work. It was her hard working and unselfish nature that made her great.
Write a composition of Madame Curie.
根据以下信息描写一篇关于居里夫人的 文章。字数100词左右。
② 正是她的坚定和勇敢使她成为了一个伟大的人。
__I_t _w__a_s___ her determination and bravery __t_h_a_t____ made her a great woman.
③. _A__lt_h_o_u_g_h__no man agree with him, he insisted on his view.
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高中英语人教版必修四课件：Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing —人物描写
3 ． During her career life, she obtained 132 championships, including 4 Olympic championships．
在她的职业生涯中，她获得了 132 个冠军，包括 4 次奥运会冠军。
4．She is an ordinary-looking girl, but her kindness and consideration impress me most．
研究黑猩猩，用了 25 年多的时间
观察和记录黑猩猩的日常活动，完
全弄懂了它们的行为
1．成立了几个组与芽”活动 3．被授予了多个奖项 参考词汇：《泰山和杜拉德博士》Tarzan and Dr Doolittle; “根与芽”“Shoot and Root”
7．He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers．
他/她擅长英语口语，计算机娴熟。 8．Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life． 她的故事告诉我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的东西， 努力克服生活中的任何困难。
② 根据自己预习时理解过的逻辑结构抓住老师的思路。老师讲课在多数情况下是根据教材本身的知识结构展开的，若把自己预习时所理解过的知识 逻辑结构与老师的讲解过程进行比较，便可以抓住老师的思路。
③ 根据老师的提示抓住老师的思路。老师在教学中经常有一些提示用语，如“请注意”、“我再重复一遍”、“这个问题的关键是····”等等，这些 用语往往体现了老师的思路。来自：学习方法网
2020-2021学年高中英语必修4人教版课件-1-Section-Ⅴ-Writing-如何描写人物
经历及贡献： 1．在中国度过了童年时期； 2．在中国生活了 40 年，把汉语当作“第一语言”； 3．20 世纪 20 年代开始写作，1931 年出版的《大地》(The Good Earth)，于 1932 年获得普利策奖(Pulitzer Prize)，1938 年获得诺贝尔文学奖，是唯一一个同时 获得普利策奖和诺贝尔文学奖的女作家 注意：1：词数 100 左右： 2．可hievement
Section Ⅴ Writing——人物描写
写作技法指导
【文体感知】 1．文体特点 人物描写属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表 达方式。 一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。 时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用 现在时态。
(3)我的父亲为我竭尽所能以确保我全身心学习。 My father does whatever he can do for me_____________________ my study. 答案： in order that I can concentrate on (4)一次他病重，大夫让他在床上休息几天。 Once he was badly ill and ______________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________. 答案： the doctor asked him to stay in bed for several days
Although his schooling adds up to no more than one year， ______________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________. 答案： he attaches great importance to my study and always encourages me to study hard
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 writing 人物介绍 (共48张PPT)
有吸引力的 attractive 有责任心的
独立的
开放的
易相处的 easy-going 健康的
高Hale Waihona Puke 的热情的有吸引力的 attractive 有责任心的 responsible 独立的
开放的
易相处的 easy-going 健康的 healthy 高贵的
热情的
有吸引力的 attractive 有责任心的 responsible 独立的 independent 开放的
Born in Jiangsu in 1898, Zhou Enlai was a great revolutionist in China.
B.外貌,性格: 巧用with做定语 译：他又高又瘦,戴着一副眼镜。
He is tall and thin with a pair of glasses.
C. 教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼 译：从北京大学毕业后，她继续深造，并获得了博士学位。
人物介绍
聪明的
谨慎的
诚实的
坏脾气的
出色的
健忘的
精力充沛的 考虑周到的
有决心的 勤奋的 心不在焉的 有志向的
聪明的 smart 诚实的
谨慎的 cautious 坏脾气的
出色的
健忘的
精力充沛的 考虑周到的
有决心的 determined 勤奋的
心不在焉的
有志向的
聪明的 smart 诚实的 honest 出色的
24. 获得第一个学位 25. 获得博士学位 26. 受到老师表扬
24. got one’s first degree获得第一个学位 25. get/obtain a doctor’s degree 获得博士学位 26. get/win praise from one’s teacher 受到老师表扬
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 Writing(共27张PPT)
4.成就&评价（achievements & evaluation）
Group-work:
Find out the expressions related to the following Chinese.
▪ Marie Curie, who made great contributions(贡 献) to the world of science, was regarded as one of the greatest women scientists in the world.
3.教育（education）
她大学毕业后,去了国外深造。 After she graduated from university, she went abroad for further education .
__A_f_te_r__g_r_a_d_u_a_t_i_n_g__fr_o_m___u_n_i_v_e_r_s_it_y__, she went abroad for further education
Tips:介绍概况，一个句型轻松搞定
Born in+ 地点+ on/ in +时间 , sb, 同位语（job），谓语+ …
Born in+ 地点+ on/ in +时间, sb, 同位语，谓语+ …
纳尔逊·曼德拉（Nelson Mandela）1918年出生,南 非总统于2013年12月6日 去世，享年95岁.
▪ 凭借优秀的表现 _w__it_h_e_x_c_e_ll_e_n_t _p_e_rf_o_r_m_a_n_ce ▪ 被认为__b_e_c_o_n_s_i_d_e_re_d__a_s_/b_e__re_g_a_r_d_e_d_a_s_ ▪ 高度评价____th_i_n_k_h_i_g_h_ly__o_f________ ▪ 做出巨大贡献_m_a_k_e__g_re_a_t_c_o_n_t_r_ib_u_t_io_n_s__to_ ▪ 致力于,把…奉献____d_e_v_o_te__…__to________ ▪ 被授予诺贝尔…奖 _b_e_a_w__a_rd_e_d__th_e__N_o_b_le__P_rize for…
book4 unit1 writing 人物介绍
评价：
5.运用强调句式及一些动词、形容词等短语、词组。
6. 雷锋为我们树立了一个好榜样, 所有人都对他高 度赞扬,尊敬他。 Lei Feng set a good example to us, so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him .
外貌,性格: 2. 巧用with做定语。
2.我的生物老师是个年轻女孩，她长着两只大 眼睛，留着长发。
My biology teacher is a young girl. She has long hair and big eyes.
My biology teacher is a young girl with long hair and big eyes.
Task 1. 短语积累：
be born in a poor family 1).出生于贫穷家庭 at the age of 2).在……岁时 have a sense of responsibility 3).有责任心 be always ready to help others 4).总是乐于助人 have a strong interest in 5).对……有浓厚兴趣 6).积极参加 take an active part in 7).毕业于哈佛大学 graduate from Harvard University 8).考上重点大学 be admitted into a key university go abroad for further study 9).出国深造 10).获得硕士学位 get a master’s degree devote one’s life to 11).致力于 12).对……做出贡献 make great contributions to 13).创造一项新的世界纪录 set a new world record be highly thought of 14).受到好评
人教版必修4--Unit1-Women-of-achievement----Writing写作教学课例教案
写作教学课例教案课题：人教版必修4 Unit1 Women of achievement----Writing课型：写作课设计者：河北省邯郸市第二中学宋XX教学背景分析教学内容：1.单元主题:本单元是人教版高中英语必修4 Unit1--- Women of achievement,主要是围绕成功女性这一主题展开，其中重点介绍了Jane Goodall和Lin Qiaozhi 两位伟大成功女性。
学习本单元有助于提高对妇女社会角色的认识，了解成功女性的奋斗经历和勇于斗争的精神，培养学生（尤其是女生）的事业心和社会责任感，建立正确的性别观和自信心。
可以帮助学生深切感受到无论男女，只要对他人有无私的爱心，对事业有坚定的信心，并不懈地为之倾注心血，都能成就一番事业。
2.课堂内容:本节课是Writing写作课。
是本单元的第5课时。
在学习了Jane Goodall和Lin Qiaozhi两位伟大女性后，在对人物介绍有了一定的基础后，由老师引导，学生完成任务，逐步完成人物描写写作课。
3.内容分派:Lead-in运用Using language--- reading (Why not carry on her good work?)林巧稚这个人物作为导入对象，引导学生从简单的词汇到简短英语短句最后总结从哪几方面进行人物描写。
人物介绍描写从背景、外貌、性格、成就、兴趣爱好、教育背景等几方面评价人物。
每环节分设任务让学生结组或者自由讨论完成。
实战演练部分呈现完整范文，师生共同分析文章总结介绍人物的文章怎么完成。
作业以学生熟悉的教师为题材进行课后练习。
教学方法：采用任务驱动方法，在整个学习过程中，充分确立学生的主体地位，充分调动学生的学习积极性和主观能动性，强化学生的个性培养，注意在教学的各环节中创设“情景”加强“协作”“会话”，让学生主动积极获取知识，使其学会，会学，真正意义上成为学习的主人。
1．演示法：把相关林巧稚的图片、视频等展示给学生看，便于学生对人物背景知识的把握，并从旧知识中获得启迪，从而达到解决问题的目的。
Book4 unit 1 Writing
a greatcontribution _________(contribute) to the human health.
I would appreciate it if my introduction could help you
get a better knowledge of Tu Youyou. I'm looking forward to
in 1951. After gradutation,she devoted all her efforts____the to
research in treating ______(treat) malaria. With hard work and
determination, she discovered artemisinin, _______ which is of great
How's it going recently? Known that you are interested in Knowing Tu Youyou, I'm very glad. With the excite inside, I'm writing excitement to tell you something about her. Details are as follows.
significance for curing malaria.
As a result, she became the first Chinese citizen______(win)a to win Nobel Prize in Medicine. As far as I'm concerned, Tu Youyou is hard-working and modest. It is these personal qualities _____ helped her make such a big difference. All our Chinese that are proud of ____(she) because her discovery _______(see)as her is seen
高一英语新人教版必修4Unit1 Women of achievement Section V Writing 人物描写
第一步 审题谋篇 一、审题 1．确定体裁：本文为人物描写； 2．确定人称：本文人称应用第一人称； 3．确定时态：本文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
二、构思 第一部分：简要介绍父亲的情况：年龄、所受教育、重视 知识等。 第二部分：探望父亲的一次经历。 第三部分：我眼中的父亲：简朴、诚实、勤劳。
3．介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价： ①He became famous for his newly theory. ②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. ③We regard him as our model. ④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
第二步 遣词造句 词汇 1．in_one's_fifties 五十多岁 2．add_up_to 总共，加起来等于 3．aware 有意识的 4．attach_importance_to/pay_attention_to/take_into_account_ 重视 5．ensure/insure/guarantee/make_certain 确保
句式 1．我的父亲五十多岁了，住在农村。(who引导定语从句) My_father,_who_is_already_in_his_fifties,_lives_in_the_count ryside. 2．尽管他受教育仅仅一年的时间，但他深刻意识到知识对 年轻人的重要性。(although引导让步状语从句，that引导宾语从 句) Although_his_schooling_adds_up_to_no_more_than_one_year, _he_is_quite_aware_that_knowledge_is_of_great_importance__to_ young_people.
人教高中英语必修四写作-Unit 1 人物描写
作文练习
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Jack想了解著名科学家屠呦呦的相关情况, 请你根据以下的要求给 他写一封回信。 姓名:屠呦呦 国籍:中国 职业:药学家，科学家 兴趣爱好:自幼对传统中药兴趣浓厚 主要经历 1. 1930年12月30日生于浙江宁波； 2. 1951年考入北京大学，主修制药专业; 3. 毕业后接受中医培训两年半，并一直在北京从事中医工作; 4. 1972年成功发现并制成青蒿素； 5. 2015年10月5日，她被授予诺贝尔医学奖，成为中国第一个获得诺贝尔奖的女性科学家。 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 参考词汇：药学家chemist 中医 traditional Chinese medicine
Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province on December 30th, 1930, Tu Youyou, a famous female chemist and scientist, showed great interest in Traditional Chinese Medicine when she was young. In 1951, she was permitted into Peking University, majoring in making medicine. After graduating from the university, she was trained in Traditional Chinese Medicine for two years and a half and has been working on it in Beijing. In 1972, she succeeded in discovering and developing Qinghaosu. To our excitement and delight, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine on October 5th, 2015, becoming the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize.
高中英语人教版(必修第一册) 复习课件：UNIT 1-Writing—如何写一篇人物简介
【完美成篇】 The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. The most beloved and respected person around me is my teacher, Ms Li. Though she has been teaching English for twenty years, she is still passionate about teaching. She is kind and considerate towards us just like our dear mother. We all respect her because she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. Hardworking and knowledgeable, she is one of the best teachers in our school. When we have a problem, we will turn to her for help. She always talks to us patiently and helps us find a solution. In our eyes, she is not only our teacher, but also our best friend. These are why she deserves our respect.
Section Ⅳ Writing—如何写一篇人物简介
【文体感知】
伟人总是给我们榜样的力量， 那么， 我们如何对伟人做人物简介 呢？ 人物介绍是高中生基础写作任务中常见的一种话题类型。它涉 及人的出生、家庭背景、教育、生平经历、成就和评价等。同学们要 注意其文体应该是记叙文， 同时还要注意人称和时态的合理使用。
高一英语必修4Unit1写作材料
高一英语必修4Unit1写作材料一、介绍人物的姓名、出身: 1) 她于1990年11月7日出生于广东湛江。
日出生于广东湛江。
→ She was born in Zhanjiang, Guangdong Province on Nov. 7 , 1990 . 2) 出生在一个贫困的农民家庭中，李华接受了很少学校教育。
出生在一个贫困的农民家庭中，李华接受了很少学校教育。
→ → Born in/into/ Born in/into/of a poor farmer’s family , Li Hua had little schooling . 二、描述人物外貌的常用词语：1 漂亮的beautiful 2.英俊的英俊的 handsome 3. 酷的cool 4. 活泼的lively 5.可爱的lovely 6. 强壮的strong 7. 长得好看的长得好看的 good-looking 8. 一张圆脸/ 长脸长脸 a round / long face 9. 有- - -米高米高 about----metres tall 10. 有大而明亮的眼睛的女孩有大而明亮的眼睛的女孩 a girl with bright big eyes 11．戴眼镜的男孩a boy with glasses 三、描述品质的词汇：1． 害羞的害羞的 shy 2. 乐于助人的helpful 3. 友好的友好的 friendly / kind 4. 安静的安静的 quiet 5. 沉默的silent 6. 耐心的耐心的 patient 7. 幽默的humorous 8. 仔细的careful 9. 精力充沛的energetic 10. 外向的out-going 11. 勇敢的brave 12. 诚实的honest 13. 热心肠的warm-hearted 14.乐观的optimistic 15. 随和的，容易相处的随和的，容易相处的 easy-going 四、表达爱好的词汇：1．favourite 2. dislike/ like 3. enjoy / be fond of 4. love / like doing 5. be good at 6. hate 7. be interested in 8.be crazy about 五教育背景：1. 考取……大学大学 be admitted to …university 2. 从某大学某系毕业从某大学某系毕业 graduate from …department of … university 3. 获取博士学位获取博士学位 get a doctor’s degree 六．主要事迹：1. 做某种工作做某种工作 serve as 2. 一生致力于一生致力于 devote oneself to 3. 专注于专注于 concentrate on sth. 4. 有……的天赋的天赋 have a gift for 5. 决心做决心做 make up one’s mind to do …= be determined to do 七．成就：1. 最好的/重要的……之一之一 one of the best/most important… 2. 为……树立榜样树立榜样 set a …example to 3. 被授予…… be honoured as …； 获得……荣誉荣誉 win the …prize 4. 为……作出巨大贡献作出巨大贡献 make great contribution to 【写作训练】【写作训练】 根据提示用英语介绍20世纪杰出的女性之一：凯勒(Helen Keller)。
高一英语人教版必修四 Unit1 Women of achievement 书面表达：人物介绍
Book4 Unit1 Women of achievement书面表达：人物介绍一、介绍的方面age, sex, birthplace, appearance, character, experience, hobby, evaluation(人们的评价) 二、经历介绍be admitted to/into a …college,when at college, he majored in …, receive a doctor’s degree ,serve as,devote oneself to,do research into,make up one’s mind to do,focus one’s attention on ,do sth with great determination,be strict with sb in our study,三、爱好，特长be good at /do well in/ be expert in have a talent for/ have a gift forbe qualified for the job / be fit for the job have a good knowledge (command) of with great passion for …,四、评价set a good example to us,a model teacher /worker,is respected by all,think highly of …高度评价be honored as ,五、常用描写人物的形容词: have a …way of doing sth,fight /struggle for ,wi n the first prize in ….,receive /get the Nobel Prize ,set a new world record,overcome many difficulties,make great progress in,train /work hardgo abroad for further educationhave a preference for / develop an interest in be fond of/ be crazy abou t / be a …loverbe experienced in / have rich experience in be skilled in…be admired for..因…被钦佩be remembered as…sing high praise for…高度赞扬make great contributions to …为..做贡献determined (有毅力的) competent (有能力的) warm- hearted(热心肠的) easy --going(温和宽容的) energetic( 精力充沛) generous( 慷慨的) intelligent( 聪明的) ambitious( 雄心的) forgetful(健忘的) honest (诚实的)六、常用句型humorous (幽默的)independent (独立的)diligent ( 勤奋的)cautious ( 谨慎的)talkative ( 多话的)attractive (有吸引力的)patient (耐心的)strict (严格的)modest(谦虚的)considerate(考虑周到的)outstanding ( 杰出的)optimistic( 乐观的)enthusiastic( 热情的)absent- minded(心不在焉)bad-tempered(脾气不好)reliable( 可信赖的)confident( 自信的)respectable(值得尊重的)1.I am Li Hua, a girl of 23/aged 23, who graduated from Guangdong University .（同位语，定从）2.I am Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School ,which is close to your school. （同位语，定语从句）3.He attaches great importance to subjects such as physics ,computer science, English and so on.4.I show a high sense of team spirit, which I think is of great importance for the job. （定语从句）5.Born in Shanghai in 1980, Yao Ming is considered/honored as one of the most outstanding basketball players in the world. (非谓语）6.Our English teacher is attractive and slim with a pair of glasses on her nose.（with 短语）7.My favorite teacher is ….,a responsible teacher with over 20 years’ teaching experience.8.As a small boy, he showed a great interest in ...,which made him quite different from other boys of an age.（定语从句）9.Thanks to the help of ..., he was able to continue his education.10.Between ... and ..., he studied at ...,after which he went abroad to receive further education.11.What made us admire her most was that she devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to the country.(名词性从句）12.She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement.13.Having graduated from Zhongshan University, she went abroad for further education and received a doctor's degree（非谓语）14.Being optimistic and energetic, he often takes an active part in after-class activities.（非谓语）15.He set a new world record in the competition, for which everyone thinks highly of him .16.Not only is he gifted at English but also he has a good command of French.（倒装句）17.H e al w ay s create s an atmo s phere in w hich everyone w ould like to voice their mind s（. 定语从句）18.In his spare time ,it is he who organizes activities such as outings and parties for us, from which we benefit a lot.（强调句型，定语从句）七、佳作赏析最近，你校英文报开辟了Famous People 专栏。
book4unit 1 women of achevements writing(人物介绍)
2）韩商言带领他的团队在中国取得 了很多个冠军，为中国电竞圈的发 展作出了贡献。
Han Shangyan leaded his nteaammed (name) K&K China to win several champions in China, which made a great contribution to the development of China's E-sports.
D. 生平Big Events in One's Life
(尽量用定语从句,半倒装，润色文章)
1）韩商言不仅对电脑感兴趣,而且他投入他所有 的精力追求他的梦想。
Not onlyis Han Shangyan fond of compute,r but also he has devoted all his energy to fighting for his dream.
( in order of time ) 评估: evaluation
貌,概,育,平, 评
something rewarding
A.外貌,性格 (巧用with做定语)
1）李华是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜。
Li Hua is a near-sighted /far-sighted boy， __w__it_h__a__p__a_i_r_o__f_g_l_a_s_s_e_s__o_n__h__i_s_n__o_s.e
2) 杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发。
Yang Yang is very beautiful, with long hair.
appearance
handsome attractive cool blue determined......
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Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809. 启示：尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺
2、外貌,性格 (巧用with做定语)
第一步：审题
文体:
人物介绍 一般现在时，或一般过去时 （出 生年月、教育背景、主要事迹）
的一般步骤： Give the right order
( )教育：education
概、貌、育、平、评
３ ( )外貌／性格appearance ,character ２ ( ) 生平 big events in his or her life ( in order of ４
equip yourself with advanced knowledge enlarge your circle of friends broaden your horizons promote your abilities prepare yourself for a better career
3.总结段---结尾段（评）
对人物做出综合性的评价。
1. 概况：age, sex, birth, family background
…was/ were born in/into (a poor family) on… As a child of … years old, he… He spent his childhood in … live a happy/hard life
Writing
How to describe a person
人物介绍
请你用英文写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，介绍中国科学家屠呦呦， 内容主要包括: 1、屠呦呦，1930年生于浙江；儿童时期就对中医（Chinese medicine）产生了兴趣； 2、1951年考入北京大学，就读生药专业（major in crude drugs）； 1955年以优异的成绩毕业于北京医学院(Beijing Medical College)。 3、毕业后一直致力于中医研究。 4、因发现青蒿素而出名，青蒿素(artemisinin )用于治疗疟疾 (malaria)，拯救了数百万人的生命。 5、2015年，获得诺贝尔医学奖，是第一位获得科学类诺贝尔奖 (the Nobel Prize in science)的中国籍科学家，被人们高度评价（be thought highly of）。 注意：1. 词数120左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
钟南山１９４１年生于广州，是中国最伟大的医生之一。 ① Zhong Nanshan, born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China. ② Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.
time )
５)评估evaluation ( １)概况age, sex, birth-place, background
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1.主题段 ---开头段（概）
人物概况：生卒年月、出生地、国 籍、职业、家庭背景。
人物介绍 基本结构
2.拓展段---中间段（貌、育、平）
其他信息(如外貌、教育、兴趣、性 格等)和举例说明生平重要事迹及其 对社会的贡献或影响。
Tu Youyou was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, China in 1930. When she was a child, she took an interest in Chinese medicine. She was admitted into Peking University in 1951 and graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1955 with excellent results. After graduation, she devoted all her life to the research of Chinese medicine. She discovered artemisinin, which was used to treat malaria and saved millions of people’s lives across the globe,especially in the developing world.In 2015 she won the Norbel Prize in medicine in praise of her achievements. Tu Youyou is one of the greatest Chinese medical scientists and she is the first Chinese scientist to win a Nobel Prize in science. A great number of her achievements are highly thougt of by many people aroud the world.
翻译：因为当时在波兰妇女不能上大学,中学毕业后, 她 决定去巴黎大学深造，并顺利地取得了物理博士学位。
Because at that time women were not admitted to universities in Poland, she decided to go on further education at Paris University after graduating from middle school, where she received a doctor's degree in physics .
翻译：她一生致力于科学研究，在1903年和1911年分别获诺贝尔物 理奖和化学奖，成为世界上第一位两次获得诺贝尔奖的科学家。
She devoted all her life to scientific research and received Nobel prizes for physics and chemistry, which made her become the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel prizes.
翻译：作为一位伟大的女科学家，居里夫人的决心、勇气、乐意与人 分享知识的精神以及她对女权所表示出来的兴趣都将永远为人们所怀 念。她给我们树立了一个良好的榜样,我们都很敬重她。
As a great woman scientist, Madame Curie will be remembered for her determination, courage, her willingness to share her knowledge and her interest in women’s rights. Madame Curie set us a good example, so all the people speak highly of her and all respect her.
启示：可用连词，从句等, 使文章连贯通顺
4、生平：事业及成就
常用表达式： 1. one of the best/most important…最好的/重要的…之一 2. set a …example to为……树立榜样 3. be honoured as…被授予…… 4. win the …prize 获得……荣誉 5. make great contribution to 为……作出巨大贡献
启示：运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
第二步：布局谋篇（What, How）
开头段 （概况）
主体段 （育、平） 1930年出生在宁波，儿时对中医感兴趣； （1）1951年考入北京大学，专修生药； （2）1955年毕业于北京医学院，毕业 后投生到中药研究； （3）发现青蒿素，2015年获得诺贝尔 医学奖。 最伟大的中国医学科学家之一；第一位获 得科学类诺贝尔将的中国科学家。
我的语文老师很漂亮,身材矮小，她长着两只大眼睛，带 着一副眼镜。
巧用同位语
a beautiful ,short woman My Chinese teacher ， ___________________ ， has two big eyes and wears a pair of glasses.
5、评价
常用表达式： As a great/outstanding…, she is highly thought of . Being the …, she is regarded as …. 作为...她被认为... set a good example to… 树立了榜样 be remembered for 永远铭记/怀念.....
巧用定语从句
is a beautiful, short woman My Chinese teacher，who ________________________, has two big eyes and wears a pair of glasses.
My Chinese teacher with two big eyes and a pair of glasses is a ______________________________________ beautiful ,short woman
巧用with介词短语做后置定语
3、教育经历
常用表达式： He was admitted to New York university 考取……大学 graduate from …department of … university从某大学某系毕业 receive/get a bachelor's/master's/doctor’s degree 获取学士/硕士/博士学位 major in 主修 go on further education 深造