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写作大作文
一、写作程序
1.审题
A.主题词
1)health (sub-health亚健康, food security 食品安全)
2)morality 道德(rumor 谣言, politeness礼貌)
3)Population 人口
4)Environment (environment pollution, excessive fishing )
5)Life value (confidence, insistence, willpower , cooperation , optimism, progress, choice, dream, share,adaption适应力)
6)Culture (intellectuals)
7)Education (spoiling溺爱,children burden of studying)
8)Family relationship (filial piety, divorce rate)
9)Technology (phone , internet , shopping online)
10)Globalization(globalize ,economy,education,culture,technology)
2.感情色彩(积极,消极,中立)
3.要求
(1)描述——意义——评论DMC
(2)描述——意义——举例DME
(3)描述——举例——评论DEC
4.明确段落内容
DMC型积极:描图——名人例子——建议
消极:描图——分析原因(对比论证)——措施
双面:描图——正反论证——中庸
DME型积极:描图——积极意义——名人例子
消极:描图——消极意义——反面例子
DEC型积极:描图——名人例子——建议
消极:描图——反面例子——措施
1、描写图片段
Currently/At present/Nowadays, the phenomenon of 主题词has been brought into the public concern in some prominent/famous blogs(websites/ newspapers/ wechats/ microblogs).
b.第二句描述图片
(1)As is graphically portrayed in the picture ,在什么位置存在的动作(exist,lie,stand,sit,walk,run,stay)主体,主体的同位语,定语从句(who/which +名词+介词/动词).
E.g. As is graphically portrayed in the cartoon, in the restaurant sit a lot of people, relatives and friends and so forth, who are preparing to have dinner with playing games, taking photos and sending wechats but ignoring one another.
(2)描绘双图
2003,2006,2014
It is a set of very eye-catching pictures in the first of which+第一张图片定从. Yet/ +第二张图片.
E.g. It is a set of very eye-catching pictures in the first of which in family livers a woman,a amiable mother, who is leading her daughter to do various things such as going to school,buying clothes,eating foods and so forth. But after 30 years,the girl growing up look after her mother.
It is a set of very eye-catching pictures in the first of which in the greenhouse stands a plant,a beautiful flower, which growing vigorously. Conversely, it faded when removed out of the greenhouse.
C.第三句写标注和文字
图片上的文字:As an Arab/ Russian/ English proverb goes”图片上的文字”.
图片下的标注:with the caption under the picture”图片下面的标注”.(直接加在上句末尾,可写可不写)
E.g. As an Russian proverb goes “Love is a light, blacker and brighter.”
D .承上启下句
Simple as the cartoon is,the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.
DMC积极描图——名人例子——建议
(politeness, share , adaption, cooperation, love , confidence, optimism, insistence, filial piety, devotion, insistence, innovation)
DMC积极作文第二段(准备一定的例子Bill Gates, Steve Jobs, Thomas Edison, Beethoven, Helen Keller, Mother Teresa)
(1)Abundant of examples would demonstrate the phenomenon, while the following one, 名人,I suppose, would suffice.
(2)A brief survey of history about our human development demonstrates the fundamental significance of 主题词taking 名人for an instance
B. 描述人物句
be+so+adj.+that....如此以至于
E.g. The girl in library is so gorgeous and talkative that every boy loves to talk with her.
实意动词+so+adv.+that....如此以至于
E.g. The couple loves each other so deeply that anyone including the third one cannot go into their life.
(1)写作结构
在哪里有什么,同位语(人物),and Sb.so ..that...
E.g. Helen Keller
In America lived a prominent writer ,Helen Keller, and she was so unfortunate in her hearing, speaking, seeing abilities because of a high fever.
Longping Yuan
In great China lives a prominent person, Longping Yuan, and he studied hybrid rice technique so crazily and experienced failures so many that he solved the problem of hunger for the world people.
Bill Gates
In America lives a prominent person, Bill Gates, and he abandoned the chance to study in the greatest university,Harvard, so boldly and bravely that he created the greatest company, Microsoft, and occupied the global market.
(2)sb, instead of /(rather than ) doing sth1 ,volunteered to doing sth2
Sb 不去干sth1 ,而去干sth2