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2) 问题解决型
通常要求考生从试题的提示行文字入手，描述其反 映出的问题，提出解决方案或应对措施。其基本结构是： 首先引出要解决的问题及其严重性或必要性，并简要分 析其产生的原因或带来的危害和影响；然后提出解决问 题的办法或措施；最后表明自己的态度，提出建议并展 望前景。典型题目如下：
篇章结构，是进行写作的必备常识。掌握了篇章结构，
才会使文章建立起骨架。一篇文章通常可分为以下三
种段落：
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短文写作的技巧与套路
一、写作步骤
1.多读多练 充分准备
考前应写几篇短文，先找自己感兴趣的题目写。要克服
畏难情绪，写作时，有可能出现较多较严重的错误，但不要
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3）对比选择型
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6. 用此简洁 篇幅适中
遣词造句注意做到简洁、朴素、易懂、多样。多用 动词短语，使文章简洁流畅。
7. 认真检查 仔细修改
文章写成后要认真检查，检查重点应放在删去和主 题不大相干的句子，纠正语法错误，拼写错误，标点和 大小写错误，把因笔误或粗心而写错的地方及时改正过 来，将差错率减少到最小程度，但原文不宜做大的调整 和改动。
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2024年浙江专升本英语作文课件一、教学内容二、教学目标1. 掌握英语议论文的基本结构和写作技巧；2. 学会运用常用的观点阐述和反驳观点的句型；3. 提高学生的英语写作能力，使他们在浙江专升本英语作文考试中取得优异成绩。
三、教学难点与重点1. 教学难点：观点阐述的逻辑性和反驳观点的合理性；2. 教学重点：英语议论文的基本结构、常用句型以及连接词的运用。
四、教具与学具准备1. 教具：PPT、黑板、粉笔；2. 学具：教材、《新编英语写作教程》、笔记本、文具。
五、教学过程1. 引入：通过展示一组关于环保的图片，引发学生对环保话题的兴趣，导入本节课的议论文写作教学。
2. 讲解：详细讲解英语议论文的基本结构、写作技巧，展示常用句型和连接词。
3. 例题讲解：以环保话题为例，分析一篇优秀作文的结构和表达方式。
4. 随堂练习：让学生根据所学内容，编写一篇关于环保的议论文草稿。
5. 互动环节：学生分组讨论，互相修改作文，教师巡回指导。
六、板书设计1. 英语议论文基本结构：引入段：背景介绍、问题提出观点阐述：论点、论据反驳观点：逐一反驳、论证2. 常用句型及连接词七、作业设计1. 作业题目：以“网络利弊”为话题，写一篇议论文。
2. 答案要求：结构清晰，观点明确，论证充分，用词准确。
八、课后反思及拓展延伸2. 拓展延伸：鼓励学生关注社会热点问题，提高自己的思辨能力和英语写作水平，为专升本考试做好充分准备。
重点和难点解析1. 教学难点：观点阐述的逻辑性和反驳观点的合理性；2. 教学过程：随堂练习、互动环节；3. 作业设计：作业题目的答案要求；4. 课后反思及拓展延伸。
一、观点阐述的逻辑性和反驳观点的合理性1. 观点阐述：明确论点：确保文章中的观点清晰明了，避免模糊或模棱两可的表达；论据充分：为每个观点提供充分的论据，包括事实、数据、实例等；逻辑性：确保观点阐述部分的内容组织合理，论据之间要有逻辑联系。
2. 反驳观点：了解对方观点：在反驳前，先了解对方观点的论点和论据；逐一反驳：针对对方观点的每个论点，进行逐一反驳；合理性：确保反驳观点的合理性，避免使用主观或偏激的言辞。
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❖ 1、写作要求 ❖ 2、作文常见错误 ❖ 3. 如何写好作文
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❖ 1 There are different ways of finding information
❖ 2.Which way(s) do you prefer? And why??
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❖ 2分 — 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大 部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
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1． 主从句叠置 1） There are more and more students like to use
the computer. 2） There are still many problems should be noted
and resolved. 2． 简单句叠置
Mary was friendly to my sister because she
wanted my sister to b专e转本h写e作r讲b义ridesmaid.
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❖例2. And we can also know the
society by serving it yourself. 剖析：句中人称代词we 和反
同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致． 改为：Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
专转本 写作
专转本写作讲义
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Outline
❖ 1、写作要求 ❖ 2、作文常见错误 ❖ 3. 如何写好作文
专转本写作讲义
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精品资料
❖ 1 There are different ways of finding information
❖ 2.Which way(s) do you prefer? And why??
专转本写作讲义
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作文评分标准
❖ 2分 — 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大 部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
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1． 主从句叠置 1） There are more and more students like to use
the computer. 2） There are still many problems should be noted
and resolved. 2． 简单句叠置
Mary was friendly to my sister because she
wanted my sister to b专e转本h写e作r讲b义ridesmaid.
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❖例2. And we can also know the
society by serving it yourself. 剖析：句中人称代词we 和反
同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致． 改为：Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
专升本-通用模板-英语作文市公开课获奖课件省名师示范课获奖课件
However, how can one person achieve their desirable goal in his life? In my humble opinion, there are many ways. First, to realize your dream, you must have a clear and strong idea. The stronger your idea is to make success, the easier your goal will become. Second, never give up even in difficulties. As the saying goes: where there is a will, there is a way. Third, make yourself different from other people. Standing out from the common people will make it easy for you to achieve your own success.
colorful life to students. For instance, they can
communicate with each other as easily as
possible. On the other hand, the advantages of
mobile phones are also apparent, the phones not
目前诸多学生都购置了手机 手机给大学生带来旳好处与坏处 你自己对这种现象有何感想或者提议
尤其提醒：此类作文必须注意（买车 旳利弊，网络、电脑旳利弊等）
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Maintain a positive learning attitude, cultivate selfconfidence and perseverance, and persistently prepare for exams.
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Reasonably arrange daily routines, ensure sufficient sleep and diet, and maintain physical and mental health.
Selecting outstanding vocational students to advance to undergraduate studies
Promote communication and integration between vocational and undergraduate students
Expand learning channels by utilizing online courses, learning websites, exam preparation forums, and other online resources.
Participate in activities such as mock exams, preparation lectures, and learning exchange meetings to gain experience and skills in preparing for exams.
Test students' ability to translate English into Chinese
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Maintain a positive learning attitude, cultivate selfconfidence and perseverance, and persistently prepare for exams.
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Reasonably arrange daily routines, ensure sufficient sleep and diet, and maintain physical and mental health.
Selecting outstanding vocational students to advance to undergraduate studies
Promote communication and integration between vocational and undergraduate students
Expand learning channels by utilizing online courses, learning websites, exam preparation forums, and other online resources.
Participate in activities such as mock exams, preparation lectures, and learning exchange meetings to gain experience and skills in preparing for exams.
Test students' ability to translate English into Chinese
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专转本应用文写作教学提纲123页PPT
专转本应用文写作教学提纲
11、获得的成功越大，就越令人高兴 。野心 是使人 勤奋的 原因， 节制使 人枯萎 。 12、不问收获，只问耕耘。如同种树 ，先有 根茎， 再有枝 叶，尔 后花实 ，好好 劳动， 不要想 太多， 那样只 会使人 胆孝懒 惰，因 为不实 践，甚 至不接 触社会 ，难道 你是野 人。(名 言网) 13、不怕，不悔(虽然只有四个字，但 常看常 新。 14、我在心里默默地为每一个人祝福 。我爱 自己， 我用清 洁与节 制来珍 惜我的 身体， 我用智 慧和知 识充实 我的头 脑。 15、这世上的一切都借希望而完成。 农夫不 会播下 一粒玉 米，如 果他不 曾希望 它长成 种籽； 单身汉 不会娶 妻，如 果他不 曾希望 有小孩 ；商人 或手艺 人不会 工作， 如果他 不曾希 望因此 而有收 益。-- 马钉路 德。
xiexie! 38、我这个人走得很慢，但是我从不后退。——亚伯拉罕·林肯
39、勿问成功的秘诀为何，且尽全力做你应该做的事吧。——美华纳
40、学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆。——孔子
谢谢！
36、自己的鞋子，自己知道紧在哪里。——西班牙
37、我们唯一不会改正的缺点是软弱。——拉罗什福科
11、获得的成功越大，就越令人高兴 。野心 是使人 勤奋的 原因， 节制使 人枯萎 。 12、不问收获，只问耕耘。如同种树 ，先有 根茎， 再有枝 叶，尔 后花实 ，好好 劳动， 不要想 太多， 那样只 会使人 胆孝懒 惰，因 为不实 践，甚 至不接 触社会 ，难道 你是野 人。(名 言网) 13、不怕，不悔(虽然只有四个字，但 常看常 新。 14、我在心里默默地为每一个人祝福 。我爱 自己， 我用清 洁与节 制来珍 惜我的 身体， 我用智 慧和知 识充实 我的头 脑。 15、这世上的一切都借希望而完成。 农夫不 会播下 一粒玉 米，如 果他不 曾希望 它长成 种籽； 单身汉 不会娶 妻，如 果他不 曾希望 有小孩 ；商人 或手艺 人不会 工作， 如果他 不曾希 望因此 而有收 益。-- 马钉路 德。
xiexie! 38、我这个人走得很慢，但是我从不后退。——亚伯拉罕·林肯
39、勿问成功的秘诀为何，且尽全力做你应该做的事吧。——美华纳
40、学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆。——孔子
谢谢！
36、自己的鞋子，自己知道紧在哪里。——西班牙
37、我们唯一不会改正的缺点是软弱。——拉罗什福科
英语专转本应用文写作精品PPT课件
May 4, 2005
The Department Office
例2
NOTICE
Date: December 12th, 2005 Place: No.2 meeting room To: All staff From: Head office Subject: Financial program of the company
2.To work as a general manager in a joint venture enterprise in Qingdao
3.To serve as a Sales Manager at a Sinoforeign joint venture in Beijing
Language Proficiency
Hobbies/Personal Strong Points 5.工作经历：时间倒序，公司名称，地点，
职务，工作内容
Personal data
Date of Birth: Mar. 9th,1986 Sex/gender: Male/Female Nationality: Chinese Marital status: Single/Married/Divorced Health: Excellent/good/bad
Education
2004-2006: Beijing Jingbei Vocational College Relevant courses: English, computer
2001-2004: No.55 High School
1998-2001: No.101 Middle School
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2. I trust you will take my complaint seriously.
3. I would, however, be perfectly satisfied if you would
kindly replace the item or refund my money, whichever is
more convenient.
4.We should be obliged if you could investigate these matters.
5.We should be thankful if you could give us a refund for the faulty goods.
sincere
1) 有礼貌地说明所犯错误或指出问题
1.I am writing to complain about---
2.I write to express my concern/dissatisfaction about
3.I would like to express my disappointment about---
I feel greatly indebted to you for…
I’m writing to tell you how greatly I appreciate all you have done for me…
But for your kind assistance, I would have …
regret for not being able to … Had I …, I would have…。 Please accept my sincere apology for… I want you to know how badly I feel about…
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I really enjoyed meeting with members of the office and learning about the job. The entire team certainly seem to be highly skilled and motivated and the work itself seems as rewarding as it is challenging. From our discussion, I gained a strong sense of (Company Names commitment to their clients and their employees. I also enjoyed our discussion of my opportunities and future within the firm.
While I’m not a little surprised, I’m all happy to get the good news. I know you have got excellent marks for all the courses you took. It is great to know that you have achieved the goal you set for yourself. It is an award that you richly deserve. I’m really proud of you.
I hope this does not cause you too much trouble/ inconvenience. I was wondering whether we can have another meeting/ make another appointment. Please don’t hesitate to tell me your favorable date/ preferable date. I will be free next Monday to Thursday. I am looking forward to your reply and seeing you soon.!
While I’m not a little surprised, I’m all happy to get the good news. I know you have got excellent marks for all the courses you took. It is great to know that you have achieved the goal you set for yourself. It is an award that you richly deserve. I’m really proud of you.
I hope this does not cause you too much trouble/ inconvenience. I was wondering whether we can have another meeting/ make another appointment. Please don’t hesitate to tell me your favorable date/ preferable date. I will be free next Monday to Thursday. I am looking forward to your reply and seeing you soon.!
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4). It can be observed easily that
(分析图表所反映的问题 ).
There are many reasons responsible for this. In the following paragraphs, I’ll venture to explore
I’ve proposed above and take proper actions accordingly. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely, (签名)
二、提纲式作文
写作模板
——提纲式作文 1．对立观点式： A.有人认为 X 是好事，赞成 X，为什么？ B.有人认为 X 是坏事，反对 X，为什么？ C.我的看法。
citizen to do so.
There are many factors which give rise to the problem. I’ll venture to explore some of the most
conspicuous factors. Firstly,
( 起 因 1). Secondly,
( 解 决 方 法 4).
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With the development of the society, with the advent of
have to face a problem that
(主题问题).
(相关事物或现象 ), we
What are the reasons for it? In the following paragraphs, I’ll venture to explore the reasons. To start
专升本英语：英语写作(课堂PPT)
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3）对比选择型
这类作文的标志十分明显，其要求比较明确，即直接要 求考生比较两种观点或两种做法，进而表明自己对问题或事 物的态度或观点，也就是做出选择。其基本结构：首先对要 评论的事物或现象进行整体介绍；然后陈述两种不同的观点 或做法及其理由;之后表明自己的观点或态度。典型题目如： It Pays to Be Honest Should Education Be Commercialized? Choose a Famous University or a Favorite Major? Reading Selective or Extensively? Money
what is more, as a result等短语，以突出文章的条理性；二是要根据标
题和提纲内容确定合适的说明角度和说明方法，如说明原因或举例说明
等。
（3）议论段：通常是考生根据文章的主题提出、论证或总结某项观点。
写议论段时应做到观点明确、论证充分，并有令人信服的数据和例子来
支持论点，使文章具有说服力。议论段主要有四种：提出观点段（有时
(2)说明段：阐述原因
③承上启下，引出原因/因素/影响
④具体阐述原因一/因素一/影响一
⑤列举原因二/因素二/影响二（可以用例证支持）
⑥列举原因三/因素三/影响三（可以用例证支持）
⑦总结以上原因或因素导致的结果/该现象的最终影响
(3)议论段：表明观点
⑧我对此现象的思考或看法（可能是个人选择或者是对现
象、趋势或影响的评述）
Why College Students Take a Part-time Job?
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Chatting on Line
专升本英语：英语写作53页PPT
Thank you
60、人民的幸福是至高无个的法。— —西塞 罗
6、最大的骄傲于最大的自卑都表示心灵的最软弱无力。——斯宾诺莎 7、自知之明是最难得的知识。——西班牙 8、勇气通往天堂，怯懦通往地狱。——塞内加 9、有时候读书是一种巧妙地避开思考的方法。——赫尔普斯 10、阅读一切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。——笛卡儿
专升本英语：英语写作
56、极端的法规，就是极端的不公。 ——西 塞罗 57、法律一旦成为人们的需要，人们 就不再 配享受 自由了 。—— 毕达哥 拉斯 58、法律规定的惩罚不是为了私人的 利益， 而是为 了公共 的利益 ；一部有法律他们会更快乐的话 ，那么 法律作 为一件 无用之 物自己 就会消 灭。— —洛克
60、人民的幸福是至高无个的法。— —西塞 罗
6、最大的骄傲于最大的自卑都表示心灵的最软弱无力。——斯宾诺莎 7、自知之明是最难得的知识。——西班牙 8、勇气通往天堂，怯懦通往地狱。——塞内加 9、有时候读书是一种巧妙地避开思考的方法。——赫尔普斯 10、阅读一切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。——笛卡儿
专升本英语：英语写作
56、极端的法规，就是极端的不公。 ——西 塞罗 57、法律一旦成为人们的需要，人们 就不再 配享受 自由了 。—— 毕达哥 拉斯 58、法律规定的惩罚不是为了私人的 利益， 而是为 了公共 的利益 ；一部有法律他们会更快乐的话 ，那么 法律作 为一件 无用之 物自己 就会消 灭。— —洛克
《专升本英语快速提升技巧》课件——第二十三讲：议论文写作
中间段
主体部分……
万能结尾段
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of protecting the environment. Only in this way can we have a good place to live in the future.
三、套用模板（3段式）
专升本《英语》快速提升技巧
（二）中间段：解决问题 6个句子 ：三个论点 +三个论据
逻辑词 first and foremost, furthermore，last but not least.
三、套用模板（3段式）
专升本《英语》快速提升技巧
（二）中间段：解决问题 6个句子 ：三个论点 +三个论据
Only in this way can we have a good place to live in the future.
→ can we have a bright and promising future.
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专升本《英语》快速提升技巧
With the rapid development of globalization, the relationship between parents and children has become increasingly important in our daily life. It is quite natural for us to ponder over the question of How to Repay Your Parents.
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of view can be listed as follows.
• 第二段：Above all, 论据一. For example, 支持论据一的事例. Furthermore, 论据二及支持论据二的 事例
• 第三段：All that has been discussed above points to the fact that 重申本文 观点. Therefore, 与该观点相符合的做 法和态度
观点论证型
• 观点论证型文章: 第一段议论段(提出 观点), 提出普遍存在的某种观点或态 度或做法, 然后进一步说明此观点, 转 折提出与之相反的本论文观点; 第二段 议论断(论证或反驳观点)列举论据, 然 后说明 ; 第三段(总结观点/新观点)
• 观点论证型文章常见写法:
• 反驳型：
• 第一段: Up to now, many people hold it true that 某观点. They believe that 进一步说明此观点. However, research shows that 与上述观点相反 的论点. The arguments forand Happiness • 1. 每个人都想获得财富， 财富似乎就
是幸福， 其实不然 • 2. 世界上有许多东西是财富换不来的
• Up to now, many people still hold that wealth can bring happiness. They believe that with a great amount of money, they must live a happy life. However, recent survey shows that wealth is necessarily associated with happiness. The arguments for this point of view can be listed as follows.
• In modern society, it is widely accepted that blood donation is good for health. As we know, donating blood benefits both society and people. Therefore, people should be encouraged to donate blood regularly.
• Above all, good health plays an important role above wealth in a happy life. For example, people can buy machine with money, but can not buy happiness. Furthermore, wealth may encourage those harmful habits which may ruin the owner of wealth, such as addiction to drugs and gambling. Most importantly, there is one thing essential to happiness
• 第三段：From what has been
discussed above, we should understand that 重申观点，But (one thing we have to notice is that)提出个 人建议，Therefore, 总结全文。
Example
• Blood Donation – 献血有益于身体健康。 – 试举例说明。
• All mentioned above tell us that blood donation does more good than harm to health. We should hold a positive attitude towards it. Therefore, it can be concluded that blood donation should be encouraged under the scientific instruction.
which can not be bought with wealth---love.
• All that has been discussed above shows that wealth is not equal to happiness. Therefore, we shouldn’t be crazy about money and should earn it with honest work.
• Many remarkable facts can support this argument. First of all, according to medical research findings, donating blood can effectively reduce the happening of certain disease. What’s more, donating blood regularly could reduce the pace of aging. Lastly, donating blood regularly could help people keep good mood.
• 支持型：
• 第一段: It is widely accepted that 某观 点，As we know, 观点正确性的表现， Therefore, 小结观点。
• 第二段：There are numerous examples supporting this argument. A case in point is 例一. For another example, 引出并说明例二
• 第二段：Above all, 论据一. For example, 支持论据一的事例. Furthermore, 论据二及支持论据二的 事例
• 第三段：All that has been discussed above points to the fact that 重申本文 观点. Therefore, 与该观点相符合的做 法和态度
观点论证型
• 观点论证型文章: 第一段议论段(提出 观点), 提出普遍存在的某种观点或态 度或做法, 然后进一步说明此观点, 转 折提出与之相反的本论文观点; 第二段 议论断(论证或反驳观点)列举论据, 然 后说明 ; 第三段(总结观点/新观点)
• 观点论证型文章常见写法:
• 反驳型：
• 第一段: Up to now, many people hold it true that 某观点. They believe that 进一步说明此观点. However, research shows that 与上述观点相反 的论点. The arguments forand Happiness • 1. 每个人都想获得财富， 财富似乎就
是幸福， 其实不然 • 2. 世界上有许多东西是财富换不来的
• Up to now, many people still hold that wealth can bring happiness. They believe that with a great amount of money, they must live a happy life. However, recent survey shows that wealth is necessarily associated with happiness. The arguments for this point of view can be listed as follows.
• In modern society, it is widely accepted that blood donation is good for health. As we know, donating blood benefits both society and people. Therefore, people should be encouraged to donate blood regularly.
• Above all, good health plays an important role above wealth in a happy life. For example, people can buy machine with money, but can not buy happiness. Furthermore, wealth may encourage those harmful habits which may ruin the owner of wealth, such as addiction to drugs and gambling. Most importantly, there is one thing essential to happiness
• 第三段：From what has been
discussed above, we should understand that 重申观点，But (one thing we have to notice is that)提出个 人建议，Therefore, 总结全文。
Example
• Blood Donation – 献血有益于身体健康。 – 试举例说明。
• All mentioned above tell us that blood donation does more good than harm to health. We should hold a positive attitude towards it. Therefore, it can be concluded that blood donation should be encouraged under the scientific instruction.
which can not be bought with wealth---love.
• All that has been discussed above shows that wealth is not equal to happiness. Therefore, we shouldn’t be crazy about money and should earn it with honest work.
• Many remarkable facts can support this argument. First of all, according to medical research findings, donating blood can effectively reduce the happening of certain disease. What’s more, donating blood regularly could reduce the pace of aging. Lastly, donating blood regularly could help people keep good mood.
• 支持型：
• 第一段: It is widely accepted that 某观 点，As we know, 观点正确性的表现， Therefore, 小结观点。
• 第二段：There are numerous examples supporting this argument. A case in point is 例一. For another example, 引出并说明例二