高三英语写作主题句的写作Handout

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一．什么是段落主题句

因读写任务“写作内容”所列要点的顺序已具有内在的逻辑性,所以考生无需重新调整写作顺序,而按照试题所给内容要点顺序写作即可。一般是每个写作要点安排为一个自然段,且将写作内容的每个要点作为各段的主题句,放在段首。那么,什么是主题句呢?段落主题句,顾名思义,就是该句表达了支配全段的主导思想(controlling idea)。这一主导思想是全段的核心,统帅全段,并决定全段的发展方向。全段其它句子都是围绕着这些句子并对其进行说明、支持或扩展, 这些句子称作主题句；对其进行说明、支持或扩展的,这些句子称作“扩展句(supporting sentence)”。主题句可以是一个词、一个短句,也可能是一个完整的句子。主题句就好比是全段的纲。只有写好了主题句,才可能做到“纲举目张”,写好全段文章。Ⅰ Lead in

Skimming and then finding out each topic sentence.

2010年广东试卷读写任务

[写作内容]

1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：

(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法；

(2)你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；

(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。

One possible version:

In my opinion, Ethan’s mother’s teaching method is not reasonable. Just as the psychologists said, giving kids money can actually spoil them. What’s worse, some of the children are lost and not clear about the purpose of studying.

I have been lucky enough to have a very good relationship with my parents. They have supported me and taught me a great deal about why and how to study. Whenever I have difficulty studying, my par ents always encourage me by telling some heroes’ story.

I think, as a student myself, school and parents should educate their kids through teaching them to study for their family and their motherland rather than giving them money to let them passively do something. Only by building up some noble and long-range aims can they study on their own initiative.

Ⅱ主题句四种模式：

1.说出感受

2.引出经历

3.表明立场

4.引出建议、方法、措施、原因等

1.你读信后的感受

(2012广州一模) 2.你读这篇演讲稿后的感受(2011广州一模)

1). Vocabulary used to show _________ 2). Discuss the expressions of showing our feelings a) 让你为我的学习如此担心，我真的很不好意思。

I ________________ that you ___________________________ my study.

b) 读完这篇演讲稿后，我陷入了沉思。

_____________________________________________________________________ 1. 叙述你在家长陪伴下的一次难忘的经历。(2014茂名一模) 2. 以你或他人的经历说明你的观点.(2012广州二模)

1).adjectives used to describe ___________ : 2). Discuss the expressions of narrating an experience. a.我曾有过一次难忘的经历。

_____________________________________________________________________

b. 拿我朋友的经历来做例子吧。

_____________________________________________________________________

c.这简单但是有意义的文章让我想起了一次经历，我永远不会忘记它。

This simple but instructive story _________________________________, which will never escape from my memory.

Useful expressions for narrating an experience:

1. It _________me of…

2 After reading the story above, I ______the experience of my friend, who ...

3. I once had an _____________ experience.

4. Take _________experience as an example.

模式3.

1 你是否赞成(熄灯一小时活动)这种做法并说明理由; (2011深圳二模要点1)

2 你赞同文中的观点(梦想改变命运)吗？(2014梅州市一检)

Useful expressions for opinions:

1. 表示支持或赞同的句型：

I agree _____the statement that ...

I am____...

I am ____favor of ...

I approve ___ the idea that ...

I’m convinced _______ ...

I can’t agree more with _____ the writer said/says.

我赞成这一观点（梦想改变命运）。

_____________________________________________________________

2. 表示反对或不赞同的句型：

I disagree _____…

I am ________…

I am ________to…

I _____________of…

我反对(梦想改变命运)的观点。

____________________________________________________________

3.写出下列作文要点的主题句

(1)你是否赞成(熄灯一小时活动)这种做法并说明理由; (2011深圳二模要点1)

I __________________________________ , which is really meaningful and helpful.

(2). 你是否支持青少年打零工，为什么？(2010深圳十校联考要点2)

I’m ___________________________________ teenagers do part-time jobs.