高考英语书面表达运用高级词汇课件

5.介词误用
1) In my surprise, he has got the first prize. 2) He came here to attend the meeting by a new car. 3) Don’t 6.冠词误用read under the sun. 1) We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five. 2) Once upon a time, there was an one-eyed lion. 3) The history is actually a very interesting subject.
If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it. (高级)
10. 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句
Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. (一般)
It was not until 1920 that regular radio…. (高级) I will make the effort. (一 Though I’m weak,
(高级) She went to Austria in order to study music. (一般)
She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music. (高级)
Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. (一般)
9. 使用虚拟语气
The ship didn’t sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一般)
But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk. (高级)
I wasn’t invited to the party, so I didn’t attend it. (一般)
I happened to have met him. (一般)
It happened that I had met him.
(高级) surprise, the little girl knows so many To his things. (一般)
What surprised him is that the girl….
(高级)
7. 使用状语从句
I won’t believe what he says. (一般)
No matter what he says, I won’t believe. (高级) before six o’clock, you can go If you come back
out. (一般)
写作中怎样使用 复杂结构和高级词汇
一.复杂结构:
1.使用适当的时态
3.使用不定式 5.使用V.+ing形式 7.使用状语从句 9.使用虚拟语气
2.适当的语态
4.使用过去分词 6.使用名词性从句 8.使用定语从句
10.使用强调句,倒装句,感叹句 11.使用并列句
一、怎样运用复杂结构：
1. 改变时态
On his arriving/ arrival, please give…. (高级) If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. (一般) Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow. (高级) Now our school has three teachers. They teach
11. 使用并列句
If you go through the gate, you’ll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般)
Go through the gate, and you’ll find…. (高级) When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般) The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级)morning. I didn’t catch the early I got up late this
9.习惯用法错误 1) The actor in this movie is very beautiful. 2) I and My parents were working in the fields at that time. 3) The reason is because he does not know what to do next.
You can go out on condition that you come back before…. (高级)
The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (一般)
The meal was so nice that we all….
7.名词的数混淆
1) It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing. 2) There is always traffic jam. 8.动词用法错误 1) Where are you come from? 2) When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me. 3) He didn’t notice the teacher to come into the classroom. 4) The accident was happened in 1999.
(高级)
8. 使用定语从句
The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)
The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级)
Followed by many students, she… .
(高级) it is seen, it can never be forgotten . (一般) Once
Once seen, it can … . (高级)
5. 使用v-ing形式
When he arrives please give me an e-mail. (一般)
六、学会使用恰当的关联词：
1. 表示平行、对等或选择关系 and，both…and, as well as, together with, neither…nor, also, not only…but also, either…or, as well. 2. 表示转折关系 but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而), in spite of, although, otherwise, while, after all.
3.时态错误
1) When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed. 2) What are you doing this time yesterday? 4.词性混用 1) She enjoys study English. 2) If anyone against the plan, please let me know.
The bell is ringing now. (一般)
There goes the bell. (高级) 2. 改变语态
People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般)
It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级)
48 pupils. (一般)
Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils. (高级)
6. 使用名词性从句
It disappointed everybody that he didn’t turn up. (一般)
The fact that he didn’t turn up disappointed everybody. (高级)
Thanks to the good weather, our journey…. (高级)
怎样运用高级词汇：
When he heard she had died, he went pale with sorrow. (一般)
At the news of her death, he went….
(高级) She can’t correctly pronounce the word. (一般)
bus. (一般)
I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus. (高
级)
四、怎样运用高级词汇：
As a result, the plan was a failure. (一般)
The plan turned out to be a failure.
3. 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand, just like, unlike, in the same way, at the same time 4. 表示因果关系 so, for, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to, on account (理由) of.
We had to go home.
What we had to do was go home.
五、常见语法错误分析：
1. 句子缺谓语 1) The building like a match box. 2) He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. 2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作 主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。 1) A worker of the farm lead us to the field. 2) All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.
般)
Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort.
(高级) We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. (一般)
How glad we were to see the crops and...! (高级)
I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. (一般)
The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English….
(高级)
She has trouble in pronouncing the wordwill be on duty today? (一般) . (高级) Who Whose turn is it to be on duty today? (高级)
She doesn’t like sports.
She cares nothing for sports.
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He is so kind that he can help me. (一般)
He is so kind as to help me. (高 级) 4. 使用过去分词
She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般)