英语书面表达英语作文汇编(讲义及答案)及答案

英语书面表达英语作文汇编(讲义及答案)及答案

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·北京中考模拟）年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写

一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。

提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important

提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?

As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

【答案】例文

As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。

句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

2．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达。

因学习压力大，部分中学生的身体健康状况有所下降，这一情况已经引起社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视。假若你是来自九年级三班的李华，请根据以下内容，用英语写一份不少于80词的倡议书。建议大家积极多参加体育活动，提高身体素质。不得出现真实姓名。要点：1. 锻炼身体的好处： strong， healthy...

2. 锻炼身体的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...

3. 请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议。

要求：1. 内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

Dear schoolmates,

I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers.

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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua

【答案】Dear shoolmates,

I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”

There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us.

In order to build oursel ves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time.

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文。讲述锻炼身体的好处、锻炼的方式，并建议大家积极参加体育活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符