2019年北京高考逐题精讲

2019年北京市⾼考英语考试逐题解析第⼀部分：知识运⽤（共两节，45分）
第⼀节语法填空（共10⼩题；每⼩题1.5分，共15分）阅读下列短⽂，根据短⽂内容填空。

在未给提示词的空⽩处仅填写1个适当的单词，在给出提示词的空⽩处⽤括号内所给词的正确形式填空。

A
On the first day of my first grade,I stood by the door with butterflies in my stomach.I(1)______(voice)my biggest concern to my mother,“How will I make friends?”She handed me advice,“Be yourself.”For the past20years,I have lived by these words.Soon I will graduate and become part of the real world.Nervously(2) ______(face)challenges,I know I will whisper to(3)______(I)the two simple words“Be yourself”.
live by these words:遵循这些信条。

1.
【答案】voiced
2.
【答案】facing
3.
【答案】myself
B
Earth Day,(4)______(mark)on22April,is an annual event
aiming to raise public awareness about environmental protection.First celebrated(5)______1970,the Day now includes events in more than 190countries and regions(地区).No matter what you like to do,there is a way to get involved in various(6)______(activity)on Earth Day. You can plant a tree,make a meal with locally grown vegetables,or save power—the possibilities are endless.
annual：每年⼀次的
raise public awareness about：提⾼公众意识
get involved in：涉及，参与4.【答案】marked
5.
【答案】in
6.
【答案】activities
C
Does the name of the college you attend really matter?Research on the question(7)______(suggest)that,for most students,it doesn’t. What students do at college seems to matter much more than(8) ______they go.The students benefitting most from college are those (9)______are totally engaged(参与)in academic life,taking full advantage of the college’s chances and resources(资源).Students should have a proper attitude towards college before thinking about which college to attend,and it’s never too early to make necessary preparations for a healthy and(10)______(meaning)college experience.
matter:起作⽤，有影响
benefitting from：从XXX中受益
academic life：学术⽣活
take advantage of:利⽤
have a proper attitude towards：对XXX有⼀个恰当的态度7.
【答案】suggests has suggested
8.
【答案】where 9.
【答案】who
第⼆节完形填空（共20⼩题；每⼩题1.5分，共30分）阅读下⾯短⽂，掌握其⼤意，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂⿊。

Regardless of the weather or the distance,Paul Wilson will make sure low-income students in his neighbourhood arrive at their college classes on time.
A retired engineer,76-year-old Wilson has been______(11)free rides to college students for the past eight years.Since he first started ______(12)his car to the young people,Wilson has______(13)an astonishing64,000miles,and has had countless pleasant and often humorous______(14)with the students he transports to and from school.The students（who he’s______(15)）have gone on to become physicians,teachers and engineers,but what they’ve also got out of their time in school is finding a role model and a friend in Wilson.Some students______(16)call him“Grandpa”.
DINK：double income no kids retire=leave a job
ride:骑，搭乘
offer:主动提供，报价，机会，录取通知书11. A.linking B.sending C.offering D.distributing
12. A.donating B.lending C.delivering D.volunteering
13. A.paved铺路 B.covered C.measured D.wandered
14. A.arguments B.interviews
C.negotiations谈判
D.conversations
15. A.met B.driven C.addressed D.greeted
16. A.even B.ever C.once D.already donate：捐赠⼤物件⽐如身体器官，⾎
pavement：⼈⾏道
to and from:往返
physician：内科医⽣
surgeon：外科医⽣
role model:榜样
address：演讲，发表演讲，地址
Tina Stern______(17)rides from Wilson for all her four years in college,and the trips meant much more to her than just free______ (18).“It’s not just a ride;you’re not just sitting there in______(19) silence or with your headphones on.”Stern said.“He asks you questions and actually______(20)the answers,so the next time you ride with him,he’ll______(21)those things.”
Wilson first worked as a driver through a student-support programme of the non-profit organisation,On Point for College. Although the______(22)asks the members only to drive students to and from their classes,Wilson often goes______(23)to ensure the welfare and safety of the students.If they have problems with registration.Wilson is there to______(24)them.If they run out of certain daily necessities,Wilson will drive to the nearest store and purchase what’s needed.If a student gets hungry on the long drives to and from school,Wilson never______(25)to buy them a meal. wish：n.愿望，⼼愿make a wish:愿望，许愿
desire：n.好的愿望，渴望
urge：n.不好的愿望欲望和冲动v.敦促某⼈17. A.earned B.received C.assessed D.demanded
18. A.transportation B.style C.time munication
19. A.forced B.awkward C.ridiculous D.suspicious
20. A.selects B.recites C.guesses D.remembers
21. A.act on B.settle on
C.check on
D.agree on
22. A.club B.league C.college D.programme
23. A.far B.around C.beyond D.forwards
24. A.assist B.watch C.urge D.warn
25. A.expects B.attempts C.manages D.hesitates assess：评估evaluate：评估
demand：⼤量需求doubt：怀疑别⼈做不了suspect：怀疑别⼈做过，嫌疑犯
act on：对XXX起作⽤，按照XXX做事
settle on：解决/安定check on：核查
welfare：福利registration：登记
daily necessities：⽇常必需品league：联盟，联赛attempt：尝试
For many students,Wilson’s help is not only appreciated,it’s also entirely______(26)for them to be able to complete their college education.Some students don’t have a reliable car,while others have to______(27)vehicles with parents who work six days a week.For them,riding with Wilson has______(28)them to complete their education—but according to Wilson,he benefits just as much from the______(29).“I just love driving,and I love these kids,”Wilson said.“It’s such a(n)______(30)to be a part of these kids’lives,even just for a few hours,getting to know them and hearing their stories.”26. A.extra B.unusual C.necessary D.adequate
27. A.share B.fuel C.repair D.exchange
28. A.required B.allowed C.reminded D.convinced
29. A.experience B.arrangement
C.appreciation
D.employment
30. A.effort B.ambition
C.privilege
D.convenience appreciate：欣赏，感激
reliable：可以依靠
unusual：不寻常（褒义词）
adequate：充⾜的
fuel：燃料助⼒
A convince B：A使得B信服
employment雇佣
privilege：特权，荣幸
第⼆部分：阅读理解（共两节，40分）
第⼀节（共15⼩题；每⼩题2分，共30分）
阅读下列短⽂，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂⿊。

A
1，Want to explore new cultures,meet new people and do
something worthwhile at the same time?（⼴告）You can do all the
three with Global Development Association(GDA).Whatever stage
of life you’re at,wherever you go and whatever project you do in
GDA,you’ll create positive changes in a poor and remote community
(社区).
2，We work with volunteers of all ages and backgrounds.Most of
our volunteers are aged17-24.Now we need volunteer managers aged
25-75.They are extremely important in the safe and effective running
of our programmes.We have such roles as project managers,mountain leaders,and communication officers.
3，Depending on which role you choose,you could help to increase a community’s access to safe drinking water,or help to protect valuable local cultures.You might also design an adventure challenge to train young volunteers.
access：通道，通路，have access to：使⽤
4，Not only will you help our young volunteers to develop personally,you’ll also learn new skills and increase your cultural awareness.You may have chances to meet new people who’ll become
your lifelong friends.
31.What is the main responsibility of volunteer managers?
A.To seek local partners.
B.To take in young volunteers.
C.To carry out programmes.
D.To foster cultural awareness.
foster：培养
run：运营
and local project partners where our help is needed.All our projects aim to promote the development of poor and remote communities.
7，There is no other chance like a GDA programme.（这个机会好）Join us as a volunteer manager to develop your own skills while bringing benefits to the communities.
Find out more about joining a GDA promgramme:
Website:
Email:humanresources@
32.The programme beginning in August will operate in______.
A.Egypt
B.Algeria
C.Kenya
D.South Africa
33.The shared goal of GDA’s projects is to______.
A.explore new cultures
B.protect the environment
C.gain corporate benefits
D.help communities in need
corporate：社团的，法⼈的，企业
B
1，Alice Moore is a teenager entrepreneur(创业者),who in May 2015set up her business AilieCandy.By the time she was13,her company was worth millions of dollars with the invention of a super-sweet treat that could save kids’teeth,instead of destroying them.
2，It all began when Moore visited a bank with her dad.On the outing,she was offered a candy bar.However,her dad reminded her that sugary treats were bad for her teeth.But Moore was sick of missing out on candies.So she desired to get round the warning,“Why can’t I make a healthy candy that’s good for my teeth so that my parents can’t say no to it?”With that in mind,Moore asked her dad if she could start her own candy company.He recommended that she do some research and talk to dentists about what a healthier candy would contain.
3，With her dad’s permission,she spent the next two years researching online and conducting trials to get a recipe that was both tasty and tooth-friendly.She also approached dentists to learn more about teeth cleaning.Consequently,she succeeded in making a kind of candy only using natural sweeteners,which can reduce oral bacteria.
34.How did Moore react to her dad’s warning?
A.She argued with him.
B.She tried to find a way out.
C.She paid no attention.
D.She chose to consult dentists.
conduct：管理，指挥，主导conduct a
research/experiment主导
trial：审判，庭审，试验
recipe：⻝谱/秘诀tooth-friendly：健⻮
35.What is special about CanCandy?
A.It is beneficial to dental health.
B.It is free of sweeteners.甜味剂
C.It is sweeter than other candies.
D.It is produced to a dentists’recipe.
4，Moore then used her savings to get her business off the ground. Afterwards,she and her father secured their first business meeting with a supermarket owner,who finally agreed to sell Moore’s product —CanCandy.
5，As CanCandy’s success grows,so does Moore’s credibility as a young entrepreneur.Moore is enthusiastic about the candy she created, and she’s also positive about what the future might bring.She hopes that every kid can have a clean mouth and a broad smile.
6，Meanwhile,with her parents’help,Moore is generally able to live a normal teenage life.Although she founded her company early on in life,she wasn’t driven primarily by profit.Moore wants to use her unique talent to help others find their smiles.She donates10%of AilieCandy’s profits to Big Smiles.With her talent and determination, it appears that the sky could be the limit for Alice Moore.
live a…life:过着xxx⽣活
smile a…smile:露出xxx微笑dream a…dream:做xxx梦
36.What does Moore expect from her business?
A.To earn more money.
B.To help others find smiles.
C.To make herself stand out.
D.To beat other candy companies.
savings：积蓄
so does she：翻译成“也”
so she does:翻译成“的确”
credibility：信⽤度，可靠性
37.What can we learn from Alice Moore’s story?
A.Fame is a great thirst of the young.
B.A youth is to be regarded with respect.
C.Positive thinking and action result in success.
D.Success means getting personal desires satisfied.
fame：名声
a great thirst of：⼤的渴望
positive：积极的，正⾯的，阳性，正极
negative：负⾯的，消极的，阴性，负极
C
1，The problem of robocalls has gotten so bad that many people now refuse to pick up calls from numbers they don’t know.By next
year,half of the calls we receive will be scams(欺诈).We are finally waking up to the severity of the problem by supporting and developing a group of tools,apps and approaches intended to prevent scammers from getting through.Unfortunately,it’s too little,too late. By the time these“solutions”(解决⽅案)become widely available, scammers will have moved onto cleverer means.In the near future, it’s not just going to be the number you see on your screen that will be in doubt.Soon you will also question whether the voice you’re hearing is actually real.
wake up to:意识到
severity:严重性
intended to:打算
get though:接通电话38.How does the author feel about the solutions to the problem of robocalls?
A.Panicked.
B.Confused.
C.Embarrassed.
D.Disappointed.
注意转折处出答案
panicked:恐慌的
2，That’s because there are a number of powerful voice manipulation(处理)and automation technologies that are about to become widely available for anyone to use.At this year’s I/O Conference,a company showed a new voice technology able to produce such a convincing human-sounding voice that it was able to speak to a receptionist and book a reservation without detection.好3，These developments are likely to make our current problems with robocalls much worse.The reason that robocalls are a headache has less to do with amount than precision.A decade of data breaches (数据侵⼊)of personal information has led to a situation where scammers can easily learn your mother’s name,and far more.不好Armed with this knowledge,they’re able to carry out individually targeted campaigns to cheat people.This means,for example,that a scammer could call you from what looks to be a familiar number and talk to you using a voice that sounds exactly like your bank teller’s,tricking you into“confirming”your address,mother’s name,and card number.Scammers follow money,so companies will be the worst hit.
A lot of business is still done over the phone,and much of it is based on trust and existing relationships.V oice manipulation technologies may weaken that gradually.
39.Taking advantage of the new technologies,scammers can______.
A.aim at victims precisely
B.damage databases easily
C.start campaigns rapidly
D.spread information widely
take advantage of:利⽤
40.What does the passage imply?
A.Honesty is the best policy.
B.Technologies can be double-edged.好+不好
C.There are more solutions than problems.
D.Credibility holds the key to development.
armed with：装备/武装
trick sb into doing：诱骗
the worst hit：打击最严重
policy；政策
4，We need to deal with the insecure nature of our telecom
networks.Phone carriers and consumers need to work together to find ways of determining and communicating what is real.That might mean either developing a uniform way to mark videos and images, showing when and who they were made by,or abandoning phone calls altogether and moving towards data-based communications—using apps like FaceTime or WhatsApp,which can be tied to your identity.
5，Credibility is hard to earn but easy to lose,and the problem is only going to get harder from here on out.
insecure nature：不安全的属性
uniform:统⼀的
credibility:可靠性，可信性
phone carriers：电话运营商
consumer：消费者41.Which of the following would be the best title for the passage?
A.Where the Problem of Robocalls Is Rooted
B.Who Is to Blame for the Problem of Robocalls
C.Why Robocalls Are About to Get More Dangerous
D.How Robocalls Are Affecting the World of Technology
root：根源在于，根源
be to blame:应受责备
第⼀段提到了⾃助语⾳电话带给⼈们的危害
接下来的段落⼜进⼀步阐述这类电话带给⼈们危害的原因倒数第⼆段阐述了减轻相关危害的⽅案
尾段最终提出信任度是很难获得⼜很容易失去的东⻄，并且，由此涉及的相关问题也会越来越难以解决。

整篇⽂章都是在逐步阐述⾃助语⾳电话愈加危险的状况；
D
1，By the end of the century,if not sooner,the world’s oceans will be bluer and greener thanks to a warming climate,according to a new study.海洋在变绿变蓝。

2，At the heart of the phenomenon lie tiny marine microorganisms (海洋微⽣物)called phytoplankton（浮游植物）.Because of the way light reflects off the organisms,these phytoplankton create colourful patterns at the ocean surface.Ocean colour varies from green to blue, depending on the type and concentration of phytoplankton.Climate change will fuel the growth of phytoplankton in some areas,while reducing it in other spots,leading to changes in the ocean’s appearance.海洋颜⾊变化在于海洋浮游植物的类型和浓度。

3，Phytoplankton live at the ocean surface,where they pull carbon dioxide(⼆氧化碳)into the ocean while giving off oxygen.But phytoplankton are vulnerable to the ocean’s warming trend.Warming changes key characteristics of the ocean and can affect phytoplankton growth,since they need not only sunlight and carbon dioxide to grow, but also nutrients.
42.What are the first two paragraphs mainly about?主旨题
A.The various patterns at the ocean surface.
B.The cause of the changes in ocean colour.
C.The way light reflects off marine organisms.
D.The efforts to fuel the growth of phytoplankton.
43.What does the underlined word“vulnerable”in Paragraph3
probably mean?
A.Sensitive.
B.Beneficial.
C.Significant.
D.Unnoticeable.
lie：在于reflect：反应pattern：模式concentration：浓度fuel：燃料，加速，促进
spot：地点，认出，现场，斑点give off：释放
trend：趋势nutrient：营养
4，Stephanie Dutkiewicz,a scientist in MIT’s Center for Global Change Science,built a climate model that projects changes to the oceans throughout the century.In a world that warms up by3℃,it found that multiple changes to the colour of the oceans would occur. The model projects that currently blue areas with little phytoplankton could become even bluer.But in some waters,such as those of the Arctic,a warming will make conditions riper for phytoplankton,and these areas will turn greener.“Not only are the quantities of phytoplankton in the ocean changing,”she said,“but the type of phytoplankton is changing.”
5，And why does that matter?Phytoplankton are the base of the food web.If certain kinds begin to disappear from the ocean, Dutkiewicz said,“it will change the type of fish that will be able to survive.”Those kinds of changes could affect the food chain.
6，Whatever colour changes the ocean experiences in the coming decades will probably be too gradual and unnoticeable,but they could mean significant changes.“It’ll be a while before we can statistically show that the changes are happening because of climate change,”Dutkiewicz said,“but the change in the colour of the ocean will be one of the early warning signals that we really have changed our planet.”
44.What can we learn from the passage?
A.Phytoplankton play a declining role in the marine ecosystem.
B.Dutkiewicz’s model aims to project phytoplankton changes.
C.Phytoplankton have been used to control global climate.
D.Oceans with more phytoplankton may appear greener.
45.What is the main purpose of the passage?
A.To assess the consequences of ocean colour changes.
B.To analyse the composition of the ocean food chain.
C.To explain the effects of climate change on oceans.
D.To introduce a new method to study phytoplankton. multiple：多样的，许多的，多重的currently：⽬前地matter：重要，有关系decade：⼗年
unnoticeable：不显著的significant：明显的
warning signal：警告信号statistically：统计地
根据短⽂内容，从短⽂后的选项中选出能填⼊空⽩处的最佳选项。

选项中有两项为多余选项。

1，看选项（找名词，找代词）2，看空格（前后有没有逻辑词，代词）
3，先做容易题，然后⼀个⼀个⽐对，排除
Much of the work in today’s world is accomplished(完成)in teams.Most people believe the best way to build a great team is to gather a group of the most talented individuals.46_____Companies spend millions hiring top business people.Is their money well spent？
B.Sports team owners spend millions of dollars attracting top talent.（句式⼀致）--类⽐
D,G绝对不能选，没有this指代
___47___They focused on football，basketball and baseball.The results are mixed For football and basketball，adding talented players to a team proves a good method，but only up to the point where70%of the players are top talent；above that level,the team’s performance begins to decline.Interestingly，this trend isn’t evident in baseball.where additional individual talent keeps improving the team’s performance.
E.Several recent studies examined the role of talent in the sports world.（代词指代）--B,D,E—最简单题⽬
To explain this phenomenon，the researchers explored the degree to which a good performance by a team requires its members to coordinate(协调)their actions.______48______In baseball，the performance of individual players is less dependent on teammates.They conclude that when task interdependence is high，team performance will suffer when there is too much talent，while individual talent will have positive effects on team performance when task interdependence is lower.（G.This task interdependence distinguishes baseball from football and basketball.）原词复现If a basketball star is.for example，trying to gain a high personal point total，he may take a shot himself when it would be better to pass the ball to a teammate，affecting the team's performance.Young children learning to play team sports are often told，“There is no I in TEAM.”___49___
D.Stars apparently do not follow this basic principle of sportsmanship.（段尾总括句）只有本句有star。

Another possibility is that when there is a lot of talent on a team，some players may make less effort.Just as in a game of tug-of-war(拔河⽐赛)，whenever a person is added，everyone else pulls the rope with less force.tug—拖
___50___.An A-team may require a balance-not just A players，but a few generous B players as well.
F.Building up a dream team is more complex than simply hiring the best talent.（段⾸主题句）
A.It's not a simple matter to determine the nature of talent.难决定天才的本质
B.Sports team owners spend millions of dollars attracting top talent.运动队花钱吸引顶尖天才
C.The group interaction and its effect drew the researchers'attention.⼩组互动和它的影响引注意
D.Stars apparently do not follow this basic principle of sportsmanship.明星不遵循体育精神原则
E.Several recent studies examined the role of talent in the sports world.研究天才在运动世界中的⻆⾊
F.Building up a dream team is more complex than simply hiring the best talent.打造梦之队难
G.This task interdependence distinguishes baseball from football and basketball.任务依赖性区别各种球
第三部分：书⾯表达（共两节，35分）
第⼀节（15分）
假设你是红星中学⾼三学⽣李华。

你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。

请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1．交通出⾏；
2．必备⾐物。

注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计⼊总词数。

Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（请务必将作⽂写在答题卡指定区域内）
主要突出两个要点：
1.交通出⾏：
覆盖三座城市谈及城际和市内，有详有略理由添加合情合理
2.必备⾐物：
体现出必备
有⾐有物
本次评分细则：
1.交际意识：开头—欢迎；结尾—祝好、盼来；要点—交际性贯穿全⽂（没有不算缺要点，但上不了⼀档⽂）
2.
交通出⾏：
出⾏⽅式—城际之间：⻜机，⾼铁，轮船，开⻋；步⾏建议不可取
城内之间：地铁，公交，共享单⻋，包括步⾏（强调中国与英国的区别）
出⾏条件—考虑天⽓，交通，⽬的地，游玩景点等条件，选择不同的出⾏⽅式出⾏安排—先到哪座城市，待⼏天，玩⼉什么
交通优势—快捷便利，欣赏⻛景，科技发展。

3.注意：书写！！！
段落结构问题
以下为两篇学⽣考场范⽂，两篇⽂章可以看出
1.要点⼀定要⻬全！⼩错误表达不会影响严重
2.作⽂表达不需⽤很多华丽复杂
的词语，⽽是要表达通畅，连贯流利，贴近地道的语⾔表达
【范⽂】
Dear Jim,
How is everything going?I’m very pleased and excited to learn your travel plan to Beijing,Tianjin and Shanghai.Welcome!It’s my great honor to offer you some travel tips,which,I hope,can solve your problems.
Transportation matters so much while traveling.Beijing,Tianjin and Shanghai all have the excellent subway systems which can take you everywhere in the city.If you want a deep experience in the city, shared bikes would be the best choice.As for city-to-city tour,the high-speed rail is highly recommended because it has been the most convenient way in recent years.As for clothes preparation, sun-protective coats and hats would be necessary,considering you will come to China during the summer.Also,pack a pair of comfortable shoes in case of the city walk.
I hope these suggestions above will be of some help to you. Perhaps we can meet in Beijing?Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
⼀些应⽤⽂的复习⼩建议
1.考场写作的四个环节：审题—写作⽬的 构思 列提纲—防漏点、防涂改、防没地（写作过程中填⼊词块、句式） 成⽂—书写
2.训练添加合理细节：要点细节意义/结果
3.提⾼语⾔质量：
英语句式：基本句型（谓语动词）
准确运⽤：单元词块⼉复习；单句、段落翻译；基础语法常抓不懈4.准备作⽂本（复习切⼊点）：记载积累过程，能⼒提⾼
第⼆节
（20分）
假设你是红星中学⾼三学⽣李华。

你们班上周组织了⼀次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。

请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写⼀篇英⽂周记，记述整个过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：⻄⽠watermelon
情景作⽂要有“⽣命⼒”，也就是说，⼀篇好的情景作⽂应是⼀篇“健康”的情景作⽂。

“健康”的标准是：1.作⽂有思想2.⽂中的语句能达意评分细节：
在评分时，不会因特定的错误扣具体分数，采⽤整体评分法。

也就是不会因为错某个词⽽扣分。

评分参照标准：1.内容：要点（是否⻬全）+细节（是否有效，是否能够⽀撑要点？）2.语⾔（准确、简练）
2015年——11.89分
2016年——11.67分
2017年——11.37分
2018年——12.01分
2019年——11.60分
从这组数据中可以看出，只有2018年的平均分都超过了及格线。

2019年，全
市满分⼈数不到10⼈。

（请务必将作⽂写在答题卡指定区域内）
2019年情景作⽂，官⽅给出的4幅图要点为：
1.宣传动员
2.准备⾏李
3.体验劳动
4.回家分享
1.将图1的要点表达为⽼师通知我们，⽽没写出宣传动员的学⽣，因两种表达⽅式产⽣的结果是相同的，所以不会影响及格。

2.图2的要点，若表达为回家做家务，是会降档的，因为本图是在为体验劳动，做提前准备，所以不能写成做家务。

3.图3的要点，在表达摘⻄⽠的时候，如果出现不够准确的情况并不会对评分结果造成影响。

4.图4的要点，如果只写出回家吃饭，是不能给及格以上的，因为⽂章的中⼼思想是劳动，所有的要点都应该服务中⼼。

所以在写最后⼀幅图的时候，如果只写出了与⽗⺟吃饭，并不能服务与中⼼思想，所以只写出吃饭是会降档的。

5.整个故事发⽣在⼀天之内，或者是分布在多天，都是不影响及格的，这个主要看语⾔的表达。

6.如果图1开头写本次活动是为了庆祝五⼀劳动节，是完全不影响评分的。

判卷细节点：在情景作⽂的判卷中，确定要点⻬全与否，是评分的第⼀步，也是最重要的⼀步。

确定要点是否⻬全不只是看要点句，也并不会抠具体的某⼀个词，只要表达出相应的要点就可以。

在⽂章细节⽅⾯，细节要做到符合逻辑，能够⽀撑要点，并且具体⽣动，在必要的时候要写出它的深层含义。

语⾔⽅⾯采⽤总体评分原则，并不会纠结⼀两处错误来扣分。

以下为学⽣考场情景作⽂
【范⽂】
Last week,our school organized an activity themed“Glory of Labor”,which proved to be meaningful and indelible.
When we held the class meeting,our teacher informed us of the news that an activity themed“Glory of Labor”would be held.On hearing that,we were extremely excited.We regarded it as a wonderful opportunity to experience the real life and couldn’t resist the desire to be involved in it.
Having signed up for the activity,I returned home to prepare the luggage.Hardly had I entered my bedroom when I took out my suitcase.I packed my necessities into it which included some clothes, towels and the water glass.I couldn’t wait to experience the activity.
Then came the big moment.Together with my classmates,I came to the watermelon patch.The moment we reached the destination,we were divided into several groups and got down to work.Some students were responsible for picking the watermelons;some students put the watermelons into the baskets while others carried the baskets filled with watermelons to the specified place.Tired as we were,we were in high spirits.
Time passed before we knew it.After getting the task finished,I returned home and recalled the whole day,sharing my excitement with my parents.With my favorite meal served,they spoke highly of me.An overwhelming sense of pride came over me.
It was through this experience that I realized that labor is glorious.Never could it fade from my mind and I expected another activity like this.。