如何在2019高考英语作文中增加细节技巧(共19张PPT)
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__m__a_k_in__g_i_t_im__p_o_s_s_i_b_le__t_o_u__s_e_. ______________(
变得无法使用)
5.补充功能性（交际性）语言 1____I_w__o_u_ld_g_r_e_a_t_ly_a_p_p_r_e_c_ia_t_e_i_t _if_y_o_u_c_o_u_l_d__
(希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).
2.补充前因后果或目的 (1) Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture,
___________________________________________ (因为知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣），I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity.
____d_o_m__e_t_h_e_f_a_v_o_ur_._____________（如果 你能帮我这个忙，我将不胜感激
（2）_L_o_o_ki_n_g_f_o_rw__a_rd__to__y_o_u_r _e_a_rl_y_r_e_p_ly_._____ （期待着你的早日回复）
(3 )_I_f_th_e_r_e_i_s_a_n_y_t_h_in_g__I _ca_n__d_o_f_o_r_y_o_u_,____ ____p_le_a_s_e__d_o_n_’t_h_e_s_i_ta_t_e_t_o_le_t_m__e_k_n_o_w__. __ (如果有什么能帮到你的，请不要犹豫告诉我）
3 With caution, I opened the plastic bag, ______________________________.（结果）
4 Last week, I bought an English dictionary from your online bookstore
____________________________________(目的/原因)
5_____________________________________ ___________________ (若你能考虑我的建议， 我将不胜感激)..
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你 咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写 封回信。
要点：1、参加中文学习班。 2、看中文书刊、电视。 3、学唱中文歌曲。 4、交中国朋友。
school.
(我们学校的学生会主席). /
a_n_e_x_c_h_a_n_g_e__s_tu_d__en__t _fr_o_m___C_h_i_n_a_._____________(来
自中国的一位交换生).
2. I want to have a pen friend,
_h__o_p_e_fu_l_l_y_a__g_ir_l_w__it_h__in_t_e_r_e_s_ts__si_m__il_a_r_t_o_m__i_n_e.
Try writing to me in Chinese next time.
BesBaidu Nhomakorabea wishes
Li Hua
(2016全国课标卷)假定你是李华，暑假想去一 家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历 （resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她修 改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
(2)In order to get some practical experience,
______________________________________________________________________
(为了获得一些实践经验) I’m planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.
missing passport, so that he can get it back. I would
appreciate it if you could do me the favor. I’m
looking forward to your reply.
交际语
结
Y果ours,
如何适当增加细节
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
practice (add reasonable details）
1.I’m LiHua,___________________. (同位语)
2. I’m writing to ask you to help me find the owner of a passport,___________________. (具 体来源等)
picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway
station when I was taking a ride home. There was
nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench.
The owner of it is Steven who comes from England.
4 增加结果或者是效果
(1)I think it is a good chance to appreciate local
operas, w__h_i_c_h__w__il_l__s_u_r_e_l_y__h_e__lp__y_o__u__le_a__r_n__m__o_r_e__ ___a_b_o__u_t_C__h__in_e__s_e cu(这ltu必re将.有助于你学到更多的中国文化）
3.适当将写作内容具体化
（1) The activity will be held from 9 a.m. to 10 ___a_._m_._o__n_A__p_ri_l _1_1__i_n_C__la_s_s_r_o_o_m___5_0_1_.__________
(具体时间、地点）
(2 )I know the owner is Steven f_r_o_m__E_n_g_la_n_d_,_a_g_e_d__3_8_, _m_a_r_ri_e_d_. (相关身份信 息)
3 When I received the dictionary, I found that _th__e_re__w__e_r_e_s_o__m_e__m__is__p_ri_n_t_s_a__n_d_p__a_g_e_s__fr_o_m_____ _2_3_-_4_5__w_e__re__m__is_s_i_n_g_.___________(具体存在问题 如错印、缺页等)
Having lost the passport, he must be very anxious,
but I have no 原S因o I need
idea your
how具to体r化eturn it help. I wish you
to him. could post
a
心理 感受
notice on your newspaper to tell him about the
1. 增加同位语 2. 补全前因后果或目的 3. 适当将写作内容具体化 4. 写出个人感受、评价或后果 5. 补充功能性（交际性）语言
What kind of information can often be added to your article?
1 增加同位语
1 I am LiHua, _C__h_ai_r_m_a_n__o_f _th_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts_’_U_n_i_o_n_o_f_m__y__
一个问题
主体信息写完往往只有60-70个字，不 足100词，怎么弥补词数？
需要“适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。
Dear editor,
同位语
I’m LiHua, a high school student in our city. I’m
writing to tell you a piece of urgent information. I
How to add reasonable details to your article
假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英 国人Steven 的护照。请你用英语给你市某英 文报社编辑写一封信，内容包括：
1.简述时间过程; 2.交代护照相关信息; 3. 委托报社刊登招领启事.
注意: 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(2)We can set out early, so that we can have more _ti_m_e__t_o_r_e_a_d__a_n_d__s_e_le__c_t _b_o_o_k_s__________(以便我
们有更多的时间阅读和挑选图书）
(3)There are quite a few missing pages,
注意：1. 词数：100左右。 2. 可适当增加 细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语已为你写好.
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends.
_(_3_)_S___in__c__e__I__h__a__v_e___t_h__e__e__x__p_e__r_i_e__n__c_e___o__f_l_o__s_i_n__g___m__y___I_D______ card, (由于我有过丢身份证的经历），I can feel how anxious Mr Steven will be now.
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I'm your student Li Hua. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation. Could you correct the language and the format of the application letter and resume I have written?
变得无法使用)
5.补充功能性（交际性）语言 1____I_w__o_u_ld_g_r_e_a_t_ly_a_p_p_r_e_c_ia_t_e_i_t _if_y_o_u_c_o_u_l_d__
(希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).
2.补充前因后果或目的 (1) Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture,
___________________________________________ (因为知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣），I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity.
____d_o_m__e_t_h_e_f_a_v_o_ur_._____________（如果 你能帮我这个忙，我将不胜感激
（2）_L_o_o_ki_n_g_f_o_rw__a_rd__to__y_o_u_r _e_a_rl_y_r_e_p_ly_._____ （期待着你的早日回复）
(3 )_I_f_th_e_r_e_i_s_a_n_y_t_h_in_g__I _ca_n__d_o_f_o_r_y_o_u_,____ ____p_le_a_s_e__d_o_n_’t_h_e_s_i_ta_t_e_t_o_le_t_m__e_k_n_o_w__. __ (如果有什么能帮到你的，请不要犹豫告诉我）
3 With caution, I opened the plastic bag, ______________________________.（结果）
4 Last week, I bought an English dictionary from your online bookstore
____________________________________(目的/原因)
5_____________________________________ ___________________ (若你能考虑我的建议， 我将不胜感激)..
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你 咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写 封回信。
要点：1、参加中文学习班。 2、看中文书刊、电视。 3、学唱中文歌曲。 4、交中国朋友。
school.
(我们学校的学生会主席). /
a_n_e_x_c_h_a_n_g_e__s_tu_d__en__t _fr_o_m___C_h_i_n_a_._____________(来
自中国的一位交换生).
2. I want to have a pen friend,
_h__o_p_e_fu_l_l_y_a__g_ir_l_w__it_h__in_t_e_r_e_s_ts__si_m__il_a_r_t_o_m__i_n_e.
Try writing to me in Chinese next time.
BesBaidu Nhomakorabea wishes
Li Hua
(2016全国课标卷)假定你是李华，暑假想去一 家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历 （resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她修 改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
(2)In order to get some practical experience,
______________________________________________________________________
(为了获得一些实践经验) I’m planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.
missing passport, so that he can get it back. I would
appreciate it if you could do me the favor. I’m
looking forward to your reply.
交际语
结
Y果ours,
如何适当增加细节
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
practice (add reasonable details）
1.I’m LiHua,___________________. (同位语)
2. I’m writing to ask you to help me find the owner of a passport,___________________. (具 体来源等)
picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway
station when I was taking a ride home. There was
nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench.
The owner of it is Steven who comes from England.
4 增加结果或者是效果
(1)I think it is a good chance to appreciate local
operas, w__h_i_c_h__w__il_l__s_u_r_e_l_y__h_e__lp__y_o__u__le_a__r_n__m__o_r_e__ ___a_b_o__u_t_C__h__in_e__s_e cu(这ltu必re将.有助于你学到更多的中国文化）
3.适当将写作内容具体化
（1) The activity will be held from 9 a.m. to 10 ___a_._m_._o__n_A__p_ri_l _1_1__i_n_C__la_s_s_r_o_o_m___5_0_1_.__________
(具体时间、地点）
(2 )I know the owner is Steven f_r_o_m__E_n_g_la_n_d_,_a_g_e_d__3_8_, _m_a_r_ri_e_d_. (相关身份信 息)
3 When I received the dictionary, I found that _th__e_re__w__e_r_e_s_o__m_e__m__is__p_ri_n_t_s_a__n_d_p__a_g_e_s__fr_o_m_____ _2_3_-_4_5__w_e__re__m__is_s_i_n_g_.___________(具体存在问题 如错印、缺页等)
Having lost the passport, he must be very anxious,
but I have no 原S因o I need
idea your
how具to体r化eturn it help. I wish you
to him. could post
a
心理 感受
notice on your newspaper to tell him about the
1. 增加同位语 2. 补全前因后果或目的 3. 适当将写作内容具体化 4. 写出个人感受、评价或后果 5. 补充功能性（交际性）语言
What kind of information can often be added to your article?
1 增加同位语
1 I am LiHua, _C__h_ai_r_m_a_n__o_f _th_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts_’_U_n_i_o_n_o_f_m__y__
一个问题
主体信息写完往往只有60-70个字，不 足100词，怎么弥补词数？
需要“适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。
Dear editor,
同位语
I’m LiHua, a high school student in our city. I’m
writing to tell you a piece of urgent information. I
How to add reasonable details to your article
假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英 国人Steven 的护照。请你用英语给你市某英 文报社编辑写一封信，内容包括：
1.简述时间过程; 2.交代护照相关信息; 3. 委托报社刊登招领启事.
注意: 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(2)We can set out early, so that we can have more _ti_m_e__t_o_r_e_a_d__a_n_d__s_e_le__c_t _b_o_o_k_s__________(以便我
们有更多的时间阅读和挑选图书）
(3)There are quite a few missing pages,
注意：1. 词数：100左右。 2. 可适当增加 细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语已为你写好.
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends.
_(_3_)_S___in__c__e__I__h__a__v_e___t_h__e__e__x__p_e__r_i_e__n__c_e___o__f_l_o__s_i_n__g___m__y___I_D______ card, (由于我有过丢身份证的经历），I can feel how anxious Mr Steven will be now.
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I'm your student Li Hua. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation. Could you correct the language and the format of the application letter and resume I have written?