Online Shopping在线购物

Online Shopping

Nowadays,online shopping is already becoming increasingly fashionable.People can stay at home to buy what they want to buy just only to move their fingers.Online shopping is more convenient than the typical shopping.We used to spend a lot of time in walking around to find what we need and make sure it’s the best.But online shopping help us save time.And things online is more cheaper than on the street.

Although online shopping have many advantages,it also have not a bit questions.For instance,we just see the picture in Internet,it may be not the same with the things we get in the end.And there may be some Hakes make use of the Internet to steal your money.

In my opinion,we can in the fashion and go online shopping,but we shuold pay more attention to the Internet security.We can also enjoy going shopping in the street.

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Nowadays, online shopping is already becoming increasingly fashionable.

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People can stay at home to buy what they want to buy just only to move their fingers.

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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: buy, purchase 均含“购买”之意。

∙[点评] at home to是习语，意为“会客”，常用于否定句，不可误解为“在家”。

Mr.Smith is not at home to anyone today.

史密斯先生今天不会客。

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∙[批改提示] move近义表达有progress/ develop/ advance

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Online shopping is more convenient than the typical shopping.

∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: normal, ordinary, regular, natural, typical均含“规则的，正常的，正规的”之意。

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We used to spend a lot of time in walking around to find what we need and make sure it's the best.

∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: lack, need, want, require 均有“缺少，短少”之意。

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But online shopping help us save time.

∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: help, aid, assistance, support 均有“帮助，支持”之意。

∙[批改提示] save近义表达有rescue/ release/ liberate/ salvage 好评报错

∙[批改提示] but的近义表达有nonetheless或nevertheless。

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And things online is more cheaper than on the street.

∙[形容词错误] 建议将more cheaper改为much cheaper。

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∙[形容词错误] 语法错误，建议将more+形容词比较级改为形容词比较级或much+形容词比较级。

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∙[语法检查] 建议把more cheaper than改成cheaper than (Revise...)

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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: inexpensive, cheap均含“便宜的，价廉的”之意。

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Although online shopping have many advantages, it also have not a bit questions.

∙[动词错误] 主谓不一致，建议将it后的谓语动词改为第三人称单数形式。

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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好处”之意。

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For instance, we just see the picture in Internet, it may be not the same with the things we get in the end.

∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标，目的”之意。

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And there may be some Hakes make use of the Internet to steal your money.

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