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• 文章框架的套用模式
• Model One
From the graph, we know the number of …is…in 1999. And the number in 2003 has increased /decreased to…. (说 明了图表概况)The change of the number/ The increasing numbers from 1999 to 2003 shows/show that more and more people prefer to…rather than do…(数据揭示了什么)
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可根据图表信息,适当发挥。
As economy develops and the standard of life improves, the beginning of 21th century sees a significant change in the ways people spend their holidays.
The reasons for this instance ( 情 况 )are as follows. Firstly,…原因一。Secondly…原因二。Thirdly…原因三。
However, with the help of …More and more people will…in future.(However, as the society goes by, more people will realize…and I believe that the number of…will increase.)
Half of the people surveyed are in favour of the idea while the other half take an objection to it, who hold the view for the following reasons. The chart shows half of the objectors are troubled by frequent traffic jams on their way to school. It seems a waste of time since they are always held up for quite a long time during rush hours. From another perspective, objectors argue(表明观点) that children can hardly stand on their own feet if they are driven to school every day. In addition, one third of them complain it adds to their parents’ burden from many aspects, such as money, time and energy.
• 目前,家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象,人们对此 做法褒贬不一。下图是就此现象所做的问卷调查结果。结果表明, 支持者和反对者各占一半。请从中选一种你支持的观点,用英语 描述关于这个观点的调查结果,并说明你支持的理由。
• 注意:1. 词数100-120左右。
• Nowadays it’s common for parents to drive their children to and from school. Recently a survey has been done on the issue. Half of the people surveyed are in favor of the practice(做法). Among them, half believe that driving children to school saves time. Another 30% think it comfortable to go by car, especially in harsh weather. About 15% consider it a good choice just for the sake of children’s safety. Still others think it offers more chances for parents to communicate with their children.
• While I agree that going to school by car is a better solution for young children, I don’t think it a good idea for older children. With high pressure on their studies, they need to find extra time for exercise. It would be better if they chose to cycle or walk to and from school instead of taking a car, which will definitely help them keep fit. (128)
记住: • 这类要用一般现在时(现在的情况)或过去式(过
去的数据)。另外,这类作文属于比较难的一种,因 此,主要内容应在原因分析上,其他部分可以用一
两句话交代清楚就行。
• 阅读下列图表,以“Changes in the Ways People Spent Their Holidays”为题,写一篇词数为120左右的短文。
3.Compared to/with... ,in contrast相比之下 4.as...as, the same as, similar to, 相同 5. be different from.. differ from 不同 三、得出结论
In conclusion/ We can draw the conclusion that..., it seems clear that /It's clear from the chart that..., We can learn/know that..
Personally, I don’t think it a good idea to drive children to and from school. Though it is a common social phenomenon, it is not a necessity and may have negative effect on children’s growth.
• Personally, I like the idea of driving children to and from school. The children may have more sleep time by getting up a bit later. Also, more and more families own private cars. The parents tend to drive to work. It would save a lot of trouble for children if they give their children a ride on their way to and from work. (121)
一、图表作文点明主题 常用的词有:1.table, chart, graph,diagram 2.describe, tell, show, represent,depict等等。 二、分析差异 在描写变化及总趋势特征时,可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题,并阐 明必要的理由。常用的词汇有: 1.rise, increase, drop, decrease, fall, reduce升高降低 2.while, but, on the contrary, however, 转折
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多幅图
Model Two
The figure of the first graph shows that…(第一幅图的 情况)While the figure of the second graph shows that… (另一幅图的情况). The figures of the two graphs warn us that…(两幅图的数据说明了什么)
步骤:
• 1) 说明图表概况。 • 2) 图表概况说明了什么。 • 3) 分析原因。
图表作文三个层次要求
图表式作文是说明文的一种。一般可分三个层次 来写:
• 第一按照题目要求描述图表反映的总情况,即 概括大意。
• 第二对数字进行仔细的比较,抓住特点进行分 析、归纳并找出产生变化的原因。
• 第三可写读图表后的想法和评论,从而得出自 己的结论。(审题)
Compared with 2002, 25% of inhabitants chose to travel abroad in 2006, increasing by about 10%. And 30% of people enjoy camping outside cities, the figure of which grew by 20% in four years. Besides, 35% of the population spent their holidays along the seaside, while 5% more did so four years ago in 2002. In the year 2006, only one out of ten people stay at home during holidays, 20% less than those in 2004.
The reasons for the change/difference of the figures are as follows. Firstly,…Secondly…Thirdly…(说明变 化的原因)
In a word, from the graphs, we have learned that…And I believe that…(总结和预测)
写文章的步骤
写作四步走:
1.审题:内容,形式, 时态,对象 2.构思:结构,过渡(词),有用词 3.成文:语言 (连贯性) 4.审核:改错(动词,主谓一致…)
审题---构思---成文---审核
图表作文
这类作文一般是柱状图,块状图进行分析。 如果是线状图,要讲明线的走向,数据对比,说 明什么,原因分析和前景预测或个人看法。如果 是柱状图,要讲明柱的高低,数据对比,说明什 么,原因分析和前景预测。如果是块状图,要说 明块状比例,数据对比例,说明什么,原因分析 和前景预测。
• Nowadays it’s common for parents to drive their children to and from school. Recently a survey has been done on the issue. Half of the people surveyed are against the practice. About 55% of them believe it results in heavier traffic, especially in rush hours. Around 30% think that driving kids to and from school will add to pressure on parents. It takes time, expense and effort to do this. Still again, 15% worry that children may become more dependent on their parents in the long term (run).