写作案例2文档

写作案例2

假设你是李华，你的美国网友Mike来信说他想来中国游玩，请你给他一些指导。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信，介绍黄山。开头和结尾已经给出不计入总词数。

提示：1、对Mike表示问候；2、介绍黄山：为中国四大名山之一，坐落于安徽省南部，山高坡陡风光秀丽，每年吸引大量游客；3、邀请Mike在暑假期间来中国玩。

注意：1、词数100—120；2、可适当增加细节。

参考词汇：奇松odd-shaped pine tree; 怪石strangely-shaped rock formations; 温泉crystal-clear hot springs; 云海clouds of sea

教学目的：教会学生写信，如何审题，抓要点，组织句子和段落

教学方法：过程写作法

教学步骤：

1、读题审题，把握文体，人称，时态和写作要点

应用文：注意信件的格式，写清问候语，黄山的美丽风光，邀请Mike来中国游玩，结束语

人称对于Mike和我使用you和I

以一般现在时为基本时态

要点：问候语；来中国玩；推荐到黄山游玩并介绍黄山；邀请到中国游玩；结束语

2、抓要点及相关内容，找准关键词汇短语及句型

a. How is it going? / How are you getting along with…

b. I strongly recommend that you go to the Yellow Mountain, one of the most famous four mountains in China; situated in the south of Anhui Province; odd-shaped pine tree; strangely-shaped rock formations; crystal-clear hot springs; clouds of sea; a number of tourists come every year / attract a number of tourists around the world every year

c. looking foreword to your reply / best wishes

3、组织句子和段落，使文章要点突出，简洁明了，句子通顺流畅，逻辑连贯，词汇句型准确，表义清楚

Paragraph 1. greetings: how is it going? come to visit China, I strongly recommend that you go to the Yellow Mountain, one of the most famous four mountains in

China;

Paragraph 2. situated in the south of Anhui Province; be famous for its beautiful scenery;

odd-shaped pine tree; strangely-shaped rock formations; crystal-clear hot

springs; clouds of sea; a number of tourists come every year

Paragraph 3. looking foreword to your reply / best wishes

4、范文赏析：阅读欣赏，学习佳句

Dear Mike,

How is it going? I am happy to hear that you are planning to visit China. There are many famous places of interest here. Here I want to tell you something about the Yellow Mountain, one of the most famous four mountains in China.

The Yellow Mountain, famous around the world, is situated in the south of Anhui Province. The mountain is high and the slope is steep, but it is wonderful. As is known to us all, there are four characteristics about the Yellow Mountain: odd-shaped pine trees, strangely-shaped rock formations, seas of cloud and crystal-clear hot springs. The Yellow Mountain is one of the rare wonders in the world and it attracts a number of tourists every year. I am sure you will have a wonderful time here if you come in the summer holiday.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua