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把握标准，树立标靶（山东高考英语作文各档次评分标准）

26-29（优秀档）紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，显示较强的语言运用能力；语言小错不超过四个。

标准解读，有的放矢

1.“语法结构多样”

1）“长短句错落有致，句式丰富多样”给阅卷老师新鲜感。简单，并列，复合句交替使用。

e.g. I have to study harder, or I shall not catch up with my classmates.

The football match had to be delayed, for it was raining heavily.

2）巧用非谓语动词，简洁明快”名词性从句，定语从句状语从句转非谓语。

e.g. If we are united, we stand; if we are divided, we fail.

3) 主被动交替：

Today, we use computers not only in our work but also in our everyday life as well.

4) 肯否交替I will try my best not to let them dow n

5) 巧用插入语in my opinion; I think; in fact等：

e.g. Measures, therefore, should be taken to deal with the problem.

6) 陈述不如倒装妙，四种形式需记牢。

In no case/By no means/Under no circumstances will I give up learning. In the center of our school lies our library, which is between the garden and the teaching building.(倒装后主语还可续加从句，呈现更多亮点。)

Only in this way/by taking regular exercise can we keep healthy.

So interesting is the film that we wanted to see it a second time.

Much as he enjoys it, he doesn’t want to be addicted to it.

★温馨提示：阅卷老师最喜欢的高级语法有it句型，分词,倒装，从句，独立主格和强调等。

2. “词汇丰富”

1）词性多样性如：benefit sb a lot /be of great benefit /benefit a lot from/ be beneficial to

2) 高级词汇使用如：make sense ,cope with, make a difference, traditionally, individually

★温馨提示：准确使用高中阶段的词汇即可，生僻词、长词并非高级词汇，不会得高分。3)同义词使用,避俗套。more and more peopl e→an increasing number of people; attractive→appealing, inviting, fascinating

4）恰当利用短语代单词，显功力。

realize the importance of →be aware of the importance of English study

美文加工厂

一审题很关键：审体裁和题材（综合类为趋势）；审写作要点：依据要点列提纲，确定人称时态，依据要点确定行文逻辑，关联词；审注意事项：开头结尾提示，提示生词词性词义，字数120-150区间内。

二成稿重头戏：打草必要；段落：3段原则：首段引入话题介绍相关信息，切中主题，增加吸引力；主体部分要层次分明合乎逻辑：主旨句-拓展句-结尾句；结尾段：总结全文，主题升华。

三修改尤重要：单词形式（拼写，单复数，冠词，时态语态，主谓一致，固定搭配之介词）；

句子是否完整通顺；过渡自然合理与否。四誊要完美：书写勿过重过淡，不利扫描，字号忌忽大忽小，字形占格子三分之二为佳；分段最好三段至少两段，首行缩进3个字符。

话题储备，诵读经典

话题一事实现象

Recently, there is a fierece debate in our school on whether …

We cannot deny / There is no denying/ No one could have failed to notice the fact that more and more primary and middle school students are wearing glasses.

话题二看法与态度

When it comes to this problem, different people hold /have different views on it.

It is universally acknowledged that hard work can lead to success while laziness often results in failure.

I personally think we should pay more attention to the safety of school children.

话题三烦恼与好恶

He seems not to be able to fit in well with others and often feels left out, which worries his parents a lot.

In order to make myself understood , I have made up my mind to study English hard.

She does very well in English, and is good at communicating with others.

Not only does she do well in English, but she is also good at communicating with others. Nothing can interest/delight him so much as travelling.

话题四建议

You may/ might as well tell him the truth.

I don’t think it any good complaining about it.

It would be beneficial if you could read English evey day.

It would be wise of you to have a face-to-face talk with him.

话题五询问请求邀请希望

I’m looking forward to your immediate response.

We would feel much honored if you could come.

We’d be much appreciate it if you could spare some time to look into it.

话题六申请

I am writing to apply for the position mentioned in your advertisement/I’m writing in response to your advertisement for the position . And I feel that I’m qualified for the position you have advertised./ I think I’m just the right person for it.

I would appreciate it if you could consider my application and grant me a personal interview.

Any favorable consideration of my application would be appreciated. I’m looking forward to your early response.

话题七原因

There are many factors contributing to /resulting in /leading to/accounting for the phenomenon mentioned above.

Obesity often results from lack of exercise and an unhealthy diet.

The answer to the question lies in the fact that rivers are being seriously polluted.

话题八好处优点坏处缺点

It has more disadvantages than advantages.

Computer will bring you great benefit if you can use it to your advantage.