建议信 公开课
建议信公开课课件
课程目标
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掌握建议信的基本构成和写作 技巧。
学习常用表达方式，提高语言 运用能力。
了解实际应用场景，提高实际 操作能力。
培养学习者沟通能力和书面表 达能力，提升个人综合素质。
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建议信的写作技巧
写作格式
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开头
明确表达写信目的，即提 出建议。
正文
分点阐述建议的具体内容 ，说明理由和依据。
推荐建议信
总结词
推荐建议信是第三方对被推荐人的能力和品格的肯定和赞扬，常用于申请学校 、工作或奖学金等场合。
详细描述
推荐建议信需要客观、具体地描述被推荐人的工作表现、能力特点和个人品质 ，强调其在所申请领域的优势和潜力。同时，推荐人还应表明自己的身份和与 被推荐人的关系，并表达对被推荐人的信任和支持。
心意思。
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建议信的实践应用
求职建议信的实践应用
求职建议信是求职者在申请工作时向 雇主展示自身优势和适合度的书面材 料，通过突出个人特点、技能和经验 ，以争取获得面试机会。
求职建议信应简洁明了，避免冗长的 篇幅和复杂的语言，让雇主能够快速 了解求职者的优势和适合度。
在撰写求职建议信时，应强调与应聘 职位相关的经验和技能，突出个人特 点和优势，同时表达对职位的热情和 兴趣。
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总结与展望
建议信的重要性和作用
促进有效沟通
促进问题解决
建议信是一种有效的沟通方式，能够 清晰地表达个人观点和建议，帮助双 方达成共识。
建议信可以针对具体问题提出建设性 的解决方案，有助于推动问题的解决 和改进。
【县级公开课教案】高三英语建议信教案
高三英语建议信讲评公开课教案教学目标知识目标：掌握建议信的句型和谋局部篇。
能力目标：运用重点短语看图说话和自评互评的能力情感目标：培养学生的自主学习意识和合作学习意识教学重点如何让学生灵活运用建议性句型。
教学难点培养学生看图说话能力教学工具PPT教学过程Step 1 佳句赏析Step 2典型错误Step 3 重点短语及句式一．英译汉1. I hope the following suggestions will be of help to you. ___________________________2.It is a good idea to do sth. ___________________________3. You had better do…___________________________4. Why not? ___________________________5. I strongly advise you to do. ___________________________6. I suggest that you should do. ___________________________7. I hold a view that…___________________________8. It is necessary/important to do. ___________________________ 二．汉译英9既不.....也不.....___________________________10 值得做某事___________________________11给.....留下深刻印象___________________________12 名人___________________________13 参观___________________________14 来自国内外___________________________15在于，位于___________________________16对某人来说做某事是方便的___________________________17对.....高度评价___________________________18我坚定地认为___________________________19玩得开心___________________________20 景点___________________________21 名胜古迹___________________________Step 4 看图说话Step 5 谋局部篇•I am very delighted that you are coming to my city for a visit. I hope the following suggestions will be of some help to you.•First of all, _____________ come here in spring or autumn, for it isneither too cold nor too hot at this time. Besides, ____________________pay a visit to Three Lanes and Seven alleys, which is well worth visiting and has attracted many people from home and abroad. Many celebrities used to live there. Its long history and unique culture will certainly make a deep impression on you. What is more, ______________ live in Shangri-la Hotel .It lies in the city center so it is convenient for you to go everywhere.Finally, ____________ try some local dishes in Fuzhou. You will think highly of them.•I am firmly convinced that you will have a good time in my city. I hope you will find these ideas useful.Step 6 自评互评请给以下作文打分，并说明理由。
人教版高中必修一Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing——建议信公开课教案课件课
Section ⅦReading for Writing——建议信本单元的写作任务是读一封建议信，了解建议信的结构和语言特征，然后再写一封建议信。
Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learning to write after the model10 September，2018Dear Worried Friend，You wrote that you are very worried about your friend，Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?I am sure he will listen to you，since you are his good friend.All the best，Susan Luo(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—Words and phrases①recommend v t.建议②unhealthy adj.不健康的③encourage v t. 鼓励④useful adj. 有用的⑤advice v t. 忠告，建议⑥in one’s spare time 闲暇⑦look forward to 盼望，期望⑧be worried about 对……担心⑨be attracted to 喜爱⑩be addicted to 对……上瘾⑪concentrate on 集中精力于⑫be good for/do good to 对……有益处⑬make friends 交朋友⑭hear from 收到……的来信⑮enjoy oneself/have fun玩得愉快Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。
建议信公开课
America American(students) get/be used to adapt(adjust)to
4.尊重 5.当地的风俗 6.与…交流 7.参加 8. 户外活动 9.礼仪
respect local customs communicate with take part in/ participate in outdoor activities manners
点评： 包含全部要点，但要点没有延伸或者说拓展部分 较简单，语言比较平淡，拼写错误较多。
Para.2 ：提出建议并陈述理由（学生习作)
First of all , you are supposed to respect the
local costcoumsthoambsits. Only in this way can you join them quickly. Besides, communicating with American students is of great benefit to you. You can share yourunuhnahpappinpeysstowithem, and they will try their best to help you to get rid of your stress from life. It’s an important thing that you should take part in more activities, which can build you up. Last but not least, papyaiyng attention to mmaannnnesers while facing others.
第二步 Make sentences
建议信公开课课件
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建议信的案例分析
针对公司管理的建议信
总结词：改善公司管理，提高工作效率
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详细描述
1. 阐述公司管理存在的问题
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2. 分析问题产生的原因和影响
3. 提出针对性的改进建议
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4. 强调改进后可能带来的好处和收益
针对产品开发的建议信
总结词：优化产品设计，提 升市场竞争力
详细描述
1. 分析市场需求和竞争态势
建议信公开课课件
• 建议信的概述 • 建议信的写作技巧 • 建议信的常见问题及解决方法 • 建议信的案例分析 • 建议信的实践与提升
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建议信的概述
建议信的定义
建议信是一种书信形式，通常用于向他 人提供建议或意见。它可以是针对个人 或组织，可以是正式或非正式，具体根
据情境和目的而异。
建议信的主要目的是提出建议或意见， 以帮助对方解决问题、改进工作或提高 效率。同时，它也可以用于表达对对方 的关注和关心，以及加强沟通与合作。
2. 阐述产品存在的问题和不 足
3. 提出产品优化和创新的建 议
4. 强调改进后可能带来的市 场潜力和增长点
针对市场营销的建议信
总结词：调整营销策略，拓展市场份额
3. 强调改进后可能带来的品牌影响和市 场占有率
2. 提出创新的营销策略和推广方式
详细描述 1. 分析市场趋势和竞争对手的营销策略
针对个人职业发展的建议信
详细描述
在表达个人观点时，需要注意语气和措辞，尽量避免使用过于主观或极端的表达 方式。同时，也需要尊重对方的意见和看法，并在适当的时候表达自己的建议是 基于共同利益出发的。
忽略对方感受
总结词
高考书面表达 建议信公开课 ppt课件
with …) Present Tense(一般现在时)
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2. 列提纲
建议信三段式：
第一段： 点明主题 第二段： 提出建议 第三段： 表明希望
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表示建议的句子
1. 上课时，专心听讲
2. 掌握学习方法
3. 培养对英语的兴趣爱好
注意：1、词数100左右； 2、可适当增加细节；
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1.审题
思考的问题: （person）
(topic) (order)
(tense)
Only for reference I, you, he or…
Advice of how to deal with …
• You should/must … • Don’t … • What/How about…? • You’d better… • I’d like to suggest … • If I were you, I would … • I’d like to suggest … • I strongly recommend … • You might as well …
take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
建议信公开课
英文信件格式一、常用信件：邀请信，推荐信，建议信，申请信…二、信封书写：三、书信结构：1)信头(heading) 2)信内姓名地址(inside address) 3) 称呼(salutation)4)正文(body) 5)信尾客套语(complimentary close) 6 )信尾签名(signature)How to write a letter for advice范文：Dear Wang Mei,I'm very glad to receive your letter ask ing for my advice on how to lear n En glish well .Here are a few suggesti ons. First ,it is importa nt to liste n to the teacher carefully and take no tes in class so that you can go over your less ons as soon as you can after class. Sec on d,it also helps to com muni cate with your classmatesi n En glish out of class .In this way you can improve your liste ning and spoke n En glish quickly. Fin ally,it should be a good idea to develop the habit of keep ing a diary,which helps you to improve your writte n En glish」hope these suggesti ons will be useful .I am look ing forward to your good n ews !Yours,Lihua根据范文内容进行讨论：1. ______________________ 写作题材 ___________________2.人称3. ________________________ 三段式:开头________ 中间____________________ •吉尾 ________________________4. __________________________ 时态___________________________ 5S渡词Some useful expressi ons一•提出问题1.1' m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to...2.1 am very glad to hear that you want to…二•提出建议及理由3.It is important to /It should be a good idea to/ It also help to•…4.First, second, third….Finally , besides三.祝愿5.1 hope that...6.1 am look ing forward to...模板：Dear __ ,I' m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ____ ./ I know that __ from ___ .Here are a few suggestions/ Here is some advice that/ on ______ . First, it isimportant to ____ . Then/ Second/ Also,it also helps to _____ . Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore, it should be a good idea to ___ . I am sure that/ I hope that ___ .Thanks for your consideration. ' m looking forward to/ Look forward to __ .Yours小试身手请按刚才的思路审题2mins假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy来信向你咨询如何才能保护好环境。
高二英语作文建议信公开课课件
The course will cover the basic principles of English composition and the structure and format of suggestion letters
Specific examples
The letter includes examples to illustrate the points made, making it easier to understand
Flexibility
The suggestions made are flexible and can be adapted to different situations or needs
make learning more interesting and engaging for students
It will resource students to actively participate in class discussions and share their ideas and experiences
Student writing ask assignment
Topic selection
Provide students with a range of topic options for their writing assignments, allowing them to choose topics that
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How many suggestions should you give? How to link the suggestions together? Linkings: • To start with… • Besides… • In addition… • What’s more… • Most importantly,
A letter of suggestions
A letter of suggestions
• 假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国朋友 Jim对于汉语产生了兴趣，来信向你咨询。请给Jim写 封回信，内容包括： • 内容涵盖：1. 学习汉语的好处 • 2. 提出学习汉语的建议 • 3. 预祝学习成功，并邀请来北京玩
How to give suggestions in complete sentences? ① You can/ should /had better do… ② doing sth can help you ③ It is also necessary/ important for you to do ④ It will be helpful if you can… ⑤ It also works if… ⑥ It will be a good idea if… ⑦ What is most important is that…
writing purpose
2. Benefits What benefits can you think of?
①___________ ②___________
Are they benefits? 1. Chinese is one of the most important language in the world . 2. Chinese is spoken by m. Therefore, being able to speak Chinese can help you…
1 .Writing purpose (Which one is better? why?) ①. Having known that you are learning Chinese now, I am writing to give you some advice on Chinese learning, which hopefully could be helpful for you. ②.Having known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and I would like to tell you something about it. 2. Benefits ①___________ What benefits can you think of? ②___________ 3. Suggestions ①__________ 1)What suggestions can you give? ②__________ ③__________
Structure
Learning Chinese can help you…
Para3: suggestions
You can/ should /had better do… I hope that you can…
Para4: best wishes and invitation 美好祝愿 诚挚邀请 Yours, Li Hua
Possible version
friends. Being able to communicate with native Chinese frequently is how you improve your spoken Chinese. What’s more, you can set achievable targets, such as listening to Chinese songs and reading Chinese newspapers or magazines to get greater comprehension. I wish you success in Chinese learning and hope you can come to Beijing soon. I am willing to be your guide. Yours, Li Hua
Which one is better?
1. Besides, it is necessary for you to make a study plan and follow it. What’s more… 李清泉 2. To attain a high level of fluency and accuracy in a foreign language, you should make a study plan and keep to it. 赵满怡
Discuss in your group
Ⅲ.语言的准确性及结构的清晰性：
题目信息：你的美国朋友Jim对于汉语 产生了兴趣，来信向你咨询。
1. writing purpose
background information
① Having known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese, ② I am more than delighted and here I would like to share some of my thoughts with you.
高考应用文阅卷评分标准
分值 第一档 (13 分 -15分) 评分标准说明 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 1内容完整，2条理清楚； 3交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求； 4体现出较强的语言运用能力。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第二档 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 （ 9 分 -- 内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求； 12分） 所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求； 语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。 基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 （ 4 分 -- 内容不完整； 8分） 所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响对所写内容的理解 未能清楚地传达信息。 第四档 未完成试题规定的任务。 （ 1 分 -- 写了少量相关信息； 3分 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。 0 未能传达任何信息；写的内容与要求无关。
What is the problem?
• First, you’d better set achievable targets. Second, it is also necessary for you to create a rich language environment. What’s more, it is important that you must know why you are learning Chinese. 赵岩
Dear Jim, Having known that you have a strong interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and here I would like to share some of my thoughts with you. Since Chinese is recognized as one of the oldest languages worldwide which carries the thousandyear history of China, there is no escaping the fact that the learning process will turn out to be rewarding and fruitful. Each character has its own unique story so that what you learn is not only the polished shape and diverse combination of the words but also the hidden culture behind the graceful sentences.
Dear Jim, Having known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and I would like to tell you something about it. As we all know, Chinese has become one of the most important languages in the world with the rapid development of China. Therefore, being able to speak Chinese can help you stand out and get ahead both in your college and future career. Here I would like to give you some suggestions on learning Chinese. To start with, it will be of great help if you can take some Chinese courses , which can ensure you an adequate amount of input in Chinese. Besides, you can make some Chinese
Appreciation
1. You had better take some Chinese classes. The teachers can create a rich language environment in the classroom. 6郑联 2. First of all, it is very important for you to attend Chinese class because the teachers in the class can give you an adequate amount of input conveyed to you through various mediums. 7贾易宁