英语建议信 PPT课件
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人教版高一英语必修一建议信 PPT课件 图文
Firstly, why not ask people their likes and dislikes. If you do this, you will soon find classmates with the same interests. Secondly, you should join in discussions and show interest in other people's ideas. That way you will get to know different people and let them see you are friendly. Thirdly, a friend
Part3 conclusion
1.I hope you will find these ideas useful.
2. I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll…..
3. Let’s keep in touch. I do hope to hear your good news.
one hand/For one thing,
● Secondly / Besides / What’s more, / In addition， / Furthermore, / Moreover，/ On
the other hand / For another / Next,
● Finally / In the end / At last / Last but not least,
常见连接词
表总结（总之：）
In short, / In brief, / In conclusion, / In a word, / All in all, / In general, / In summary
《英语建议信》课件
Example
Content
The letter is addressed to the human resources department of a company, suggesting ways to improve the recruitment process and attract more qualified candidates
Objectives
To provide learners with a clear understanding of the purpose and significance of learning English suggestion letters
Purpose and significance
02
Composition of suggestion letter
Start
Salutation
Start with a formal salutations, such as "Dear [Name]", to show respect and diversity
Introduction
Briefly introduce the purpose of the letter, for example, to provide suggestions for improving a certain aspect
Features
The letter is well organized and clearly outlines the problems and solutions It uses formal language and political tone, and it includes specific examples to illustrate its points
2019高中英语作文写作指导-- 建议信(共34张) PPT课件 图文
S1: I _q_u_a_rr_e_ll_ed__w_it_h my parents and I
feel they only care about my __s_tu_d_y__
S2: __M_y__w_e_i_g_h_t _keeps increasing and My classmates often_l_a_u_g_h_t_a_t me.
4.建议信结尾常用句式：
1. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
2. I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions. I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
Complimentary close(结束语), Signature
Yours sincerely, Robert
实际操练
假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME” 专栏的 编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最 近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而 写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解 2、提出建议并给出理由 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
You should not only concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports. Not only should you concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports.
新课标必修一unit1英语建议信 共8张ppt
开头：
常用句式：
1.You have asked me for some advice on/with regard
to...and I will try to give some useful suggestions. 您问及我有关......的事情，我会尽量给出一些有用的建议。
2. I’m writing to express my views concerning... 我写信是想表达我有关......的观点
结尾：
1. I hope you will find these proposals / suggestions / recommendations practical /useful /helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见对您有用。 2. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。 3. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decisionmaking. 希望我的建议能对您的决定有所帮助 4. I hope you will take my advice into account.
I hope you will consider my suggestions. 5. Thank you for reading my letter. 6. I’m looking forward to you建议一+理由+举例 ② 建议二+理由+举例 ③ 建议三+理由+举例 3. 结尾段：
表达希望对方采纳建议或期待回复。
例文： Dear Jenny， How nice to hear from you. ln your letter, you
《英语建议信模版》课件
Strike a balance between formal and casual
Your language should be formal enough to show respect, but not too stuffy or formal that it comes across as stiff or unnatural. Use 专业且亲切的语言，让读者感到舒适。
Begin your letter with a brief introduction of yourself and your purpose for writing. State your relationship to the recipient and explain why you are writing.
结尾: 鼓励团队采纳建议，表达对团队发展的期望。
具体建议: 分析团队协作中存在的问题，提出改善团队沟通和合作的具体建议。
目的: 针对团队协作提出建议，帮助改善团队氛围，提高团队效率。
How to write a good suggestion letter
05
Start with a clear introduction
I would be grateful if you could provide me with further information.
Thank you for your assistance in this matter.
Example analysis of suggestion letters
02
Salutation
Begin with a formal salutation, such as "Dear [Recipient's Name]," or "To Whom It May Concern."
Your language should be formal enough to show respect, but not too stuffy or formal that it comes across as stiff or unnatural. Use 专业且亲切的语言，让读者感到舒适。
Begin your letter with a brief introduction of yourself and your purpose for writing. State your relationship to the recipient and explain why you are writing.
结尾: 鼓励团队采纳建议，表达对团队发展的期望。
具体建议: 分析团队协作中存在的问题，提出改善团队沟通和合作的具体建议。
目的: 针对团队协作提出建议，帮助改善团队氛围，提高团队效率。
How to write a good suggestion letter
05
Start with a clear introduction
I would be grateful if you could provide me with further information.
Thank you for your assistance in this matter.
Example analysis of suggestion letters
02
Salutation
Begin with a formal salutation, such as "Dear [Recipient's Name]," or "To Whom It May Concern."
建议信 英语作文精品PPT课件
be build a swimming pool. • Swimming is a good sport for students to
prevent illness from body.
• I think we can put it on the place where besides the playground, here has trees and flowers so that we can prevent students from the rain.
you
主体
• From my point of view/personally/as far as I am concerned
• I highly recommend that….. • On the one hand….on the other hand….. • Besides, it is necessary for us to…. • Consequently, I believe that….
• Only in this way can the students be more and more active.
• Only if swimming can we build our body to defeat diseases.
• It can help students save themselves or others when they drop into the water by accident.
• The students volunteer to/are willing to raise money to build the swimming pool.
• If you agree with what I said, we are willing to afford money to build the swimming pool no matter how much it will cost.
prevent illness from body.
• I think we can put it on the place where besides the playground, here has trees and flowers so that we can prevent students from the rain.
you
主体
• From my point of view/personally/as far as I am concerned
• I highly recommend that….. • On the one hand….on the other hand….. • Besides, it is necessary for us to…. • Consequently, I believe that….
• Only in this way can the students be more and more active.
• Only if swimming can we build our body to defeat diseases.
• It can help students save themselves or others when they drop into the water by accident.
• The students volunteer to/are willing to raise money to build the swimming pool.
• If you agree with what I said, we are willing to afford money to build the swimming pool no matter how much it will cost.
高中英语作文 建议信(共9张PPT)
16. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善；
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善；
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____
高考英语建议信教学课件(共14张PPT)
if only you can follow the advice below. 如果对方遇到一般问题，可以用以下开头：
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式：
Beginning：
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结，表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式：
Beginning：
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结，表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.
高中英语写作建议信完整ppt课件
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 3.I would like to sugges.t/recommend that...
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
transition words（过渡词）
转折 however, but, on the contrary 因果 so, therefore, for this reason, as a result,
as a consequence 结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion,
problems which person(第几人称) what type(什么体裁） what topic(什么主题）
what tense （写作时态）
conclusion first person
suggestion letter suggetions of learning English
simple present tense
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
---江西省寻乌中学 卢文华
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
高一英语写作---英语建议信课件(共23张幻灯片)
Then, you should make strangers feel easy, no matter where he is. Be more concerned about others than yourself.
3.与别人有分歧时不吵架，要商量； disagree with sb have different ideas/opinions don’t argue/quarrel discuss with sb have a discussion with sb talk with sb have a talk face to face
范文：
Dear Flower, I'm glad to receive
your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. The following is my advice.
Everyone needs friends, so
写作模板 第二段： (建议及理由) 1. Here are a few suggestions. 2.I’d like to share some advice
with you. 3.In my opinion/As far as I am
concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions.
When you have different opinions, you can discuss with others. I don't think it's necessary to quarrel with them. Finally, don't trust those who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
高中英语选修7-1建议信 PPT课件 图文
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Hua
谢谢！ 学妹给我打电话，说她又换工作了，这次是销售。电话里，她絮絮叨叨说着一年多来工作上的不如意，她说工作一点都不开心，找不到半点成就感。 末了，她问我：学姐，为什么想 找一份 自己热 爱的工 作这么 难呢？ 我问她上一份工作干了多久，她 说不到 三个月 ，做的 还是行 政助理 的工作 ，工作 内容枯 燥乏味 不说， 还特别 容易得 罪人， 实在不 是自己 的理想 型。 我又问了她前几份工作辞职的原 因，结 果都是 大同小 异，不 是因为 工作乏 味，就 是同事 不好相 处，再 者就是 薪水太 低，发 展前景 堪忧。 粗略估计，这姑娘毕业不到一年 ，工作 却已经 换了四 五份， 还跨了 三个行 业。 但即使如此频繁的跳槽，她也仍 然没有 找不到 自己满 意的工 作。 2 我问她，心目中理想型的工作是 什么样 子的。 她说， 姐，你 知道苏 明玉吗 ？就是 《都挺 好》电 视剧里 的女老 大，我 就喜欢 她样子 的工作 ，有挑 战有成 就感， 有钱有 权，生 活自由 ，如果 给我那 样的工 作，我 会投入 我全部 的热情 。 听她说完，我尴尬的笑了笑。 其实每一个人都向往这样的成功 ，但这 姑娘却 本末倒 置了， 并不是 有了钱 有了权 有了成 就以后 才全力 以赴的 工作， 而是全 力以赴 工作， 投入了 自己的 全部以 后，才 有了地 位名望 钱财。 你要先投入，才会有收获，当你 真正投 入做一 件事后 ，会明 白两件 事：首 先你会 明白， 把一件 事认认 真真做 好，所 获得的 收益远 大于同 时做很 多事； 你会明白，有人风风火火做各种 事仍未 有回报 ，是因 为他们 从未投 入过。 从“做 了”到 “做” ，正如 “知
谢谢！ 学妹给我打电话，说她又换工作了，这次是销售。电话里，她絮絮叨叨说着一年多来工作上的不如意，她说工作一点都不开心，找不到半点成就感。 末了，她问我：学姐，为什么想 找一份 自己热 爱的工 作这么 难呢？ 我问她上一份工作干了多久，她 说不到 三个月 ，做的 还是行 政助理 的工作 ，工作 内容枯 燥乏味 不说， 还特别 容易得 罪人， 实在不 是自己 的理想 型。 我又问了她前几份工作辞职的原 因，结 果都是 大同小 异，不 是因为 工作乏 味，就 是同事 不好相 处，再 者就是 薪水太 低，发 展前景 堪忧。 粗略估计，这姑娘毕业不到一年 ，工作 却已经 换了四 五份， 还跨了 三个行 业。 但即使如此频繁的跳槽，她也仍 然没有 找不到 自己满 意的工 作。 2 我问她，心目中理想型的工作是 什么样 子的。 她说， 姐，你 知道苏 明玉吗 ？就是 《都挺 好》电 视剧里 的女老 大，我 就喜欢 她样子 的工作 ，有挑 战有成 就感， 有钱有 权，生 活自由 ，如果 给我那 样的工 作，我 会投入 我全部 的热情 。 听她说完，我尴尬的笑了笑。 其实每一个人都向往这样的成功 ，但这 姑娘却 本末倒 置了， 并不是 有了钱 有了权 有了成 就以后 才全力 以赴的 工作， 而是全 力以赴 工作， 投入了 自己的 全部以 后，才 有了地 位名望 钱财。 你要先投入，才会有收获，当你 真正投 入做一 件事后 ，会明 白两件 事：首 先你会 明白， 把一件 事认认 真真做 好，所 获得的 收益远 大于同 时做很 多事； 你会明白，有人风风火火做各种 事仍未 有回报 ，是因 为他们 从未投 入过。 从“做 了”到 “做” ，正如 “知
人教版高中英语必修一Unit1Friendship建议信课件(共11张PPT)
Made by Echo
衔接: 1.To begin with,…and then…besides, …,what’s more,…
2.Firstly,… secondly, …thirdly,… ,finally,…
3.On the one hand, … on the other hand,…
Made by Echo
承上启 下
层层递进
结论
Now please think about your writing and begin!!!
Made by Echo
Made by Echo
8.As long as
Made by Echo
连词成句
你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现 状，因为朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤 其重要。
I consider that Recover yourself from
You should
it as soon as possible
and
make an effort to change your present situation
Words and expressions in unit 1
upset ignore recover settle have got to go through calm(…)down
a series of in order to be concerned about face to face suffer from get along with join in
Writing
Friendship
Made by Echo
建议信开头： 1.I’ m sorry to hear that …. 2. I’m glad to receive your letter
衔接: 1.To begin with,…and then…besides, …,what’s more,…
2.Firstly,… secondly, …thirdly,… ,finally,…
3.On the one hand, … on the other hand,…
Made by Echo
承上启 下
层层递进
结论
Now please think about your writing and begin!!!
Made by Echo
Made by Echo
8.As long as
Made by Echo
连词成句
你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现 状，因为朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤 其重要。
I consider that Recover yourself from
You should
it as soon as possible
and
make an effort to change your present situation
Words and expressions in unit 1
upset ignore recover settle have got to go through calm(…)down
a series of in order to be concerned about face to face suffer from get along with join in
Writing
Friendship
Made by Echo
建议信开头： 1.I’ m sorry to hear that …. 2. I’m glad to receive your letter
高中英语复习---英语应用文写作(建议信)(共33张PPT)
4. I have received your letter saying you plan to pay a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中 国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
2.长江和泰山这两条线路都很有价值，就我个人 而言，我倾向于长江之行。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅 行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容 包括： 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2（.开二头）和谋结篇尾列已纲给：出，不计入总词数。 (1)说明写信的原因；(2)引出自己的建议； (3)建议的理由一； (4)建议的理由二； (5) 总结建议理由； (6) 祝愿旅游愉快。
3.长江，世界最长，又是中华文明的母亲河之一， 你可以学到许多中国历史知识。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅 行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容 包括： 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2（.开二头）和谋结篇尾列已纲给：出，不计入总词数。 (1)说明写信的原因；(2)引出自己的建议； (3)建议的理由一； (4)建议的理由二； (5) 总结建议理由； (6) 祝愿旅游愉快。
5.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further deal. 我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
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you could ------我想如果你能-----可能会更好
建议信结尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into account. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/ 有用/有帮助。 3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
2. Hearing that you are in trouble with English, I’d like to give you some advice on how to get along well with English.(Class 1 Maguo Qin)
3. No one can fail to notice the fact that listening and reading are playing an important role in learning English.(Class 1 Han Xu)
明智的选择。
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议， 井然有序。 1.first，firstly，secondly…．then， after that，in the end．finally．。 meanwhile ．．．
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if
• 递进关系： furthermore；moreover； not only...but also...； not...but...；, besides； in other words；on the one hand...，on the other hand...； meanwhile； at the same time；
写作步骤
首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单 介绍自己，注意语气。
主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点， 然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情 况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要 让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。
结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注 意有礼貌使读者容易接受。
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要st the key points
个
Step 2 Make sentences
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学 的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议， 帮助他学好英语。
内容提示：1. 一定要做好课前预习
You can set down what you think is important.
Beautiful sentences in you compositions
1.Here is some useful advice for you about how to learn English well ( class 2 Jirun Ze)
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter
点睛之笔：
• Nothing is impossible to a willing heart! • Practice makes perfect • Never give up/lose heart • If you have any trouble, please turn to me for help. • I’d like to share my methods with you. • Only in this way, can you learn English well • read novels, magazines and everything to do with
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个 问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给 某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或 忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提 出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语 气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明 扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记
3. 课后认真独立完成作业
4. 每天进行英语听说练习
5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
第一步：列举要点
• 英语学的不大好
You are not good at English You don’t do well in English You have difficulty with English You are not getting along well with English
English
改错
1.I’ll help you iwn ithyour English
2.My English is not very well. Well ---good 3.Finish it on yourself. /On your own On----by 4. There arise some advaisdev. ice 5.Don’t beafraid of English. 6. Set up a learning aim, agnodahead to achieve it. 7. Set down the knowledge in the class 8. You must listen carefully and follow teawchhearts said.
加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
Enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.
• 注意衔接词使用: • 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin with/ to start with, at last
提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。
give you some advice on English/learning English/how to learn English
I will give you some suggestions which I think may be helpful to you.
4.I will give you some necessary advice which can improve your English.(Class7 Xie Shuang)
5. No one can deny the fact that it is important to listen to the teacher carefully.
记好笔记 Set / write down Make/take notes
课后认真独立完成作业
Finish your homework by yourself/on your own/don’t copy 每天进行英语听说练习
Practise listening and speaking every day
小结；呼应主题
小试身手
• 你的朋友Mary 为了迎接高考努力学习， 进来冰岛了。请你以李华的名义给她写 一封信，就健康和学习方面提些建议。
• 词数：100
Here are my suggestions/tips on ….
做好课前预习 preview Prepare/ make preparations for Look through 课堂上认真听讲 Listen to the teacher carefully Pay attention to what the teacher says carefully
9. Only if you read about it ahead of schedule, you will learn it better. will you
• I am sure you’ll be sucscuescsc. essful all
• You can set down that you think is important.
4.I am writing to you for the purpose of ----5 I am writing to share some advice with you
6 In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.在下认 为， 如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种
(Cass 7 Liuxin Yan)
6.Only in these ways, can you have a good command of English.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
建议信结尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into account. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/ 有用/有帮助。 3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
2. Hearing that you are in trouble with English, I’d like to give you some advice on how to get along well with English.(Class 1 Maguo Qin)
3. No one can fail to notice the fact that listening and reading are playing an important role in learning English.(Class 1 Han Xu)
明智的选择。
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议， 井然有序。 1.first，firstly，secondly…．then， after that，in the end．finally．。 meanwhile ．．．
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if
• 递进关系： furthermore；moreover； not only...but also...； not...but...；, besides； in other words；on the one hand...，on the other hand...； meanwhile； at the same time；
写作步骤
首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单 介绍自己，注意语气。
主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点， 然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情 况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要 让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。
结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注 意有礼貌使读者容易接受。
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要st the key points
个
Step 2 Make sentences
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学 的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议， 帮助他学好英语。
内容提示：1. 一定要做好课前预习
You can set down what you think is important.
Beautiful sentences in you compositions
1.Here is some useful advice for you about how to learn English well ( class 2 Jirun Ze)
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter
点睛之笔：
• Nothing is impossible to a willing heart! • Practice makes perfect • Never give up/lose heart • If you have any trouble, please turn to me for help. • I’d like to share my methods with you. • Only in this way, can you learn English well • read novels, magazines and everything to do with
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个 问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给 某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或 忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提 出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语 气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明 扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记
3. 课后认真独立完成作业
4. 每天进行英语听说练习
5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
第一步：列举要点
• 英语学的不大好
You are not good at English You don’t do well in English You have difficulty with English You are not getting along well with English
English
改错
1.I’ll help you iwn ithyour English
2.My English is not very well. Well ---good 3.Finish it on yourself. /On your own On----by 4. There arise some advaisdev. ice 5.Don’t beafraid of English. 6. Set up a learning aim, agnodahead to achieve it. 7. Set down the knowledge in the class 8. You must listen carefully and follow teawchhearts said.
加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
Enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.
• 注意衔接词使用: • 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin with/ to start with, at last
提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。
give you some advice on English/learning English/how to learn English
I will give you some suggestions which I think may be helpful to you.
4.I will give you some necessary advice which can improve your English.(Class7 Xie Shuang)
5. No one can deny the fact that it is important to listen to the teacher carefully.
记好笔记 Set / write down Make/take notes
课后认真独立完成作业
Finish your homework by yourself/on your own/don’t copy 每天进行英语听说练习
Practise listening and speaking every day
小结；呼应主题
小试身手
• 你的朋友Mary 为了迎接高考努力学习， 进来冰岛了。请你以李华的名义给她写 一封信，就健康和学习方面提些建议。
• 词数：100
Here are my suggestions/tips on ….
做好课前预习 preview Prepare/ make preparations for Look through 课堂上认真听讲 Listen to the teacher carefully Pay attention to what the teacher says carefully
9. Only if you read about it ahead of schedule, you will learn it better. will you
• I am sure you’ll be sucscuescsc. essful all
• You can set down that you think is important.
4.I am writing to you for the purpose of ----5 I am writing to share some advice with you
6 In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.在下认 为， 如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种
(Cass 7 Liuxin Yan)
6.Only in these ways, can you have a good command of English.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending