2020北京高考一模英语作文解析汇编
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2020北京一摸作文解析汇编
海淀一模
第三部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）
第一节（15分）
51.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim得知你对探月感兴趣，发来邮件和你讨论该话题。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.月亮在中国文化中的寓意；
2.你对人类探月活动的看法。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.你对人类探月活动的看法。
第二步:列提纲（重Biblioteka Baidu词组）
moon exploration；be compared to；remind sb. of sb./sth.；as if；serve as；gaze at
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给美国朋友Jim，和Jim探讨有关探月的话题。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
人称：第一人称为主
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.月亮在中国文化中的寓意；
I hope you find what I‘ve mentioned above interesting and reasonable. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon? Write back and tell me about it!
提示词：探月moon exploration
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.
It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid and grew stronger with time. As you can guess, there is rich cultural meaning behind the faithful companion伴侣of the earth. In Chinese culture, as opposed to the masculinity阳刚之气of the sun, the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. People feel reassured安心knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.
Human beings have never stopped exploring our closest neighbor. I believe it is of greatsignificance. The development of relevant technology facilitates促进the progress of science in general, which benefits our everyday life. What’s more, I think moon exploration shows an important human trait特征, that is, curiosity about the unknown, which is the driving force that has brought our species this far.
5. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon?
2. the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady.
3. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away.
4. People feel reassured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.
海淀一模
第三部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）
第一节（15分）
51.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim得知你对探月感兴趣，发来邮件和你讨论该话题。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.月亮在中国文化中的寓意；
2.你对人类探月活动的看法。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.你对人类探月活动的看法。
第二步:列提纲（重Biblioteka Baidu词组）
moon exploration；be compared to；remind sb. of sb./sth.；as if；serve as；gaze at
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给美国朋友Jim，和Jim探讨有关探月的话题。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
人称：第一人称为主
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.月亮在中国文化中的寓意；
I hope you find what I‘ve mentioned above interesting and reasonable. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon? Write back and tell me about it!
提示词：探月moon exploration
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.
It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid and grew stronger with time. As you can guess, there is rich cultural meaning behind the faithful companion伴侣of the earth. In Chinese culture, as opposed to the masculinity阳刚之气of the sun, the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. People feel reassured安心knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.
Human beings have never stopped exploring our closest neighbor. I believe it is of greatsignificance. The development of relevant technology facilitates促进the progress of science in general, which benefits our everyday life. What’s more, I think moon exploration shows an important human trait特征, that is, curiosity about the unknown, which is the driving force that has brought our species this far.
5. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon?
2. the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady.
3. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away.
4. People feel reassured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.