雅思写作ppt课件

ways. ❖ There are several reasons why he can
fix a bicycle.
❖ 练习：She tries to improve her looks.
推展句
❖主要推展句：围绕段落主题句展开 的每一个推展句本身都不要求作进 一步的说明或证明，句与句之间的 关系是相互独立又是互相连接的。
❖Indeed, a dessert is always enjoyable.
转折
❖But, however, although, though, yet, except for
❖Yet there was still a chance that he would win.
举例
❖for se in point, such as
❖顺序
❖ First, second, third, afterwards, meanwhile, thereafter(在那以后), last, finally, eventually
比较
❖ 类 比： ❖ Similarly, likewise, the same is true of…
❖ 对 比： ❖ While, whereas, by contrast, instead, on
总结
❖To sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in short, in a word, in the long run
结论段
❖重复中心思想 ❖做出结论
❖ 主题句topic sentence,推展句supporting sentences，结论句concluding sentence
❖位置
主题句
❖关键词（具体）：控制和限制段落的 发展；说明段落发展的方法
❖ 原句：He can fix a bicycle himself. ❖ 修改： ❖ He can fix a bicycle himself in several
法接受的论点(文化差异) ❖（4）语法不通，表达不地道
对策
❖ 尝试用不同的方法写同一个句子，练习 句子多样化表达
❖ 多样化：同义词替换，词性变化，主语 从句的运用， 强调句运用，there be句 型运用，倒装，插入语，伴随状态
段落结构
❖ 段落（paragraph）是由表达单一中心思想 （controlling idea or central idea）的一组 句子构成，是文章结构的基本独立单位。
❖ The point is best illustrated with the example of…
❖ The point can be confirmed by the example of…
补充、递进
❖ In addition, furthermore, also, moreover, yet
❖ （主题句）There are several factors affecting climate.（推展句1） One factor is the a mount of sunlight received. （推 展句2）Altitude, or the height above sea level, also determines climate. （推展句 3）The oceans have an effect on the climate of adjacent land. （推展句4）In addition, climate is influenced by the general circulation of the atmosphere.
the other hand
让步
❖ Although, of course, after all, clearly, still, yet, nevertheless
❖结 果
❖ Therefore, as a result, consequently, then, thereby, thus, hence, accordingly, so, otherwise
段落发展方法
❖列举、举例、对比、分类、 因果分析
过渡词
❖解释：now, in addition, for, in
this case, furthermore, in fact
❖The problem, in this case, is hard to solve.
强调
❖Certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important
次要推展句
❖次要推展句是指对主要推展句作进 一步的事实分析和举例说明。它从 属于某一个或某几个推展句。
❖ I don’t teach because teaching is not easy for me. Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living: mechanic, carpenter, writer. For me, teaching is a red-eye, sweaty-palm, sink-stomach profession. Red-eye, because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing. Sweaty-palm, because I’m always nervous before I enter the classroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am. Smoking-stomach, because I leave the classroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual.
IELTS Writing
---- Catherine
Introduction
❖时长： 60分钟 ❖A类： 小作文、 大作文 ❖B类： 书信、大作文 ❖评分：9分制 ❖Task 1 、Task 2
写作常见问题
❖（1）题目看不懂 ❖（2）没想法：有想法≠胡扯；观点
抽象，写不下去； ❖（3）分论点主次不分，或者考官无