高考英语复习书面表达评析及指导课件.ppt

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半期考作文
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英
语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下 列要点写回信。 要点: 1. 我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取 得了一些进步； 2. 但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用 法； 3. 今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流 利的英语和你写信； 4. 我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓宽 了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化； 5. 如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家 乡。
read and write
find it hard
fluent English to write
Great changes
had taken place in my hometown
I thhaids mbroerankifnagstetahtibs rmeaokrnfainstg..
HGaovoedymouorenaitnmg/eaaftl?ernoon/evening!
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antecedent 先行词 I. Restrictive clause 限制性定语从句 1. 关系代词 relative pronoun
who whom whose that which as that who the sth. of which the same...as
that of which the sth. such.......as 2. 关系副词 relative adverb
when ,where ,why the way (___/that/in which) I didn't like the way (___/that/in which) he spoke.
when ,where, why & that that & which ... the first (second, last) time that... 1.all, much, little, everything, anything, nothing, none,few, the one 2.all, any, no, only, very, some 3.the best, the most beautiful 4the first, the last 5. who & that anyone who those who he who Who is the girl that is speaking? 6. Mary is no longer (that) she was.(作表语）
高考书面表达题型
• 应用文：书信、通知、便条 • 记叙文：看图作文、日记 • 说明文：人物介绍、活动 • 议论文：
高考书面表达评分原则以及给分范围
第五档（很好）：完全完成试题规定的任务 （21- 25分）
第四档（好）：完全完成试题规定的任务， 漏掉1、 2个次重点。 （16-20分）
第三档（适当）：基本完成试题规定的任务。
注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。
June 8, 2008 Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and hometown. ………….
高考复习
---书面表达评析及指导
Chinglish
horse horse tiger tiger open water watch sister up street buy things give you some colour see see heart flower angry open I call Li old big. toyear 25. American Chinese not enough
II. non-restrictive clause 非限制性定语从句 who,whom, whose, which, as when, where
which & as As is often the case, Mary was late for school. He was late for school, which made his teacher angry. His mother, who loved him very much, died in 1818. My brother, who is a doctor, is 20. My brother who is a doctor is 20. I saLeabharlann Baidu a house, in front of which sat a boy.
You see no see people mountain people sea You ask me , me ask who ? How are you ? How old are you? You no see, I now very busy. One side play go!!! We two who and who？ You give me stop!!