2019年托福口语备考：口语开头要注意十大误区.doc

2019 年托福口语备考：口语开头要注意十大误区
俗话说“题好文一半”，一个好的托福写作开头绝对能够吸引考官的注意，从而让他对你的作文有个好印象，不过，如果你的托福写作开头十分糟糕，那么，它足以害死你的这次托福考试。

下面，新东方在线就为大家整理 10 大“害死人”的托福写作开头，大家要谨以为戒哦 !
“害死人”托福写作开头之一：废话连篇不知所云( 喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed
to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I talking about this topic. Because I and I ’m not married
’m very interested in ’m also a college student
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In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story ： I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn ’t it? Of course! It ’s really very very important!
( 喷血指数：“害死人”托福写作开头之二：中式英文人见人晕
☆☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例： Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make
your heart flower opened angrily
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example,
in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see
people mountain people sea there 。

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today ’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out
buy things
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a
people always do bad things, he will get“baoying”。

“害死人”托福写作开头之三：观点模糊态度暧昧( 喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed
to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am
still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is
very difficult for me
“害死人”托福写作开头之四：偏离主题无轨电车( 喷血指数：
☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例： Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success
through university education. To what extent do you agree or
disagree with the statement?
I think to success, we must have a lot of important
qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a
lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We
can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and
from books. All in all, we can learn from many places 。

( 喷血指数：“害死人”托福写作开头之五：语法错误惨不忍睹
☆☆☆)
典型失败案例： Topic-If children behave badly, should
their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly,
then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent
’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides
children is also should。

( 喷血指数：“害死人”托福写作开头之六：过度简单没有重点
☆☆)
典型失败案例： Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
“害死人”托福写作开头之七：用词不当表达不准 ( 喷血指数：☆☆)
典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to
get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get
married because they are very young and so we can
’t take the responsibility to form a family。

( 喷血指数：“害死人”托福写作开头之八：意思重复原地踏步
☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not
a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to
our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society 。

( 喷血指数：“害死人”托福写作开头之九：中国俗语胡乱翻译
☆☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we
Chinese believe a sentence：“Many sons, many lucks ”
准确说法： Happiness lies in having many children
Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or
admit our ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers
said ：“Know is know, don ’t know is don’t know ”
Topic 3- Do you think one
’s character is greatly
influenced by his/her family?
Chinese old words says very good：Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
I believe one sentence：“ A good person is all life
safe ”. We Chinese people always say：“Good has good pay,
bad has bad pay ”。

“害死人”托福写作开头之十：观点武断态度强硬( 喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例： Topic1-The importance of confidence
In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for
a person. All the successful people in the world are full of
confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence,
they all have failed。

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem
I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For
those who don ’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of
them into prison. If we do that, I ’m sure there will be no traffic
problem any more.。