美国大学申请文书写作实例

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崔尧

2010.07

IDP Beijing Office 本科部分

Y the OSU? （Fall 2010 金融专业）节选

As the 16th largest city in the US, Columbus offers almost all major components needed from a business major college student. With a diversified local economy based on multiple industries, Columbus fosters a dynamic business environment for both

quitted my restaurant job and wished Hong good luck. With the overlap being removed, we are living in paralleled worlds now.

A couple of weeks ago, Hong called me on my cell. His voice was steady and peaceful.

“I got promoted” Hong sounded excited, though talking in his regular voice. “Nice” I thought he was a supervisor now.

“I don’t have to run food any more. I am a waiter now” Hong continued.

Being a waiter, his monthly income probably got tripled.

“My mom doesn’t have to work that hard now. And I can afford college if I do this job

for one more year” I can sense his excitement now.

Occasionally I was thinking about Hong when I took a break from my SAT study, I knew it was unlikely for our worlds got overlapped again. For me, acquaintance with such a unique friend left me another taste of life, a taste that I merely know but has been widely tried around the real world.

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研究生部分

Case, 物流管理，$10,000奖学金， OSU。节选

When the Internet was created last century, we were unable to envision how the latest technology would reshape the world. One of the panics were diminishing functionality of mail service since a significant amount of the mail service, seemingly, could be replaced by email systems and other online technologies such as file sharing. Decades later, standing on the threshold of the second ten year of the Twenty First Century, the growing of the internet impacted our lives in an unexpected way. The anxiety over disappearance of old fashioned mail service did not occur, thrive of the online services, however, became a powerful boost to the rebirth of supply chain management. As online shopping became a backbone of the retail industry, how to reduce the cost on inventory and shipping has becoming a vital factor for companies like Wal-Mart and Amazon, whose revenue heavily relying on figures of online shopping.

上个世纪，当互联网出现的时候，我们还不能够完全看清楚这项技术将如何重塑我们的

世界。一部分人担心email以及文件共享服务的出现将会替代传统邮政服务在生活中的作用。多年以后，当我们走入21世纪，却发现互联网正在以当初我们意料之外的方式影响着我们

的生活。传统的邮政服务并没有完全消失，而互联网的不断完善却带动了在线服务的发展，间接的推动了物流行业的更新与完善。对于零售行业来说，网络销售所占的市场份额便得愈

发重要。对于沃尔玛、亚马逊这样的消费行业巨头而言，如何有效的减低运输成本则成为企

业发展的关键。