评语大全之英语作文批改评语

英语作文批改评语

【篇一：英文作文批改激励性评语】

英语作文激励性评语

一、宏观性评价

1. 整体印象类评语

super!excellent!perfect!wonderful！fantastic！ marvelous！采用整体印象类评语对于起始阶段的学生有较好的激励作用，但若千篇一律德使用此类评语，就会使学生无法正确认识自己的写作水平，最终导致教师的评语失去应有的作用。

2. 规范导知类评语

beautiful.clear. wonderful.good hand-writing.

youer careful of using pronounciation.

glad to see your improvement in handwriting.

im expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time.

youd better pay more attention to word order.

better be more careful of your spelling.

its important to compose a draft beforhand.

3. 情感调控类评语

i appreciate your handwriting.

you have a good knowledge of english proverbs.

you are quite aware of making meaningful sentences.

you are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences and idioms.

im expecting greater progress from you in writing. come on. if you need my help, never hesitate to come to me.

警句：

hard work leads to success.

not to advance is to go back.

no one is without faults.

keeping is harder than winning. keep it up.

二、微观写作技能方面的评语

1. 专项点拨类评语

its proper to use the proverb in para.2 quite clever.

you are good at using attributive clauses in your writing.

the struck sentence is perfectly used.

youd better use third person in the first para.

its good to use the past tense in your writing.

2. 佳句欣赏类评语

教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的符号（如e--excellent)或标识不

同星级等。

what a wonderful sentence using cover.

its really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence.

the inverted sentence is well written.

3. 谋篇布局类评语

a good beginning. a perfect ending. well-organized.perfectly-expanded.

the first para. makes a good beginning.

the last para. makes a perfect ending.

all the points have been covered.

its clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para.

its wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences.

you are good at developing a para.

you have made great progress in developing a passage.

i am glad to see the sentence conherence in your last para.

better pay more attention to the relationship b

etween sentences.

its really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials.

在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为规范的引领，重在对学生进行词

句方面的引导；对高年级学生则应侧重对文章的结构、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方面的指点和引导。

虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来说不太适合，因为他们连老师评

他们什么都看不懂。但我们平时对作文的批改确实没做到这么仔细。有很大启发！

【篇二：作文批改评语集锦】

作文批改评语集锦（一）

作文开头：

1、文章开头简而得当，通过环境描写来衬托人物心情，十分艺术化。

2、开头简明扼要

3、文章开头新颖，具有先声夺人之效。使读者一见面就能对人物产生…的印象。