高三英语作文公开课-如何使你的作文颜值与才华齐飞
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Health is more important than wealth.
It is universally acknowledged that health is more important than wealth.
固定句型：倒装句
Only in this way can sb do…. Only by doing...can sb do.... 只有通过这种方式我们才能....
Only in this way can you solve this problem.
Only by taking exercise can we keep healthy.
固定句型：虚拟语气
If I were you, I would ……
If I were you, I would take part in more activities. It is high time that sb did sth/should do sth
Our teacher always help us when we are in trouble.
It is our teacher that always help us when we are in trouble.
I believe you can do it. I do believe you can do it.
It is high time that we paid/ should pay more attention to our environment
固定句型：强调句
1、It is/was +被强调部分+that/who+其余成分 2、It is/was not until ……that…… 3、用do来强调动词
More attention should be given to teaching and learning English. Measures should be taken to protect our mother river.
固定句型：主语从句 It is believed that... It is universally acknowledged that..... 人们认为
欣赏一个人， 始于颜值， 敬于才华, …
How about a composition?
欣赏一篇文章 始于“颜值” 敬于“才华”
作文五档：（ 从教师阅卷印象角度划分）
漂漂亮亮 （21—25分） 有模有样 （16—20分） 马马虎虎 （11—15分） 稀里糊涂 （6—10分） 一塌糊涂 （0—5分）
There is no doubt that/It goes without saying that more and more students choose to study abroad.
固定句型：被动句
More attention should be given to…… Measures should be taken to……
怎样能使我们的文章
颜值与才华齐飞？
Tips 1：颜值
★1、分段要合理。绝大多数高考范文以 及高分作文都是分为2~3段的，也有少 数是4-5段的。
★ 2、书写要美观。书写要符合英文书写 习惯，字母的大小，字母之间的距离要 匀称，尽量减少涂改、增补的现象。
Tips 2：词汇
1、高级词汇代替低级词汇 chance---opportunity ; so---therefore important---vital 可参考三维设计P136页 2、短语代替单个单词 important---be of great importance should---be supposed to help sb---do sb a favor visit---pay a visit to
高级表达
过渡词
动名词做主语
非限制性定语从句 谚语
宾语从句
唐美林 22.5
陈梅
It goes without saying that our classmate is extremely warmhearted and open-minded.
I firmly believe that you will have a colorful and meaningful school life here.
我认为...... I am convinced that…. As far as I am concerned, ….. From my point of view, ….. From where I stand, ……
谚语格言名言
颜值代表
唐美林 22.5
黄佳倩 21
高“颜值”的文章能够评委老师留下好 印象，先声夺人。但是“好文章”却不 仅限于只有“颜值”，…….
才华
词汇
句型
衔接 过渡
回顾作文题目
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Andy 即将到你所在的中学做一年的交换生， 想提前了解一些情况，故向你求助。
请给他写一封回信，提供有关天气、 当地饮食习惯、学校生活方面的信息。
陈小露
And our school often hold activities to enrich our school life, so we have a meaningful and colorful school life. To promote our friendship, I will keep a good relationship with you. I believe you can fit in our school life……
Tips 3：句型
定语从句 宾语从句 名词性从句
强调句 With 的复合结构
省略句
被动句 常用谚语
倒装句 非谓语动词 …….
固定句型：同位语从句 There is no doubt that... It goes without saying that毫无疑问, ……
More and more swenku.baidu.comudents choose to study abroad.
It is universally acknowledged that health is more important than wealth.
固定句型：倒装句
Only in this way can sb do…. Only by doing...can sb do.... 只有通过这种方式我们才能....
Only in this way can you solve this problem.
Only by taking exercise can we keep healthy.
固定句型：虚拟语气
If I were you, I would ……
If I were you, I would take part in more activities. It is high time that sb did sth/should do sth
Our teacher always help us when we are in trouble.
It is our teacher that always help us when we are in trouble.
I believe you can do it. I do believe you can do it.
It is high time that we paid/ should pay more attention to our environment
固定句型：强调句
1、It is/was +被强调部分+that/who+其余成分 2、It is/was not until ……that…… 3、用do来强调动词
More attention should be given to teaching and learning English. Measures should be taken to protect our mother river.
固定句型：主语从句 It is believed that... It is universally acknowledged that..... 人们认为
欣赏一个人， 始于颜值， 敬于才华, …
How about a composition?
欣赏一篇文章 始于“颜值” 敬于“才华”
作文五档：（ 从教师阅卷印象角度划分）
漂漂亮亮 （21—25分） 有模有样 （16—20分） 马马虎虎 （11—15分） 稀里糊涂 （6—10分） 一塌糊涂 （0—5分）
There is no doubt that/It goes without saying that more and more students choose to study abroad.
固定句型：被动句
More attention should be given to…… Measures should be taken to……
怎样能使我们的文章
颜值与才华齐飞？
Tips 1：颜值
★1、分段要合理。绝大多数高考范文以 及高分作文都是分为2~3段的，也有少 数是4-5段的。
★ 2、书写要美观。书写要符合英文书写 习惯，字母的大小，字母之间的距离要 匀称，尽量减少涂改、增补的现象。
Tips 2：词汇
1、高级词汇代替低级词汇 chance---opportunity ; so---therefore important---vital 可参考三维设计P136页 2、短语代替单个单词 important---be of great importance should---be supposed to help sb---do sb a favor visit---pay a visit to
高级表达
过渡词
动名词做主语
非限制性定语从句 谚语
宾语从句
唐美林 22.5
陈梅
It goes without saying that our classmate is extremely warmhearted and open-minded.
I firmly believe that you will have a colorful and meaningful school life here.
我认为...... I am convinced that…. As far as I am concerned, ….. From my point of view, ….. From where I stand, ……
谚语格言名言
颜值代表
唐美林 22.5
黄佳倩 21
高“颜值”的文章能够评委老师留下好 印象，先声夺人。但是“好文章”却不 仅限于只有“颜值”，…….
才华
词汇
句型
衔接 过渡
回顾作文题目
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Andy 即将到你所在的中学做一年的交换生， 想提前了解一些情况，故向你求助。
请给他写一封回信，提供有关天气、 当地饮食习惯、学校生活方面的信息。
陈小露
And our school often hold activities to enrich our school life, so we have a meaningful and colorful school life. To promote our friendship, I will keep a good relationship with you. I believe you can fit in our school life……
Tips 3：句型
定语从句 宾语从句 名词性从句
强调句 With 的复合结构
省略句
被动句 常用谚语
倒装句 非谓语动词 …….
固定句型：同位语从句 There is no doubt that... It goes without saying that毫无疑问, ……
More and more swenku.baidu.comudents choose to study abroad.