2021届高考英语冲刺写作专题复习：困难模式——water, flood

2021届高考英语冲刺写作专题复习：困难模式——water, flood

话题一：困难解决——大水

Step I 导入

围绕七个场景：

一、环境描写（恶劣）

二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）

三、转机描写——描写声音传来或看见了什么

四、情绪描写（希望+努力）

五、脱险描写

六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）

七、主旨描写

模板语句：

一、环境描写（恶劣）

——波涛汹涌：

1.As I floated on, a huge wave (一个巨浪) whistled (呼啸而来)and approached us.

2. The big wind roared through our ears (在耳边咆哮), and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther.

3. All my senses told me that a big wave was about to come.(即将来临)

4. A powerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wave was coming towards us. (靠近我们)

——鲨鱼的可怕：

It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her.

The shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of sharp teeth.

——陆地上的水：

Splashing raindrops hit the windshield frantically and the skies were overhung with a blanket of grey,.

雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。

The water kept rising, as if it would engulf me alive.

水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。

Unfortunately, the water poured in and crept upon my waist.

在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）

wade: 跋涉，蹚（水或淤泥等）Joe leaped out and waded into the flood.

struggle: 艰难地行进；吃力地进行I struggled up the hill with the heavy bags.

struggle to one’s feet 挣扎着站起来

plod:艰难地行走；吃力地

stagger/ totter/ stumble 蹒跚；踉跄

Our horses plodded down the muddy track. 我们的马沿着泥泞小路蹒跚而行。

We plodded on through the rain. 我们冒雨艰难地跋涉。

With jaws clenched, I resolved to keep edging closer, inch by inch.

Mustering up my courage, I pushed the door open with all my might, seized Joe’s arm tightly, and we waddled （蹒跚而行）to the truck by holding each other up.

I stretched out my arms to embrace him, and he patted me on the back slightly to show comfort.

——推荐句型：

1. The wind blows/whistles/howls/picks up/whips through sth/sweeps across sth.

风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……

2. They were getting drenched by icy water.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。

3. The heavy rain was violently beating against the window.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。

4. The rain drummed on the roof of the building.雨不停地击打着房预。

5. The furious storm is grumbling outside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。

6. The icy wind started howling, stinging my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。

7. A flash of lightning lit up the whole sky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。

8. The sharp claps of thunder pierced the quiet night.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。

9. The bolt of lightning stabs the earth. 一道闪电划过天空。

10. 天空和海洋融为一体| the sky and the ocean melt into each other

二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）

——疲倦/寒冷

1. Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.

2. Time passing us, tiredness engulfed (包围了) us with my feet stiff/numb (僵硬/麻木)and shivering.

3.Exhausted as we were (尽管很累), we didn’t stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept swimming.

4. After what seemed a century, I felt extremely fatigued (非常累) while swimming hard to keep myself afloat(漂浮着的).

5. He was huddled into his coat, his face blue with cold.他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。

6. Fingers numbed by the chilly water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing.

7. She clasped the baby to her bosom in the biting/cutting/piercing/sharp wind.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。