大学英语四级写作辅导.ppt

请你写提纲
How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent? (2010年12月真题）
1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该...... 3. （提示：只有两点的提纲，结构应该怎样：
二段还是三段？
How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent?
审题练习一
❖ 98年1月大学英语四级作文题目
❖ Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Harmfulness of Fake Commodities. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
P2: 1)read more books on teaching
2) do more physical exercises in pursuit of good health
3) work as a part-time tutor/teacher on weekends or vacation
P3: conclusion
范文赏析
❖ The Internet—A Two-Ewk.baidu.comged Sword
❖ (Topic sentence) There is a good side and a bad side to everything—and that includes the Internet. As the latest product of the “technological revolution,” the Internet has usheredin a new era of global information. Nevertheless, along with conveniences, it has brought mankind new problems to solve.
说明文 议论文 记叙文 描写文
书信体
非书信体
写作的流程： 以96年1月大学英语四级写作为例
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Two-day Weekend. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 双休日给大学生带来的好处。 2. 双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。 3. 我应当怎样过好双休日。
P1: Parents are willing to do everything for children (some damages，reasons）
P2: To help children become indepent, parents should
1 guide children to figure out how to solve problems on their own
❖ 根据题目和中文提纲利用2-3分钟时间列出写 作要点， 理清要点间的逻辑关系，组织并列 出写作素材，列出关键词，在头脑中形成一 个整体的思路。
以 “I Have a Dream” 为例
outline:1what’s your dream 2 how to realize your dream
P1: My dream is to be a teacher. (a story, a saying,direct opening)
1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。
2.为什么会有这种现象? （1厂家追逐利益，2政府 缺少监管，3群众难以识别）
3.举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的 危害。
课堂练习一：审题练习
❖ 参见《710分》P20，对如下作文4,5,9 进行 快速审题练习。
如何写提纲
❖ (Topic sentence) Internet benefits us in many respects. There is no denying that the Internet can vastly improve the efficiency of scientific research; it allows scientists swift access to all the data and research findings in their fields available worldwide. Moreover, as information is as valuable as any material resource, anyone who has access to the Internet has a competitive advantage in business over those who don’t. Last but not least, the Internet has made personal communication both more convenient and more rapid.
写作的流程
❖ 一看（看清标题和字数） ❖ 二圈（在提纲中圈出关键词，即写作重点） ❖ 三标（在要详写的提纲的关键词旁标注1、2、3，
表示这个关键点至少从3个方面阐述。如果该点略 写，则不标123） ❖ 四想（进行构思（全文分几个段？详略如何分布? 段落间如何衔接，段落内部如何衔接？），意在笔 先） ❖ 五写（语言组织，想好后下笔，下笔后不改）
2. teach children how to do some households instead of doing it for them
P3:(conclusion) By doing so, children will be able to learn how to adopt themselves to the complicated society.
大学英语四级写作辅导
重温四级写作评分中的几个关键点 （参见《710分》第一页）
1、内容：紧扣提纲、不能偏题 2、结构：布局合理、详略得当 3、语言：语句通顺、语义连贯 备注项: 1、字数不足,酌情扣分 2、只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分。
(总分按照15分计算)
四级写作的文体
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