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The pie charts show the amount of oil production and consumption measured in million barrels per day (MB/D) in seven regions in 2001.
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• The pie charts show the world divided into seven regions and the amount of oil produced and consumed in those regions in MB/D in 2001. In total, the regions can be divided into two groups—one where production outpaces consumption and the other where the reverse is the case.
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• The former group consists of Africa, the Former Soviet Union, the Middle East, and Latin America. The Middle East is by far the largest producer (22.2 MB/D), but its consumption is relatively low (4.3 MB/D) – just a fifth of what it produces. Africa produces 7.8 MB/D, about three times what it consumes (2.5MB/D), the Former Soviet Union about 250% more, and Latin America about 150% more.
• The other group…
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The pie chart shows the amount of oil production measured in million barrels per day (MB/D) in seven regions in 2001.
• 22.2 6.8
• 14 • 7.8 7 8 8.7
中间段
• According to the graph, the amount of oil production in the Middle East is the largest (22.2MB/D), while Europe is the region which produces the least oil (6.8MB/D). In addition, it can be clearly seen that the oil production in the America and Canada (14MB/D) is twice as that in Latin America (7MB/D). Moreover, there are three other regions, namely Africa, AsiaPacific and Former Soviet Union, all of which have the similar amount of oil production—7.8MB/D, 8MB/D and 8.7MB/D respectively/ correspondingly.