北京高三一模英语作文汇总教程文件

2014丰台一模

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）

第一节（15分）

假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，下个月英国Saint Gorge High School的交换学生要来你校学习。学校招募接待家庭。请你根据以下信息，提出申请并说明理由。

1. 家里住宿条件好；

2. 英语听说能力强；

3. 了解英国人的文化习俗。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Yours,

Li Hua 第二节情景作文(20分)

假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，下面四幅图描述了你们家上周收留流浪狗的真实故事，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。

注意：1. 文章的开头已为你写好。

2. 词数不少于60。

Last Friday，

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三、Possible versions

Possible version 1

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to host a student from Saint George High School. My house is big enough to give him a room to live in. Also, I am good at English listening and speaking. I have studied a lot about British culture and customs. I can create a welcoming atmosphere for him. I would be very

happy, if you give me this opportunity.

Thank you!

Yours,

Li Hua (65 words) Possible version 2

Dear Sir or Madam,

I feel very excited to know that the exchange students from Saint Gorge High School will come and study at our school. I would like to be a host family. The reasons are as follows: First, my home is big with three bedrooms and two bathrooms. This makes it possible for me to provide the exchange student with good living accommodations. Moreover, I have a good command of English and I am good at listening and speaking. I would be able to communicate with the student easily. In addition, I have a good understanding of British customs and culture, allowing us to have a lot to talk about.

Because of the above mentioned reasons I am applying to be a host family. I sincerely hope I will be granted this great opportunity.

Thank you very much!

Yours,

Li Hua (136 words)

四、Possible versions:

Possible version 1:

Last Friday, on the way home from school, I found a dirty puppy dog lying beside the dustbin. He was so weak that he couldn't open his eyes. I felt sorry for the puppy and carried him home immediately. After feeding him food and milk, I gave him a shower. I was so glad to see the dog recover. He was so lovely and I wanted to keep him. After discussing the situation with my parents, I decided to adopt him. Today the dog has become part of our family. We walk him in the park, play with him and take good care of him. He brings us happiness and keeps us company.

(111 words) Possible version 2:

Last Friday, a chance encounter changed me and my family's life greatly.

After school, I was about to enter my apartment building when a little dirty dog, lying beside the dustbin, caught my eye. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me with sympathy. So I bent down and held him in my arms. I rushed him upstairs and right away fixed him some food. Then, I gave him a bath. After the bath he looked energetic and refreshed. What a lovely dog!

When my parents got home, I asked if I could keep the dog. To my surprise and happiness, they agreed. From that day, he has become a member of our family. Everyone has enjoyed his company. My parents walk him often. He and I play joyfully.

Looking at the cute, happy dog today. I realize that I did the fight thing. I brought him to a warm, loving home and he has brought us great happiness and laughter. (161 words)