【中考英语突破】最新中考英语作文(书面表达)专题 (3)学校生活

2 典例分析
为了更好地开展八年级学生的研学旅行(study travel)，学校现面向全年 级征集活动意向。假如你是李华，请向学校领导谈谈你建议的时间和地点并 陈述理由，简要介绍打算开展的活动。
要求： 1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2．词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear leaders， I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 8．
We will have lots of activities，such as climbing the mountains and studying about plants.I'm sure the travel will be pleasant and educational.
We can discuss the details(细节) later. Yours， Li Hua
1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 60 个；
2．文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。
I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School My three－year life in junior high school is interesting and colorful.I've learned a lot from it. First of all，I've learned to be a good person.I can tell what's right and what's wrong.Secondly，I've developed good learning habits and made great progress in study.Thirdly，I've learned to get on well with others and I've made many friends.We often help each other and learn from each other. All in all，I've learned more than I can say.I'll value it forever.
主题
1．有山有水，亲近自然(green water and mountains；get close 正文：选择
to nature) 公园的原因
2．此时雨水少，天气凉爽(not too much rain；much cooler)
结尾：可以 爬山、研究植物(climb mountains；study about plants)
I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 8．Here is my advice about our study travel.
I suggest going to Wufeng Houhe Forest Park.It is a beautiful park with green water and mountains.There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals.We can get closer to nature.I think June is the best time to get there.Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.
注意： 1．文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选 择使用； 2．文中不得出现真实的校名和人名； 3．词数：80－100； 4．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My School Life I'm Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China.I'd like to share
3 聚焦中考
A(2016·云南)
I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School 提示：初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈。在老师、同学和家长的帮助下，
通过你的努力，你在学习、生活、文体活动、与人相处等方面，一定学到很
多，取得了进步。请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：
【句子升格】 1．It is a beautiful park and has green water and mountains.(用 with 作 伴随状语改写句子) It is a beautiful park with green water and mountains. 2．I think it's better for us to get there in June.(用 the best time 改写句 子) I think June is the best time to get there.
英语 第三部分 中考题型实战篇
中考题型六 书面表达
话题(三) 学校生活
1 考情分析
分析云南近 6 年真题可知，针对“学校生活”这一话题，云南中考具体 考査如下：2016 云南省卷“I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School'”和 2013 云南省卷“A Talk to Myself”。
3．I'm sure the travel will be pleasant and educational.(用“both… and…”改写句子)
I'm sure the travel will be both pleasant and educational.
【优秀范文】 Dear leaders，
举பைடு நூலகம்的活动
【标准范文】 Dear leaders，
I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 8．Here is my advice about our study travel.
I suggest going to Wufeng Houhe Forest Park.It is a beautiful park and has green water and mountains.There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals.We can get closer to nature.I think it's better for us to get there in June.Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.
used throughout the world.Our teachers are kind and helpful.Whenever I have problems，they are always ready to give me a hand.
School activities are rich and colorful.I often play basketball with my classmates，which brings me lots of fun.I like reading as well.So I often spend my free time reading in the school library. My school life is wonderful and I enjoy it very much.
B(2019·金华)
某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是
李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点
参考词汇
Subjects
English，Science，…
Teachers/Classmates
kind，helpful，…
Activities
sports，hobbies，…
We will have lots of activities, such as climbing the mountains and studying about plants.I'm sure the travel will be both pleasant and educational.
We can discuss the details(细节) later. Yours， Li Hua
my school life with you. We have many subjects at school such as Chinese，English and so on.I
am focused more on Chinese，for I think it's getting more and more widely
We can discuss the details(细节) later.
Yours， Li Hua
【审题思路】 1．这是一篇应用文，注意正确使用书信格式； 2．根据自己的想法写出建议的时间、地点、活动及理由； 3．可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，语句通顺。
【写作指导】
要点提示
素材串联
开头：直入 建议选择的地点(Wufeng Houhe Forest Park)
分析全国近 3 年中考真题可知，对于此话题通常有以下命题角度： 1．谈论学生在学校的学习与生活，如：2019 金华、2018 潍坊、2017 黔东南、2017 柳州； 2．谈论校园活动，如：2019 德州，2019 荆州、2018 柳州、2017 长沙； 3．给新生提出一些关于校园生活的建议，如：2019 哈尔滨、2019 龙东、 2018 广西北部湾、2017 莱芜。