雅思写作讲座(新航道)lesson-3

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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right and wrong and how to behave well. Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
(1 details).The invention of the steam engine led to the industrial revolution and brought about a new era of thrift of world economy. The employment of electricity has multiplied the productivity and reproduced the limited energy on earth. The innovation of computer technology resulted in the informaiton age and connected the distant countries as a single market.(3 details).
1. 扩展主题句：
A: 同义替换
1. in other words换言之 2. that is to say也就是说 3. to be more precise说的具体一些 4. by … I mean 我的意思是 5. this means…这意味着 6. namely
1. 扩展主题句： B: 主题句中的名词讲清楚---抽象名词具体化
让步： Admittedly
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1. 扩展主题句 （基本句型）
2. 假设论证 （状语从句）
3. 延长因果链 （状语从句）
4. 举例论证 (单个例子，例子排比）
5. 对比论证 （具体情况，时间对比）
6. 驳论
论证方法： 同一段可以使用多个论证手段
但是： 不是说每一段都得使用到这几种，将论证方 法分散到你的论据种。不要成了填空式作文。
Initially, one issue makes me support this is that (1topic stentence) the development of science and technology has always accomapanied the progress of society.
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4. 举例论证
1)分论点体现在具体的人、事物和场合上（注意内部逻辑）
Rather than limiting man’s imagination, the general application of modern technologies actually enables man to be more and more creative. For instance, Dream Works, the famous American film company, has been designing and producing cartons using computer technology. (3D technology)
5. For the people who lend their support to…for the people who wish to see the legal prohibition of …
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转折与让步
转折： However Nevertheless Nonetheless In spite of
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2. 逆接（两边倒） 1. While there is great deal of enthusiasm nowadays over the advantages of the Internet, its drawbacks should not be neglected. 2. While it is undeniable that studying abroad is beneficial, it inevitably carries some intrinsic defects.
举例子
1. I can think of no better illustration
of this idea
than the fact that more and more young people are
finding it easier to get jobs.
2. A good case in point is Wuhan, which has a pedestrian shopping street.
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Lesson Four:
段落连接关系+如何写论据+论据综合实例
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中间段落由关联词+分论点+分论点的论证 构成 分论点和分论点的论证之间可能有关联词。
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1 顺接(一边倒的内部)
议论类：
并列 For one thing… For another…
TS: For one thing, offering academic knowledge can contribute to students’ achievement.
使用拓展主题句方法展开： That is to say, in primary school, children should be instilled the ability of spell chinese characters and basic mathmatical knowledge which ensure them mastering the commen sense in daily life and offering the first step of further education.
3. Take my father as an example.
4. to illustrate, as an illustration
TS: It is the essential responsbility for teachers to convey acadimic subjects to learners.
1. For one thing, offering academic knowledge can contribute to students’ achievement.
2. For another, at the community level, education institutions, obviously, should shoulder the responsbility to cultivate qualified citizens.
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3. Proponents of such a change hold /maintain/argue that Opponents of such a practice…
4. An argument used by opponents of … is /an argument advanced on behalf of … is
On one hand… On the other hand…
递进： Moreover Besides Furthermore More importantly In addition to Additionally
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原因建议类： The most important reason ( factor) An equally important reason An additional reason…
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For example, Michelangelo would not have become distinguished painter if he had spent his days doodling. Another illustration is that Mozart would not have grown up to be a accompllished musician at the age of 8 if he had stayed in front of television. Like Marie Curie and Helen Keller, they responded to the challenges of lives activily by displined trainings, and then they gained a new freedom of their lives. (3 examples).
2. 假设说明
思路：条件状语从句 目的状语从句
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3. 延长因果链 The most immediate factor that has given rose to this phenomenon is the extensive use of farming machinery. Such as seeding, harvesting and graindying machines, in the process of the modernization of agricultural production, which has, in turn freed more farmers form the land to seek better opportunities in cities. With more immigrant workers swarming into them, many cities have been forced to expand into the neighboring countryside, as to accommodate the swelling population.
The cost of living has been steadily rising in the past decades. Food prices, clothing costs, housing expenses, and tuition fees annually increased by 5.59% over the period of 1995 to 2008.
TS:
For one thing, offering academic knowledge can
contribute to students’ achievement.
使用拓展主题句方法展开：
In primary school, children should be instilled the ability of spelling chinese letters and basic mathmatical knowledge which ensure them mastering the commen sense in daily life. When students have a good command of academic subjects, such as, …they can obation the priority to further education. If they fail to master those knowledge, it is difficult to seek a briht futur.