2017高考英语满分作文赏析
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全国III卷 书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正 在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric 写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括: 1.球队活动; 2.报名方式及截止日期。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2017年的新课标卷英语作文,可以用"稳、变、新" 三个字来总结,具体呈现出了以下几个特点: 一、稳: 考查形式延续了往年新课标卷的应用文体,如书信 体作文类型。 近年来,高考越来越从“神坛”向“平民化”迈进, 对于我们英语来说,所谓“神坛”指的就是过去那 些略感晦涩,让学生无处下笔的话题作文或开放式 作文,而所谓“平民化”则是更加突出作文的“有 用”,学语言,理论很重要,但实用更重要。而这 几年,语言作为沟通的桥梁作用,更是深刻体现在 了我们高考的书面表达中。 以书信体作文为载体,传播中国文化就成了今年高 考作文的主题。
2017高考英语作文全国I、Ⅱ、 Ⅲ卷真题及满分范文赏析
2017年高考已然落下帷幕。不过这也意 味着下一届高考序幕的开启。今天,老 师跟大家一起回顾一下刚过去的2017年 高考全国I,Ⅱ,Ⅲ卷英语作文真题及优 秀满分范文!2018年的准高考生们可得 关注咯,值得收藏一年!
全国I卷 书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。 请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括: 1.时间和地点; 2.内容:学习唐诗; 3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
优秀满分范文
Dear Leslie, How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson. The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class. If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.
三、新 高考英语作文,七分在内容,三分在语言。 对于今年的高考作文来说,内容和语言一样重 要,今年的高考作文难度与2016年相比基本持 平,因此在这种情况下,覆盖所有要点不遗漏, 并且能够语言出彩,例如分词和从句的使用、 被动语态的使用、IT结构的使用等能顾及到, 同时兼顾“内容至上”的原则,不过分炫技, 就能取得最终的胜利。
Dear Eric,优秀满分范文 I am Li Hua. Occasionally learning that you are addicted to table tennis, I am writing to sincerely invite you to join the table tennis team in our school aimed at developing our interests and improving our skills. Considering the enormous benefits, which we can earn steadily from tennis practice, including preventing us from getting short-sighted and keeping physically healthy, we are lost in training course. Definitely, as for the activities, we will be honored to be given high-level training by a professional coach every Friday around 3-5 pm. Meanwhile, we will be divided into several groups to conduct competitions every two weeks. If you are interested in what I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st. I’m looking forward to your reply even your appearance in our training center soon. Yours, Li Hua
全国II卷 书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观 中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他 写封邮件,内容包括: 1.展览时间、地点; 2.展览内容。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry 实例(分数:24分 四川德阳中学) I'm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I'm glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast. The exhibition, the theme of which is "beauty of China", will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club's works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture. I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I'm looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua
二、变 与往年作文相比,今年的作文有了一些新变化,为了了解这种变 化,我们先来看看17年的新课标卷作文。 刚刚结束的2017年新课标Ⅰ卷作文题为: 假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语,请你写封 邮件告知下次上课的计划,内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.内容: 学习唐诗;3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。 这是一封典型的"咨询信",按照顾斐老师在考前给学生传授的"斐 式大招"写作技巧,注意审清楚题目所给的细节,尤其是图表里出 现的一些要点,将自己所要了解的暑期学习信息写清楚,就是这 封信的关键所在。 与往年考过的题目相比,通知信难度并不大,关键是将通知和中 国文化"唐诗"进行有机的结合,给自己的书面表达换发新的生机。 而2017年全国Ⅱ卷作文题为: 假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(papercutting)艺术展,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地 点;2.展览内容。 与新课标Ⅰ卷相比,二卷同样选择了告知信这种书信体作文,只 是在内容上,将“唐诗”变成了“中国剪纸”,同样是中国文化, 几乎是同样的要点,对于学生知识和语言的考查略微轻松于新课 标卷