走进高考读后续写(课堂PPT)

Para 5: happy, stronger
Para 6: hopeful
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Step 2： Creative plotting
Attention： Being creative doesn’t mean you can
write whatever you like. Continuation writing must be designed in a logical and reasonable way. And on top of that being creative will be appreciated.
构紧凑；
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Step 1： Thorough Reading
1. Read the article carefully and analyze the 5 elements: when, where, who, what, how.
When: one weekend Who: Jane and her husband Tom Where: in the forest What &how:
2. 内容丰富，应用了5个以
上短文中标出的关键词语。
3. 所使用语法结构和词汇丰 富、准确，可能有些许错 误，但完全不影响意义表
2. Creative plotting （构思）
3. Swift drafting
达；
4. Careful polishing
4. 有效地使用了语句间的连
接成分，使所续写短文结 5. Neat copying
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Step 1： Thorough Reading
1. Read the article carefully and analyze the 5 elements: when, where, who, what, how.
What & how: Jane _q_u_a_rr_e_ll_e_d with Tom and _w_a_lk_e_d_away to _fi_n_d__ a better spot . Unfortunately, she was _l_o_s_t on the way. She _c_ri_e_d for help and kept m__o_v_in_g_ until she was so tired. After a night’s rest, Jane __r_o_saet the break of the day and ___fo_ll_o_w_etdhe sound to a stream, getting something to eat. 4
Paragraph 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. ______________________________________
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Step 2： Creative plotting
people place
feeling object
Use over 5 of the folalocwtioinng words:
Step 1： Thorough Reading
1. Read the article carefully and analyze the 5 elements: when, where, who, what, how,
What & how: As she picked her way along the stream, Jane _h_e_a_rd__ a helicopter and another, so she _to_o_k__o_ff_ her yellow blouse, _th_i_n_k_in_gthat she should go and __fl_a_g_ them if the helicopters come back.
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Step 1： Thorough Reading
2. Read and pay attention to the feeling of the character in different paragraphs.
Para 1:
angry
Para 2-4: fearful, regretful, tired, helpless
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Step 1： Thorough
Reading The plot of original article
quarrelled——walked away——got lost——saved herself——missed her husband——saved herself again—— helicopter appeared and flew away……
Jane Tom lake walked climbed
at a distance stream to her great joy
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Step 3： Swift drafting
1. When no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again, what’s Jane’ s feeling and what’s her action?
走进2016高考读后续写
Continuation writing in 2016 College Entrance Examination
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对第五档(21-25)作文的描述：
1. 与所给wk.baidu.com文融洽度高，
与所提供各段落开头语衔 Tips for writing:
接合理。
1. Thorough reading
+ logic creativity
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Step 2： Creative plotting
Paragraph 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. ______________________________________
(Jane, to her great joy, walked, climbed, stream) 2. What happened when Jane wake up at daybreak? (helicopter, yellow blouse, Tom, at a distance, lake)