读后续写作文Alippt课件

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Continuation Writing
Children of Heaven
电影：天堂的孩子
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Read for information
What is the type of writing?
A. narrative (记叙文） B. exposition （说明文 ) C. argumentation (议论文）
How many words should we write? How many given underlined words should be used? How many paragraphs should we write?
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注意事项
1.续写材料是一段350词以内的材料（一般为记叙 文）。 2.所续写短文的词数应为150左右。词数少于130词, 从总分中减去2分; 3.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。 4.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 5.续写完成后，请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。
and reasonably.
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When doing continuation writing, what should we pay attention to?
the given passage:
In general, how many words are there?
the continuation writing part:
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One day he didn't come to the restaurant . She called his home , only to hear an answering machine . With nervousness wrapped into anxiety , Kathy went to his house and found out from his neighbor that he had died the previous night . On hearing the bad news she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly. Because Charlie had no family or close friends , Kathy put herself in charge of his funeral arrangements . She and the neighbor were the only people to attend.
Continuation Writing
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Reflection The cost of a smile
1.Have you got a high score in this writing? 2.What problems do you have? Or Why do you fail to get a good result?
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Do you think such kind of ending acceptable?
1.Charlie moved to another city with his son or daughter.
2.Charlie was the boss of a big company, so he asked Kathy to work with him in his company.
Character
How many characters are there in the passage? Who are the main characters ?
Many. The main characters are Ali and his
younger sister, Zahra.
A smile costs nothing, but it is worth everything.
Convey positive message.
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A successful story
development (logical/reasonable)
language (vivid)
message (positive)
Use vivid detailed description to show characters6.
Several days after the funeral , Kathy received a very important - looking letter in the mail . It was sent to her from Charlie’s lawyer . Enclosed was a check for almost $600 , 000 ! Kathy nearly fainted （晕倒） , but then she noticed a handwritten note which read ， “ Dear Kathy , by the time you read this , I will be gone . Here I have left for my best friend a small token（表示） of my gratitude I can never repay you for what you've given me , for you see , Kathy , a smile is worth much more than $20 . Indeed , a smile is priceless.
3.To win Kathy's smile,Charlie gave lots of tips to Kathy.Then they were in love with each other. But Charlie was seriously ill.
the funeral
Make sure the story develops logically