读后续写和概要写作课件65

climate change to continue.
写作思路解读
Para. 1: Which year was the hottest since record-keeping began in 1880? It’s been clear that 2015 has stolen the award from 2014, with 10 out of its 12 months being the warmest respective months on record. Tip 1: 运用Q - A策略找要点。
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only warm the ocean but also put lots of extra heat into the atmosphere, raising global
temperatures.
④ El Nino years tend to be warmer than non-El Nino years. El Nino was a major driver
Para.2:(要点2) …at 1.62 degrees Fahrenheit warmer than the 20th century average, more than 20% higher than the previous highest departure from average…. This was aided by a December that looked and felt more like a March or April…
respective months on record.
② According to NOAA(the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration), the
average temperature over global land and ocean surfaces for September 2015 was at
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
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in 1880? It’s been clear that 12 months being the warmest
写作思路解读
Para. 2: According to NOAA(the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration), the average temperature over global land and ocean surfaces for September 2015 was at 1.62 degrees Fahrenheit warmer than the 20th century average, more than 20% higher than the previous highest departure from average. Therefore it was not surprised that 2015 lapped the field — finished in the first place. This was aided by a December that looked and felt more like a March or April for much of the Northern Hemisphere (北半球), where traditional winter holidays had weather that was neither traditional nor winter-like.
that 2016 will end up globally being the warmest on record,” according to Hennen.
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weather forecasters are already saying 2016 would push chart-topping temperature to
climb even higher, with El Nino lasting into spring and the influence from man-made
2.写作思路解读
Para. 3: Why was 2015 so warm? The crucial element was a major El Nino(厄尔尼诺), which has joined 1997-1998 as the strongest El Nino ever observed. El Nino, which are characterized by significant warming over tropical ocean waters in the Pacific, not only warm the ocean but also put lots of extra heat into the
atmosphere, which have increased greatly over the last 150 years.
⑤ “With a 98% chance that the strong El Niño conditions will last, it is virtually certain
Para.3&4:(要点3) The crucial element was a major El Nino, which has joined 19971998 as the strongest El Nino ever observed…The change also was largely driven by increased carbon dioxide and other human-made emissions into the atmosphere.
概要写作 ① 文本内容与结构解读 ② 写作思路解读 ③ 写作思路微技能之策略 ④ 表达微技能之同义/近义词（组）替换篇 ⑤ 牛刀小试 ⑥ 参考范文欣赏
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁： 主题： 结构：
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题： Global Warming
结构：
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3 & 4
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of the heat this year, but certainly not the only factor. The change also was largely
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(北半球), where traditional winter holidays had weather that was neither traditional
nor winter-like.
③ Why was 2015 so warm? The crucial element was a major El Nino(厄尔尼诺), which
2.写作思路解读
Para. 5: “With a 98% chance that the strong El Niño conditions will last, it is virtually certain that 2016 will end up globally being the warmest on record,” according to Hennen. Much like sports writers who start their preseason predictions based on the final buzzer(蜂鸣器) of the previous season's championship, many climate scientists and weather forecasters are already saying 2016 would push chart-topping temperature to climb even higher, with El Nino lasting into spring and the influence from man-made climate change to continue.