外研版英语短文改错

Dear Elli,

I ' m a senior student. I like make friends with people but I do my best to get on well everyone. But in last week I found that one of myfriends wrote in her English diary that she disliked me and that he didn ' t want

to be my friend any more. Now she has started to make fun of me because of I ' m fat.

I ' m kind to her, but why can ' t she be friend of mine

Other problem is about my weight. Should I do less exercise or use pills And do you know any other way Please give me some advices.

Yours, Mary

Dear Sir,

I am now a college student at Peking University. I 'm quite interested

in the position offering by your website for part-time English reporters.

I think I ' m fit the job. As a student, I ' ve read a lo t and have many knowledge in different field. I 'm fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I 'm easily to get along with and I enjoy working together with another. Above all, I once work as a reporter for

my college broadcast stati on. So I'm sure I can do the job well if I will get the chance work for a website. I 'm looking forward to your reply.

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Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no play makeJack a dull boy What this means is that if you study all the times you will become a boring person. You must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have a confidence problem.

Please try remember that the work you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do not have to compete your classmates. No one can be happier in studying seven day and seven nights a week.

（四）

Dear Tracy ，

Although I'm 1 6 years old ，but my father still treats me as a careless

children. He doesn 't value my opinions. He is very strict with me and

often punishes me about leaving things lying around in the house while he did this all time. I think he fails to set an example me to follow.

But he often says ：“Doing as I say ，not as I do. ”Even worse，he points out mypast mistakes to guests ，making mefeel hurting. I love my father, but I can't bear what he does. I have been tried many times to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me.

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Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted to see the report about an important football match the night before. The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless he saw the sea. He got on at the next station, and had to wait a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrived late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”, he shouted.

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Whenmy father bought mea computer as a birthday gift for mein last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers are getting more and more usefully now. Much information can be stored in them. We can also learn that has lately happened in the world on the internet. In past, people had to do lots of work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do it instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises on my computer. Then it will correct it and tell me the right answers. In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare the exam than before. The computer has become my real friend.

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In 10th April this year, as Li Ming was leaving his home in the morning, he got into the lift together a woman. Whenthe lift got to the four floor, it stopped and a middle-aged man enter. Once the man got in, he snatched the woman' s handbag. He pulled both Li Ming and the woman out of the lift. Li Ming ran downstairs. When he reached for the ground floor, he saw the man walked out. He told the caretaker at once and they both followed thief to a restaurant nearby which they met two policemen. Li Ming told them all about the