备考高考写作专题7 十句作文法

备考高考写作专题7 十句作文法

重点诠释：

十句作文法是有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高写作水平。其基本模式为：

1．第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。两者关系也可倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句点明主题。2．第二段为正文，共七句。第三句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关或一致。第四至九句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意好过渡，以使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。

3．第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句，它将前面的内容总结为一个结果，表明自己的论点。

注意：要提高语言表达的档次，在句式运用上就不能一味地使用简单句和称述句，而应该根据实际情况灵活运用所学的各种句式。丰富的句式有助于考生在高考中出类拔萃，赢得高分。写作典例：

电视在人们的日常生活中占有很重要的地位，电视传播不断深层次地影响着每一个人。请以“Television”为题，写一篇有关其所带来的积极影响的英语短文。

分析：1。这篇书面表达的中心思想是电视所带来的积极影响。2。电视对现代生活的影响是多方面的，考生不要试图面面俱到，如果涉及面太多，文章反而显得松散，我们只选择几个方面进行写作，可用举例的方法合理安排语言材料。

范文：有毒食品致病甚至致死的事例经常见诸报端，目前三鹿奶粉更是闹得人心惶惶。现请你以“Let’s all go out for food safety”为标题根据下表提示完成一篇短文。

注意：①避免直译，要求层次清楚，内容连贯。②字数120字左右。

参考词汇：添加剂addictive 严厉severely 监督员supervisor 消费者consumer

Let us all go out for food safety

It is frequently reported that poisonous food causes deaths. Sanlu Milk Powder is a good example at precent. Therefore, food safety had been drawing the public’s great attention.

Food problems mainly lie in the two factors. On the one hand, some food producers lack social conscience. Centering on money, they produce lots of fake and junk food; On the other hand, other producers are short of common sense on food safety, thus poison and addictive abuse pollutes food.

For the sake of health, we must take food safety seriously. Firstly, food producers shall pay more attention to food quality, and they are required to care about food safety as well as profits; Secondly, food supervisors shall operate strict food standards and punish the ill producers severely; Lastly, consumers had better go to regular markets to choose green food.

针对练习：（用十句作文法和三段式表达）

下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查，请结合表格内容，用英语写一篇120—150单词的短文，就中学生应如何过双休日发表你的看法

范文(One possible version):

This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students’ weekend. It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more. Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games. Library and interest groups are available but not favourable.

Personally I think, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged. They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally. Besides, more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually. All these will contributes a lot to a well-informed and highly qualified teenager.

In conclusion, students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful