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现象描述+意义分析+我的观点
现象描述:1. 开门见山,直接点题,
2. 阐述现象的具体表现或变化(可以用例子)
3. 强化主题/ 过渡句引出下文对意义的分析。3-4句话注:在描述现象前,先思考该现象是消极还是积极,然后再选用相应模版
消极现象:
1. Along with/due to/as a result of the advance of ____________, countless problems are brought to our attention/ focus, one of which is that________________
1.随着/由于/因为_________的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是____________。
替换词汇:advance n. 发展deepening n.深化broadening n. 扩大(范围)
2. In recent years/months (recently/nowadays), the phenomenon of _____________has aroused wid e concern/d ebate, so peopl e are in alarm that ___________
最近, ____________现象引起了人们的广泛关注,人们开始担心______________。
3. One of the pressing problems facing our ___________ today is _____________.
我们____如今面临的紧迫问题之一是____________
One of the most serious/commonly-seen problems many people talk about centers on _____.
许多人谈论的一个严重/最常见的问题集中在__________________
4. a growing number of people are beginning to realize that ____________ has become a serious problem/ an urgent problem.
越来越多的人意识到———已经成为一个严重的/亟待解决的问题。
5. Never before( in history) has the issue of __________ been more evident than now.
(Never before has the topic of ______ been more controversial/ heatedly discussed/ valued than today.)
历史上,———的问题从来没有像现在这样更加突出。
6. _______ was once seen as a blessing/luck/ virtue. Today, however, things are changing and an increasing number of _________realize that ______________.
——曾经被看作是一种福气/好运/美德, 然而如今事情在变化,越来越多的——意识到——。
另:__has never been thought/ defined/ termed as a problem. (was unheard of 10 years ago)
7. it is noticeable that _____ has gone wild/viral nowadays with the use/transmission of __________.
值得注意的是,随着——的使用/传播,——已经很流行/很狂热了。
补充:mania n. 狂热religious mania宗教狂热the mania of online shopping 网购狂潮
the global mania of English learning 全球英语学习热
8. In spite of _the extraordinary progress made in science and technology__________, problems remain in terms of _guaranteeing that achievements benefit the greatest number of people____________.
尽管科学技术取得了非凡的成就,但是在保证成果惠及尽可能多的人方面还存在问题.
9. (we have to admit that) apart from……., _______ is yet another new and bitter situation/problem we must learn to face and deal with.
(我们不得不承认)除了。。。——又是一个我们必须学会面对及解决的痛苦的新情况/问题。
10. A great number of people are following the trend/ tide/ suit of doing………
今年来我们可以看到很多人都在(跟风)。。。。。。
积极/中性现象:
1._______explodes in popularity (are gaining increasing popularity)nowadays.
——突然流行开来(越来越流行)
2.recently we have witnessed a prevailing trend for many people to ……….
3._____has been widely seen/ talked about/used/ spread nowadays
a common occurrence/phenomenon /matter nowadays is …….
目前比较常见的一种现象是______
4.____refers to/ is defined as an activity/a group of people which/ who………For example,…. (直接定
义式)
_____ is obtaining gradual significance/attention …….
_____ is highly valued in the modern society______. people attach great importance to______ by______ ___指的是。。。。_____越来越受到重视_______高度重视/珍视
5. There is a growing tend ency nowadays that peopl e in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for _________. They are willing to _____________
如今有这样一种趋势,越来越多的人都热衷于______....
6. ___ has profoundly/ thoroughly/ to great extent permeated into every aspect of our daily life.
___已经全面/很大程度上渗透到我们生活的方方面面