现象分析

6. 全社会 7. 安全意识
_______________________ the whole society _______________________ safety awareness
8. 有效的办法/途径 _______________________ an effective approach 9. 越来越多的…… an _______________________ increasing number of… 10. 共同关注 _______________________ a common concern
11. 热点话题 12. 人们普遍认为
_____________________ a hot topic
_____________________ It is commonly believed/recognized that… 13. 社会发展的必然结果 ____________________________ the inevitable result of social development 14. 随着经济的快速发展 ____________________________ with the rapid development of economy 15. 面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges ____________________________
6. 在problem后加is分析句子成分可知，此处 caused作谓语，故要考虑时态和语态。时态 准确，但语态应该用被动才符合逻辑。 7. by →for固定搭配as for意为“至于/关于”。 8. 去掉think后的that此处并非引导宾语从句， 而是it作形式宾语，后面的不定式短语才是真 正的宾语。 9. Beside →Besides beside意为“在……旁 边”，不符合文意。besides意为“此外”， 符合文意。 10. decreased →decrease情态动词后接动词原 形。
习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Recently the safety of school buses has become a seriously problem, that has attracted more and
serious
which
more public attention. So in our class we have held an heated discussion on the causes and solution.
文体概述 现象分析的文章属于说明文，一般先指 出某地存在某种现象，然后说明这种现象 产生的原因，最后提出建议或呼吁杜绝这 种现象。通常用一般现在时态。
常用语块
1. 引起某人的注意 ______________________ draw/arouse one’s
attention / be brought to one’s attention ________________________________________
solutions After the discuss, we find that the problem caused ∧ is discussion
by three kinds of reasons which include overloading, speeding as well as weak safety awareness.
2. 采取措施(做……) take ______________________ measures (to do…)
3. 日益严重的问题
______________________ an increasingly serious problem
4. 普遍现象
5. 改善这种情况
a ______________________ common phenomenon ______________________ improve the situation
2. Recently the safety of school buses has become an increasingly serious problem.
3. 如今高中生在网上开通博客成为了一种普遍现象。 3. It is a common phenomenon that high school students open their blogs on the Internet.
4. 结果，这种现象引起了社会的关注。
4. As a result, the phenomenon has aroused social attention.
5. 有三方面的主要因素应该引起我们的关注。
5. There are three main factors that should call our concern.
1. seriously →serious修饰名词要用形容词形 式。 2. that →which非限制性定语从句不能用that 引导。 3源自文库 an →a冠词后面的heated并非以元音音素 开头。 4. solution →solutions solution是可数名词， 要和causes保持一致。 5. discuss →discussion定冠词the后面接名词。
套用句式 1. 随着工业的发展，城市的空气质量变得越来越 差。
1. With the rapid development of industry, the air quality in cities is becoming worse and worse.
2. 近期校车安全问题成为了一个日益严重的问题。
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As by the solutions, first of all, we all for think that it necessary to examine the safety
of the school buses. Beside, we should stop Besides risky buses from being operated. Only if all people attach importance to safety education to raise safety awareness can traffic accidents decreased. decrease