上海新世纪高考英语作文分类讲评范文课件(共27张PPT)

• Anti-junk-message war can be demanding , but it will be worth the efforts to free people form the constant assault presented by these unwelcomed visitor.
• Some students are keen on playing games and others spend too much time on sending short messages. By doing so, both time and money are wasted and even our sleep and studies are harmed. As far as I am concerned, using mobile phones is quite necessary in some way, especially for those boarding school students. Acting as a strong link between parents and us, mobile phones bring us lots of convenience. What’s more, mobile phones can also help to promote friendship and provide us with a way to communicate with our peers or friends. With the smart phones, we students can access much more information, becoming more efficient in our studies and staying open-minded in this information age.
我的看法或态度。
• 2常见句型 • 陈述事物的优点
• There are several advantages in ….the first /biggest advantage is that…
陈述事物的缺点
• However, …just like anything else, has its negative side as well.
blackmailing ones. Still others are perhaps due to
ineffective administration or technological failures.
Whatever the causes, they must be removed.
• The most direct solution is to turn to phone producers who may equipped each phone with a message filter so as to automatically abandon those junk messages. But it may not be the most far-reaching solution. To handle the problem thoroughtly we may first set up a supervising network to detect the spread of junk messages. Secondly, laws for punishment shall follow to fight against these behaviors. Meanwhile, our personal information must get better protection to avoid being aimed at as potential customers. And finally, the public should be educated to respect others by stopping the spread of junk messages.
• 1 写作结构指导 • 问题陈述----分析（原因/后果）---问题解决---
结论（期望/展望）
2 常用句型 • 问题陈述
• Recently/nowadays, ….has become a serious problem we have to face.
• ….the phenomenon…has aroused the public’s concern.
• In the meanwhile, we can’t ignore the disadvantages of ….
• However, the negative aspects of ….are also obvious. To begin with, … to make matters worse, …worst of all…
58% of the students tend to turn to their friends and classmates in that being similar in age leads to better mutual understanding and communication while another 33% argue that they can be fully trusted. Apart from the above, those who refuse to share their thoughts with others account for the rest 9%.
• In spite of /Despite the advantages/beneficial sides, it has its comprehensive/disadvantages side effects.
• 表明个人态度或看法（利大于弊）
• As to me, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage.至于我，我认为优势大于劣势
• As far as I am concerned, I hold that .. has more advantages than disadvantages.就我而言，我认 为……利大于弊。
• 范文： 手机是人们生活不可缺少的交流工具，谈 谈它对中学生在学习上或生活中带来的优缺点。
• As the life standard becomes higher and higher, mobile phones play an essential part in our own daily life now. not only the adults but also many middle school students use them frequently.
英语作文高考上海文体分类讲解
文体 记叙文 议论文/ 论说文
具体
观点对比型；
问题解决型；
道理/观点论证型； 说明利弊型
应用文
书信； 日记； 发言稿；读后感；
综合文体
图片和图表范文； 夹叙夹议； 应用文加多种文体；
高考重点：问题解决型；综合文体；
一议论文/论说文
• （一）问题解决型
• 此题型是先提出某一问题和现象，然后提出 解决方法。此类型的论说文重心在于解决问 题上，但有时也要对问题产生的原因或引起 的后果做相应的描述，所以审题要注意段落 的合理比例。
• 分为4段 • 第一段：陈述现状
• 第二段：优点罗列；缺点罗列
• 第三段: 表明自己的态度 • 第四段: 总结
二图表类别：最近学校在高中生中做一次 :有烦恼向谁说？的调查活动，谈谈想法和理由。
Recently, a survey on the topic of ‘ whom do you turn to when in trouble’ has been carried out in our school whicwenku.baidu.com has aroused a heated discussion among students.
• 分为4段 • 第一段：陈述垃圾信息泛滥
• 第二段: 出现这样的原因分析 • 第三段： 采取的应对方法
• 第四段： 总结长期的解决方法
（二）说明利弊型
• 此题型要求针对某一事物或现象从正反面 分析其优缺点，然后表明作者对该事物或 想象的看法。
• 1写作结构指导 • 描述某事物或现象---陈述它的优缺点---表面
• All in all, everything has two sides. Whether mobile phones will do us good or harm all depends on how we use them. If we have a right attitude towards them and use them properly, mobile phones are our good servants.
• There is no denying that …has become a serious concern among people.
• 分析（原因/后果） • There are several reasons for the problem.
• There are a variety of factors contributing to the phenomenon. 起作用
• There is no doubt that mobile phones have their advantages. As a communication tool, mobile phones connect people conveniently. We can use mobile phones to call or send text messages to each other, keeping in touch with the outside world. On the other hand, mobile phones also have disadvantages.
in a constant rustle with them-you delete while they
arrive. How unpleasant!
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Reasons for such inconvenience vary. Some may
be caused by business battles where companies take
• 问题解决
• People have figured out many ways to solve the problem.
• It is high time that we figured out ways to deal with the problem.
• 结论（展望/期望） • With the joint efforts, I am confident that …
• As long as we …., we will resolve the problem eventually.
作文范文：Junk message
• 目前垃圾短信泛滥，给人们生活带来困扰，分析原 因谈谈如何解决这个问题。
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Junk messages are in the air. People are caught up
advantage of leaked personal information and use text
messages as a ay of advertising while others may result
from evil thoughts, including teasing ones or even