2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文试题解析及佳作选评

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湖北省荆门市2015年中考语文真题试题(含扫描答案)

湖北省荆门市2015年中考语文真题试题(含扫描答案)

荆门市2015年初中毕业生学业水平考试语文试题第Ⅰ卷(选择题,共31分)一、积累与运用(每小题2分,共10分)1.下列词语中加点字注音错误最多的一项是A.荣膺(yīn)恻隐(cè)联袂(jué)龙吟凤哕(suì)B.嗔怪(chēn)涟漪(qǐ)遒劲(qiú)忍俊不禁(jìn)C.阔绰(chuò)伶仃(líng)逶迤(yí)鳞次栉比(jié)D.真谛(dì)炽热(chì)酝酿(niàng)惟妙惟肖(xiào)2.下列各组词语中字形都正确的一组是A.引吭高歌直截了当淋漓尽致不记其数B.好高骛远殚精竭虑博闻强识阴谋诡计C.梦寐以求刚愎自用按步就班桀骜不驯D.逆来顺受脍灸人口无精打彩叱咤风云3.下列各句中,加点成语使用恰当的一项是A.海外网文章指出,如今有的领导干部喜欢到处卖弄笔墨,其实胸无城府....,让人联想起鲁迅笔下那些不学无术、附庸风雅的“清国留学生”。

B.在读书汇报会上,张山同学旁征博引,断章取义....,赢得了同学们的一致好评。

C.她喜欢收藏,买了不少关于古玩鉴定的书,到各地去按图索骥....,结果收回来的东西多而杂。

D.从楼市表现来看,几个品牌房企业心领神会....的降价方式可以被称作“多形态营销”手段,但不可否认的是绝大部分房企实际上都在“以价换量”。

4.下列各句中,没有语病的一项是A.几千年的祭祀传统,牵动着中国人一种最隐秘而质朴的情感,一头系着对亲人的思念,一头连着对未来的祈福和期盼。

B.在学校追逐教育效率的进程中,相关政府部门需要证明并履行自身职责,发挥调控和监督功能,要对非正当、无界限抢夺优质资源加以规范。

C.2014年热播的《咱们结婚吧》,虽然是一部常见的被观众戏称为“电视购物剧”的都市情感剧,高圆圆却将它演绎得别具浪漫主义气息,成为当年最火的电视剧之一。

2015年中考满分作文和评析

2015年中考满分作文和评析

2015年中考满分作文赏析今天属于我整天沉浸在紧张的学习中,唉,累死我了!今天我要过属于自己的周末,今天属于我。

早上,一睁开眼就望见窗外投来的一缕阳光,这阳光聚集到地上形成一个小光点,恍恍惚惚的这光点给我的一天蒙上一层神秘的面纱。

今天的阳光属于我。

今天或许是幸福的。

也许我会收到一封热情洋溢的来信,也许我会接到同学问候我的亲切电话,也许我会看到妈妈久违的笑脸,也许我会得到爸爸的表扬:“不错,好样的!”……这些都来之不易,我会将它们小心翼翼地收藏在记忆宝库里。

回忆起来,这些事固然美好,但重要的是今天要好好珍惜,要让这些荣誉永远留在我身边。

今天的幸福属于我。

今天或许是难过的。

新穿的白球鞋也许会被别人踩一脚,出门时也许会遇到狂风暴雨,也许会因误会与邻居闹翻……嗨!心里多不好受,算了吧,忘掉它似乎会好受一些。

但这些记忆难道就这样丢掉吗?不!这些悲伤与今天一样都是属于我的,生活本来就是酸甜苦辣咸五味俱全。

今天的悲伤属于我。

今天的时间属于我。

当我早晨吃饭时,时间在我的饭桌旁悄然而逝;当我到野外散步看风景时,时间又从我身边偷偷溜走;当我放下手中的笔与伙伴们一起嬉闹时,时间飘然地离我而去。

“一寸光阴一寸金,寸金难买寸光阴。

”这句话我读幼儿园时就会背,但现在想想却别有一番道理。

今天的时间属于我,不好好把握时间,就等于抛弃了一件本属于我的美好的东西,多可惜!今天的繁花属于我,今天的小草属于我,今天的苍天大树同样属于我。

它们象征着我拥有三分之一的活泼、三分之一的坚韧、三分之一的成熟……今天的一切都属于我,阳光、幸福、悲伤、时间、繁花、小草、苍天大树……都使我尽情的“享有”。

惟有好好地把握,才能体会到今天的绚丽多彩。

得分点解读:这是一篇类似随笔的记叙文,内容新颖,详略得当,结构合理,流畅连贯,极富功底。

具体来讲,有下列三个特点:一是通篇运用排比段的结构,一气呵成。

文章除了开头和结尾外,中间分别写了“今天的阳光属于我”、“今天的幸福属于我”、“今天的悲伤属于我”、“今天的时间属于我”。

2015年中考作文题目5篇

2015年中考作文题目5篇

2015年中考作文题目5篇2015年中考作文题目1:1、2015年湖北武汉中考作文题目:关于成长的材料作文阅读下面的材料,按要求作文。

(50分)初春,街心公园的树争先恐后地长满了绿芽,有一棵树却迟迟没有动静。

一段时间后,别的树的叶子都已张开,这棵树才刚刚冒出嫩芽。

一开始就比别人晚了一大步,不免让人担忧。

不过这棵树并不着急,还是按着自己的节奏不紧不慢地生长着,不经意间夏天来临,举头望去,这棵树与别的树已无区别,浓浓的绿色在夏日的酷暑里同样可以遮荫纳凉。

此时,谁又在意它当初的滞后?人的成长何尝不是这样?请根据对上述文字的感悟和思考,写一篇文章。

要求:依据材料的整体语意立意,自拟标题,不少于600字。

文中如果涉及真实的姓名或校名,请用化名代替。

2、2015年湖北宜昌中考作文题目:我的争我的不争梁启超和陈寅恪的“争”与“不争”展现了他们的君子风范,在你的生活中,一定也有过“争”或者“不争”的经历。

回想这些经历,“争”,或许是学习上的力争上游、辩论中的据理力争、赛场里的谁与争锋……“不争”,或许是矛盾冲突时的主动示弱、荣誉评比时的随意安然、素淡日子里的快乐满足……请结合自己的经历,以《我的“争”》或《我的“不争”》为题,写一篇600字左右的文章。

要求:①先将题目填写在横线上。

②文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

3、2015年湖北襄阳中考作文题目:_______需要表达材料作文请从下面两题中任选一题作文。

题一:思想、感情、态度等,用言语、行为显示出来,即为“表达”。

把爱表达出来,你会被更多关爱包围;把幸福表达出来,你会感受更多幸福;把失意表达出来,你会获得真诚帮助……勇于表达,善于表达,成长更顺利,生活更美好。

请以“ 需要表达”为题写一篇文章。

题二:阅读下面材料,自选角度,写一篇文章。

在这人世间,有些路是非要单独一个人去面对,单独一个人去跋涉的,路再长、再远,夜再黑、再暗也得独自默默地走下去。

——席慕蓉要求:①请先在答题卡上所选题号后的括号内打“√”,然后再作文。

2015年湖北荆州中考作文赏析:那天,雨一直下

2015年湖北荆州中考作文赏析:那天,雨一直下

2015年湖北荆州中考作文赏析:那天,雨一直下【真题】写作(50分)请以“那天,雨一直下”为题,写一篇不少于600字的记叙文。

写作要求:①将题目写在作文格的第一行;②文章贴近生活,言之有物,禁止抄袭或套作;③认真书写,力求工整、美观;④文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名。

【解读】荆州市2015年中考作文题回归到了传统的命题作文方式,该命题的巧妙之处,在于寓“开放”于“限制”,在诗意的命题中,让考生在命题作文的“限制”下,“开放”构思,自由作文。

首先,该作文题是“限制”性的命题作文。

从整体来看,有以下一些“限制”:一是限定了字数(不少于600字)和文体(记叙文),二是“写作要求”上贯彻了荆州市中考作文一贯的“贴近生活,言之有物”的精神。

从题目本身来看,限定了事情发生的时间(那天)和环境(雨一直下)。

由于有了“那天”的时间限制及“记叙文”的文体限制,则“雨一直下”只能成为叙事文章的环境限制,即所写事情,只能是发生在“那天”的一天时间之中,而且是“雨一直下”的自然环境之中。

其次,该作文题也是“开放”性较强的题目。

虽然是命题作文,却贯彻了荆州市一直提倡的“不设置审题障碍”的作文命题精神,任何考生均有话可写,且不会偏离主题。

有叙事数量上的“开放”:可以是一件事,也可以是多件事。

有叙事空间上的“开放”:所叙事情可以发生在同学们熟悉的学校、家庭之中,也可以发生于相对陌生的社会之中。

有叙述方式上的开放:可以是顺叙或倒叙,更可运用插叙。

有叙事结构上的“开放”:可以是“三段式”“镜头式”等常见结构,也可以是日记体、书信体等特殊结构。

有叙事情感上的“开放”:可表现亲情、友情,也可表现师生情、同学情,甚至是陌生人的善良之情。

有叙事主题上的“开放”:可以是人间情感的赞美,可以是成长路上的迷茫,甚至可以是不良现象的批判。

再者,该作文题富于诗意,适合写出文质兼美的文章。

环境烘托作为一种基本的写作手法,是学生必须掌握的写作手法之一。

2015年湖北省荆州市英语中考试卷及参考答案

2015年湖北省荆州市英语中考试卷及参考答案

2015年湖北省荆州市中考英语试卷一、听力部分(共13小题,满分20分)1.(1分)What's the weather like these days?A.Cool.B.Hot.C.Cold.2.(1分)What are the two speakers talking about?A.The school subjects.B.The interesting movie.C.The ball game.3.(1分)What's the relationship between the two speakers?A.Husband and wife.B.Doctor and patient.C.Teacher and student.4.(1分)Where are the two speakers probably talking?A.In the restaurant.B.In the clothes store.C.At the cinema.5.(1分)Why does the girl want to leave a little earlier today?A.To leave for Australia.B.To see her father off.C.To send her teacher back.6.(3分)听下面一段对话,回答第6至第8三个小题.6.What size T﹣shirt does the man want?A.Size L.B.Size M.C.Size S.7.What color T﹣shirt does the man want?A.Brown.B.White.C.Black.8.How much is the T﹣shirt?A.74.B.64.C.47.7.(3分)(1)What does the woman want to do?A.Visit her friends.B.Go to the park.C.Get some money.(2)How long does it take the woman to get there on foot?A.Five minutes.B.Ten minutes.C.Fifteen minutes.(3)How will the man help the woman at last?A.Draw a map for her.B.Give her a ride.C.Give her some money.8.(4分)听下面一段对话,回答第12至第15四个小题.12.What might Robert King be?A.A driver.B.A policeman.C.A doctor.13.How many people were there in the big blue car?A.Two.B.Three.C.Four.14.﹣What did the driver of the motorbike look like?﹣He was.A.tall with long hairB.short with dark hairC.short with red hair15.Who called 120for help?A.Robert.B.Kate.C.Danny.9.(1分)Who gave Tom one dollar at first?A.His mother.B.His father.C.The old man.10.(1分)What happened when Tom went to buy a toy?A.James was hit badly by snowballs.B.Tom met an old man and helped him.C.Tom broke a window of the house.11.(1分)﹣Why did Tom go back to the house?﹣Because he wanted to.A.play snowballs again B.pay for the window C.get his toy back.12.(1分)How much money did Tomget at last?A.Two dollars.B.One dollar.C.Nothing.13.(1分)What does the story want to tell us?A.Working hard is very important.B.Helping others is to help ourselves.C.Being honest can bring us more.二、单项选择.(共10分,每小题1分)从(A、B、C、D)四个选项中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项.14.(1分)﹣How do you like the famous actor,Tong Dawei?﹣Wonderful!I like very much()A.he B.his C.him D.himself15.(1分)﹣More and more people come to visit Jingzhou Ancient City.﹣That's true.It has become the of Jingzhou()A.effort B.praise C.courage D.pride16.(1分)﹣What do you think of the dish I cooked for you?﹣I haven't had it yet.However,it good()A.tastes B.smells C.sounds D.feels17.(1分)﹣Can you tell the difference between these two pictures?﹣Difference?Oh,no.They look quite____.()A.similar B.different C.strange D.interesting18.(1分)﹣How much do you know about Taiwan,Li Fen?﹣Taiwan and the mainland have a lot in common.They a lot of history and culture()A.support B.explain C.share D.belong19.(1分)﹣It's one of the things in the world to stay with friends.﹣I agree.It always makes us relaxed()A.worst B.happiest C.busiest D.hardest20.(1分)﹣John is so excited.Did he win the competition?﹣Yes.He was lucky and he had one minute to complete the special task,no more and no less()A.especially B.probably C.exactly D.hardly21.(1分)﹣Where was your dad at this time last night?﹣He was talking with my uncle I was looking for some information on the Internet.()A.after B.until C.since D.while22.(1分)﹣The group of boys and girls to study in college this morning,full of nice dreams.﹣I believe their dreams can come true one day()A.set off B.fell off C.put off D.kept off23.(1分)﹣So kind of you to give me a ride to the station.﹣___________()A.Never mind B.My pleasureC.It doesn't matter D.Glad you like it三、完形填空.(共10分,每小题10分)阅读下面短文,从短文后所给各题的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项.24.(10分)Once when Kevin was selling hats under a big tree,the monkeys on the tree picked some hats and put them on.So Kevin took off his own hat and threw(31)on the ground.The stupid monkeys threw their hats,too!Kevin soon(32)all the hats and left happily.Fifty years later,young Tony,(33)of Kevin,also sold hats for a living.(34)a long walk,Tony was tired,so he put his bag of hats beside him and laid down under a big tree.He was soon fast(35).When he woke up,Tony found that there weren't any hats in his bag!Tony started looking for his hats.To his(36),he found some monkeys on the tree wearing his hats.Tony didn't know what to do.Then he remembered the story his grandfather(37)used to tell him."Yes!I can fool these monkeys!"said Tony."I'll(38)them imitate (模仿)me and very soon I will get all my hats back!"Tony then waved at the monkeys,the monkeys waved at him.Tony started dancing,the monkeys were also dancing.Tony threw his hat on the ground…Just then,one of the monkeys jumped down(39)the tree,picked up the hat Tony threw on the ground and (40)up to Tony.He said,"Do you think onlyyou had a grandfather?"31.A.it B.its C.him D.his32.A.pointed B.put C.collected D.matched33.A.father B.son C.grandson D.friend34.A.When B.After C.Before D.As35.A.alive B.afraid C.awake D.asleep36.A.pleasure B.interest C.value D.surprise37.A.recently B.luckily C.proudly D.angrily38.A.tell B.make C.promise D.realize39.A.from B.beside C.toward D.through40.A.put B.brought C.walked D.took.四、阅读理解.(共30分,每小题6分)阅读下列短文,从每篇短文后所给各题的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项.25.(6分)A new term might be the best time to make new friends,but it can be hardto begin the first conversation.Below are four useful ways.Take a look.Search for common interests.Talking about shared interests,such as sports and popular talent shows,is the easiest way to make a successful talk with someone.Welcome the silence.In fact,sometimes silence is needed in order to continue a conversation.Remember that if you say something,the other person may need time to understand it.Keep it positive(积极的).To make great small talk,you should keep things fun.You should be cheerful and able to laugh over things that aren't very interesting.These will make the other person want to keep talking to you.Take it as a learning experience.Every time you meet someone from other places,it's a good chance to learn something new.You can learn more about their cultures and nations.These make you a more interesting person to talk to as well.41.How many ways are mentioned to start a conversation in the reading?A.Only one.B.Three.C.Four.D.Five.42.You can start a meaningful conversation by according to the reading.A.travelling to other countriesB.studying very hard in the classC.talking about the same interestsD finding someone from other places43.If someone is talking about something you don't like,you should according to the reading.A.stop the conversation at onceB.be cheerful and relaxedC.keep silent all the timeD.talk about something new.26.(8分)If you need glasses to read this,you are among most of Chinese students.About four﹣fifths of high school students in China have poor eyesight(视力).And now more and more children in primary school need glasses,too.Two main reasons can cause poor eyesight:too much time spent indoors studying and too little time spent outdoors playing.Reading and writing for hours and hours,sometimes in poorly lighted rooms,causes eyesight to weaken.But students have to do this because there is so much pressure on them to succeed in school.They have less time to enjoy the sun.The sun,it turns out,is important in developing good eyesight.According to a study by AustralianNationalUniversity,Australian children and Chinese children have the same level of eyesight before they start school,but once they enter primary school,Chinese children only spend about an hour a day outside,while Australian children spend three to four hours each day in the sunshine.The result is that while about forty percent of Chinese primary school students need glasses,only three percent of Australian children do.And poor eyesight at a young age can have serious long term influence.As you get older,your eyesight can worsen.With all that in mind,don't you think it's time to give your eyes a break?44.How many high school students have poor eyesight in Chinaaccording to the reading?A.A half of them.B.Three percent of them.C.Forty percent of them.D.Four﹣fifths of them.45.Which can cause poor eyesight according to the reading?A.Like reading and writing very much.B.Spend too much time enjoying the sun.C.Spend too much time indoors studying.D.Start primary school at a young age.46.What can we learn from the third paragraph?A.Primary school studying can be very harmful to young students.B.Australian children spend more time outdoors than Chinese children.C.After primary school,children in China and Australia have the same eyesight.D.Fewer Chinese primary school students have poor eyesight than Australian ones.47.What does the writer want to tell us?A.Remember to give our eyes a break.B.Develop good eyesight in Australia.C.Avoid poor eyesight at an old age.D.Spend little time outdoors playing.27.(8分)The message was short.I read it three times:"Hey,Mom,can I come to see you guys?"I wrote back:"Yes!"He said he hoped to make it in time for dinner.I made a quick run to the market,put sheets on the guest bed and set the TV to record the Warriors'game,so if traffic was awful,he wouldn't have to miss the first half.Then I began cooking,cleaning,watching the clock and listening for his footsteps coming up the walk.It's called waiting.I'm good at it.When he was a newborn,I'd wait for him to go to sleep.Soon then I'd stand by his bed waiting for him to wake up.I waited,as he learned to do things like walking,talking and feeding himself;throwing a ball,riding a bike and reading a book.I waited for him to start preschool,primary school,middle school and college.I waited with dread for him to start driving.And I waited up every time he came home late.I wait for my son to grow up,but that doesn'tmean the waiting game is over.It never really ends.Mothers wait for all kinds of reasons﹣good news or bad,happiness or heartache.But the waiting is soon forgotten,usually,the minute a long awaited child walks through the door.My boy will be here soon.But if he's late,I can wait.I'm good at it.And he's worth it.I will always leave a light on for him.48.After knowing her son would come home,which of the following activities did she do?a.Shopping.b.Cooking.c.Cleaning.d.Watching the Warriors'game.A.bcB.adC.abcD.bcd49.What does the underlined word"dread"mean?A.激动B.骄傲C.厌恶D.害怕50.Which of the following about the writer is TRUE according to the reading?A.Luckily,her son never makes her wait long.B.She has experienced all kinds of feelings while waiting for her son to do things.C.When her son went to college,her waiting ended.D.Waiting for her son is often boring,but once her son arrives she forgets about it.51.Which do you think would be the best title for the reading?A.Worth waiting forB.Being patient is difficultC.Learn to be a motherD.Visit your mother often.28.(8分)One cold winter night in Shanghai,I was walking home at one in the morning after long tiring work.I was having trouble with my job in the bank.As I walked,I thought seriously about giving up living there.City life had become too much for me.As I walked down empty streets,I felt very small and cold.I began running,both to keep warm and to keep away any possible danger.Very few people were still out except a few sad﹣looking homeless people under blankets(毛毯).Suddenly,I heard a sound behind me.I turned quickly,all I saw was a shining streetlight.Still,the noise had made me nervous,so I started to run faster.When I reached home,I realized what the noise had been.It had been my wallet falling to the sidewalk.Now I wasn't cold or tired anymore.I ran back to where I'd heard the noise.Although I searched carefully for fifteen minutes,my wallet was nowhere to be found.Just as I was about to give up the search,I heard the garbage truck(垃圾车)come to me.When a voice called from the inside,"Alisa Chen?"I thought I was dreaming.How could this man know my name?The door opened,and out jumped a small red﹣haired man"Is this what you're looking for?"he asked,holding up a small square shape.It was nearly 3a.m.by the time I got into bed.But I had got my wallet back.I also had got back some enjoyment of city life.I realized that the city couldn't be a bad place as long as people were willing to help each other.52.One cold winter night,the writer felt when she was back home after work.A.cold and sickB.lucky and helpfulC.excited and cheerfulD.disappointed and helpless53.What happened when the writer was running down the empty streets?A.She lost her wallet unknowingly.B.Someone had stolen her wallet.C.She was stopped by a garbage truck driver.D.She found some homeless people following her54.In the fifth paragraph,why did the writer say she was dreaming?A.Someone offered to take her back home.B.A.red﹣haired man came to see her.C.She heard someone call her name.D.Her wallet was found in a garbage truck.55.From the reading,we can infer(推断)that the writer.A.would stop working at nightB.would stay on in ShanghaiC.would make friends with cleanersD.would give up her job at the bank.五、词语运用.(共6分,每小题1分)根据句子意思和音标、首字母提示填词,每空一词.29.(1分)﹣Dad,why do you have so much work and get back home so late every day?﹣I'm sorry,dear.Um,because we live in a[ˈbɪzi]society.30.(1分)﹣The noise from the railway really[drəʊv]me crazy.﹣Oh,it's your fault to live near there.31.(1分)﹣Jim,is physics difficult to learn?﹣Yes.No subject can be learned well[wɪˈðaʊt]hard work.32.(1分)﹣Linda,what does the instruction say?﹣You are supposed to take these pills only t a day.More than that isn't helpful.33.(1分)﹣What's the most important morning news on CCTV today?﹣The Chinese g warned Japan not to hurt the feelings of the Chinese people.34.(1分)By bringing soccer to the schools,President Xi hopes he can a his dream and China's dream of playing for the World Cup,hosting(举办)the World Cup and finally,winning the World Cup.六、完成句子.(共14分,每小题2分)阅读下列各小题,根据汉语提示,用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子.35.(2分)My English teacher a movie star.(look)我的英语老师看起来像一位电影明星.36.(2分)Look!The children a story for the picture in the classroom.(make)瞧!孩子们正在教室里根据图片编一个故事.37.(2分)If you know what kind of people are unfriendly,just them.(stay)知道了哪些人不友好,就离他们远点.38.(2分)Liu Yang math last term,but now he loves to play computer games.(be)上学期刘洋对数学很感兴趣,但现在他迷上了电脑游戏.39.(2分)I the story,so I can tell them the truth.(happen)碰巧我读过那个故事,所以我能告诉他们事实真相.40.(2分)It is said that Shenzhou﹣11 spacecraft into space in 2016.(send)据说,神州十一号飞船将于2016年发射升空.41.(2分)Dr Lee a real example already.He'll tell us tomorrow.(come)李博士已经想到了一个真实的例子,明天告诉我们.七、短文填空.(共10分,每小题10分)阅读短文,并选择方框中的词用适当形式填空,每个词最多选用一次,有一项是多余的,每空一词.42.(10分)阅读短文,并选择方框中的词用适当形式填空,每个词最多选用一次,有一项是多余的,每空一词.Sometimes,we see some people reading books while bitingtheir nails(咬指甲).According to the BBC(英国广播公司),up to 45percent of teenagers bit their nails.There is not an exact answer to (1)why people bite their nails.But most commonly,nail biting is said to be a nervous habit.It is done(2)of stress(压力),boredom or excitement.What's more,a report says that people with higher levels of intelligence(智力)(3)biting their nails at an early age.It believes that compared(4)common person,(5)with higher levels of intelligence may feel higher levels of stress more easily.This habit is(6)for the biters.It can give them red or sore fingertips.And long﹣term nail biting can affect(影响)(7)nails grow.But don't worry!There are many(8)to stop biting your nails.First,keep your nails clean.The more you focus on taking care of your nails,the(9)likely you may bite them again.Also,when you feel stressed,try to relax.(10)exercise or having a warm bath both help.八、短文写作.(共15分)43.(15分)今天是6月21日,父亲节.假设你是李明,你早起为爸爸做早餐,煮了一碗鸡蛋面条.现在请你按照下表提示内容,用英语写一则日记.要求:1.请使用恰当的关联词叙述做面条的过程.2.可以适当增加内容,但是文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称.3.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范.4.词数80左右.日记开头已给出,不计入总词数.Sunday,June 21 Sunny Today is Father's Day.I got up early and.2015年湖北省荆州市中考英语试卷参考答案与试题解析一、听力部分(共13小题,满分20分)1.(1分)What's the weather like these days?略A.Cool.B.Hot.C.Cold.【解答】略2.(1分)What are the two speakers talking about?略A.The school subjects.B.The interesting movie.C.The ball game.【解答】略3.(1分)What's the relationship between the two speakers?略A.Husband and wife.B.Doctor and patient.C.Teacher and student.【解答】略4.(1分)Where are the two speakers probably talking?略A.In the restaurant.B.In the clothes store.C.At the cinema.【解答】略5.(1分)Why does the girl want to leave a little earlier today?略A.To leave for Australia.B.To see her father off.C.To send her teacher back.【解答】略6.(3分)听下面一段对话,回答第6至第8三个小题.6.What size T﹣shirt does the man want?A.Size L.B.Size M.C.Size S.7.What color T﹣shirt does the man want?A.Brown.B.White.C.Black.8.How much is the T﹣shirt?A.74.B.64.C.47.【解答】6.A 7.B7.(3分)(1)What does the woman want to do?A.Visit her friends.B.Go to the park.C.Get some money.(2)How long does it take the woman to get there on foot?A.Five minutes.B.Ten minutes.C.Fifteen minutes.(3)How will the man help the woman at last?A.Draw a map for her.B.Give her a ride.C.Give her some money.【解答】8.A 9.C 10.B 11.A8.(4分)听下面一段对话,回答第12至第15四个小题.12.What might Robert King be?A.A driver.B.A policeman.C.A doctor.13.How many people were there in the big blue car?A.Two.B.Three.C.Four.14.﹣What did the driver of the motorbike look like?﹣He was略.A.tall with long hairB.short with dark hairC.short with red hair15.Who called 120for help?A.Robert.B.Kate.C.Danny.【解答】略9.(1分)Who gave Tom one dollar at first?略A.His mother.B.His father.C.The old man.【解答】略10.(1分)What happened when Tom went to buy a toy?略A.James was hit badly by snowballs.B.Tom met an old man and helped him.C.Tom broke a window of the house.【解答】略11.(1分)﹣Why did Tom go back to the house?略﹣Because he wanted to.A.play snowballs again B.pay for the window C.get his toy back.【解答】略12.(1分)How much money did Tomget at last?略A.Two dollars.B.One dollar.C.Nothing.【解答】略13.(1分)What does the story want to tell us?A.Working hard is very important.B.Helping others is to help ourselves.C.Being honest can bring us more.【解答】略二、单项选择.(共10分,每小题1分)从(A、B、C、D)四个选项中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项.14.(1分)﹣How do you like the famous actor,Tong Dawei?﹣Wonderful!I like very much()A.he B.his C.him D.himself【解答】根据句意和句子结构,在谓语的后面,需要人称代词宾格在句中作宾语,故答案为:C.15.(1分)﹣More and more people come to visit Jingzhou Ancient City.﹣That's true.It has become the of Jingzhou()A.effort B.praise C.courage D.pride【解答】答案:D effort"努力";praise"赞扬";courage"勇气";pride"骄傲".根据More and more people come to visit Jingzhou Ancient City.可知是:成了荆州的骄傲.故选D.16.(1分)﹣What do you think of the dish I cooked for you?﹣I haven't had it yet.However,it good()A.tastes B.smells C.sounds D.feels【解答】taste:尝起来";smell"闻起来";sound"听起来";feel"感觉".根据I haven't had it yet可知,菜还没吃但闻起来很香.故选:B17.(1分)﹣Can you tell the difference between these two pictures?﹣Difference?Oh,no.They look quite____.()A.similar B.different C.strange D.interesting【解答】similar表示"相似的";different表示"不同的";strange表示"奇怪的";interesting表示"有趣的".根据句意他们看起来很相似.答案:A.18.(1分)﹣How much do you know about Taiwan,Li Fen?﹣Taiwan and the mainland have a lot in common.They a lot of history and culture()A.support B.explain C.share D.belong【解答】C.support表示"支持";explain表示"解释";share表示"共用";belong 表示"属于".根据句意他们共用许多历史和文化.故答案为:C.19.(1分)﹣It's one of the things in the world to stay with friends.﹣I agree.It always makes us relaxed()A.worst B.happiest C.busiest D.hardest【解答】根据下文中"It always makes us relaxed"可知上句表达的意思是"最快乐的",所以直接选B20.(1分)﹣John is so excited.Did he win the competition?﹣Yes.He was lucky and he had one minute to complete the special task,no more and no less()A.especially B.probably C.exactly D.hardly【解答】especially"特别的";probably"可能的";exactly"恰好";hardly"几乎不".根据题干no more and no less可知,恰巧只有一分钟.故选:C21.(1分)﹣Where was your dad at this time last night?﹣He was talking with my uncle I was looking for some information on the Internet.()A.after B.until C.since D.while【解答】after"在…之后";until"直到";since"自从";while"当…时候",常用于过去进行时态中.根据句意及I was looking for some information on the Internet可知,此处用while引导时间状语从句.故选:D22.(1分)﹣The group of boys and girls to study in college this morning,full of nice dreams.﹣I believe their dreams can come true one day()A.set off B.fell off C.put off D.kept off【解答】A.set off意思为"开始";B.fell off意思为"从…掉下";C.put off意思为"推迟";D.kept off意思为"离开,避开"由题意可知,选A23.(1分)﹣So kind of you to give me a ride to the station.﹣___________()A.Never mind B.My pleasureC.It doesn't matter D.Glad you like it【解答】A.Never mind意思为"没关系,用于安慰";B.My pleasure意思为"我的荣幸";C.It doesn't matter意思为"没关系,用于回应别人的道歉";D.Glad you like it意思为"很高兴你喜欢";由题意可知,选B三、完形填空.(共10分,每小题10分)阅读下面短文,从短文后所给各题的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项.24.(10分)Once when Kevin was selling hats under a big tree,the monkeys on thetree picked some hats and put them on.So Kevin took off his own hat and threw(31)A on the ground.The stupid monkeys threw their hats,too!Kevin soon(32)C all the hats and left happily.Fifty years later,young Tony,(33)C of Kevin,also sold hats for a living.(34)B a long walk,Tony was tired,so he put his bag of hats beside him and laid down under a big tree.He was soon fast(35)D.When he woke up,Tony found that there weren't any hats in his bag!Tony started looking for his hats.To his(36)D,he found some monkeys on the tree wearing his hats.Tony didn't know what to do.Then he remembered the story his grandfather(37)C used to tell him."Yes!I can fool these monkeys!"said Tony."I'll(38)B them imitate (模仿)me and very soon I will get all my hats back!"Tony then waved at the monkeys,the monkeys waved at him.Tony started dancing,the monkeys were also dancing.Tony thr ew his hat on the ground…Just then,one of the monkeys jumped down(39)A the tree,picked up the hat Tony threw on the ground and (40)C up to Tony.He said,"Do you think onlyyou had a grandfather?"31.A.it B.its C.him D.his32.A.pointed B.put C.collected D.matched33.A.father B.son C.grandson D.friend34.A.When B.After C.Before D.As35.A.alive B.afraid C.awake D.asleep36.A.pleasure B.interest C.value D.surprise37.A.recently B.luckily C.proudly D.angrily38.A.tell B.make C.promise D.realize39.A.from B.beside C.toward D.through40.A.put B.brought C.walked D.took.【解答】31.A考查代词及语境的理解.A.it 它;B.Its它的;C.Him他,宾格形式;D.His他的.句意:于是凯文把自己的帽子脱下来,把它扔在地上.因为凯文在树底下卖帽子,树上的猴子拿了他的帽子戴上了,所以扔掉自己的,这样猴子也会扔掉它们的.句中它指帽子,用代词的宾格形式,故选A.32.C考查动词及语境的理解.A.pointed指出;B.put 放;C.collected收集;D.matched匹配.句意:凯文很快就把所有的帽子都收集回来了,高兴地走了.他把猴子扔到地上的帽子捡起来了.故选C.33.C考查名词及语境的理解.A.father父亲;B.son儿子;C.grandson孙子;D.friend 朋友.根据句意:五十年后,凯文的孙子,年轻的Tony,也靠卖帽子为生.这里应该指的是凯文的孙子.故选C.34.B考查连词及语境的理解.A.When当…时候;B.After在…之后;C.Before 在…之前;D.As当…时候.根据上文走了很长一段时间之后,托尼累了,所以他把自己的帽子放在他旁边,躺在一棵大树下,故选B.35.D考查形容词及语境的理解.A.alive活着的;B.afraid害怕的;C.awake 醒着的;D.asleep睡着的.上下文串联.他很快就快睡着了.因为他累了,所以躺在树下睡着了.故选D.36.D考查名词及语境的理解.A.pleasure快乐;B.interest有趣;C.value 价值;D.surprise吃惊.句意:使他吃惊的是,他发现树上有几只猴子戴着他的帽子.使某人吃惊的是to one's surprise;结合句意,故选D.37.C考查副词及语境的理解.A.recently最近地;B.luckily幸运地;C.proudly 骄傲地;D.angrily生气地.上下文串联.然后他想起了他的祖父过去讲给他的那个令他骄傲的故事.结合句意应该是副词修饰动词,故选C.38.B考查动词及语境的理解.A.tell告诉;B.make制作;C.promise答应;D.realize意识到.结合句意我会使它们模仿我,我很快就要把我所有的帽子找回来!根据动词短语make sb do表示使某人做某事;故选B.39.A考查介词及语境的理解.A.From从…;B.Beside在…旁边;C.Toward 朝;D.Through通过.句意:就在那时,一只猴子从树上跳了下来,捡起了托尼扔在地上的帽子.从…地方要用介词from;故选A.40.A.put 放;B.brought 带来;C.walked走;D.took带去.根据上下文猴子从树上跳下来捡起扔在地上的帽子,走向托尼对他说:"你以为就只有你有爷爷吗".故选C.四、阅读理解.(共30分,每小题6分)阅读下列短文,从每篇短文后所给各题的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项.25.(6分)A new term might be the best time to make new friends,but it can be hard to begin the first conversation.Below are four useful ways.Take a look.Search for common interests.Talking about shared interests,such as sports and popular talent shows,is the easiest way to make a successful talk with someone.Welcome the silence.In fact,sometimes silence is needed in order to continue a conversation.Remember that if you say something,the other person may need time to understand it.Keep it positive(积极的).To make great small talk,you should keep things fun.You should be cheerful and able to laugh over things that aren't very interesting.These will make the other person want to keep talking to you.Take it as a learning experience.Every time you meet someone from other places,it's a good chance to learn something new.You can learn more about their cultures and nations.These make you a more interesting person to talk to as well.41.How many ways are mentioned to start a conversation in the reading?C A.Only one.B.Three.C.Four.D.Five.42.You can start a meaningful conversation by according to the reading.C A.travelling to other countriesB.studying very hard in the classC.talking about the same interestsD finding someone from other places43.If someone is talking about something you don't like,you should according to the reading.BA.stop the conversation at onceB.be cheerful and relaxedC.keep silent all the timeD.talk about something new.【解答】41.C 根据句子Below are four useful ways可知,有四种方式,故选C.42.C 根据句子Talking about shared interests可知,谈论共同的兴趣是交谈的有意义的方式,故选C.43.B 根据You should be cheerful and able to laugh over things that aren't very interesting.可知,即使不喜欢的事情你也要保持兴奋和放松,答案为B.26.(8分)If you need glasses to read this,you are among most of Chinese students.About four﹣fifths of high school students in China have poor eyesight(视力).And now more and more children in primary school need glasses,too.Two main reasons can cause poor eyesight:too much time spent indoors studying and too little time spent outdoors playing.Reading and writing for hours and hours,sometimes in poorly lighted rooms,causes eyesight to weaken.But students have to do this because there is so much pressure on them to succeed in school.They have less time to enjoy the sun.The sun,it turns out,is important in developing good eyesight.According to a study by AustralianNationalUniversity,Australian children and Chinese children have the same level of eyesight before they start school,but once they enter primary school,Chinese children only spend about an hour a day outside,while Australian children spend three to four hours each day in the sunshine.The result is that while about forty percent of Chinese primary school students need glasses,only three percent of Australian children do.And poor eyesight at a young age can have serious long term influence.As you get older,your eyesight can worsen.With all that in mind,don't you think it's time to give your eyes a break?44.How many high school students have poor eyesight in Chinaaccording to the reading?DA.A half of them.B.Three percent of them.C.Forty percent of them.D.Four﹣fifths of them.45.Which can cause poor eyesight according to the reading?C。

2015年湖北卷中考满分作文精选三篇

2015年湖北卷中考满分作文精选三篇

2015年湖北卷中考满分作文精选三篇2015年湖北卷中考满分作文精选三篇角色的扮演需要摆脱依赖,从出生、幼儿、成长为儿童、少年、青年,父母的关怀如同一簇簇蒲公英开遍了我的成长之路,但却也如同温室困住了我的独立性.下面小编整理的我的“不争”满分,欢迎大家参考!【优秀范文】我的“不争”耳边朦胧响起,社会课上班主任讲的话,“人们的社会角色是在不断变化着的,我们还可能扮演许多其他的社会角色,我们不知一个角色……”的确,我不止一个角色.在学校里,我是一位学生,在课堂上专心听着老师的教诲,认真完成作业,与伙伴同坐一间教室时,我们是同学、是朋友,一同学习,一同游戏;在家里时,我是孩子,是爸爸妈妈的掌上明珠,是他们的小帮手;在商店时,我是消费者,在商店里精心挑选商品,付出金钱,收获我所心仪的东西.在奥运会时,我就是一个普普通通的中国人,为奥运健儿们加油助威,当他们夺冠的时候,我会用心从喉咙里发出呐喊,为他们欢庆,为他们骄傲……是的,我的的确确有这么多的角色,它们无处不在随时随地地陪伴着我们.我不止一个角色,那么,如何适应这多重的身份,如何使我称职地扮演好这“不止一个”的角色,使这些角色升级为主角呢?角色的扮演需要理想,这就好比在夜晚仰望星空,总会有一颗北极星指明前方,点亮前进的路,童谣,我们心中的星空也应该是如此:繁星点点,星空璀璨,其中一颗星星光彩夺目,照亮前方,使人忍不住想把它摘下来,它驱使着我们获得美好的东西而前进;反之,若是一个人心目中的星空是死寂一片,星光暗淡,空洞漆黑的天际中没有一颗指明星,那他必然扮演不好他的各种角色.角色的的扮演,只有拥有远大的理想,树立志向并为之努力,才能扮演好自己的角色.角色的扮演需要学习.学校教室里,朗朗书声不绝于耳,老师们的谆谆教诲,同学们认真学习,在这里头,有着演好角色的关键,任何角色的扮演都有从幼稚到成熟的`过程,每一个角色的成功都离不开之前的努力、学习、锻炼和磨砺,不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹?学习与锻炼,是一个角色成熟合格的必经之路.角色的扮演需要摆脱依赖,从出生、幼儿、成长为儿童、少年、青年,父母的关怀如同一簇簇蒲公英开遍了我的成长之路,但却也如同温室困住了我的独立性.而我正如同温室里的花朵,在父母的呵护下茁壮成长,但却无法摆脱对温室的依赖,离开温室之后的生存能力有待考验.我不可能永远呆在温室里,总有一天我会暴露在烈日下,如果那时我没有练就出色扮演角色的能力,那将面对残酷环境的折磨.所以,我应该独立起来,在如同熔炉般的环境中练就生存能力,适应独立的生活,使我的角色更加完美.的确,我不只一个角色,可我还没有“不止一个”完美的角色,但在我各方面的努力下,总有一天,我能高声呐喊,我不止一个角色,而且“不止一个”角色是精彩的!我的“不争”第一次见到你,我十一岁。

作文

作文

【真题】写作(50分)请以“那天,雨一直下”为题,写一篇不少于600字的记叙文。

写作要求:①将题目写在作文格的第一行;②文章贴近生活,言之有物,禁止抄袭或套作;③认真书写,力求工整、美观;④文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名。

【解读】荆州市2015年中考作文题回归到了传统的命题作文方式,该命题的巧妙之处,在于寓“开放”于“限制”,在诗意的命题中,让考生在命题作文的“限制”下,“开放”构思,自由作文。

首先,该作文题是“限制”性的命题作文。

从整体来看,有以下一些“限制”:一是限定了字数(不少于600字)和文体(记叙文),二是“写作要求”上贯彻了荆州市中考作文一贯的“贴近生活,言之有物”的精神。

从题目本身来看,限定了事情发生的时间(那天)和环境(雨一直下)。

由于有了“那天”的时间限制及“记叙文”的文体限制,则“雨一直下”只能成为叙事文章的环境限制,即所写事情,只能是发生在“那天”的一天时间之中,而且是“雨一直下”的自然环境之中。

其次,该作文题也是“开放”性较强的题目。

虽然是命题作文,却贯彻了荆州市一直提倡的“不设置审题障碍”的作文命题精神,任何考生均有话可写,且不会偏离主题。

有叙事数量上的“开放”:可以是一件事,也可以是多件事。

有叙事空间上的“开放”:所叙事情可以发生在同学们熟悉的学校、家庭之中,也可以发生于相对陌生的社会之中。

有叙述方式上的开放:可以是顺叙或倒叙,更可运用插叙。

有叙事结构上的“开放”:可以是“三段式”“镜头式”等常见结构,也可以是日记体、书信体等特殊结构。

有叙事情感上的“开放”:可表现亲情、友情,也可表现师生情、同学情,甚至是陌生人的善良之情。

有叙事主题上的“开放”:可以是人间情感的赞美,可以是成长路上的迷茫,甚至可以是不良现象的批判。

再者,该作文题富于诗意,适合写出文质兼美的文章。

环境烘托作为一种基本的写作手法,是学生必须掌握的写作手法之一。

“雨”作为叙事文章的环境烘托,在初中课文中也多次出现。

荆州市2015年初中毕业生毕业考试

荆州市2015年初中毕业生毕业考试

荆州市2015年初中毕业生毕业考试第Ⅰ卷选择题(共75分)听力部分I. 短对话理解。

(共5分,每小题1分)听短对话,根据你听到的内容从每小题的三个选项中选出正确答案,每段对话听两遍。

1.How old is Rose?A.FiveB. sixC. eleven2. what did the woman do before?A. a driverB. a farmerC. a doctor3. why can’t Linda go to the birthday party?Because she has to ___A.Study for testB. help her momC. do her homework4. where is the woman’s father?A. in the bedroomB. in hospitalC. in the office5. who is the main role in the film?A. a French writerB. an American directorC. an Australian manII. 长对话理解。

(共10分,每小题1分)听下面A、B、C三段对话,并从每小题的三个选项中选一个正确答案,每段对话听两遍。

A6. where does the conversation probably take place?A. at schoolB. in a shopC. by the sea7. what will Linda have to do this evening?\A. buy a new coatB. do her homeworkC. stay up late8. when can Linda go shopping with Mary?A. this morningB. tonightC. tomorrow afternoonB9. why did Lily look sad?A. she fought with AnnaB. she failed the examC. she was ill10. how long was Lily away from school?A. for a weekB. for a monthC. for three days11. how will they help Lily?A. by testing herB. by looking after herC. by studying together with herC12. what’s wrong with the boy?A. he has a coldB. he has a matchC. he feels hot13. who has taken the boy’s temperature?A. the doctorB. the boyC. the boy’s mother14. which of the following shouldn’t the boy do?A. take some medicineB. stay in bedC. do more exercise15. what is the doctor’s advice?A. the boy can go to the basketball matchB. the boy’s health is more importantC. the boy should join the school teamIII. 短文理解。

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文命题掠影——寓开放于限.制中

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文命题掠影——寓开放于限.制中

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2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题解析

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题解析

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题解析
湖北省荆州市2015年中考作文题目解析;本年度湖北省荆州市中考考试中设置了以“能否从日常中汲取快乐”为主题的作文题目。

考试作文话题把人们关注的焦点放在了日常中应如何寻找快乐的问
题上,鼓励学生们从内心深处挖掘出带给自己的欢乐。

日常生活中,许多人苦苦寻找快乐,但却发现往往在最简单的事物中滋养出自己的快乐。

生活中可以从各个方面汲取快乐,从工作中获得成就感,从每日的琐事中体会家庭的温馨;还可以通过拍照和旅行,感受大自然的惊喜,去发现丰富多采的新鲜事物,让自己更充实、更有活力。

另外,从自身养成一定的行为习惯,尝试发展一些个人的优势,亦有助于促使快乐之源的迸发。

在生活中,把自己的精力充分投入学习、工作,让自己更充实,在学习、工作中取得成就,而获得成功感后发出的“欢欣”就是快乐。

此外,可以结交一些朋友,经常聚会聊天,不断拓展阅历、经历,心情也会变得更加快乐。

最重要的是,在生活中要学会放松心情,及时释放所有压力,克服担忧与恐惧,这样就可以把心情放松,把人们视觉中的世界从怀疑、负面转变为美好的、正确的,及时乐在其中。

总之,追求快乐的道路不在于财富的积累,而在于转移焦点,从外在的物质对象转向内在的文化心灵;从社会现实中寻找养分,快乐的生活方式永远是贴近自然、做有意义的事情,从而获得精神上的满足感。

只有懂得从日常中汲取快乐的人,才能获得最美好的快乐。

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题解析

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题解析

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题解析
2015年6月,湖北省荆州市中考作文考题要求考生根据“走自
己的路,让别人说去吧”这句话,结合自身经历,谈谈自己的看法。

考生因受限于文题,在作文方面表现出一定的劣势,下面,我们就荆州市2015年中考作文题来进行解析。

首先,文题要求考生根据某句话结合自身经历来谈谈自己的看法,这是一种引导性的考题。

考生在准备作文的第一步便是根据这句话弄清其深层含义,此句话的本意是让人勇敢地坚持自己的道路,不要改变自我,以便能实现自己的愿望。

其次,考生应该根据自身的阅历分析展开演绎,使作文更加有深度、有新意,这样作文才会得到较好的分数。

其实,在解析湖北省荆州市2015年中考作文题时,我们可以依
据以下3点:
一是认真分析文题;二是根据文题结合自身经历;三是加强前期的准备。

首先,要认真分析文题的内涵和深层含义,仔细品读文题,深刻理解文题,我们才能得到更深刻的认识。

接着,我们应该根据文题结合自身经历,分析自身经历中遇到的困难、成功,分析自我感受和体会,并加以集中、抽象,将真实的经历发挥得淋漓尽致,让作文更加具有亲切感和真实感。

最后,考生在前期准备方面要花费更多的时间、精力。

考生应动笔前,先收集一些可以用于作文的材料,如故事、经历、诗句、古文等,能够丰富自己的素材,激发更多的灵感,这样,
当考生进行写作时,就能够更加自信,从而获得更好的分数。

综上所述,湖北省荆州市2015年中考作文考题是一个引导性的考题。

考生在准备作文时要认真解读文题,根据文题结合自身经历进行解析,并在前期准备中不断收集有关材料,提前准备,这样才能使自己的作文表现更加出色,达到满分。

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题解析

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题解析

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题解析2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题主题为“树立正确价值观,追求真知灼见”。

本次中考作文题旨在指导考生树立成熟的价值观,追求真知灼见来实现自身的全面发展,以达到有效发展的目的。

首先,考生应当树立正确的价值观。

正确的价值观不仅是对未来发展的指导,而且是实现自身有效发展的基础。

比如,坚持以诚恳的态度学习,表达以礼貌的语言与他人相处,尊重他人的权利,把家庭作为自己的根本,总之,要遵循正义道德原则,认真尊重合法权利,不受任何利益的影响来做出正确的选择,并且积极担当责任。

其次,考生应当勇于追求真知灼见。

面对日益复杂的社会,面对不断变化的环境,考生需要学会深度思考,去思索与反思,获得能够正确处理问题的知识,从而使自己经验不断丰富,从而获取到可用的灵活思维和解决问题的能力。

另外,考生还应该勤于阅读,多方了解发展最新的消息,以便能够紧跟时代的步伐,使自己的知识丰富多彩。

最后,考生应该多多参加各种有益的活动,增强自身的社会知识,有助于培养健康友爱的人格特质,以及积极的行为习惯,正确认识自己及世界,增强自己的勇气、智慧、感慨能力,使自己能在社会生活中脱颖而出。

总而言之,2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题旨在指导考生树立成熟的价值观,追求真知灼见来实现自身的全面发展,以达到有效发展的目的。

树立正确的价值观是实现有效发展的基础,而追求真知灼见则是实现高效发展的保证。

考生要时刻牢记,在中考作文中,要以正确的价值观与真智慧来实现自身的有效发展,以求取满意的成绩。

2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文题解析,就此而言,考生应该以学习的态度和勤奋的精神树立正确的价值观,勇于获取真知灼见。

学习要追求实用性,不断提高自身的素养,获取新的知识,掌握最新的技术和资讯。

要多参与社会实践活动,多思考多体验,提升自身的见识水平,加深对正常发展的认识,以达到取得更优良的中考成绩。

2015中考语文真题汇编记叙文——湖北荆门卷

2015中考语文真题汇编记叙文——湖北荆门卷

2015中考语文真题汇编记叙文——湖北荆门卷痴心石三毛①许多年前,当我还是一个十三岁的少年时,看见街上有人因为要盖房子而挖树,很心疼那棵树的死亡,就站在路边呆呆的看。

树太大了,不好整棵的运走,于是工地的人拿出了锯子,把树分解。

就在那个时候,我鼓足勇气,很不好意思的问,可不可以把那个剩下的树根送给我。

那个人笑着看了我一眼,说:只要你拿得动,就拿去好了。

我说我拿不动,可是拖得动。

②父母看见当时发育不良的我拖回来那么一个大树根,不但没有嘲笑和责备,反而帮忙清洗、晒干,然后将它搬到我的睡房中去。

③以后的很多年,我捡过许多奇奇怪怪的东西回家,父母并不嫌烦,反而特别看重那批不值钱但是对我有意义的东西。

我和父母,其实很少一同欣赏同样的事情。

他们有他们的天地,我,埋首在中国书籍里。

④我的父母并不明白也不欣赏我的那些怪癖,可是他们包涵。

我也并不想父母能够了解我对于美这种主观事物的看法,只要他们不干涉,我就心安。

⑤有一次,我答应了跟父母和小弟全家去海边。

结果前一天晚上又去看书,看到天亮才睡去。

全家人在次日早晨等着我起床一直等到十一点,母亲不得已叫醒我,又怕我不跟去会失望,又怕叫醒了我要丧失睡眠,总之,她很为难。

半醒了,我只挥一下手,说:不去。

醒来发现父亲留了条子,叮咛我一个人也得吃饭。

⑥中午起床,奔回不远处自己的小房子去打扫落花残叶,弄到下午五点多钟才再回父母家中去。

妈妈迎了上来,责我怎么不吃中饭,我问爸爸在哪里,妈妈说:嗳,在阳台水池里替你洗东西呢。

我拉开纱门跑出去喊爸爸,他应了一声,也不回头,用一个刷子在刷什么,刷得好用力的。

过了一会儿,爸爸又在厨房里找毛巾,说要擦干什么的,他要我去客厅等着。

⑦一会儿,爸爸出来了,妈妈出来了,两老手中各捧着一块石头。

⑧爸爸说:你看,我给你捡的这一块,上面不但有纹路,石头顶上还有一抹淡红,你觉得怎么样?妈妈说:我挑挑拣拣,才得了一个石球,你看它有多圆!我注视着这两块石头,眼前立即看见年迈的父母弯着腰,佝着背,在海边的大风里辛苦翻石头的画面。

2015年湖北荆州中考作文赏析:那天,雨一直下

2015年湖北荆州中考作文赏析:那天,雨一直下

三一文库()〔2015年湖北荆州中考作文赏析:那天,雨一直下〕▲【真题】写作(50分)请以“那天,雨一直下”为题,写一篇不少于600字的记叙文。

写作要求:①将题目写在作文格的第一行;②文章贴近生活,言之有物,禁止抄袭或套作;③认真书写,力求工整、美观;④文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名。

▲【范文】▲那天,雨一直下细雨甘霖般打湿了飞檐上的辟邪,水珠沿着黛瓦间沟汇集,没过丛丛瓦上草。

小镇里的柏油路经过雨的洗礼,也变得光润了,倒映出街边各色房屋的轮廓。

同学们涌出校园,沉寂的小街,顿时热闹起来,仿佛天然的素琴上跳动着音符。

无心赏景,只想赶快搭上客车。

回家这段路,我不想和父亲同行。

每个周末放学上学,父亲都会骑着他的“宝马”接送我。

上个星期,我想问他买个手机,他板着脸狠狠地凶了我一顿,我没有要他送,怄着气冲出家门。

今天雨就没有断过,他不会来吧。

“还不快上来!”冷冰冰的声音,是他,扶着一辆伴随他多年的摩托车。

车上装着的遮阳伞显然挡不住迎面扑来的雨水,他使劲地眨巴着眼睛,雨水顺着皱纹流到嘴边,样子竟然有几分滑稽。

我想笑,忍着低了头,坐上生了锈的后座。

一路颠簸,我们没有一句话,耳旁只剩下“啪啪”的雨声。

听雨声落下,看雨珠跳起,恍惚间,又回到童年。

小时候,每当下雨,我会冲向雨中的伞下,爬上父亲已弯好的背上。

一路上,父亲的大手抓住我不断晃动的腿,我的身体紧贴在父亲宽厚的背上,胳膊搂住父亲的脖子,手里擎着一把雨伞。

有时候,我的手酸了,父亲便会用温热的脖子夹住冰凉的伞柄,替我一会儿。

父亲的身体随着脚步的节奏一晃一晃的,就像儿时躺过的摇篮。

我的心也随着那节奏晃动,晃动着甜蜜,晃动着温馨。

就这样,在父亲的背上,我度过了记忆中的那些雨天。

就这样,我的路,在父亲脚下延伸;我的天空,在父亲的伞下明媚。

后来,家里添置了这辆“宝马”,父亲骑着它接送我,骑着它四处打工赚钱,风里来雨里去。

如今,父亲的背已被岁月压得有些弯了,它,也浑身锈迹斑斑。

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2015年湖北省荆州市中考作文试题解析及佳作选评
作者:罗先菊刘正艳
来源:《作文·初中版》2015年第07期
中考真题
请以“那天,雨一直下”为题,写一篇不少于600字的记叙文。

要求:①文章贴近生活,言之有物,禁止抄袭或套作;②认真书写,力求工整、美观;③文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名。

试题解析
这是一道全命题作文,按要求必须写成记叙文。

写作中,一定要有文体意识,要有对事件的具体叙述,要紧扣记叙文写作的要素,交代清楚事件的来龙去脉。

一、咀嚼文题,把握要素——审题求准
这道命题看似简单直白,但如若匆忙下笔是很难成就佳作的。

静心思索,题目是有一定限制性的,所以仍需字斟句酌,谨慎行文。

“那天”交代了时间,它是特定的某一天,作文中就不能一连写到好几个时日。

“那天”有别于“那一刻”“一瞬间”,一定要拿捏好时间的跨度。

“雨一直下”为故事设定了特殊的场景,这是行文中应该注意的细节。

只有准确理解题意,才不会出现失误。

二、遴选材料,确立中心——选材求新
选取典型的材料是考场作文制胜的关键。

如果走大众化路线,作文就会流于平庸,难以出奇制胜。

尽量挖掘出新鲜的材料,达到引人注目的效果,不要老生常谈,一写到下雨就是爸爸送伞,妈妈冒雨背“我”去医院看病,这样的陈词滥调是乏味的。

将写作的触角延伸到生活的各个层面,写家庭,写童年,写动物,写社会见闻……从身边找寻材料,从媒体获得材料,从阅读中积累材料,从街头巷尾挖掘材料……展现温馨亲情、甜蜜友情、童年之乐、凡人善举,传递正能量。

也可反弹琵琶,写不和谐的一幕,引发深层思考。

三、锁定细节,大肆泼墨——叙述求精
要让习作具有感染力,就少不了对细节的雕琢。

抓住那些能够凸显人物形象的语言、动作、神态等,进行细致入微的描写,人物才会鲜活生动,富有立体感。

当然,细节必须真实,且要用到关键处,力求精练准确地表达。

四、景物造境,妙笔传情——情感求真
雨景的描写是文中必不可少的一笔,“雨一直下”是设置的特定环境,它能渲染气氛,烘托心情,推动情节的发展,深化中心。

和风细雨、疾风骤雨、凄风苦雨……不同的情境演绎出不同的故事,传达出不一样的情感。

雨,是最能牵起人的情思的,借雨抒情,融情于雨,让雨景诉说衷肠,让真情自然流淌,悄然无声地打动阅卷人。

佳作展示
那天,雨一直下
湖北荆州一考生
风雨中,朵朵伞花连缀成一座坚实的桥,犹如一道缤纷的虹,虹下流动着一张张如花的笑脸……
——题记
那天早自习,天气阴沉沉的,远远地传来阵阵闷雷声。

没多久,一声巨雷炸响,如山崩海啸一般,雨接踵而至了。

教室里发出阵阵惊呼,大家吓得紧缩脖子,捂住双耳。

窗外,肆虐的风裹着雨四处乱窜,狠命地往玻璃窗上撞。

道道闪电似金蛇狂舞,阵阵霹雳使人胆战心惊。

雨势渐猛,天地间迷蒙一片。

风也越刮越大,穿过门窗挤进教室里,我不禁瑟缩起来。

早餐的时间到了,“噼里啪啦,噼里啪啦……”急促的雨点敲击在我们心上,大家的心都被淋湿了。

好些人下了楼挤在楼道口止步不前,还有些人干脆无奈地呆坐在教室里。

食堂虽然紧邻着教学楼,但少说也有二十来米没有遮拦,若这样冲过去,铁定变成落汤鸡。

有几个胆大的男生横下心来,咬紧牙关,双手护头,迅速冲进雨帘,深一脚浅一脚,溅起了一路水花,洒下一路嗷嗷的惨叫声……楼道里传来一阵笑声,没有人再傻乎乎地往雨里冲了。

“嗨,慢着!”突然,一个洪亮的声音响起。

大家循声望去,赫然发现楼道里多了好几个老师,他们每人手拿一把伞,正缓缓地下着楼梯,后面还陆陆续续有老师跟来。

我们直勾勾地盯着他们手中的伞,迅速让开了出口。

奇怪的是,老师们拥在走廊外,并不急着走。

接下来的一幕让我们更意外了!老师们齐刷刷地撑开伞,一个接着一个往餐厅方向延伸,一朵伞花连缀着一朵伞花,连接了教学楼的楼梯口和餐厅门口。

各式各样的雨伞构成了一条五彩长廊,准确地说,是一道缤纷的彩虹。

红、黄、绿、蓝、紫……五颜六色,真好看!有个老师不知从哪儿弄来了几个麻袋,风雨中,他弓着身子,小心翼翼地将麻袋展开铺在了餐厅外的三级台阶上。

雨水淌了他一脸,他的袖管也湿了半截,可他却一点儿也不顾这些。

伞下,老师们微笑着向我们招手示意。

大家恍然大悟,惊喜地飞奔出楼,一个接着一个穿过长廊。

我也钻进了这条长廊。

大家脸上漾起一阵红晕,有些同学还不忘对老师们敬礼致谢。

此刻,狂风卷着暴雨抽打在伞面上,啪啪作响,耳边传来呼呼的风声。

我看到老师们双手死死地抓住伞柄,尽力地向我们倾斜着,他们的衣服被风吹得鼓鼓的。

食堂前的那片洼地早已成了一片水坑,有几个老师的鞋子浸在水里,可他们毫不在意,脸上满是笑意。

不少老师的头发、后背、裤腿都湿了,有的女老师在瑟瑟发抖。

我的内心涌出了阵阵暖意,久久难消。

就这样,这条长廊,这座彩虹桥,傲然地屹立于风雨中,直到同学们吃完早餐,再次穿过彩虹进了教室,伞花才消散。

午餐时间,雨势减弱,淅淅沥沥的小雨仍然不肯停歇。

彩虹桥消失了,防滑的麻袋仍在,心中的温暖又一次升腾起来。

那天,雨一直在下,一阵接一阵,时缓时急,犹如我起伏不定的心潮。

无法忘记,那道美丽的虹,那群可爱的人!是你们,在无遮拦的天空下,为莘莘学子撑起了一方爱的晴空!
简评
本文有几个突出优点。

1. 写景细腻,为文蓄势。

习作以天气的突变开篇,写风,写雨,写雷,写闪电,写同学们的惊吓之状,渲染了天气的恶劣,营造出紧张迫人的气氛,为下文故事的层层展开作铺垫。

夸张、比喻、拟人等修辞手法联袂使用,使得描写生动细腻,使人如临其境。

环境描写为人物的活动提供了舞台,增加了感人的力度。

2. 选材典型,不落俗套。

新鲜的素材才具备旺盛的生命力,作者避开了老生常谈的陈旧题材,放开视线,捕捉到使人耳目一新的事件,选取了老师结队为学生撑伞,护送学生进食堂就餐这一新鲜事,扣住感人细节,凸显人物形象。

风雨中,老师们的表现可敬可叹。

3. 中心突出,情感真挚。

习作在结尾处直抒胸臆,表达了对老师们的感激之情。

老师关爱学生,学生感恩老师,师生之间亲密融洽,这样的师生关系正是大家所希望看到的。

文中流淌的浓浓真情令人感怀,老师是学生的引路人,在学习上,在生活中,他们言传身教,践行了教师这一职业的崇高。

德高为师,身正为范,他们以行动感召了无数学生,这是难能可贵的。

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