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超实用高考英语专题复习：专题02 应用文写作(2)-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达

研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦高考距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。

以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。

做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。

总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。

在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。

英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。

越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。

另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。

Part1 应用文写作（二）1．（2021·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。

你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。

请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因;2.提出建议并给出理由。

注意：1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just beentold that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who wassuddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too muchtrouble.How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meetat the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should beavailable anytime next weekend.In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can goto see the flowers together.I am looking forward to your early reply.Y ours,L i Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。

写作教程2课后答案（上海外国语教育出版社）

写作教程2课后答案（上海外国语教育出版社）写作教程 2 课后题答案提示：页码有部分错误，但答案内容正确。

P2 . PART1Advantages : It is very convenient . You can make a call whenever and wherever you want to.It is especially helpful in an emergency .It saves time .You don't have to search for or await the turn for the public phone.You can always be reached when you are neededby others.In an information age ,it can help you to get the information you want in the quickest way.It may help you to grasp any chance to succeed. You canplay games and surf the net through thephone........Disadvantages : It is quite expensiveIts radiation is harmful to healthAnswering calls in public places such as on a bus is embarrassingMaking or answering calls while driving isdangerousYou can always be reached by your parents oryour bossIt may ring at the moment when you least wantit toYou may receive calls fromstrangers or advertising companies and have to pay forthem ..........P3. PART2have become increasingly violentis more and more important for young people is thekindest neighbour I have ever known has aprofound effect on our healthP4. 2.too specificBritish English is different from American English inspelling3.This is not a sentence, but a fragment Differentcountries have different customs4.too general,too emotionalThe local food is tasteless and greasyP7. Approach 1: For one thing, they should balance science and non-science courses so that they do not have too many time-consuming labs.Approach 2:They should also try to get a mixture between subjects they find fairly easy and those that are difficult for them.Example 1: For instance,the student who dose well in history but expects to have a terrible time with calculus might plan on taking both in the same semester to balance the work load.Example 2: The student who dose not plan carefully and takes five tough courses the first term may wind up on scholastic probation.P11. 4 . Paragraph 1:All invention are either basic inventions or improvement on earlier inventions.Paragraph 2:There was a serious accident in thechemistry lab yesterday.Paragraph 3: Nutritional deficiency is a major problemof the elderly.5. Paragraph 1 : T opic sentence: people .....to each other. 和convenience. 第一句And无关句：Manynowadays,....moreParagraph 2: T S : 第一句无关句：I didn't /doc/b810843207.html,st night 和 I heard that .... own children.排序：574169832（1）First of all . (2) secondly (3)By and by (4) In addition(5)In shortP18 Paragraph B : Jack should not have taken the gymnastics course.he fell off the uneven bars and got a concussion.he sprained his ankle,after a bad landing off the balance beam.he broken the support beam in the basement of his parent's home,showing them his skills.he broke his thumb when he caught it on the bar the pommel horse.he fails the final exam in his gymnastics course.he failed to graduate due to the lack of twohours of physical education creditP19 T S: Some historians mark the course of the American Revolutionary War in three major periods.1.During the first phase of the conflict ,New English was the battleground,1)The Minutemen and the Redcoats fired the opening shots of the war at Lexington at dawn of April 19,17752) Shortly afterwards ,the New England colonists laid siege toBoston .the location of the British headquarters.2.In the second phase of the war ,which began after the signing of the Declaration ,both the British and the American made important military gains.1)The British soldiers captured New York in the fall of 1776,and a year later they occupied Philadelphia.2)Meanwhile the Americans were able to seize New Jersey3.The fighting moved to the west and south during the last phase.1)In 1778 and 1779 several battles occurred in Kentucky and Tennessee.2)Then two years later ,the final battle of the war wasfought at Yorktown ,Virginia.P22 . 4: 排序： 4 10 5 12 3 7 15 9 14 2 11 8 13 6 1T S ： My family spent two fun-filled days at Disney World last year.P23. 5.(1)Then (2) morning (3)afternoon (4)Then (5)After that (6)when (7)already (8)afterP33. 3. 排序：3614752 Relationship : organization of the paragraph represents Primarily, movementtheingeographical space.P34 5. (1)into (2) crosses (3) In the center of (4) Outside (5)inside (6) On the front (7)over (8)down (9)lined with (10) At the rearP46 4. (1)with (2)while (3)slowly (4)Gradually (5)with (6)By this time (7)Suddenly (8)final (9) ending (10) applause5.Prepare and lay out food;make the special lanterns Keepdancing and singing overnightThrow the food and lanterns into a river or seaWatch the lanterns drifting wayP52 . T S : Working as a cook at the Venture Inn is the best job i have ever had.Reasons: 1. I have a steady fort-hour workweek ,along with a chance for overtime if i want it.2.I can eat whatever i like ,and i get a chance to take steak and sometimes lobster home to my wife.3.I don't have any big hassle with my boss;if i have to report late or skip a day now and then,all she asks is that i call her in advance4. They pay is very good ,averaging close to $200 the weeks that i work overtime5. The job is seasonal.P57. 3. T S : Working in an apple plant was the worst job i ever had.Examples :1: First of all,the work was physically hardSpecific details:1)For ten hours a night ,i took cartons that rolled down a metal track and stacked them onto wooden skids in a tractor trailer.2)Each carton contained twelve 32-ounce cans or bottles of apple juice,and they were heavy2:The second bad feature of the job was the paySpecific details:I was getting the minimum wage at thattime ,$1.25an hour,plus a minimum of a nickel extra for working the night shift.3:The worst feature of the apple plant job was the working conditions.1)During work we were limited to two10-minute breaks and an unpaid half-hour for lunch2)The steel floors of the trucks were like ice ;the quickly penetrating cold made my feet feel like stone.Concluding S : I felt humiliated by the poverty thatforced me to do such a bitter job.P58 4. 排序： 36182475Pattern : It follows Pattern 1 and uses many examples to illustrate the controlling idea.5.(1) For example (2)Furthermore (3)In still another instance(4)Even (5)his (6)these (7)contemporaryP59 7. 1) I've never seen a girl as lazy as Arena2)English teachers are applying different means to teach theEnglish language3)Americans have been decreasing their working hours sinceearly 1900s4)My father has been a generous man to his childrenP70 5. 排序：213546explain a Spanish word which hasno exact English equivalentcourageous behaviour earthy sexualityP76 Cause: 1. Over a million cars are abandoned on the streets3.Both city governments or governmental agencies have financial headachesEffect: lack of parking in citiesP78 Cause: the terrorist strikesEffects: 1. The Americans feel very anxious and panicky3.The public would wind up ignoring the one warning that really matters.P82 2) Cause : (1) got drunk at the party(2)had taken the drug of Accutane(3)adolescent depressionEffect : Bart Jr.'s suicide4.排序：241365 Pattern of cause and effect: single effect and multiple causesP88 sample 1 subject: the time most students spend studying for a testTopic sentence: The time most students spend studying for a test can be divided into three distinct phases.Division ；1）Phase One runs from the day the test is announced to approximately forty-eight hours before the exam is passed out.2)Phase two is entered two days prior to the test.3)Phase three ,the final phase ,is entered twelve hours before “ZeroHour . ”Sample 2 : subject: students in our schoolTopic sentence: students in our school fall into three groups according to their different intentions of taking part in sports. Division :1) students who go to the playground when they feel tired after study.2)real sports lovers who even put aside their studies for a game. P93 3. 1) T S: University students' entertainment can be divided into three categories according to where it takes placeDivision: a) entertainment at homeb)entertainment on campusc)entertainment elsewhere2)T S: The average young married woman in today's society has her life divided into three different roles.Division: a)the role of wifeb)the role of motherc)the role of self3)T S : Neighbours fall into three categories according to their different attitudes towards youDivision:a)those who are friendlyb)those who are indifferentc)those who hate youP94 5: 排序： 7 3 10 9 1 5 8 4 2 11 6 Subject: Christmas gifts T S : Christmas gifts can be divided into threegroups ,according to their after-Christmas fateDivision: a)those that are welcomed and put into usevery soonb)those that are halfway between being hated and lovedc)those that you banish as soon as possibleConcluding S : By New Year's Day, you have eitherused ,stored or disposed of each of your Christmas gifts6.(1)types (2)Though (3) Finally (4)however(5)Even though (6)Before (7)third (8)If(9)Then (10)theseP106 4.排序： 53624871Pattern of comparison and contrast: subject by subjectP107 5. (1)similar (2)although (3)difference (4)identical(5)again (6)while (7)But (8)difference (9)consistency(10)completelyP114 paragraph B: First statement :The invention of movable type made the mass media possible.Supporting details: Large numbers of people could haveaccessto learning.Second statement :Television brought a second revolution means of the media .Supporting details: Television made experiences available massive numbers of people. by toMillions could watch a president being sworn in or buried ,a spaceship launched .An Olympic race run ,comedies or talk shows at the same time . Third statement :You ,through the medium of television ,will be a member of a “global villages ”.Supporting details ； In the future , this revolution in both information and experiences will spread to the far reaches of the world and even to outer space. Ultimately, you will be able to see and talk instantly to anyone else in the world.General statement : Technology will take a leading role in the media future as it always has in the past.P118 3. The enormous importance of television news had started the process of change in the printed pressP119 5 .A : Programs on TV tend to have a high level of maturity(1) fostering maturity at early age or hindering maturity(2)misleading children to imitating scenes on TVB: TV serials or dramas may oversimplifycomplex social and psychological problems.(1)enjoying simple-minded soap operas and stereotyped characters(2)giving a false picture of realityC:Informative and cultural programs are frequently interrupted by vulgar advertising.(1)too many commercials(2)an insult even to the intelligence of a moronP120 6.(1)Thus (2)When (3)also (4)however (5)Moreover (6)indeed (7)also (8)Yet (9) and (10)ThusP139 sample 2Sample 1 Sample 2Topic sentence: Stanford Introductory paragraph : (the University is one of the famous first para) the main idea of the institutions of higher learning composition :Its reputation is in northern California. based on its intelligentstudents ,distinguished facultyand growth opportunitiesoffered to students.Supporting detail 1 : Body para 1 (the secondIts highly intelligent student para)topic sentence:The population university ?s standards foradmission remain high .Supporting sentences: studentsenroll from all over the UnitedStates ,and many foreignstudents study there as well.Young men and women areselected to enter the universityfrom the upper fifteen percentof their high school classes. Supporting detail 2 : Body para 2（the third para ）Distinguished teaching staff Topic sentence :Stanford hasattracted to its faculty some ofthe world ?s most respectedscholars.Supporting sentences ； Theuniversity staff has includedseveral Nobel Prize winners inphysics ,medicine andchemistry .Stanford?sundergraduate school ofengineering and its graduate schools of business ,law ,and medicine are especially well regarded.Supporting campus life detail 3 : its Body parapara )topicCulturally,campus isstudents .3thea(the fourthsentence :universitymagnet forSupporting sentences ；Plays ,concerts ,and operas areperformed in the university?sseveral auditoriums and inoutdoor Frost Amphitheater.Guest lectures from public andacademic life frequently appearon campus,. In the evening,many students gather tosocialize in the Student Union,s coffee house .For the sports–minded ,the Stanford campusoffers highly developedConcluding sentence: It is considered comparable in quality to other longer established universities. athletic facilities. Team sports ,swimming ,and track and field activity are all very much part of the Stanford picture. Concluding para (the last para ) conclusion: Stanford is now generally considered comparable in quality to such other longer established ,major American universities as Harvard ,Yale, Princeton, and Columbia.P145 3. Gambling is the root cause of many social problems The future of education lies in the innovation of educational technologyViolence on television has a negative impact on children's view of societyWomen should be given equal opportunities in education and career developmentEfforts should be made to preserve natural beauty in developing local tourismP147 6. (1)usually (2)often (3)Since (4)on the other hand(5)also (6)but (7)AlthoughP158 5.排序： 8 3 7 1 5 9 13 2 6 12 4 11 106: 1.While 2.in the morning 3. in the evening 4.While 5.until 6.while 7.before 8.at six o'clock 9.As soon as10.Unfortunately 11.What's more 12.After 13.the next morning14.next 15. Luckily 16.until 17.at lastP172 5.排序：32718564P173 6: (1)cozy (2)soft (3)On one side of the room(4)Next to (5)muted (6)On the other side o f (7)nap(8)orange(9)lighted (10)sizzling。

大学专业试卷英语写作二卷A

英语写作2考试试卷A适用专业：考试时间：考试时间：120分钟闭卷试卷总分：100分(答案请写在答题纸上)Part I. Summary Writing (20 %):Directions: Read the following passage. Write a summary of about 80 words.The “Hawthorne Effect ”, one of the best-known experiments in sociology was conducted before World War II at the Hawthorne plant of Western Electric. The management was eager to improve productivity and wanted to know what kind of incentives would encourage the workers to increase output. The researcher who investigated the problem, Elton Mayo, separated a group of women from the other workers and systematically varied lighting, coffee breaks, lunch hours, methods of payment, and so on. At first, Mayo and his associates were delighted: each new change increased levels of productivity. But when the researchers found that productivity rose no matter which variables were involved, they became suspicious. When the workers were finally returned to their original conditions, their productivity rose yet again! Something was seriously wrong with the researchers ’ theoretical assumptions. Whatever had caused the changes in the dependent variable —productivity —it was not the independent variables the experimenters had introduced, and from this point of view the experiment was a failure. But the reasons for the experiment ’s failure have taught sociologists a great deal. Production rose, it seems, because the women enjoyed all the attention they were getting: they became a tight-knit, cooperative group, they knew what effects the sociologists were trying to produce, and they did their best to please. This phenomenon —the contamination of the experiment by the subjects ’ assumptions about what the sociologist is trying to prove —is still known as the Hawthorne effect. (239 words)Part II. Essay Appreciation (35%)Directions: Read the following essay and answer the questions.The Hazards of MoviegoingI am a movie fanatic. My friends count on me to know movie trivia (who was the pigtailed little girl in E.T.: The Extra-Terrestrial? Drew Barrymore) and to remember every big Oscar awarded since I was in grade school (best picture 1994? Forrest Gump). My friends, though, have stopped asking me if I want to go out to the movies. While I love movies as much as ever, the inconvenience of going out, the temptations of the theatre, and the behavior of some patrons are reasons for me to wait and rent the video.To begin with, I just don ’t enjoy the general hassle of the evening. Since small local movie theaters are a thing of the past, I have to drive for fifteen minutes to get to the nearest multiplex. The parking lot is shared with several restaurants and a supermarket, so it ’s always jammed. I have to drive around at a snail ’s pace until I spot another driver backing out. Then it ’s time to stand in an endless line, with theconstant threat that tickets for the show I want will sell out. If we do get tickets, the theater will be so crowded that I won ’t be able to sit with my friends, or we ’ll have to sit in a front row gaping up at a giant screen, I have to shell out a ridiculous amount of money —up to ＄8—for a ticket. That entitles me to sit while my shoes seal themselves to a sticky floor coated with spilled soda, bubble gum, and crushed Raisinets.Second, . Like most of us, I have to battle an expanding waistline. At home I do pretty well by simply not buying stuff that is bad for me. I can make do with snacks like celery and carrot sticks because there is no ice cream in the freezer. Going to the theater, however, is like spending my evening in a Seven-Eleven that ’s been equipped with a movie screen and comfortable seats. As I try to persuade myself to just have a diet Coke, the smell of fresh popcorn dripping with butter soon overcomes me. Chocolate bars the size of small automobiles seem to jump into my hands. I risk pulling out my fillings as I chew enormous mouthfuls of Milk Duds. By the time I leave the theater, I feel disgusted with myself.Many of the other patrons are even more of a problem than the concession stand. Little kids race up and down the aisles, usually in giggling packs. Teenagers try to impress their friends by talking back to the screen, whistling, and making what they consider to be hilarious noises. Adults act as if they were at home in their own living room. They comment loudly on the ages of the stars and reveal plot twists that are supposed to be a secret until the film ’s end. And people of all ages create distractions. They crinkle candy wrappers, stick gum on their seats, and drop popcorn tubs or cups of crushed ice and soda on the floor. They also cough and burp, squirm endlessly in their seats, file out for repeated trips to the rest rooms or concession stands, and elbow me out of the armrest on either side of my seat.After arriving home from the movies one night, I decided that I was not going to be a moviegoer anymore. Questions:1. What pattern of development does this essay belong to? (2’)A. DescriptionB. ExampleC. ProcessD. Cause and effect 2. In which sentence is the thesis of the essay presented? (2’)A. Second sentenceB. Third sentenceC. Fourth sentence 3. Which statement best describes the introduction of the essay? (2’)A. It starts with an idea that is the opposite of the one then developed.B. It explains the importance of the topic to its readers.C. It begins with a general statement of the topic and narrows it down to a thesis statement.D. It begins with an anecdote.4. Which method of organization does the essay “The Hazards of Moviegoing ” use? (2’)A. Time orderB. Emphatic order5. Write the words in the thesis that announce the three major supporting points in the essay: (3’)a. b. c.院系：专业班级：姓名：学号：装订线6.The topic sentence for the first supporting paragraph is supported by the following details (filling themissing details): (4’)a.Have to drive fifteen minutesb.c. d.e. f. Sticky floor7.What is the topic sentence for the second supporting paragraph (filling the missing sentence)? (3’)8.The second topic sentence is supported by the following details: (3’)a.At home, only snacks are celery and carrot sticks.b.(1)fresh popcorn(2)(3)9.The third topic sentence is supported by the following details: (6’)a.b.c. Adults talk loudly and reveal plot twists.d.10. The ending paragraph of the essay has been eliminated except one sentence. Try to finish it with about 60 words. (8’)Part III. Writing (45%)Directions: Write an example essay of about 250 words on the following topic.As a sophomore, you are asked to write an essay to the new students in which you make the point that college is more demanding than high school. Make vividly clear—for example, using several hypothetical students as examples—just what the consequences of being unprepared for those demands can be. Focus on three areas of college and the demands of each. Each of the areas you choose should be developed in a separate paragraph. Each paragraph should have its own detailed examples.You are to write in five parts.In the first part, state specifically what your thesis is.In the second three parts, support your thesis with three points.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.。

剑桥雅思真题7-写作(Test 2 附高分范文)

剑桥雅思真题7—写作（Test 2 附高分范文）Writing Task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write at least 150 words.参考范文1：The graph illustrates changes in the amount of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979, beef consumption reached the highest point, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were consumed in similar quantities about 150 grams. However, fish consumption hit a low of 50 grams.Yet, the consumption of beef and lamb dropped sharply to nearly 100 grams respectively. There had been a stable pattern at 50 grams in the consumption of fish.In contrast, the consumption of chicken showed an upward trend,transcending that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. Then this figure rose to a peak of about 250 in 2004.Overall, the line graph clearly showed the consumption of chicken rised rapidly while other foods decreased during this period.参考范文2：The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), whilemuch less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams). However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable. The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.参考范文3：The given line graph compares the fish and meat consumptions by the people of a European country from 1979 to 2004.As is presented in the graph, the consumption of chicken increased over the time while meats of different types were more preferred by people in the given European country than the fishes.According to the graph, more than 200 grams of beef was consumed daily by each person initially in 1979. In this year, each person on an average ate 150 grams of chicken and lambs while the consumption was just over 50 grams in this year. Over time people preferred chicken and the consumption kept on increasing and reached to over 250 grams per day by each person. The consumption of beef, lamb decreased over time and finally in 2004 the average consumption of these two meat types decreased to around 100 grams per person in a day. The amount consumed for fish remained almost same throughout the years and slightly decreased over time.In summary, people started consuming more chicken than beef and lamb and the fish consumption remained almost the same.Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.参考范文（Band 7.5）：Fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debatable issue. There are many arguments supporting both views, those for and those against fixed punishments.On the one hand, fixed punishments will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime, will reconsider committing this act in the first place.This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crime committed.If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This wouldresult into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.On the other hand, taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity.A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next. In my opinion, an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity.There have to be fixed punishments for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and a maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions.An example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is Completion Law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime.As for the exemptions, in some countries the law exempts thiefs stealing food during a period of famine taking into consideration the distress and hunger.Also, a person killing in self-defense will be exempted from punishment.考官评语：This is a thoughtful and well-argued response to the task. The candidate examines the opposing views of the topic and gives a clear opinion that is well developed and supported. To reach the highest band a more clearly-signalled conclusion would be needed. The argument is well organised and linking is well managed throughout. The development of the answer is not helped however, by poor control of paragraphing which sometimes confuses the links across different sections. This is a weak feature of the script which limits the overall rating. In contrast, an excellent range of vocabulary is used with a sophisticated level of control and only rare slips. The range of structures is also wide and most sentences are accurate and precise, but there are some errors and omissions. These, however, are only minor and do not affect communication.。

新视野大学英语(第三版)写作教程2全册答案

新视野大学英语(第三版)写作教程2全册答案本文档提供了《新视野大学英语(第三版)写作教程2》全册的答案。

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建议在使用时仍以教材为主，灵活运用答案中的思路和方法。

单元一：写作技巧1.1 写作的基本原则- 问：写作的基本原则有哪些？- 答：写作的基本原则包括：- 有明确的主题和中心思想；- 具有逻辑性和连贯性；- 使用准确、简洁和恰当的语言；- 注意段落结构和标点符号的运用。

1.2 写作的步骤和注意事项- 问：写作的步骤和注意事项有哪些？- 答：写作的步骤和注意事项包括：- 确定写作目的和读者对象；- 收集和整理相关素材；- 制定写作计划和提纲；- 进行初步写作和修改；- 注重语法和拼写的准确性；- 最后进行整体修改和润色。

单元二：描写2.1 描写的技巧和方法- 问：描写的技巧和方法有哪些？- 答：描写的技巧和方法包括：- 使用具体而生动的词语和形象；- 运用多种感官来描写；- 使用比喻、拟人和排比等修辞手法；- 注意时态和语态的运用。

2.2 描写的范文和练- 问：有没有描写的范文和练？- 答：下面是一篇描写性文章范文，供参考：> 五彩斑斓的花海迎面扑来，像是一幅绚丽的油画。

鲜艳的红、黄、蓝、紫交织在一起，花朵如同绽放的烟火，散发着芬芳的香气。

微风吹过，花瓣轻轻地摇摆，仿佛在向游客们点头致意。

阳光透过树叶的缝隙洒在花海上，给它披上了一层金色的光晕，犹如仙境一般。

单元三：议论文3.1 议论文的特点- 问：议论文的特点是什么？- 答：议论文的特点包括：- 中心明确，立场鲜明；- 逻辑严密，论据充分；- 引用可靠的数据和事实支持观点；- 考虑反方观点并进行辩驳。

3.2 议论文的写作方法- 问：写议论文有什么方法和技巧？- 答：写议论文时可以采用以下方法和技巧：- 选择具有争议性的话题；- 分清主题句和论据；- 使用恰当的过渡词语和连词；- 提供充分的例子和证据；- 使用恰当的复杂句式和修辞手法。

2023最新雅思写作Task 2范文

2023最新雅思写作Task 2范文题目：Some people believe that technology has made our lives more complicated, while others feel that it has had the opposite effect. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.雅思写作Task 2范文Technology has become an increasingly ubiquitous presence in our daily lives, and its impact on our wellbeing is a topic of much debate. While some individuals believe that technology has made our lives unnecessarily complex, many others argue that it has had a positive impact on our lives. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before drawing a conclusion.On the one hand, detractors of technology argue that it has made our lives more complicated. Firstly, they point out that social media and other forms of digital communication can be a source of stress, as people feel pressure to be constantly connected and responsive to messages. Secondly, they argue that the sheer amount of information available online is overwhelming, making it difficult to filter useful information from the noise. This can lead to anxiety and a feeling of being constantly bombarded with choices.However, supporters of technology argue that it has madeour lives easier and more convenient in a number of ways. For instance, technology has enabled us to work remotely, freeing us from the constraints of a fixed location and a rigid work schedule. Additionally, online shopping and the ability to access information from anywhere have become increasingly popular and convenient. Moreover, technology has enabled us to stay connected with friends, family and colleagues easily, even when separated by geography or time zones.In my opinion, while technology has certainly made our lives more complex in some ways, it has actually had a net positive impact on our wellbeing. The ability to communicate and access information from anywhere has given us greater choice and flexibility in our lives, and it has enabled us to work more efficiently and effectively. While it is true that some people may feel overwhelmed by the amount of information and communication options available through technology, this is ultimately a problem of moderation and self-control.In conclusion, while some people argue that technology has made our lives unnecessarily complicated, I believe that its benefits outweigh its disadvantages. Technology has had a positive impact on our lives by improving our ability to communicate, work, learn and stay connected, and it will continue to do so as long as we use it responsibly.。

新时代核心英语教程写作2教学课件U2

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Activity 2
Read the following paragraph and then complete the tasks below.
A community is a sea in which people swim unconsciously, like fish. We fail to recognize our neighbors as fellow human, and they show the same lack of fellow-feelings for us. A complete lack of concern for one another is evident in today’s complex society.
• What current events or issues spark your interest?
2. You will like writing better and will write more successfully this way.
Choose manageable topics
Look for familiar topics and ideas
1. Discover ideas about topics that you know a lot about.
2. Examine your own experiences and areas of knowledge.
3. Your background knowledge may enable you to write in-depth essays.
An idea makes a point or states an opinion about a topic.

托福TPO72写作 (2)

综合写作Transient lunar phenomena(TLP)are relatively brief flashes of light that appear to come from the surface of the Moon.Such flashes of light have been observed for centuries by both amateur and professional astronomers,and several theories have been put forward to explain them.One theory is that TLP are not genuine lunar phenomena,but only random observational errors caused by defects in the telescopes some observers use. Optical instruments such as telescopes or microscopes are complex pieces of machinery;even small flaws in their design can create artificial optical impressions like flashes or other distortions in the visual field.To an observer, a flash of light caused by an instrument error may sometimes look like a real phenomenon taking place in nature.A second theory is that meteors striking the Moon cause TLP.Because the Moon has no atmosphere,meteors often reach the lunar surface.In fact, meteors strike the Moon every day.According to the meteor theory,when meteors strike the lunar surface,they explode,creating enough heat energy to appear as a flash of light to observers on Earth.When people observe TLP, they are actually observing flashes of light generated by meteor impacts.A third theory is that TLP are the result of lunar rocks emitting their own light by a process called thermoluminescence.It is known that the Moon does in fact contain certain rocks that are capable of generating light in this way when they are heated by the Sun.This is strong empirical support that TLP are caused by thermoluminescence.听力文本Unfortunately,none of the theories presented in the reading selection really explain TLP.First,if TLP observations were caused by random flaws in telescope design, then the reports of the TLP would be pretty random as well.Observers with flawed telescopes would probably report TLP happening at many random places on the moon surface,but that's not what observers have been reported.Most observers report TLP from two very specific locations on the moon surface.Since TLP are so closely associated with specific places on moon,they probably reflect real events happening on the moon,not flaws in telescopes.Second,about the meteor.The flashes of light that meteor impacts produce usually last just one second,but the average duration of a TLP is20minutes. It is true that meteor showers in which many meters are grouped together can occur on the Moon.So this could cause light flashes instead of a longer duration.But the vast majority of TLP are not reported during meteor showers.So,while it is possible that a few TLP are caused by meteor impacts,the great majority of TLP certainly have other causes.Third,could thermoluminescence cause TLP?Certain rocks on the moon do emit their own light.But this light is weaker than the glare of the moon's surface that we usually see when we observe the moon.As you know,we see the moon at night because its surface reflects light from the sun.Now,this reflected light is fairly bright and it is certainly much brighter than thermoluminescence of the moon's rocks.So we would not be able to see the thermoluminescence against this very bright background.It would be like trying to see the light from the candle in front of a powerful spotlight.So thermoluminescence cannot be the source of the observed TLP flashes.Question:Summarize the points made in the lecture,being sure to explain how they challenge the specific theories presented in the reading passage.独立写作Question:When a new technological device becomes available,some people buy it right away;others wait until many have adopted it.Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.。

雅思9 test 2小作文

雅思9 test 2小作文英文回答：The topic of the IELTS Writing Task 2 is about the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad. Studying abroad has become increasingly popular in recent years, and it offers many advantages. Firstly, studying abroad allows students to experience a new culture and broaden their horizons. Living in a foreign country exposes students to different customs, traditions, and ways of thinking, which can help them develop a global perspective and become more open-minded individuals. Secondly, studying abroad provides students with the opportunity to improve their language skills. Immersion in a foreign language environment forces students to communicate in the target language on a daily basis, which can significantly enhance their language proficiency. Lastly, studying abroad can also enhance career prospects. Employers often value candidates who have international experience, as it demonstrates adaptability, cultural awareness, and independence.However, there are also some drawbacks to studying abroad. Firstly, homesickness can be a major issue for many students. Being away from family and friends can be emotionally challenging, especially in the beginning. Students may feel lonely and isolated, and this can affect their overall well-being and academic performance. Secondly, studying abroad can be financially burdensome. Tuition fees, accommodation, and living expenses in a foreign country can be expensive, and not all students have the financial means to support themselves. Lastly, studying abroad may also create a sense of disconnection from one's own culture and identity. Students may struggle with the clash of valuesand norms between their home country and the host country, which can lead to a sense of identity crisis.中文回答：关于留学的好处和坏处是雅思写作任务2的主题。

剑桥雅思真题6-写作(Test 2 附高分范文)

剑桥雅思真题6—写作（Test 2 附高分范文）Writing Task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.参考范文1：The given table data shows information on the way of travelling by British people for the year 1985 and 2000. As is presented on the table, car was the most common way of travel by British people both in 1985 and in 2000. In 1985, more than 3000 miles out of total 4740 miles were travelled by an average British people that increased to well over 4000 out of total 6475 in the year 2000. The second most common way of travelling for these two years was local bus (excluding the data from other category) which was far less than the car. Taxi was the least preferred way of travelling both in these two years amounting only 13 miles per person and 42 miles per person, respectively, for these two years.Bicycle was used for an average of 50 miles travel by each person in 1985 and that decreased to 41 miles in 2000 which shows the decline of bicycle usages by British. Train, local distance buses were two other mode of travel by British people whose popularity increased over time. In 1985, 255 miles distance was travelled by an average British on foot while this distance decreased a bit in 2000. The other transportation were used comprises about 450 miles per person in 1985 which increased to 585 in 2000.In summary, the popularity of car as transportation gained popularity among British people in 15 years of time and they mostly preferred to use car as the mode of travel.参考范文2：The table demonstrates how different modes of travel changed in England in 15 years spanning from 1985 to 2000. In general, the modes are classified into two kinds in terms of average miles traveled per person per years: one enjoyed rising popularity while other decreasing.The travel modes which modes which gained popularity in the period included cars, long distance buses, train, taxis and other. Cars remained top among the modes in the 15 years, with its average miles increasing considerably from 3,199 in 1985 to 4,806 in 2000. Long distance buses and taxis seemed to be warmly welcomed by travelers so average miles traveled in the two modes almost tripled.Travels by walking, bicycles and local buses lost travelers’ favor in the one and half decade. Average traveling distance by local buses suffered the biggest decrease, dropping from 429 to 274, while the number of miles by walking and bike fell mildly from 255 to 237 and from 51 to 41 respectively. Despite the decreases, however, the total miles traveled grew from 4,740 to 6,475.In brief, the total traveling distance in the country grew in the years when cars, long distance buses, trains, taxis and other modes of travel were more popular and walking, bicycling and local transportation less popular.参考范文3（6分）：In 2000 the most preferred mode of travel is by car with 4,806 people. There’s a noticable decrease in public transportation locally where it dropped from 429 people in 1985 to 274 people in 2000. However the long distance bus rides is much more preferred by people as its figures are more than doubled in the last 15 years. People who chose to walk or cycle are decreased slightly in 2000. Which probably made people to take the take the train more often. There’s a significant increase in the numbers of people who travelled by train. It jumped from 289 in 1985 to 366 in 2000. This makes the train second popular mode of transportation. Thi biggest leap in the chart is the increase of taxi users who are tripled in 2000 with 42 people, where it was only 13 in 1985.Apart from all this modes of travel, there are some more different types of travel as well of course. Number of people choosing different modes of travel is rapidly increased from 450 to 585 in 2000.本文得分6。

备考2023新高考英语读后续写名校试题及写作素材读后续写Writing 2(16张PPT)

续写第二段开头：“Peter向四周看了看，发现许多同学在冲他微笑。”本段接下来可以这样构思：老师的做法—— 表扬Peter的诚实行为，并且不打算收回奖品。材料的最后提到“Peter想起妈妈教他做人要诚实”，续写中可以很自然地出现Peter的妈妈，比如可以写Peter回家后与妈妈分享这件事，并展示自己的奖品。再写Peter妈妈的心情，如为Peter的诚实感到欣慰或对他的表扬。
的行为，与老师的评价相符，也为下文老师
拒绝收回奖品做了铺垫。
标准范文及评析
Paragraph 2: Peter looked around and found many of his
classmates were smiling at him. “Peter, I want you to keep this dictionary because you set an example for all of us,” said Mr. White. Peter took the dictionary from his teacher and expressed his thanks to him. Meanwhile, he ④couldn’t wait to show it to Mum and tell her one of his best days ever. On arriving home, he told Mum what had happened. ⑤“You did the right thing. Honesty is the best policy,” said his mother proudly.
Staring at the red sign “100%” which was written on his test paper, Peter was lost in thought. After a while, he remembered a lesson Mum used to teach him, “We ought to be an honest person.” 注意：

英语写作教程2复旦大学版课后答案

英语写作教程2复旦大学版课后答案1、In order to find the missing child, villagers _______ all they can over the past five hours. [单选题] *A. didB. doC. had doneD. have been doing(正确答案)2、John and Jack had looked for the key, but _____ of them found it. [单选题] *A. noneB. neither(正确答案)C. bothD. either3、The storybook is very ______. I’m very ______ in reading it. （）[单选题] *A. interesting; interested(正确答案)B. interested; interestingC. interested; interestedD. interesting; interesting4、Don’t forget _______ those books when you are free. [单选题] *A. to read(正确答案)B. readingC. readD. to reading5、You might not like the way Sam behaves, but please be kind to him. _____, he is your grandfather. [单选题] *A. After all(正确答案)B. Above allC. In allD. At all6、The firm attributed the accident to（）fog, and no casualties have been reported until now. [单选题] *A. minimumB. scarceC. dense(正确答案)D. seldom7、If the manager had to choose between the two, he would say John was _____ choice. [单选题] *A. goodB. the bestC. betterD. the better(正确答案)8、—Excuse me, how long does it ______ to walk to the library? —About 15 minutes, I’m afraid.（）[单选题] *A. take(正确答案)B. spendC. costD. pay9、64．Would you like to drink ________？[单选题] *A．something else(正确答案)B．anything elseC．else somethingD．else anything10、I repeated my question several times. [单选题] *A. 到达B. 惊奇C. 重复(正确答案)D. 返回11、( ). I’m _____ in that ______ film [单选题] *A. interesting interestedB. interested interesting(正确答案)C. interested interestedD. interesting interesting12、Stephanie _______ going shopping to staying at home. [单选题] *A. prefers(正确答案)B. likesC. preferD. instead13、19．_______ will the film Country Road last? [单选题] * A．How farB．How oftenC．How soonD．How long(正确答案)14、95．-Dad, can we walk? ? ? ? ? ? ?the road now?-No,we? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? . We have to wait until the light turns green. [单选题] *A．across, needn’tB．across, mustn’t(正确答案)C．though, can’tD．through, mustn't15、I?have to?_______ my younger brother on Sunday. [单选题] *A. look after(正确答案)B. look upC. take careD. look out16、One thousand dollars a month is not a fortune but at least can help cover my living（）. [单选题] *A. billsB. expenses(正确答案)C. pricesD. charges17、Bliss, who worked in an information centre, began to work on the book in 1 [单选题] *A. 策划B. 上班C. 写作(正确答案)D. 销售18、He does ______ in math.（）[单选题] *A. goodB. betterC. well(正确答案)D. best19、Having stayed in the United States for more than ten years, he got an American（）[单选题] *A. speechB. accent(正确答案)C. voiceD. sound20、It’s raining outside. Take an _______ with you. [单选题] *A. cashB. life ringC. cameraD. umbrella(正确答案)21、His father always _______ by subway. [单选题] *A. go to workB. go to schoolC. goes to bedD. goes to work(正确答案)22、11．________ big furniture shop it is! [单选题] *A．HowB．WhatC．What a (正确答案)D．What an23、It is reported that the fire caused serious（）to that school building. [单选题] *A. damage(正确答案)B. destroyC. harmD.hurt24、My brother will come to see me tomorrow. I’ll meet?_______ at the airport. [单选题] *A. herB. youC. him(正确答案)D. them25、We often go to the zoo _______ Saturday mornings. [单选题] *A. atB. inC. on(正确答案)D. of26、I _______ seeing you soon. [单选题] *A. look afterB. look forC. look atD. look forward to(正确答案)27、We need some green paint badly, but there' s _____ at hand. [单选题] *A. notB. nothingC. little(正确答案)D. none28、Medicines are to be taken according to the doctor’s advice. [单选题] *A. 发放B. 提取C. 配方D. 服用(正确答案)29、--It is Sunday tomorrow, I have no idea what to do.--What about _______? [单选题] *A. play computer gamesB. go fishingC. climbing the mountain(正确答案)D. see a film30、--All of you have passed the test!--_______ pleasant news you have told us! [单选题] *A. HowB. How aC. What(正确答案)D. What a。

写作练习2相信和怀疑综述

有一位老师，他说：我曾经患过癌症，需要九次治疗才能康复，而我和我的家人，朋友想尽办法，完成了八次。就在我打算放弃之时，一条诈骗短信发了过来。使我突然恶作剧般地把自己缺钱的情况编辑成短信，随机发送给了42个陌生人。结果，期中35个人回复了我并捐助我完成了最后一次治疗。
一条恶作剧性质的短信，却救了老师的性命。现在的社会， “扶不扶”，“十字路口的抢钱风暴” ……一系列关于信任的问题产生，使人们开始怀疑，导致“九十岁的老人倒地无人敢扶”， “先拍照，后救人”等缺少信任的行为发生。造成了恶性循环。信任的问题再次被提出。
怀疑全部伤身。守财奴视财如命不相信任何人，连一只苍蝇飞近都如临大敌，整天躲藏于暗处，以防别人投抢他的钱财，一颗心整日半吊着，终日惴惴不安，以致阳寿早尽，连死都不安稳。由此可见，若将怀疑终日扛于身上，找不到信任去分担一点，后果就只有累死。人若将筹码都赌上了，输赢都不是好事，怀疑一切的人看到的世界是灰色的，丝毫体会不到信任是怎样一种美妙的感觉，最后只会孤家寡人，寂寞终身。
相信全部伤身。中世纪是个人才辈出的时代，也让那时的人们看到了时代进步的希望，一些科学家因此而特别吃香吗，动不动便说“地球是宇宙的中心”，“力是维持运动的原因。愚昧人们就誓死相信，以致烧死了布鲁诺，让哥白尼当了一生的懦夫，绞死了数位敢于怀疑的后起之秀。人性已经扭曲，灵魂染上了罪恶的鲜血，这便是全部的相信给予他们的恩赐。赌道中庸：适度怀疑，适度相信。小泽征尔，著名音乐指挥家，在一次比赛中，反复停下三次重奏乐谱，最后他坚决地，不亢不卑地大声喊出：”这谱子一定错了。 “是敢于怀疑的精神，让他获得全场的掌声，是敢于相信自己的精神让他名垂后世。他没有过度相信权威，是自己在霎时间埋没，也没有过度怀疑自己，而是让自己珍珠般耀眼光芒闪烁在沙滩上.

英语写作2(argumentation)

Protecting the Environment: Who is Responsible?
❖ Intro 1 ❖ Today we live in a global consumer society. People
across the world purchase, use, and dispose of a huge variety of products which make our lives easier and more comfortable. However, the result of this is massive damage to our environment. This essay will examine how authorities and individuals need to work together to protect our resources and our planet.
❖ Beating children brutalizes parents, damages the parent-child relationship, and is completely unnecessary. (be strong!)
❖ Words to use in the thesis sentence
❖ This essay will discuss the benefits of having universal free health care.
❖ I am going to analyse the effects of drugs on the individual, the family, and society.
❖ 3773 means ❖ a 3-sentence Intro ❖ a 7-sentence para ❖ a 7-sentence para ❖ a 3-sentence conclusion

新时代核心英语教程写作2电子版

新时代核心英语教程写作2电子版阅读理解是英语学习的核心，其中最难的部分就是语言的运用。

尤其是在英语作文中，要写好一篇精彩的书面语。

文章一定要做到主题明确，层次分明，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。

要抓住中心思想及核心论点，重点突出，有特色地进行表达。

文章要具有鲜明的时代性和针对性：“不能用一个时态或节奏去表达你对某一话题或某一个具体内容的看法；语言风格要尽量朴实些……”我们常说：有什么好写的作文？那就一定是优秀作文！一、写好作文的基本原则在英语学习中，写好作文，主要要把握以下几个原则：首先，要注意写作方法和技巧，掌握语言表达的规律。

掌握运用书面表达的技巧（表达方法）。

这是写好作文的基础。

其次，要学会审题，了解文体、思想内容和写作要求等方面。

最后还要学会把握文章整体大意及中心思想的表述方式、结构和布局。

掌握语言表达的规律，有利于锻炼和提高表达能力和写作水平：既不能胡编乱造，也不能照搬套话；既不可以偏概全，也不能刻意追求完美；还不可模棱两可、东施效颦；更不能信口开河、胡编乱造、信口开河等等。

二、写作的五个方面1、语言表达的有效性：书面语的写作一定要做到内容准确，重点突出，流畅自然，逻辑清晰，用词准确，表达准确有条理。

2、逻辑严密：在写作中，要求思维连贯，层次分明，在内容上要注意语言和思维之间要衔接自然，不能出现逻辑混乱，错别字严重等问题。

3、表达清晰：写作时必须避免生搬硬套、标新立异以及过度使用辞藻；要避免以议论文而非散文的形式出现；字数不足可以采用分段的形式来保证文体整齐有序；不能过度运用复杂修辞或夸张手法；逻辑是用来说话交流、解决问题以及确定观点的重要方法；不能用标点符号（如 long’s body)代替正确地标点符号；语法规则、句型结构应严格遵守；文章格式应符合我国小学生日常行为规范、格式规范等要求。

4、内容真实是语言品质最基本的要求之一。

文章内容应该真实、真情等地反映事物之间及事物与人之间的关系和本质。

中考语文：消息写作 2

中国运动员吕伟亚运会夺冠
新华社新德里11月24日电 11月24日，中国跳水姑娘吕伟在10米跳台跳水比赛中，技压群芳，一举夺冠。
新德里跳水运动馆，10米跳台跳水比赛进入白热化状态。八名各国选手按照次序登台比赛。4轮比赛过后，中国姑娘吕伟以微弱优势排在第一。第五轮比赛，选手们纷纷上了难度，吕伟这最后一轮选择的动作是“5136”，这是跳水比赛中难度系数最高的动作。只见她登上高台，静静站立。起跳，向前翻腾一周半，空中转体三周，身体打开，笔直地入水，压住了水花。完美的表现，裁判给了 9.5的高分。凭借着这一跳，吕伟获得第9届亚运会10米跳台跳水比赛金牌。
央视网消息：北京时间7月24日，东京奥运会正赛正式拉开帷幕，在女子十米气步枪决赛中，中国选手杨倩惊险夺冠，拿到了中国代表团东京奥运会第一枚金牌，与此同时也是此次奥运会产生的第一枚金牌。
杨倩。出生于2000年的她今年周岁只有20岁，这位来自浙江的美女在小学4年级时就被选入了宁波体校射击队，师从国家级教练虞利华。整个射击职业生涯中她已经拿到多项奖牌，2012年的时候获得全国青少年锦标赛亚军。2014年的时候在省运会上拿下了3块金牌，并在射击女子气步枪40发比赛中打出399环的世界级好成绩。 2021年7月份的时候，杨倩成功入选此次东京奥运会女子射击队名单，一路过关斩将夺冠。值得一提的是，长相甜美的杨倩此次不仅拿到了金牌，比赛中她修长手指的特写中做的美甲也是成功抢镜。
200米过后，谢震业顺利将棒交到苏神苏炳添手上，这位刚刚在100米创造历史的亚洲飞人，依靠无与伦比的个人能力，宛如一支离弦之箭，直接冲到了第一的位置，交接棒之后来到最后的100 米，右边的意大利队和第九道的加拿大队紧紧追赶吴志强，好在吴志强顶住了压力，以千分之二秒秒杀加拿大队，最终第一个冲过终点。

中级写作-写作2

中级写作-写作2(总分：30.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、Test 1(总题数：2，分数：10.00)1.Part OneYou are a marketing manager of" a furniture company and you want to buy a stand at a trade fair. Write a note to your assistant Lucy:·giving her the basic information of the fair·asking her to fax the organiser for some enquiries·suggesting when you want to get the result.Write 40-50 words.NOTEPADTo:LucyFrom:Nick（分数：5.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 正确答案：(I'm interested in having a stand at the International Furniture Exhibition in Paris on 15[th] May. Please fax the organiser and get some information as to the price, size, lo cation and discount. I expect to have the feedback by Thursday this week.)解析：2.Part Two·The sales of your company, Toller Electrical Ltd, have been falling lately. Your Managing Director has asked to write a report on this issue.·Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.·Then, using all you r handwritten notes, write your report.·Write 120-140 words.（分数：5.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 正确答案：(Report on the fall of salesIntroductionThe aim of this report is to examine the current sales situation and suggest some pos sible solutions as to how to increase sales in the next quarter. Findings·The sales in the first quarter of 2008 were unsatisfactory, which might indicate that we have already been deeply affected by the worldwide economic recession.TVs and Heaters performed the worst with a fall of 1, 000 in sales respectively.However, the demand for Heaters usually falls when spring comes.·It was also reported that the level of customer satisfaction plunged dramatically, which might also trigger the decrease of our sales. As the consumption capacity is shrinking, there is anurgent need for us to improve the after-sales service to win more customers.ConclusionThe current situation calls for our immediate action to introduce the employee bonus schemes to improve our business performance in sales in the next quarter.)解析：二、Test 2(总题数：2，分数：10.00)3.Part OneYou are a HR manager and you plan to invite Mindsets Company to give personnel training course on cultural diversity.Write an email to your assistant:·asking her/him to contact the company·saying the number of p articipants and the duration of time·suggesting available weekends.Write 40-50 words.To... GraceCC...Subject : Personnel training（分数：5.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 正确答案：(Grace,Could you please contact Mindsets to organize a personnel training course on the topic of Cultural Diversity? We will have ten participants and the course should last two days. I suggest the weekend of 11th/12th June or, if that is not possible, the following weekend.Thanks.Nick)解析：4.Part Two·Your Managing Director has asked you to reply to the letter below which is about a proposed educational visit to your company by a local school. He has written his comments on the letter. ·Write a letter of 120 - 140 words to the headteacher explaining the changes the Managing Director would like to make to the visit.·Write on your answer sheet.·Please do not include postal addresses.（分数：5.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 正确答案：(Dear Mr. MacNeil,Thank you for your letter, in which you put forward some suggestions for the pro posed visit to our company.There are, however, a few changes which I would like to make to your suggestions:* Our company is not able to receive 40 students but a maximum of 25 would be acceptable.* You suggested the date of 18th Friday. Unfortunately, a conference has been ar ranged on that day. Would Monday of the following week be available for you ?* The training officer will not come back until 10:30, so his talk to the students will have to be detayed.As to your request to have our new employees talk to your students, we regret to tell you that we can not release them from their duties. If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me.Your sincerely,David Johnson)解析：三、Test 3(总题数：2，分数：10.00)5.Part OneYou are the Head Office Manager. You want to make a budget for office appliances for next year. Write a memo to all department managers:·asking them to report the appliances needed·saying what appliances are included·telling them the deadline.Write 40-50 words.[Memo]To: All department managersFrom : Susan SmithSubject: Budget for office appliances（分数：5.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 正确答案：(Dear colleagues,Please let me know what office appliances you need to buy, for I'm making a budget for the coming year. Electronic devices, such as scanners or overhead projectors, will be given prior consideration this time. Please remember to send me your report by 15[th] November.)解析：6.Part Two·The staff at your company we re recently asked what they thought about the com- pany canteen. Your line manager has asked you to write a proposal summarizing their opinions and suggesting possible improvements.·Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwr itten notes. ·Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your proposal.·Write 120-140 words.（分数：5.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 正确答案：(Proposal on the low utility rate of staff canteenIntroductionThe proposal aims to examine key reasons why our employees prefer other lunch ven ues as opposed to our staff canteen and suggest possible ways for improvement. Semi formal interviews with 20 staff members were conducted to obtain the following opin ions.Findings·Menu. It was pointed out by many employees that the menu failed to offer any variety. Set menus can no longer cater to their needs for healthy and bal- anced diet.·Conditions of the canteen. The main problem is that the canteen is too crowed at peak hour. ·Price too high. Compared with many other fast food restaurants within a five-minute walking distance from our premises, our food is too expensive.RecommendationsIt is strongly suggested that we should introduce flexible opening hours to avoid too many people dining at peak hour and provide cheaper, more healthy and diversified meals to attract our employees.)解析：。

雅思剑17t1写作第二篇范文

雅思剑17t1写作第二篇范文题目：In some countries, more and more people are becoming interestedin finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?In recent years, there has been a growing trend among folks in certain countries to dig into the history of their abodes. Well, there are several groovy reasons for this curious phenomenon.First off, it's all about a sense of connection. People these days are like roots seeking plants. We all want to feel like we belong somewhere. Knowing the history of your house is like finding out about your family tree but for your living space. For example, if you discover that your house was once home to a famous artist or a heroic figure from the past, it gives you a special link to that era and a real feeling of pride. It's like your house has a story to tell, and you become a part of that story.Another nifty reason is the simple love for mystery and discovery. Humans are natural-born explorers. When we come home every day, we start to wonder what secrets those walls might be hiding. Maybe there were wild parties in the 1920s in the very living room where you now watch TV. Or perhaps a long lost treasure was once buried in the backyard. Unraveling these mysteries is like going on a mini adventure without even leaving your home.Now, let's talk about how one can actually do this research. One super cool way is to talk to the neighbors, especially the old timers. These guys are like walking history books. They might remember all kinds of juicy details about your house like who built it, when it was renovated last, andif there were any strange happenings. It's like having a free and friendly source of information right next door.Another great avenue is to check out local archives. These places are like time capsules filled with old maps, building permits, and newspaper clippings. You might find an old photo of your house looking all spiffy in the 1950s or a news article about some big event that took place there. And don't forget about the Internet. There are all sorts of websites and forums where people share stories about old buildings. You might just strike gold and find someone who has some inside scoop on your place.In conclusion, the trend of people getting interested in their house's history is a really fascinating one. It's driven by our need for connection and our love for discovery. And with a bit of legwork, chatting with neighbors, exploring local archives, and surfing the net, we can all uncover the hidden tales of our homes.。