2019版高考英语大一轮复习 层级化晋级写作 层级二 词靓句高赢高分(一)不落俗套的亮点词汇讲义
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级二词靓句高赢高分(一)不落俗套的亮点词汇讲义
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③We can look at this problem in many ways.
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2.更新换代,避免重复
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语, 要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。 用词
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vital/ significant
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①That ’ s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice .
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opini on
choic e peopl e
result
conse quence
effec t
have
posse ss
repla ce
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develop
put up with
promo te
under stand
consi der
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adequ
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2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级...
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级...富有文采的状语从句[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.根据提示用状语从句补全句子1.如果我们继续污染环境,地球将不再适合我们居住。
(if)If_we_go_on_polluting_the_environment,_the earth won’t be fit for us to live in.2.无论我做什么,我都会尽全力做好。
(no matter what)No_matter_what_I_do,_I will try my best to do it well.3.他努力学习功课,结果考试取得了好成绩。
(so that)He worked hard at his lessons, so_that_he_got_high_grades_in_the_exams.4.只要我们有强大的信念,就能够克服任何困难。
(as long as) As_long_as_we_have_a_strong_will,_we’ll be ab le to get over any difficulty.5.尽管有规律的锻炼很重要,但临睡前锻炼不是个好主意。
(though/although/while)Though/Although/While_regular_exercise_is_very_important,_it ’s never a good idea to exercise too close to bedtime.6.既然你找到了一份工作,你应该学会独立不依靠父母。
(now that)Now_that_you_have_got_a_job,_you should learn to be independent of your parents.Ⅱ.请根据以下内容要点写一篇英语短文,尽可能多地使用状语从句假定你是李华,请以“An Unforgettable Sports Meeting”为标题写一篇回忆录,叙述高中时期运动会给你留下的难忘记忆。
2019高考英语一轮复习作文精讲词汇升级和写作要点
第一讲词汇升级特训【换词大法】有意识地将“第一反响词〞代替成高级单词!1 、gooda)excellent 优秀的b)outstanding 优秀的,优秀的c)terrific 优秀的d)wonderful 优秀的e)kind, patient, knowledgeable, warm-heartedf)beneficial 有益的g) amazing令人惊喜的/ amazed感觉惊喜的2 、bada)terrible 糟糕的b)tiring 令人劳累的 /tired 感觉劳累的c) disappointing令人无望的/disappointed感觉无望的d) harmful有害的3 、beautifula)attractive 有吸引力b)appealing 有吸引力c)elegant 优雅的d)gorgeous 优雅的e) of great beautyi.This picture is of great beauty.ii.I like this picture of great beauty. 4 、difficulta)challenging 有挑战性的b)of great difficultyi.Learning new words is of great difficulty for me.ii.It is of great difficulty for me to master new words. 5 、differenta)of great difference6 、 importanta)of great importanceb)vital 至关重要的c)significant 至关重要的d)essential 必要的7 、we/usa)we/us high school studentsb)we/us teenagersc)we/us Chinese young generationd) we/us modern individuals我们今世的个人e) we/us English learners同位语: A=B , A 和 B 都是名词8 、should提建议专用句型a) ought to do sthb)be supposed to do sthc)sb had better do sthd)真的到了做某事的了:It is high time that sb did sth.〔虚气〕eg: It is high time that you got up!e)若是我是你的,我就会⋯ . If Iwere you, I would do sth.eg: If I were you, I would get up immediately.f)Why not do sth?g)Why don ’t you do sth?h)It is beneficial for you to do sth.i)It is wise of you to do sth.j)Do sth! 直接用祈使句提建9 、wanta)would like to do sthb)desire to do sth. 期望做某事c)have a great desire to do sth.有期望做某事d)be longing/thirsty for doing sth.期望做某事e)plan to do sth划做某事f)tend to do sth有向做某事g)can ’t wait to do sth.急不行待做某事10、 like/love/enjoya)be fond of sth/doing sth.b)be crazy about sth/doing sth.c)be interested in sth/doing sth.11 、 happya)joyful 高的b)delighted 高的c) of great happiness有很大幸福感的12 、sb remember stha)sb keep in mind sth.b)sth occur to sb. 某人想起了什么注意:种表达方式,属于英中的“物称主〞用法,亦称“无灵主〞用法。
2019版高考英语大一轮层级化晋级写作讲义层级三 学案(二) 词顺意畅的衔接
学案(二) 词顺意畅的衔接衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。
在句与句之间,段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡(连接)性词语是非常必要的。
高中阶段应该掌握的过渡(连接)性词语归纳如下:一、表示起始关系的过渡性词语①To begin with, the final exam of this term is around the corner, so I am busy preparing for it.(2017·天津高考书面表达)首先,本学期的期末考试就要到了,因此我正忙于准备考试。
②Recently, the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school, which arouses a heated debate.近来,教育部要求上学期间加强学生劳动教育,这引起了激烈的讨论。
[即时演练] 补全句子1.(2015·湖南高考满分作文)现在,我想与你们分享一下我的经历。
Now,_I’d like to share my experience with you.2.随着互联网的发展,电脑在人们的生活中起着重要作用。
With_the_development_of_the_Internet,_computers play an important role in people’s life.二、表示时间顺序的过渡性词语①Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received.(2017·北京高考书面表达)几天后,当视频在毕业典礼上播放时,它受到了好评。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习步骤化写作增分第一步过词汇关第一讲词汇如何写对讲义20180429173
第一步过词汇关第一讲词汇如何写对[编写说明] 创设4步增分方案:过词汇关→过句子关→过段落关→过篇章关,每关又按“先写对→再写美”两层级设置课时。
由词组句、连句成段、由段成篇,循序渐进,步步为营步步赢;先写对,再写美,符合一般考生的学习实际,保住基本分,才能得高分。
第一步过词汇关第一讲_词汇如何写对词汇是语言的建筑材料,我们说话、写文章都离不开词汇。
只有准确选词,文章才能优美。
所以,要想写好文章,首先应从词汇着手。
一、准确选词的两个原则1.规范所谓规范是指所选的词语应是合乎习惯的、现代的、通用的。
语言是交流的工具,我们只有选用那些合乎习惯的、现代的、通用的词语,人们才会觉得顺耳,否则就会显得生硬、难懂。
如:We rise early every day.我们每天很早起床。
这里的rise虽也有“起床”的含义,但很正式,生活中不常用。
不如改为get up更为通俗易懂。
又如,汉语中表示“看书”“看电视”“看黑板”等都用到一个“看”字,因为这个字在汉语中通用。
如果英语中我们都用read或see或watch或look at等来表达这些“看”,则不符合英语的表达习惯,因此就是错误的。
例如:Let’s go to see the movies.我们去看电影吧。
Look at the blackboard, please.请看黑板。
Don’t read in the sun.不要在阳光下看书。
How many children like watching TV?有多少孩子喜欢看电视?2.贴切所谓贴切是指词义所表示的内容能准确表达思想,这就要求写作者应透彻地掌握每个词语的确切含义。
在学习英语时,我们尤其要注意那些同义词和多义词,使用不当就会出错。
例如:“他长得很高。
”英语是He is very tall.如果将tall误译为high则会使人理解为“他离地面很高”。
当然这里只列举了词义间的差别。
在行文中用词贴切,还应注意语境和通篇的语体,使每个词在上下文中都自然和谐。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级二词靓句高赢高分避免头重脚轻的it句式讲义
学案(六) 避免头重脚轻的it句式it除了用作人称代词外,还常用作形式主语或形式宾语,有时也可以用在一些固定句型中。
灵活地运用it句式可使作文更高级,结构更紧凑。
一、it作形式主语的常用句型在英语中,为了避免头重脚轻,经常运用it作形式主语,而把真正的主语后置,作真正主语的常为动词不定式(短语)或从句,有时也可用动名词(短语)。
1.It takes (sb.) some time/energy/effort ... to do sth.“花某人的时间/精力做某事”It takes me about an hour to study English every day.我每天大约花一个小时学习英语。
2.It is/was+形容词+(of/for sb.) to do sth.It’s necessary for you to have a good knowledge of Tang Poetry.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)对唐诗有很好的了解对你来说是很有必要的。
3.It is/was+形容词+that ...It is necessary that we students should get well prepared for their future.我们学生应该为将来做好准备是很有必要的。
4.It is a virtue and tradition for sb. to do sth.“做某事是某人的优良传统和美德”It is a virtue and tradition for us Chinese people to help those in need.帮助需要帮助的人是我们中华民族的优良传统和美德。
5.It’s really a good idea that ...“……的确是个好主意”It’s really a good idea that we should spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)我们应该花点时间简要了解唐朝的历史,这的确是个好主意。
2019年高考英语大一轮复习备考:高考常用写作模板及经典句型【33页】
四、高考常用写作模板及经典句型高考常用写作模板对比观点题型(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人认为……2. 另一些人认为……3. 我的看法……The topic of ——(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ——(支持A 的理由一). What is more, ——(理由二). Moreover, ——(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly, ——(支持B的理由一). Secondly (Besides), ——(理由二). Thirdly (Finally), ——(理由三).From my point of view, I think ——(我的观点). The reason is that——(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2) 给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点。
Some people believe that——(观点一). For example, they think——(举例说明).And it will bring them——(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, ——(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ——(反对的理由二).From all what I have said, I agree to the thought that——(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级二词靓句高赢高分不落俗套的亮点词汇课时提能训练
不落俗套的亮点词汇[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加彩部分1.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达) S o, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class.Therefore;_make_preparations_for2.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)In order to get a better understanding of Tang Poetry, I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.acquire_3.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.various/a_range_of4.(2016·北京高考书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with5.(2016·四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following.as_follows6.(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things ...made_up_my_mind 7.As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.are_supposed_to8.There’s no harm in your staying up late sometimes.occasionally/once_in_a_while9.The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.challenging10.So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a model student.intends_to Ⅱ.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文假定你是中学生李华,家住泉州。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级二词靓句高赢高分彰显水平的强调句型倒装句型和There
彰显水平的强调句型、倒装句型和There be句型[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.用强调句型、倒装句型或There be句型补全句子1.(2016·北京高考书面表达)正是他的不懈努力使得中国逐渐发生变化。
It_was_his_continuous_efforts_that caused China to change gradually.2.(2015·天津高考满分作文)如果还有什么我可以为你做的事情,请尽快与我联系。
If_there_is_anything_else_I_can_do_for_you,_please contact me as soon as possible.3.(2015·四川高考满分作文)只有通过练习你才能发现这种语言的魅力。
Only_through_practice_can_you_find the beauty of this language.4.(2015·广东高考满分作文)毫无疑问,它能增强人们的健康意识,但更有可能引起过度焦虑。
There_is_no_doubt_that it can enhance people’s consciousness of health, but it is more likely to result in overanxiety.5.窗户旁坐着一个年轻人,手里拿着一本杂志。
By_the_window_sat a young man with a magazine in his hand.Ⅱ.请根据以下内容要点写一篇英语短文,尽可能多地使用强调句型、倒装句型和There be句型1.在我的家乡曾经有一条小河,鱼儿在河中快乐地游着。
2.每当我看见这条小河,我禁不住会想到我快乐的童年。
3.现在不仅河中没有了鱼,而且发出难闻的气味。
4.据说是附近的一家化工厂使得河水受到了如此严重的污染。
5.我认为确实到了政府采取措施制止污染的时候了。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级二词靓句高赢高分用途各异的被动语态虚拟语气倍数和比较句
用途各异的被动语态、虚拟语气、倍数和比较句型[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.根据要求补全句子1.人们把我当作一个危险的人对待。
(虚拟语气)People treat me as_if_I_were_a_dangerous_person.2.我宁愿他们昨天没去上学。
(虚拟语气)I’d rather they_hadn’t_gone_to_school_yesterday.3.诺言一旦许下,就不能违背。
(被动语态)Once a promise is_made,_it shouldn’t_be_broken.4.作为一名学生,我认为应该采取一些措施节约能源。
(被动语态)As a student, I think some_measures_should_be_taken to save energy.5.如果当时你努力的话,你就能轻松地通过期末考试。
(虚拟语气)If you had_worked_hard,_you would_have_easily_passed the final exam.6.我希望昨天见到那位影星了。
(虚拟语气)I wish (that) I had_met_that_film_star yesterday.7.如今,一些青少年宁愿在家看电视也不愿意出去做运动。
(比较句型)Nowadays some teenagers prefer_to_watch_TV_at_home_rather_than_go_out to do exercise.8.什么时候去野营尚未决定。
(被动语态)It_hasn’t_been_decided when we should go camping.Ⅱ.请根据以下内容要点写一篇英语短文,尽可能多地使用被动语态、虚拟语气、倍数和比较句型1.我的家乡发生了巨大的变化,建起了很多新房屋,人们的生活水平有了很大提高。
2.一般来说,我们越富裕就会感觉越幸福。
3.如果你处在一个严重污染的环境中,你的心情不会好。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级二词靓句高赢高分彰显水平的强调句型倒装句型和There
学案(八) 彰显水平的强调句型、倒装句型和There be句型特殊句式是英语中的高级表达,其中,强调句型和倒装句型是最为常见的特殊句式,它们的准确使用能够彰显考生的英语水平,提高写作档次。
另外There be句型在写作中也是一种常见的高级表达。
一、重点突出的强调句型强调句型可强调除谓语动词和表语外的其他任何成分,如主语、宾语、状语等。
强调句型的灵活运用不仅有助于增强表达效果,突出要强调的重点,更能彰显考生对英语表达的把握能力。
其基本结构为:It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分。
It was because of their help that a disaster was avoided.(2017·浙江高考读后续写)正是由于他们的帮助,才避免了一场灾难。
在写作中,我们可以通过强调句型将句子提高到一个新的档次,写作时可采用“四步法”:[示例]1.It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分.It is because it’s a good chance for you to learn the natural knowledge of China and make new friends that we really wish you can join us.(2017·浙江高考应用文写作)这是因为它是你学习中国的自然知识和结交新朋友的好机会,我们真的希望你能加入我们。
2.Is/Was it+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分?Was it in that park that the children saw the strange green objects?正是在那个公园里孩子们看见了那些奇怪的绿色物体吗?3.特殊疑问词+is/was it+that+句子其他部分?When was it that you made up your mind to work as a volunteer teacher?是什么时候你下定决心要当一名志愿者老师的?4.It is/was not until ... that ...“直到……才……”It was not until he went through real hardship that he realized the love we have for our families is important.直到他经历了真正的苦难,他才意识到我们对家人的爱很重要。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级二词靓句高赢高分(二)整齐和谐的并列句课时提能训练
整齐和谐的并列句[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.用适当的并列连词填空1.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Not_only will all kinds of papercutting works created by famous artists of this field be on show that day, but_(also) a lot of useful and interesting activities will be held as well.2.Seize the chance, or/or_else/otherwise you’ll regret some day.3.Another try, and you’ll achieve a success.4.The young man wanted to help the dog, but as he approached, the dog started to bark.5.We were about to set off when it suddenly began to rain.6.Some people believe smoking is harmful to health while others consider it is helpful reducing in working pressure.Ⅱ.用并列句补全句子1.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)因此,如果你努力学习的话,展览不仅可以帮助你更好地了解中国民间艺术作品,而且可以帮助你获得一些剪纸技巧。
Therefore, the exhibition can_not_only_help_you_have_a_better_understanding_of Chinese folk art works, but_can_also_help_you_acquire some papercutting skills if you try hard to learn.2.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)别犹豫,如果你有什么问题就问我。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级二词靓句高赢高分七言简意明的非谓语动词讲义
学案(七) 言简意明的非谓语动词众所周知,作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味,句子与句子之间的关系显得松散;而作文中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘,读起来费劲。
而恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换,不仅显得句式多样、句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑、言简意明。
一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句写作时,我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换,使其成为较高级的表达方式。
转换时可采用“三步法”:[示例]第一步:写出两个简单句。
①I want to improve myself by reading some books.②The books were written in the Tang Dynasty.第二步:让句①作主句,用非谓语动词改写句②。
第三步:让句②作定语,由于其动词write与主语the books之间为被动关系,故用过去分词短语作定语。
I want to improve myself by reading some books written in the Tang Dynasty.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)其他几个转换的例子如下:①Mount Tai stands in Shandong Province. It has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it.→Standing in Shandong Province, Mount Tai has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attac hed to it.(2017·北京高考书面表达)②In the newspaper of our school there is a column called “Foreign Culture”.It aims to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.→In the newspaper of our school there is a column called “Foreign Culture”,aiming to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.(2015·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)[即时演练] 用非谓语动词进行句型转换1.All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom.→All_the_people_here_like_the_novel_written_by_Tom.(用过去分词作定语)2.The boy came to school late again. This made the teacher very angry.→The_boy’s_coming_to_school_late_again_made_the_teacher_very_angry.(用动名词作主语)3.The students were making the most of time. They wanted to finish the work earlier.→The_students_were_making_the_most_of_time_so_as_to_finish_the_work_earlie r.(用动词不定式作目的状语)二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些,因为需转换的一般是从句部分,这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词,并把握好动词的时态和语态即可,所以只需两步。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级二词靓句高赢高分(
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级二词靓句高赢高分(|灵活易用的名词性从句[提高课堂能力训练]ⅰ。
使用名词性从句完成句子1。
我真的希望我的建议能对你有所帮助,也希望你在中国过得愉快。
我希望我的建议能对你有所帮助,并希望你在中国过得愉快。
(2016年国家论文我的书面表达),然而,我不确定措辞和格式是否正确。
怎么样,我不知道为什么这些单词和格式是正确的。
3. (2015年全国论文我满分作文)你应该记住的最后一件重要的事情是在6月28日前把文章发给我。
最后一件重要的事情是有些人因为不锻炼而生病。
没有人能否认教育是生活中最重要的方面。
没有人能否认一个人的教育是他生活中最重要的方面。
请根据以下要点写一封信,尽可能多地使用假设你是李华,并了解到你的学校英语学习协会正计划建立一个中学英语校刊,以促进每个人的英语学习。
请用英语给俱乐部的负责人史密斯先生写一封信,表达你对了解此事的喜悦,并提出你最喜欢的专栏,简要说明原因。
注:1。
单词的数量大约是100个;2。
这封信的开头和结尾都是为你写的,不包括在字数里。
亲爱的史密斯先生,您诚挚的,李华参考模式:1院长史密斯先生,得知我们的英语学习俱乐部要创办一本英语杂志,我非常激动。
这的确是个好主意,我相信它会成功的。
9我认为学校杂志最好有三个栏目,如学校新闻、教师建议和学生心声。
从学校新闻专栏中,我们可以了解到我们学校正在发生的事情。
在老师的建议中,我们的老师可以给我们建议如何更有效地学习英语。
学生之声将为我们提供一个自由表达我们对生活和学习的想法和感受的空间。
我相信这本杂志一定会使我们受益,我期待着阅读它。
您的真诚,李华2。
2019版高考英语大一轮复习步骤化写作增分第二步过句子关第二讲句子如何写美讲义
第二讲句子如何写美第1课时从形式上错落有致写作时应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、复杂句和复合句并用,还可以使用简化句等,这样可以增加文章亮点。
一、让简单句“靓”起来→扩写简单句在简单句的基础上充分利用形容词、副词、定语从句和状语从句等来充实句子,让句子体现作者较高的修辞意识。
He is sleeping.→He is sleeping in class.(添加状语)→He is sleeping in the English class.(添加定语)→He is sleeping soundly in the English class.(添加状语)→He is sleeping soundly in the English class when t he teacher calls his name.(添加when连接的状语从句)→He, who attended his friend’s birthday party till midnight yesterday, is sleeping soundly in the English class when the teacher calls his name.(添加who 引导的定语从句)注意:扩写句子时有一点很关键,即要明晰句子的主要成分,并搞清单词的词性,如:它是名词还是动词,是形容词还是副词。
二、让句子“瘦”下来→高级简单句有些句子过于冗长,让句子显得不够简洁,如果用单词、介词短语、非谓语动词等简化句子,可使句子变得更加优美。
1.用单词简化句子As he was tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on.→Tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on.2.用介词短语简化句子We will not finish the task if you do not help us.→Without your help, we will not finish the task.3.用非谓语动词简化句子①Mary came late, which made her teacher angry.→Mary’s coming late made her teacher angry.②Because he did not know what to do, he had to ask the teacher for help.→Not knowing what to do, he had to ask the teacher for help.4.用并列结构简化句子I am a music lover. Jack is also a music lover.→Both Jack and I are music lovers.三、交叉使用长句与短句在英语写作中,过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好,正确的做法是,根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短句,使文章显得错落有致,这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。
2019版高考英语大一轮层级化晋级写作讲义层级一 学案(一) 万变不离其宗的5种基本句式
[编写说明] 写作是考生失分的重灾区,针对这一薄弱环节,本书采用4步学习法,教考生先完成→再完美;先求稳→再求变;先仿作→再创作;先写好→再写快。
四个层级梯度设置,步步登高、级级提档。
层级一表达无误保住分——“写对句子”是基础(安排2个学案)写作中写对句子是最基本的要求,其中最重要的一点是句子结构要完整。
所以,在平时训练时一定要从掌握基本句式做起,通过观摩、背诵、仿写,最终写出准确无误的句子。
在高考中即使你的作文不能写得漂漂亮亮、洋气十足,也一定要写得像模像样,硬伤不多!所以学写作,要先从最基本的句子抓起。
学案(一) 万变不离其宗的5种基本句式句子成分构成了英语中各种各样的句子,其实英语中最基本的句式只有五种,其他各种句式都是由这五种基本句式演变而来。
一、主语+谓语(不及物动词)该句式常用来表示主语的动作或状态。
其特点为:句子的谓语动词都能表达完整的意思,这类动词叫作不及物动词,后面可以接副词、介词短语、状语从句等结构。
①The_13th_National_Gameswill take place in Tianjin at the end of August.(2017·天津高考书面表达)第十三届全运会将于8月底在天津举行。
②And Ican play outside too!(2016·四川高考书面表达)我也可以在外面玩![即时演练] 补全句子1.(2017·江苏高考书面表达)如图所示,中国电影的票房收入从2012到2015不断上升。
As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased_constantly_ from_2012_to_2015.2.(2015·北京高考书面表达)训练营将于7月20号开始。
This camp will_open_on_July_20th.3.(2014·湖南高考书面表达)因此,这种新鞋最近才问世。
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层级二词靓句高赢高分——“营造亮点”有一套阅卷时,一篇高考作文往往在1分钟内就会被判定生死,大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。
在词汇方面:如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇,阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬;在句式方面:如果考生多运用一些并列句和复合句等高级句式,并注意句式的灵活多变,使文章读起来抑扬顿挫,让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现,阅卷老师一定会毫不犹豫地将考生的作文定位于五档线。
学案(一) 不落俗套的亮点词汇
写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力,遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、生动形象。
如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上,能够将一些常用词汇进行升华,就将成为高考作文获得高分的亮点之一。
一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法
1.“语”众不同,避免人云亦云
写作时,恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
①I’m busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near.
→I’m occupied with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is of great importance to me, is around the corner.(2017·天津高考书面表达)
②So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.
→Therefore,I have no choice but to put you to trouble by correcting my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)
2.更新换代,避免重复
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语,要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。
用词不同、表达方式迥异,也是高级用法。
①The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.
→The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)
②We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also built
a library where the old playground used to be.
→We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also set up a library where the old playground used to be.
3.单词与短语巧妙互用
一般情况下短语优先,应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。
但有时单词比短语更生动,可以“一词传神”。
①I’ve decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.
→I’ve made up my mind to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)
②We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future.
→We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.
(2015·福建高考书面表达)
③We can look at this problem in many ways.
→We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有“内涵”)
4.用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇
为了表现自己的语言功底,吸引阅卷老师的眼球,应避免反复使用初中或小学阶段学过的词汇,尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。
①I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
→I owe you an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)
②Second, I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.
→Second, I am sparing no efforts to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(2017·天津高考书面表达)
二、使用亮点词汇的2点注意
1.注意增加亮词的“出镜率”,变消极词汇为积极词汇
阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇,写作中能运用自如的词汇为积极词汇,也就是平常所说的“第一反应词”。
积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语作文表达水平的高低。
现在很多考生的困难是,头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇与消极词汇之间;另外,很多背到的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会变成陌生词汇。
因此在备考过程中,考生要做的事情就是迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持接触的频度,力争使其变成积极词汇。
很多考生作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复用初中学过的简单词汇,背了大量的亮词妙语而不用。
建议大家在想到一个表达时,务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式,这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”。
例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义,大家首先想到的是
“beautiful”,那么在下笔时,要想一想还有没有更出彩的表达,如“attractive”或“charming”等。
再如表达“困难的”时,大家常用“difficult”,那是不是用“tough”或“challenging”更与众不同呢?
2.注意亮点词汇使用的场合
写作时,在用词上不可随心所欲,决不能为追求“高级”而使用复杂但毫无把握的词语,也不能满篇堆积所谓的“高级”词汇,否则给人过分炫耀之嫌,得不偿失。
一般来说,一篇文章能用好三至五个高级词汇就可以了。
另外,为能更好地“完成规定的写作任务”,减少错误,特别提醒考生在使用“高级词汇”时,一定要注意遵循“准确、恰当”的原则,并且要注意使用的场合,难词和生僻词汇并不一定就是高级词汇,例如:
一大早我们买了一些圣诞礼物。
Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents. (purchased太过于书面化,改为bought更地道)
三、高分必备的24个亮点词汇
①That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.
→That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better alternative.(2017·北京高考书面表达)
这就是为什么我认为长江之行将是一个更好的选择。
②In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.
→I n the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.(2014·江西高考书面表达)
在随后的三年里,我们的学校生活将会非常具有挑战性。