2019年高考英语满分作文汇编

2019年高考英语满分作文汇编

2019年·全国Ⅰ卷

适用地区：河北、河南、山西、山东、江西、安徽、湖北、湖南、广东、福建。

假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：

1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。

注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．结束语已为你写好。

【试题解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。

1．审题立意

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。

2．谋篇布局

书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。

3．关键词

根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate ，take my application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least，等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。

【满分作文1】

I'm LiHua，an outgoing boy，who is studying in London．I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team，having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city．I have some advantages for the job．

First of all，having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child ，I have a good command of English and Chinese，which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings．Besides，having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture，I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it．Last but not least，through my introduction and efforts，I believe，I can strengthen the friendship between China and England．I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration．

【作文点评】

本文首段开门见山，表达了写信的目的；第2段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，an outgoing boy，who is studying in London．此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city．使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child，I have a good command of English and Chinese，which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings．使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外

First of all，Besides，Last but not least的使用使文章富有条理性。此外，还使用了高级句式结构，如I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration条件状语从句。

【满分作文2】

Dear Sir/Madam，

I’m Li Hua，an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.

The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all，having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age，I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more，years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer，which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.

All in all，my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if y ou could take my application into consideration.

Yours，

Li Hua

【满分作文3】

DearSirmadam

I have learned from the newspaper that the Chinese painting exhibition will be held in summer in Lon don， where I’ll study.I want to be a volunteer for the exhibition so I am writing to apply for it.

I’m Lihua. who is an 18-year-old Chinese student in a sermon middle school. I’m good at English esp eciall spoken English. I’m easy to get along with i lke to m ake friends， and I am willing to help others. Be cause one of myfavorite hobbies is Chinese painting I can be a good interpreter， showing the visitors around during the time.

I hope I will be chosen to be one， so I can have a chance to better my English. I am looking forww a rd to your reply.

Yours，