江苏省盐城市大丰区小海镇七年级英语上册 满分冲刺 第18讲 写作改错讲义 (新版)牛津版

第18讲写作改错

假如你是李华, 学校正在进行“优秀教师”的选举活动，你想选举你的英语老师Daniel为本学期“优秀教师”, 请你给组委会写一封推荐信讲明你选他的理由。

要求：

1. 词数50左右；

2. 叙事清楚，语句通顺，语意连贯；

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名；

4. 文章开头已给，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir,

Tha nks for reading my letter. I want to

recommend (推荐) my English teach er Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year.

Sample

Dear Sir,

Thanks for reading my letter. I want to

recommend (推荐) my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year.

I’m very li ke Daniel. He look very young. He’s about thirty years old. He favourite color is black. Because he is always wear black T-shirt. He can plays basketball very good. He is very good at it. He is funny, he also vey strict. He wants we study hard. We all like her.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

题一：语法填空

I’m very like Daniel. He look very young. He’s about thirty years old. He favourite color is black. Because he is always wear black T-shirt. He can plays basketball very good. He is v ery good at it. He is fu nny, he also very strict. He wants we study hard. We all like her.

内容提升

话题范畴：描写人

目的：推荐当选 the Best Teacher of the year

要点：谈理由

选材：详写性格特征，教学特点

结构：总分总结构，有始有终

拓展词汇

helpful, kind, caring, patient, smart…

be strict with sb. in sth.

encourage sb. to do

help sb. with/(to) do

get along well with sb.

treat sb. as…

We can get…/enjoy…/improve…

改进之后

Dear Sir,

Thanks for reading my letter. I want to recommend (推荐) my English teac her Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year.

I like Daniel very much. He looks young and handsome. He is good at playing basketball. He is very kind and he treats us as friends. But he is also strict with us in study. He often encourages us to speak English aloud and helps us to speak English well. We can really enjoy ourselves and i mprove our listening and speaking skills in his clas s.

All my classmates feel lucky to be his students. So I hope Daniel can be the Best Teacher of the year.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

第18讲写作改错

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I like Daniel very much. looks

young. He’s about thirty years old. He

His

favourite color is black. Because he is

, because

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wears a T-shirts

plays basketball very good. He is very good at

play well

it. He is funny, he also very strict. and/but is

He wants we study hard. We all like her.

us to him