广东省张静中学2014届高考英语一轮复习书面表达训练题(9)

2019高考英语书面表达一轮训练（9）附参考范文(2019湖北孝感一次统考)请根据下面提示，结合你的校园生活中的一个事例，就英语格言“Failure is the mother of success.”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。

In fact，there aren't always bright sunshine and gentle breeze，birds' singing and flowers' fragrant in our daily life.We have so many failures and hardships that someone will be disappointed and give up the hope of success，but life is what you make it.注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③词数为130左右。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文One possible version：Success will be gained after times of failure so long as we are good at drawing lessons from failures or mistakes and stick to what we are doing.That is the message carried in the proverb “Failure is the mother of success”．For example，when I began to learn English，I was slow and clumsy that I read the words wrong from time to time.My poor pronunciation made myself laughed at by my classmates.But I didn't give up and kept practising reading aloud English every day.And my teacher gave me a helping hand，getting me right whenever I made anerror.In a word，as long as we don't lose heart and keep on trying，we are sure to go through failure and achieve our aims.*********************************************************结束图表式书面表达思路与技巧图表式书面表达是常见的一种写作形式,现笔者结合下面一则实例,谈谈怎样写好这类书面表达。

根据以下表格内容,请以"How to Reduce the Present City Population"为题,用英语为杂志社写一篇短文,阐述你对这一问题的见解。

建议I具体措施:A. 晚婚 B. 一对夫妇,一个孩子目的:减少人口自然增长(人口出生率)建议II具体措施:严格控制外地人进城务工经商目的:减少外地人口对城市的压力建议III具体措施:A. 在郊区,建造生活、商业、文教、卫生、娱乐、休闲生活小区B. 在城外建造卫星城目的:吸引城市居民到郊区和卫星城工作和生活注意:1)词数:100左右。

2)参考词汇:严格控制have a tight control, 卫星城 satellite town一、认真审题,准确把握提示要求。

1. 审体裁。

准确把握体裁是写好一篇文章关键的一步。

体裁的形式直接决定着考生用英语表达信息的途径和形式,并影响着书面表述语句的正确性和准确性。

2. 审人称。

根据体裁要求,要准确把握人称的使用。

是用第一、二人称,还是用第三人称。

3. 审时态。

不同的体裁,其动词时态的使用也各有不同。

一般情况下,故事、日记等体裁常以一般过去时为主要动词时态;书信、便条、通知等体裁常以一般现在时为主要动词时态。

分析以上实例,应以第一人称的口吻进行描写。

从题目要求、表内要点以及体裁可知,本文时态应以一般现在时为主体时态。

二、理清表内要点,进行合理发挥。

图表式书面表达其主要内容常被列在表内。

考生首先必须理清表内内容要点,抓住主要信息进行描写。

可先把表内所提供的内容要点用英语列出,尽量使用一些较高层次的词汇或短语以及所学过的句法结构(如定语从句、分词结构等)进行描述。

例如上述实例图表中的内容可用英语列出以下几个短语或句式:(1) practice a policy of "Late Marriage" and "One Couple, One Child"(2) reduce the birth rate(3) have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs(4) lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population(5) build apartment blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theater s around us or even build satellite towns in the city suburbs or the counties round the cities(6) encourage city citizens to move there to live and work三、正确使用过渡性词语,提高文章的连贯性。

过渡性词语的使用是语言的连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。

在句子与句子之间,段落与段落之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡性词语是非常必要的。

例如上述实例,我们可在要点(1)前插入表示时间顺序的过渡词语 first / firstly, 在要点(3)前插入secondly,在要点(5)前插入finally。

在要点(6)前可以插入表示终结关系的过渡短语in this way / by this means。

现将中学课本中应掌握的过渡词语总结如下:1. 表示起始关系的有: first of all, according to, so far, as far as, to begin with, in my opinion等。

2. 表示时间顺序的有: first, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediatel y, suddenly, soon等。

3. 表示空间顺序的有: on the right / left, on one side of, at the top / foot / end of, in the middle of, i n front of, at the back of等。

4. 表示并列关系的有:and, or, also, too, as well as, neither...nor, not only...but also, either...or, not... but等。