高考英语写作公开课课件(共25张PPT)
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高二英语写作公开课ppt课件
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take
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List main points and key words
书面表达：
假设你是李华，我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在德江二中就读的
你的朋友Linda写一封电子邮件，我邀校请她一起参加。下内周容五包括： 1. 介绍比 问你 对语打 方幽算 的默参 意故加 向事的 。大原赛因；
Yours, Li Hua
Body Ending
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Structure of an invitation 邀请信结构
Para.1 (beginning)
writing purpose 介绍比赛的相关内容
Para.2 (body)
reasons 说明你打算参加的原因
Para.3 (ending)
expectation\reply 表达愿望(希望对方接受邀请)
3. I would appreciate it very much if you could accept my invitationn.
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Thinking
Step 1 发散思维，扩充内容 （enrich contents） attention:when\ where\ who\ what\ why\ how
Para.1 介绍比赛的相关内容（5W\1H)
我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
when: next friday where: our school) who: all students who love English what: Telling English story why: (to improve spoken English
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书面表达失分表现
9 ;.
take
10
List main points and key words
书面表达：
假设你是李华，我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在德江二中就读的
你的朋友Linda写一封电子邮件，我邀校请她一起参加。下内周容五包括： 1. 介绍比 问你 对语打 方幽算 的默参 意故加 向事的 。大原赛因；
Yours, Li Hua
Body Ending
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Structure of an invitation 邀请信结构
Para.1 (beginning)
writing purpose 介绍比赛的相关内容
Para.2 (body)
reasons 说明你打算参加的原因
Para.3 (ending)
expectation\reply 表达愿望(希望对方接受邀请)
3. I would appreciate it very much if you could accept my invitationn.
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Thinking
Step 1 发散思维，扩充内容 （enrich contents） attention:when\ where\ who\ what\ why\ how
Para.1 介绍比赛的相关内容（5W\1H)
我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
when: next friday where: our school) who: all students who love English what: Telling English story why: (to improve spoken English
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书面表达失分表现
9 ;.
新高考书面表达讲解(共26张PPT)
dark
Jane night
in the forest
walk, find, climb, stop, hsldoeiwespaJpapnoeinfeteltd wthiraetdJane did
Para 8: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. …
who when where
在理解阅读材料的基础上，为了创造性地构思续写内容，考生必须发挥想象力，准确判断作者 的写作思路和行文逻辑，这样才能续写符合逻辑的故事结局
四.回扣原文，揣摩写作思路
抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定文章的写作思路。同时，结合文中划线的关键 词，确定段落的写作内容。
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高考英语读后续写的解题策略和技巧
lake, stream, helicopter, yellow blouse Jane, Tom walked, climbed
at a distance To her great joy
Choose at least five out of ten words and expressions
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Para. 7 But no more helicopters came and it was dark again.
Feeling: disappointed
Find a place to sleep
Time: the night before slept Para. 8
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
Some steps to analyze before Continuation : 1. Find the style、person、tense、theme of the passage
高考英语怎样让书面表达文采飞扬教学课件 (共26张PPT)
恰当的过渡词
Individual work 独学
• 表示因果关系——therefore，so，thus， accordingly，consequently，as a result
• 表示举例示范——for example，in other words，for instance，that is，that is to say
3. She went there in order to study music.
She went there for the purpose of
studying music.
4. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.
Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.
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丰富的语法结构(Exercises
３弃旧取新:
Ｗe all phoasvseess the same oppchoarntcue.nity
There exariest more opponents.
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It was not until he had read the news in the n6e. wTsopmapaenrdtMhaatryhleikkenseinwgiwnghasot nhgasd.(h使ap用pe倒ne装d.）
Individual work 独学
• 表示因果关系——therefore，so，thus， accordingly，consequently，as a result
• 表示举例示范——for example，in other words，for instance，that is，that is to say
3. She went there in order to study music.
She went there for the purpose of
studying music.
4. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.
Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.
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丰富的语法结构(Exercises
３弃旧取新:
Ｗe all phoasvseess the same oppchoarntcue.nity
There exariest more opponents.
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It was not until he had read the news in the n6e. wTsopmapaenrdtMhaatryhleikkenseinwgiwnghasot nhgasd.(h使ap用pe倒ne装d.）
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高考英语写作指导课课件
A good composition
content structurelanguage
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
2020/3/7
DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content:
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
2020/3/7
总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
2020/3/7
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1 • adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest_h_e_l_d___in our school.(12 山东)
2020/3/7
3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句) _W__h_a_t_s_u_r_p_r_i_s_es__h_im___is__th_a_t____ the little girl knows so many things.
content structurelanguage
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
2020/3/7
DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content:
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
2020/3/7
总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
2020/3/7
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1 • adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest_h_e_l_d___in our school.(12 山东)
2020/3/7
3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句) _W__h_a_t_s_u_r_p_r_i_s_es__h_im___is__th_a_t____ the little girl knows so many things.
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)
二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。
高考英语作文 公开课PPT课件
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• The English newspaper in our school is going to publish a passage which introduces American festivals and customs as well as American students' life style in the column called Foreign Culture. I wonder if you can write a 400-word article for me. If you are interested in it, you can post your work to me before June 28th, which is the deadline. If your work is accepted, you can get paid for your hard work. (75words)
• 要点如下： • 1、栏目介绍 • 2、稿件内容 • 3、稿件长度：约400字 • 4、交稿日期：6月28日前
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who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 1 I'm very glad to represent our school's newspaper, “Foreign Culture” to invite you to write us an article. (邱李涛)
• 2 If possible, I hope the passage could cover about 400 words and you can send it to me before June 28th. (方钦豪)
• 3 By the way, I wish you can finish it before June 28th. Thanks a million and best wishes! (庄之涵)
• The English newspaper in our school is going to publish a passage which introduces American festivals and customs as well as American students' life style in the column called Foreign Culture. I wonder if you can write a 400-word article for me. If you are interested in it, you can post your work to me before June 28th, which is the deadline. If your work is accepted, you can get paid for your hard work. (75words)
• 要点如下： • 1、栏目介绍 • 2、稿件内容 • 3、稿件长度：约400字 • 4、交稿日期：6月28日前
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who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 1 I'm very glad to represent our school's newspaper, “Foreign Culture” to invite you to write us an article. (邱李涛)
• 2 If possible, I hope the passage could cover about 400 words and you can send it to me before June 28th. (方钦豪)
• 3 By the way, I wish you can finish it before June 28th. Thanks a million and best wishes! (庄之涵)
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
Voice
Language use
02
03
04
01
Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
01
Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
02
Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument
Language use
02
03
04
01
Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
01
Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
02
Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument
高考英语 书面表达英语话题写作 语言学习 课件(共26张PPT)
Wish you success. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
第五步，仔细检查，工整书写。
四、课外作业
假定你是高一新生李华，在学习英语过程中 遇到了困难。请用英语给English Weekly 的 编辑写一封邮件，主要内容如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.遇到的困难； 3.希望得到建议和帮助
• 结构4. v-ing 作主语
• 掌握英语意味着我们可以通过一个新的窗 口看世界。
• Mastering English means that we can see the world through a new window.
• 结构5. (more…பைடு நூலகம்han…)
• 就学习英语而言，词汇，在某种程度上， 要比语法更加重要。
I would be grateful if I could get your reply. Best wishes,
Li Hua
Wish you success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
［导练］ 第一步，认真审题，明确要求。 体裁：书信 人称：第一、二人称 时态：以一般现在时为主 要点：英语学习的意义、方法
第二步，列出要点，以免遗漏。 1.开头引入 (not good at English)
2.英语学习的意义(international language; important part in our life; learn it well)
have some difficulty in leaning English and hope you can give me some advice.
In English class, I find it very difficult to follow my teacher because of the poor listening. Also, I can’t remember the words clearly.
第五步，仔细检查，工整书写。
四、课外作业
假定你是高一新生李华，在学习英语过程中 遇到了困难。请用英语给English Weekly 的 编辑写一封邮件，主要内容如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.遇到的困难； 3.希望得到建议和帮助
• 结构4. v-ing 作主语
• 掌握英语意味着我们可以通过一个新的窗 口看世界。
• Mastering English means that we can see the world through a new window.
• 结构5. (more…பைடு நூலகம்han…)
• 就学习英语而言，词汇，在某种程度上， 要比语法更加重要。
I would be grateful if I could get your reply. Best wishes,
Li Hua
Wish you success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
［导练］ 第一步，认真审题，明确要求。 体裁：书信 人称：第一、二人称 时态：以一般现在时为主 要点：英语学习的意义、方法
第二步，列出要点，以免遗漏。 1.开头引入 (not good at English)
2.英语学习的意义(international language; important part in our life; learn it well)
have some difficulty in leaning English and hope you can give me some advice.
In English class, I find it very difficult to follow my teacher because of the poor listening. Also, I can’t remember the words clearly.
高考英语作文技巧(21张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
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常用句子
• It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome. • These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our
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• I think • I firmly believe that … • In my opinion, • Personally speaking,… • As far as I am concerned, … • From my point of view, ….
表达个人观点的用语
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How to summarize an argumentation
Skill: 议论三步法 论点—观点 主题句 论据— （事例）
结论
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典型模板
评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点. 2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点) 3. 归纳得出作者的结论. 4. a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对) 5. b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
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高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
高考英语写作指导课课件
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二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
•adj.令人惊奇的 • surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
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二、感知典型范例
——句型层面1
• 他昨天下午来的。
1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday
• 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好):(16-20分)
• 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
• 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
• 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
• 4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所 致。
• 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
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总结:什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点,即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰:分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来,我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
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二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
• adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
afternoon. 3. Not until yesterday afternoon did he
come here. 4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came
here.
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Step1 .Analyzing the task
【审题——抓准信息· 快速推断】
项目 体裁 话题
结论 书信（给_编__辑_一__封__信_）_
以“文明出国旅游”为主题
时态 人称
一般现__在_时__为_主_及__情_态__动_词_的_ 应用 __第__一_人__称__为_主___
Step2. Finding out the main points and forming sentences
outline composition writing, the proof and the rational cloze.
What is a good writing？
Content:
* everything needed included which is related to your view.( 内容要完整)
行为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。
【遣词】 1.代表国家形象：represent our country 2.注意：be cautious about 3.只有这样：only in this way
【造句】 more importantly, we should bear in mind that we are ____r_e_p_r_e_s_e_n_ti_n_g__o_u_r_c_o_u_nwtrhyile abroad, so we need to___b_e__c_a_u_ti_o_u_s_a_b_ohuotw we act, ___o_n_l_y_i_n_tchains wweay enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.
avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that _q_u_e_u_e__ju_m__p_i_n_g_is unacceptable in many countries。
第3段：向社会呼吁【结尾6分】
【信息】呼吁大家做文明游客
【点拨】适度发挥, 以使文章符合逻辑 【运用】我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意自己的
By Wang Yinghui March 15th,2016
Learning Aims
1.Learn to write an outline composition. 2.Develop a good writing habit —
analyze — organize — polish. 3.Develop the abilities to solving the
【定点——把握要点，遣词造句】
第1段：点明话题—出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为【引入6分】 【信息】每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起 了社会关注。 【遣词】1. 假日游客: holidaymaker
2.出国旅游观光: go abroad for sightsee明行为: behave rudely
(云南省第二次统测)每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不 文明行为引起了社会关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文 明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请给报社 专栏编辑写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：
1.尊重习俗； 2.不高声喧哗；
3.其它。 注意:词数100~120个,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
4.引起了社会关注: cause a big concern
【造句】Every year, a great many holidaymakersgo abroad for sightseeing and relaxation ,while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big .concern
* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
How to write a composition
Six steps to write a composition ① Analyzing the task ②Finding out the main points ③Thinking of key points/phrases ④Forming sentences ⑤Combining the sentences into a passage ⑥Copying normally
【造句】 In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must_r_e_sp__ec_t__a_n_d_f_o_ll_o_w__l_o_ca_l_c_u_s_t_o_m__s, Besides, we’d better n_o_t_t_a_l_k_l_o_u_d_ly__i_n_p_u_b_l_ic__p_la_c_e_s_to
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
* Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)
第2段：针对不文明行为三条建议【作文重点12分】
【信息】1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。
【点拨】扩充要点, 使文章条理
【运用】 建议注意自己的行为。首先，尊重习俗；其次，不高声
喧哗，再次，插队是不被接受的。
【遣词】1.尊重习俗：respect and follow local customs 2.高声喧哗：talk loudly in public places 3.插队：queue jumping