新高考英语写作Writing公开课课件

1.应该学会平衡分配时间。 2.熬夜不利于白天听课的效果。 3. ……
the first impression！
para1 para2
para3
Structure:
1.several parts √
Structure:
1. several parts √
___________________________ __
on studying.
tip2． Use compound and complex sentences
It is known to us. Staying up late will naturally affect the next day’s performance in class. →As is known to us , staying up late will naturally affect the next day’s performance in class.
新高考英语写作
Writing
listening
speaking
reading
four skills
writing
Learning Objectives: 1.Get to know the factors contributing to a good writing. 2.Be able to revise a writing by using these factors.
language:
1.Variation of words√ 2.Variation of phrases√
For variation of
words and phrases
(2tips)
tip1．fresh and not overused words 1.With the College Entrance Examinations capopmroinacgh, ing the senior three students are focusing much more on studying.
Two Rules:
• 1.You learn to write by writing. • 2. There is no good writing; only good
rewriting.
重庆高考英语写作评分标准(criteria)
档次
评分细则
第五档 -完全完成了试题规定的任务。
次（很 好）；
-覆盖所有内容要点。
(21-25 -应用较多的语法结构和词汇。
分)
-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂
结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
(1)It is known to us that… (2)What is known to us is that…
Tip2.Use compound and complex sentences
The examinations are only 200 days ahead, so it’s high time they made good use of every minute. for, while, not only…but also, and, both…and, or, either…or…, neither…nor, …
A good handwriting counts a lot!
Challenge Yourself!
Writing 2 如今许多家长因为工作繁忙而无暇顾及孩子，于是 就选择用物质来奖励孩子在学习上的进步很成就。 请以“Reward the children with money or not ” 为题，写一篇120词左右的英文短文，谈谈你对这一 现象的看法。 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.标题已为你写出，不计入总词数。
Reward the Children with Money or Not
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later, in the end, eventuall递y,进关系：in addition,
since then, afterwards furthermore, still less,
on the one ha1n.vdar…iatoionntohf ewoortdhs√er
…
hand, to make matters worse,
(1)I have _m__a_d_e__u_p__m__y__m__in_d_ to study English
better this term.(同义词decided)
(2)We will t_a_k_e__ the matter i_n_t_o__a_c_c_o_u__n_t______
(同义词consider)
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
structure
several parts topic sentence
A good writing
content
all points covered
language
words phrases variation sentences
Writing 1 好题展示 是否熬夜
It is minocrreeasnidngmlyore difficult to find jobs in China nowadays.
Tip. Phrases come first
Firstly the quietness in the night will rbersinuglt in
better effectiveness.
2.topic sentences√
_________________ _____________________
√
Point1 Point3 Point4 Point5
Point2
Content:
Covering all points √
√
先后顺序： to begin with，first, then, language:
5.Is there a variation of words and phrases? △
Language 6.Are various sentence patterns used?
△
7.Are there any mistakes?
△
handwriting
△
Assignment: 百度文库inish revising the whole writing
/consideration
language:
1.Variation of wor√ds 2.Variation of phra√ses
3.Variation of
sentences √
For variation of
sentences
(3 tips)
tip1．Use phrases to replace sentences
As the College Entrance Examinations approach,
(1)With the College Entrance Examinations approaching,
(prepositional phrase)
(2)The College Entrance Examinations approaching,
Checklist
1.Is the writing divided into parts?
Structure
2.Are there any topic sentences?
√ or △
√
√
Content 3.Are all the points clearly stated?
△
4.Does the writer use any transitional words? √
(absolute construction)
(3)Facing the approach of the College Entrance Examinations,
(non-finite verb)
the senior three students are focusing on much more
① 到了高三， 同学们对学习的重视度陡增。
② 很多同学开始熬夜学习，班主任注意到了这个问题，
开班会让大家讨论熬夜学习的利弊。请你根据以下
内容报告一下大家讨论的结果，并谈谈你自己的看法。
③赞成者 ④反对者 ⑤自己的看法
1.夜里安静，学习效果更好。 2.时间紧迫必须充分利用时间。 3.同学都在熬，自己不熬心里慌。
转折w关or系se：sbtiullt,, on(ttrhaensciotinontraal rwyo,rds)
nevertheless，yet, otherwise, despite,
in spite of, regardless of ,
表观点：in my opinion, in my view, from my point of view, as for me, personally …
(spelling & grammatical
Summary:
Checklist
Is the writing divided into parts?
Structure
Are there any topic sentences? Content Are all the points clearly stated?
tip23．eye-catching structures
1).A heated discussion_w_a_s h_e_ld_to argue about the
advantages and disadvantages of it. (passive voice)
2) So_it_’s_h_ig_h_ti_m_e_th_e_y_m_a_d_e good use of every minute.
(subjunctive mood)
3)O_n_ly_b_y_d_o_in_g_s_o _ca_n_w_e really make progress.
(inversion)
Writing 1
1.Good handwr√iting 2.Good structure√ 3.Good content √ 4.Good language√ 5.No mistakes √
Does the writer use any transitional words? Is there a variation of words and phrases? Language Are various sentence patterns used?
Are there any mistakes?