2015届高考英语二轮语法复习训练《短文改错》

第五部分写作专题一短文改错Ⅰ.体验高考(2014·浙江卷)I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.答案I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I noticed that the carriagewas and filled with people.Before long，a train inspector to check our tickets.A passenger realizedhe couldn't find his ticket became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriagebegan searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat severalrows from owner.The person who found ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had spoken to or even noticed theticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the their help.If wecould show concern to others need，the world would be a better place to live in.Ⅱ.仿真、模拟Passage 1What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley.It's a brief or excellent article about credit cards.The author explains what credit cards work.And he also points out the positive and negative aspect for having it.American consumers are mostly likely to use credit cards.However，the use of credit cards are expanding into almost every country in world.The key point making by the author is that users should pay for the amount in full when a bill is sent from the credit card company.This protected all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards.答案What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley.It's a briefexcellent article about credit cards.The author explains creditcards work.And he also points out the positive and negative for having.American consumers are likely to use credit cards.However，theuse of credit cards expanding into almost every country in world.Thekey point by the author is that users should pay the amount in fullwhen a bill is sent from the credit card company.This all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards.Passage 2After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning，I phoned to my classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon.Before the film was over，we returned to school to do our lessons.While we are having a rest in the corridor，I saw Mr Liu，my China teacher.He told me that we had made some progresses in English，but myChinese lagged behind，especially my Chinese composition.He suggested I should read more and keeping a diary every day.In the evening my father told me thatreading newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing.That was really good idea! What they said was quite right，and I should follow their advice.答案After “English TV” last Sunday morning，I phoned myclassmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon. thefilm was over，we returned to school to do our lessons.While we having ahad rest in the corridor，I saw Mr Liu，my teacher.He told me that weImade some in English，but my Chinese lagged behind，especially myChinese composition.He suggested I should read more and a diary everyday.In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do mefor improving composition writing.That was really good idea! What they said was quite right，and I should follow their advice.Passage 3I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two week ago.I have been thinking about a question you asked me.In my opinion，you should come back after finish your studies abroad.For one reason，that you are studying is bad needed nowadays in our country.It will be quite easy for you find a good job.In fact，I knew a few big companies in our city hope to hire people like you.For another one reason，I think it will be more convenient for you to look after your parents but they are getting old.But this is only my point of view.It is up for you to make a right choice.答案I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two ago.I havebeen thinking about question you asked me.In my opinion，you shouldcome back after your studies abroad.For one reason，you arestudying is needed nowadays in our country.It will be quite easy for youfind a good job.In fact，I a few big companies in our city hope to hirepeople like you.For another reason，I think it will be more convenient foryou to look after your parents they are getting old.But this is only my point ofview.It is up you to make a right choice.Passage 4This morning I found red wallet on the campus.Girls usual like red，so I believed the wallet was belonged to a girl student.I opened it，try to find out whose it was.Therefore，I found nothing but 300 yuan in it.I was wondering what to do with it while suddenly my classmates Chen Yang passed by.She suggested she put up a Lost and Found notice and I did so.I wrote down my telephone number and ask the owner to call me after she saw ter，a girl came to claim it on 3 o'clock this afternoon.答案This morning I found red wallet on the campus.Girls like red，soI believed the wallet belonged to a girl student.I opened it，to findout whose it was.，I found nothing but 300 yuan in it.I was wonderingwhat to do with it suddenly my Chen Yang passed by.Shesuggested put up a Lost and Found notice and I did so.I wrote down mytelephone number and the owner to call me after she saw ter，a girlcame to claim it 3 o'clock this afternoon.Passage 5Last Saturday，our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit the children at a local orphanage.We took many books that was popular among children，as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys，to children.They were delighted to receive these gift.We played some games together and give performances.Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.That day，each one of us had an enjoyable time.We gave the children their care and help；for return，they gave us their smiles and love.These voluntary activities made a deeply impression on us.答案Last Saturday，our school organized all of the Senior 1 students to visitthe children at a local orphanage.We took many books that popular amongchildren，as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys，to children.Theywere delighted to receive these .We played some games together andperformances.Before the orphanage we took photos with them and gavethem our contact details we could keep in touch with one another.That day，each one of us had an enjoyable time.We gave the childrencare and help；return，they gave us their smiles and love.These voluntaryactivities made a impression on us.Passage 6I as well as my family are going to New York City this weekend.I had been looking forward to go there for a long time.It is one of the modernest city in the world.There have also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can't learn it in school.I'd also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building.Unfortunately，the twin towers destroyed on September 11th,2001 and I would have the chance to see them by myself.Now I am getting ready for the excited trip.I bet it will be a unforgettable experience.答案I as well as my family going to New York City this weekend.I beenlooking forward to there for a long time.It is one of the modernestin the world.There also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can'tlearn in school.I'd also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building.Unfortunately，the twin towers destroyed on September 11th，2001I would have the chance to see them by myself.Now I am getting ready for thetrip.I bet it will be unforgettable experience.。