基础写作作文课件---简介地方
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基础写作之地点介绍 课件
Writing suggestions
审题：文体，主体时态和人称； 考虑篇章结构; 确定要点，写出相关英语词语； 根据所列词语，写出句子(表达变化)； 连句成篇，恰当使用过渡词语和适当
增加细节。
Hainan Island
When you come to Hainan, the second largest island in China, you will find it mild all the year round and the places of interest there are really a feast for eyes.
People there get many ways to earn their living, for example, growing rice, fishing and so on. Tourism is also developing fast with its vast coastline and natural harbors.
It covers an area of 35,000 square kilometers with a history of over 6000 years. The population of it is 7.11 million, which consists of 10 ere is mild all the year around. 四季温和
常用语句：useful expression
5.其他（other things）
transportation convenient
economy
prosperous
environment harmonious
高考一轮复习 地点介绍类说明文 课件(11PPT)
化为一体的旅游区。
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注意： 1．词数：120左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．参考词汇：圣地resort
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Magical Mount Wutai ①Mount Wutai is located in the city of Xinzhou, in the northeast of Shaanxi Province. ②It's one of the world's five famous Buddhist Holy Lands. ③Mount Wutai mainly consists of five peaks and their tops are as flat as a pancake, after which they were named “Mount Wutai”. ④The peaks are covered with ice all the year round, so the weather is cool in summer. ⑤That is why it is a famous summer resort. ⑥The five peaks are all beautiful and each has its own special features.
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技法指导
本模块的写作任务是写一篇介绍某个景点或某旅游胜地 的文章，这种类型的文章属于地点介绍类说明文。写此类文 章应注意以下几点：
1．写作内容通常包括地理位置、面积、人口、气候特征、 历史、特产等。也可适当融入人文风貌，简单介绍该地区的 民间风俗及人们的生活方式等，但要抓住该地的主要特征， 描写详略得当，不可面面俱到。
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2．写作时要遵循一定的顺序。描写时找准切入点， 再由这个点展开(时间或空间顺序)，过渡要自然，适当使 用过渡性连词或过渡句。
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注意： 1．词数：120左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．参考词汇：圣地resort
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Magical Mount Wutai ①Mount Wutai is located in the city of Xinzhou, in the northeast of Shaanxi Province. ②It's one of the world's five famous Buddhist Holy Lands. ③Mount Wutai mainly consists of five peaks and their tops are as flat as a pancake, after which they were named “Mount Wutai”. ④The peaks are covered with ice all the year round, so the weather is cool in summer. ⑤That is why it is a famous summer resort. ⑥The five peaks are all beautiful and each has its own special features.
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技法指导
本模块的写作任务是写一篇介绍某个景点或某旅游胜地 的文章，这种类型的文章属于地点介绍类说明文。写此类文 章应注意以下几点：
1．写作内容通常包括地理位置、面积、人口、气候特征、 历史、特产等。也可适当融入人文风貌，简单介绍该地区的 民间风俗及人们的生活方式等，但要抓住该地的主要特征， 描写详略得当，不可面面俱到。
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2．写作时要遵循一定的顺序。描写时找准切入点， 再由这个点展开(时间或空间顺序)，过渡要自然，适当使 用过渡性连词或过渡句。
习作一介绍自己的家乡课件
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总结与展望
对家乡的印象和感受
总结词
温馨的回忆
详细描述
家乡是我成长的地方，充满了许多温馨的回忆。那里有我熟悉的人和事，有我曾经玩耍 的田野和河流，有我曾经品尝过的美食和喝过的茶。这些回忆让我感到无比幸福和满足
。
对家乡的印象和感受
总结词
深厚的情感纽带
详细描述
家乡是我与亲人和朋友之间深厚的情感纽带 。在那里，我结交了许多知心朋友，他们陪 我度过了许多难忘的时光。即使现在我已经 离开了家乡，但与亲人和朋友的联系依然紧 密，这种情感纽带是我永远无法割舍的。
02 自然景观
山水风光
总结词
描述家乡的山水风光，包括山峰、河 流、湖泊等自然景观的特点和美丽之 处。
详细描述
我的家乡坐落在一片群山环抱之中， 山峰连绵起伏，峰峦秀丽。山间溪流 潺潺，清澈见底。湖泊如镜，倒映着 蓝天白云和周围的山色，景色宜人。
植物动物
要点一
总结词
介绍家乡的植物和动物资源，包括常见的植物、动物种类 及其生态特点。
我的家乡是一个历史悠久的城市，有着丰富的文化底蕴和历史遗迹。这里曾经是古 代丝绸之路的重要节点之一，也是中国的重要港口城市之一。
历史背景
我的家乡有着悠久的历史，可以追溯 到几千年前。这里曾经是古代丝绸之 路的重要节点之一，也是中国的重要 港口城市之一。
我的家乡在中国近现代史上也扮演着 重要的角色。这里曾经是革命的重要 发源地之一，也是中国改革开放的重 要窗口之一。
要点二
详细描述
在我们的家乡，四季分明，植物生长茂盛。春天，漫山遍 野的花朵竞相开放，五彩斑斓。夏天，绿树成荫，为人们 提供避暑胜地。秋天，丰收的季节，果园里硕果累累。冬 天，白雪皑皑，银装素裹，宛如童话世界。在家乡的田野 、山林间，生活着各种动物，如野兔、松鼠、鸟类等，它 们与自然和谐共处，构成了一幅生动的生态画卷。
高考英语作文地方介绍(共30张PPT)
1.某地+lies in/is situated in/is located in the+方位+of. 北京位于中国的北方。
Beijing lies in/is situated in/is located in the north of China. 2.Lying in/Situated in/Located in the+方位+ of+地名 /neighboring+地名, 某地+谓语（分词作状语） 北京位于中国的北方是一个漂亮的地方。
3. 夏季炎热多雨，冬季寒冷干燥。 4. 历史悠久，是旅游胜地，有很多著名文化古迹如紫
禁城(Forbidden City)，颐和园，(the Summer Palace)长城等。每年都吸引众多世界各地游客。
[写作要求]
1. 介绍必须包括所有要点。
① Beijing, situated in the northeast of China, is
4) It is no wonder that every year an increasing number of people come to visit it.
写作训练：请介绍我国首都北京。
[写作内容]
1. 北京，位于中国东北部，是中国的首都，全国的政 治、文化中心。
2. 全市面积一万六千多平方公里，人口1400余万， 是全国第二大城市。
west of the lake.
1. 日本在中国的东方. 2. 新教学楼坐落在学校的中央。 3. 中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。
1. 日本在中国的东方. Japan is/lies to the east of China.
基础写作----地点描写(共21张PPT)
history of over 20 years , it 4_w_a__s_r_e_b__u_il_t_(build) in
2008. When 5_w__a_l_k_in_g__(walk) through the garden,
you can see 6_v_a_r_io__u_s__(vary) kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs. Not only 7_c_a_n__/d__o_e_s the
实战演练二
◆Rewrite the following passage:
Our Zengcheng lies to the west of Guangzhou . It
has a population of 800,000. It covers an area of about
1,741square kilometres . It has a a warm climate and
be rich in place(s) of interest
Task1: Correct or rewrite(改写)the following sentences, and then give explanations by the students whose answers are right. (1-3 by group1-4; 4-5 by group5-9)
5. Our school has a botanical garden and it has
an area of about 1000 square metres and it is
located at the south-west corner of our
2008. When 5_w__a_l_k_in_g__(walk) through the garden,
you can see 6_v_a_r_io__u_s__(vary) kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs. Not only 7_c_a_n__/d__o_e_s the
实战演练二
◆Rewrite the following passage:
Our Zengcheng lies to the west of Guangzhou . It
has a population of 800,000. It covers an area of about
1,741square kilometres . It has a a warm climate and
be rich in place(s) of interest
Task1: Correct or rewrite(改写)the following sentences, and then give explanations by the students whose answers are right. (1-3 by group1-4; 4-5 by group5-9)
5. Our school has a botanical garden and it has
an area of about 1000 square metres and it is
located at the south-west corner of our
作文指导ppt我的家乡
动植物资源及其特点
动物
家乡拥有丰富的动物资源，如奔跑的 鹿群、翱翔的苍鹰等，它们与人们和 谐共处，共同构成了生态家园。
植物
茂密的森林、碧绿的草地和五彩斑斓 的花海，为家乡披上了美丽的外衣。 这些植物不仅美化了环境，还为人们 提供了丰富的食材和药材。
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讲述家乡人文风情
民俗习惯与传统节日
春节
贴春联、放鞭炮、舞龙舞狮、吃 年夜饭、压岁钱等独特的风俗习
活力。
秋季
丰收的季节，金黄的麦 田、硕果累累的果园， 构成一幅美丽的画卷。
冬季
银装素裹，白雪皑皑， 宁静而祥和。
山水田园之美
山
家乡的山峰层峦叠嶂，云雾缭绕，仿 佛仙境一般。
水
田园
广袤的田野上，金黄的麦浪翻滚，稻 香四溢，展现Biblioteka 家乡人民的辛勤付出 和丰收的喜悦。
清澈的小溪、碧绿的湖泊和壮观的瀑 布，为家乡增添了无限生机与活力。
惯。
中秋节
赏月、吃月饼、提灯笼等富有诗 意的传统习俗。
端午节
赛龙舟、吃粽子、挂艾草等丰富 多彩的节庆活动。
民间艺术与手工艺品
剪纸
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用剪刀或刻刀在纸上剪刻花纹，用于装点生活空间，寓意吉祥
如意。
皮影戏
02
以兽皮或纸板做成的人物剪影来表演故事的民间戏剧，具有浓
厚的乡土气息。
刺绣
03
古代女子必备的手艺之一，以丝线、棉线在布帛上绣出各种图
工业产业
引进先进技术和设备，推动工业结构调整和优化升级，提高工业 竞争力。
服务业
发展旅游、物流、金融等现代服务业，促进经济多元化发展。
教育医疗等社会事业进步
教育事业
加大教育投入，改善办学条件，提高教育质量，培养更多优秀人 才。
基础写作指导_地点介绍
基础写作指导－地点介绍介绍某个地方是基础写作常考的一种题型,它涉及到_________________________________________________________ 等几个方面。
一、介绍某个地方常用的短语和句型：1.Location(位置):位于________________________________________________________________位于…的东边________________________________________________________被…所环绕________________________________________________________离…(不)远_______________________________________________________在…的中央_________________________________________________________ 2.Size(面积): _________________________________________________________占地…3.History(历史):有着一个…的历史_____________________________________________________4.Population(人口):人口是…__________________________________________________________5.Climate(气候):常年温暖如春_______________________________________________________天气变幻莫测______________________________________________________6.Scenery(风景):是著名的度暑胜地__________________________________________________有迷人的风景_______________________________________________________有很多著名的名胜古迹____________________________________________7 Transport (交通):…非常方便_____________________________________________________________坐公车从…到…要…时间______________________________________________就在附近… _____________________________________________________________二、Practice:Translate the following sentences:1、这寺庙耸立在高山之巅，它经历了许多历史的变迁。
基础写作之地方介绍(公开课)
Area
• 全市总面积约5240平方公里。 • · · ·covers/takes up an area of· · · • The whole city takes up an area of about 5,240 square kilometers.
Population
• • • • • 揭阳总人口508多万。 · · ·has a large/small population. · · ·has a population of · · · The population of · · ·is · · · Jieyang has a population of 5,080,000.
History
• 揭阳是粤东古邑，已有2200余年的历史。 • · · ·has a long history of · · · years. • · · ·is a place /country with a history of · · ·years. • Jieyang is an ancient city in East Guangdong with a long history of more than 2200 years.
1.Jieyang is/lies/is located in the southeast of Guangdong, with Shantou and Chaozhou on the east and Shanwei on the west. 2.The whole city takes up an area of about 5,240 square kilometers. 3.Jieyang has a population of 5,080,000. 4.Jieyang is an ancient city with a long history of more than 2200 years. 5.Jieyang has its own culture and customs, such as Kongfu tea and Yingge Dance. 6.There are many tourist attractions in Jieyang, such as Huangqi Mountain ，Chenghuang Temple and Temple of Confucius. 7.They attract many tourists both at home and abroad. 8.Jieyang is famous for its specialities, such as bamboo shoots and longans.
英语写作--地点介绍 PPT课件
• 名胜：
• • • •
place of interest 名胜古迹，名胜风景 with many tourist attractions 有许多旅游景点 Be famous for … 以…而闻名 Be famous as… 作为……而闻名
以下是关于温哥华的介绍
位置
文化 人口 地理 气候
加拿大西部
How to introduce a place in English?
Writing :
基础写作---地点介绍专题
• 基础写作---地点介绍
• 地点简介是指对某一国家、地区、 城市、场所、景点等的简介。
• 介绍的内容包括其地理位置，人口， 面积，气候，环境，物产，历史， 评价等。常用的短语句式有：
• 面积 • with an area of … 面积有… • is ….. in area面积有…
• 中国陆地面积约960万平方千米。2 ways • China is a country with an area of about 9.6 million square kilometers . • China is about 9.6 million square kilometers in area .
• 气候 the climate is warm/cold/wet /cool ..气候……
• 鹤山不冷也不热，全年温和湿润。 • The climate in Heshan is • neither too cold nor too hot, warm and wet all year round.
• 历史： • With/ has a history of 有……的历史
• 中国是一个有着5000年历史的国家。(2 ways) • China is a country with a long history of more than 5000 years. • China has a history of more than 5000 years.
基础写作--地方介绍
基础写作—地方介绍1. 表示位置Fujian Province lies in the southeast of China. 福建省位于中国的东南部。
On the top of the mountain lies a temple. 山顶有一座庙。
The teaching building is located at the back of the school. 教学楼坐落于校园的后面。
2. 表示历史The city has a history of more than 1,000 years. 这个城市有1000多年历史。
The city with a history of more than 1,000 years is our pride. 这座有1000多年历史的城市是我们的骄傲。
3. 表示面积The new square will cover an area of 100,000 square meters. 新广场将占地100000平方米。
A new school with an area of more than 200,000 square meters will be set up. 一所占地200000平方米的新学校将被建设起来。
4. 表示人口Shanghai has a population of more than 2,000,000. 上海人口超过二千万。
5. 表示“是……之乡/乐土”This region is the home of many species of wild flower. 这一地区是多种野花的家园。
The land flowing （流趟）with milk and honey is no longer there. 曾经的“鱼米之乡”不复存在。
The Rockies are home to some bears. 落基山脉中有熊生长。
The countryside in the north is hospitable to such fruits. 北方的乡下适宜这些水果的生长。
基础写作--地方介绍市公开课获奖课件省名师示范课获奖课件
一所占地200,000 平方米旳新学校将被建设起来。
A new school with an area of more than 200,000 square meters will be set up.
4．表达人口 上海人口超出二千万。 Shanghai has a population of more than 20,000,000（20 million）.
Surrounded by the sea, it enjoys/has the reputation of “the City on Water”. 非谓语短语做原因状语
Venice, located in the northeast of Italy, is the main port city of Italy. It has a population of nearly 70,000. TThhee hhiissttoorryy ooff tthhee cciittyy ggooeess back over 700 years when a group of refugees settled on a small island earliest. Venice has many famous tourist attractions, such as the Grand Canal, the Governor House, the Bridge of Sighs and so on. The city is surrounded by the sea so it is called “the City on Water”.
in the beginning/end at the beginning/end of the 20th century
A new school with an area of more than 200,000 square meters will be set up.
4．表达人口 上海人口超出二千万。 Shanghai has a population of more than 20,000,000（20 million）.
Surrounded by the sea, it enjoys/has the reputation of “the City on Water”. 非谓语短语做原因状语
Venice, located in the northeast of Italy, is the main port city of Italy. It has a population of nearly 70,000. TThhee hhiissttoorryy ooff tthhee cciittyy ggooeess back over 700 years when a group of refugees settled on a small island earliest. Venice has many famous tourist attractions, such as the Grand Canal, the Governor House, the Bridge of Sighs and so on. The city is surrounded by the sea so it is called “the City on Water”.
in the beginning/end at the beginning/end of the 20th century
英语写作地方介绍ppt课件
-- How to Introduce a Place
基础写作
1
Reading and discussion
1. 地点介绍通常写哪几方面的情况 (写作要点)?
2. 地点介绍常用的词汇和句型有什么?
2
Australia
• Located in the smallest continent—Oceania,
5.The beautiful town _is__lo_c_a_t_e_d(locate) to/ on the west of the lake.
6
Ⅱ.人口
句型: 1_._T__h_e_c_i_ty__h_a_s_a__la_r_g_e__p_o_p_u_la_t_i_o_n_o_f_… . 2_._T_h__e_p_o_p_u_l_a_t_io_n__o_f_…__is_…___. _______ 3_._T_h_e__p_o_p_u_la_t_i_o_n_i_n_c_r_e_a_s_e_s_/ _d_e_c_re_a_s_es…; 4_._T_h__e_p_o_p_u_l_a_t_io_n__h_a_s_g_r_o_w__n_t_o_…__.__ 5_._T_h__e_c_i_ty_,_w_i_t_h_a__p_o__u_la_t_i_o_n_o_f_…__, _is_ …
Fill in the blanks
1.Australia ＿ha＿s ＿a ＿po＿pu＿la＿tio＿n＿of＿about 20 million.
2.China is a developing country,w＿it＿h a＿p＿op＿u＿la＿tio＿n of
1300 million.
3.＿T＿he＿p＿op＿ul＿at＿io＿n in this city is increasing year by
基础写作
1
Reading and discussion
1. 地点介绍通常写哪几方面的情况 (写作要点)?
2. 地点介绍常用的词汇和句型有什么?
2
Australia
• Located in the smallest continent—Oceania,
5.The beautiful town _is__lo_c_a_t_e_d(locate) to/ on the west of the lake.
6
Ⅱ.人口
句型: 1_._T__h_e_c_i_ty__h_a_s_a__la_r_g_e__p_o_p_u_la_t_i_o_n_o_f_… . 2_._T_h__e_p_o_p_u_l_a_t_io_n__o_f_…__is_…___. _______ 3_._T_h_e__p_o_p_u_la_t_i_o_n_i_n_c_r_e_a_s_e_s_/ _d_e_c_re_a_s_es…; 4_._T_h__e_p_o_p_u_l_a_t_io_n__h_a_s_g_r_o_w__n_t_o_…__.__ 5_._T_h__e_c_i_ty_,_w_i_t_h_a__p_o__u_la_t_i_o_n_o_f_…__, _is_ …
Fill in the blanks
1.Australia ＿ha＿s ＿a ＿po＿pu＿la＿tio＿n＿of＿about 20 million.
2.China is a developing country,w＿it＿h a＿p＿op＿u＿la＿tio＿n of
1300 million.
3.＿T＿he＿p＿op＿ul＿at＿io＿n in this city is increasing year by
基础写作----地点描写(共21张PPT)
基础写作----地点描写(共21张PPT)
基础写作----地点描写(共21张PPT)
Task4--- Revision Of Expressions Of Describing
A Place 位置：主+ is located /lies /is in(内)/to(外)/on(邻)/off(岛)
located /lying ….(定语/状语) ----必须有主句
Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden has an area of about 1000 square metres.
基础写作----地点描写(共21张PPT)
Task 2: Fill in the blanks and exchange the 基础写作----地点描写(共21张PPT) answers in your group , and then give explanations by the students whose answers are right .
Task 5: Practice (实战演练) 1)实战演练一: (分组完成→对换修改→老师点评
→投影参考答案) A: 用一句话表达以下句子 (By Group5-9)
香港, 被誉为“东方之珠”(the Pearl of the east )。 它位于中国的东南部。占地面积为1104 平方公里。
① Well known as “ the Pearl of the east”, Hong
1. Located at the south-west corner of our
school, the botanical garden which covers an
基础写作----地点描写(共21张PPT)
Task4--- Revision Of Expressions Of Describing
A Place 位置：主+ is located /lies /is in(内)/to(外)/on(邻)/off(岛)
located /lying ….(定语/状语) ----必须有主句
Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden has an area of about 1000 square metres.
基础写作----地点描写(共21张PPT)
Task 2: Fill in the blanks and exchange the 基础写作----地点描写(共21张PPT) answers in your group , and then give explanations by the students whose answers are right .
Task 5: Practice (实战演练) 1)实战演练一: (分组完成→对换修改→老师点评
→投影参考答案) A: 用一句话表达以下句子 (By Group5-9)
香港, 被誉为“东方之珠”(the Pearl of the east )。 它位于中国的东南部。占地面积为1104 平方公里。
① Well known as “ the Pearl of the east”, Hong
1. Located at the south-west corner of our
school, the botanical garden which covers an
写一个地方PPT课件
南京市红山森林动物园真是个好玩的
推荐
地方，我建议大家去看看这些有趣的动物，
写动 物园里的 美食多， 可以简略 地写，这 样推荐理 由就有详 有略了。
了解一下与动物相关的知识。
作文新貌 这儿真是个好地方
南京市红山森林动物园是一个有趣的地方。在那 里，我们可以看到各种各样的动物，了解到关于动物 的有趣知识。
丽江古城以四方街为中心，呈八卦型 放射状延伸，并分出无数条街道，整体形 成网状布局。条条街道有小桥，小桥两边
是人家，桥下有潺潺的流水，这是终年积
雪的玉龙雪山之水渗透到黑龙潭而成的。
水边杨柳垂丝，柳下小桥座座，城内共有
大小桥三百五十四座，可谓城依水存，水
随城在，好一幅“家家溪水绕户转，户户 【引用名句】
中心句 引出下面对 购物商场的 具体描写。
杭州大厦，只不过要带够钱哟！如果你 囊中羞涩，就去龙翔大厦吧，那里物品 齐全，并且物美价廉。
杭州有很多美食。来到这里，你一 定能大饱口福。这里有西湖醋鱼、西湖 藕粉、叫花鸡、东坡肉、桂花糖、龙井 虾仁等美味。知味观的各种小吃，色香 味俱全，不可不尝。临走时记得带些龙
比喻手法 把摇动的苇
尾巴，漂亮极了。
穗比作小狐
诸暨河流环绕，因此家家户户养鸭。 狸摇摆的尾
河里到处是鸭子，每只鸭子都肥肥壮壮 的，毛色油光发亮。它们自由自在、成 群结队地在河里游来游去，所到之处把
巴，形象地 写出了苇穗 的形态。
河道围得水泄不通。有的鸭子还很调皮，
只见一只银灰色的鸭子玩起了叠罗汉， 拟人手法
名师 点评
这篇习作的结构是“总—分—总”。开 头引用俗语点题。中间采用并列段的方法， 从购物、美食、旅游三个方面详细描写了杭 州。互动式结尾，吸引读者来杭州游玩。文 章条理清晰，内容丰富，中心突出。
推荐
地方，我建议大家去看看这些有趣的动物，
写动 物园里的 美食多， 可以简略 地写，这 样推荐理 由就有详 有略了。
了解一下与动物相关的知识。
作文新貌 这儿真是个好地方
南京市红山森林动物园是一个有趣的地方。在那 里，我们可以看到各种各样的动物，了解到关于动物 的有趣知识。
丽江古城以四方街为中心，呈八卦型 放射状延伸，并分出无数条街道，整体形 成网状布局。条条街道有小桥，小桥两边
是人家，桥下有潺潺的流水，这是终年积
雪的玉龙雪山之水渗透到黑龙潭而成的。
水边杨柳垂丝，柳下小桥座座，城内共有
大小桥三百五十四座，可谓城依水存，水
随城在，好一幅“家家溪水绕户转，户户 【引用名句】
中心句 引出下面对 购物商场的 具体描写。
杭州大厦，只不过要带够钱哟！如果你 囊中羞涩，就去龙翔大厦吧，那里物品 齐全，并且物美价廉。
杭州有很多美食。来到这里，你一 定能大饱口福。这里有西湖醋鱼、西湖 藕粉、叫花鸡、东坡肉、桂花糖、龙井 虾仁等美味。知味观的各种小吃，色香 味俱全，不可不尝。临走时记得带些龙
比喻手法 把摇动的苇
尾巴，漂亮极了。
穗比作小狐
诸暨河流环绕，因此家家户户养鸭。 狸摇摆的尾
河里到处是鸭子，每只鸭子都肥肥壮壮 的，毛色油光发亮。它们自由自在、成 群结队地在河里游来游去，所到之处把
巴，形象地 写出了苇穗 的形态。
河道围得水泄不通。有的鸭子还很调皮，
只见一只银灰色的鸭子玩起了叠罗汉， 拟人手法
名师 点评
这篇习作的结构是“总—分—总”。开 头引用俗语点题。中间采用并列段的方法， 从购物、美食、旅游三个方面详细描写了杭 州。互动式结尾，吸引读者来杭州游玩。文 章条理清晰，内容丰富，中心突出。
作文地点描述基础写作.ppt
课型:写作课 教学目标:通过这节的讲授,让学生掌握如 何用英语描写地点. 重点:讲授描写地点的常用词汇及句型. 难点:灵活运用所学词汇及句型写一篇短 文. 教学方法: 归纳演绎法
Describing a place
When you want to describe a place, what aspects will you write about?
1)清远是一个发展中的城市，有约400万的 人口。 Qingyuan is a developing city ,having/with a population of about four million.
2) 我们城市的人口在年年增加。 The population of our city is increasing
Writing
（2009江门一模）2010年，第十六届亚 运会将在广州举行。假如你是亚运会的志 愿者，请你用英语介绍主办城市—广州市。
（2009江门一模）2010年，第十六届亚运会将 在广州举行。假如你是亚运会的志愿者，请你 用英语介绍主办城市—广州市写作内容 1、概况：中国第三大城市；别称：五羊 城、 花城等；广东省省会；全市面积7，434平方公 里；人口1，000多万。 2、历史：2，200多年历史的文化名城，历史上 丝绸之路（海路）的始发港。 3、地理：珠江从市中心穿过，温暖湿润。 4、旅游：风光旖旎，旅游资源丰富。
特色 (The Βιβλιοθήκη lace) is famous for…../ The special character of ( the place) is ….
Practice 请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个 规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息。
清远市位于广东省北部，历史悠久,是一 个山区市。总面积1.9万平方公里，人口约 400万, 其中农村人口占75%。清远自然资 源和旅游资源非常丰富，名胜古迹众多， 每年吸引大量游客。气候宜人，夏天不是 太热，冬天不是太冷。交通便利，比如乘 汽车从清远到广东省的省会--广州只需30分 钟。
Describing a place
When you want to describe a place, what aspects will you write about?
1)清远是一个发展中的城市，有约400万的 人口。 Qingyuan is a developing city ,having/with a population of about four million.
2) 我们城市的人口在年年增加。 The population of our city is increasing
Writing
（2009江门一模）2010年，第十六届亚 运会将在广州举行。假如你是亚运会的志 愿者，请你用英语介绍主办城市—广州市。
（2009江门一模）2010年，第十六届亚运会将 在广州举行。假如你是亚运会的志愿者，请你 用英语介绍主办城市—广州市写作内容 1、概况：中国第三大城市；别称：五羊 城、 花城等；广东省省会；全市面积7，434平方公 里；人口1，000多万。 2、历史：2，200多年历史的文化名城，历史上 丝绸之路（海路）的始发港。 3、地理：珠江从市中心穿过，温暖湿润。 4、旅游：风光旖旎，旅游资源丰富。
特色 (The Βιβλιοθήκη lace) is famous for…../ The special character of ( the place) is ….
Practice 请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个 规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息。
清远市位于广东省北部，历史悠久,是一 个山区市。总面积1.9万平方公里，人口约 400万, 其中农村人口占75%。清远自然资 源和旅游资源非常丰富，名胜古迹众多， 每年吸引大量游客。气候宜人，夏天不是 太热，冬天不是太冷。交通便利，比如乘 汽车从清远到广东省的省会--广州只需30分 钟。
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famous for its trade and business and it is experiencing rapid economic development nowadays.
4. 它还是文化名城 Foshan is also a historical and culture city with many ancient buildings and other historical sites.
With a population of over 7million, it covers an area of about 3800 square kilometers and enjoys a mild and rainy climate.
==It has a population of over 7 million, with an area of about 3800 square kilometers and enjoys a mild and rainy climate.
Located in the south of China, Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province. Known as the “City of Flowers”, large parts of Guangzhou are covered with trees, flowers and grasses. There are many places of interest in Guangzhou, such as Baiyun Mountain, Yunxiu Park and Guangzhou TV Tower. Guangzhou has a long history and is the center of Lingnan Culture. Besides, there is plenty of great food here so you can not only enjoy delicious dishes but also have a taste of many different kinds of dim sum and snacks.
==Located in the middle part of Guangdong Province, Foshan is the neighbour of the capital city Guangzhou City. （用非谓语动 词—过去分词作状语）
2. 面积约3800平方公里，人口700多万；
介绍地点
学习目的:
1. 学会使用在作文写作中关 于介绍地方的一些有用的短 语. 2. 学会可以尽量使用非谓语 动词----过去分词和定语从句 来把句子变成5句话作文。
1. 位于：be located in /on…; be situated in/on…; lie in/on… 2. 与……为邻：neighbour…;is bounded by; its neighbouring country is… 3. 占地……平方公里：It covers an area of…; Covering an area of…, it has… 4. 人口/ : it has a population of…; with a population of…; it has a history of…; with a history of…
5. 排名：rank the first; get the second place
6. 气候：It has a… climate 7. 以……出名: be famous for/as… 8. 享有……的美誉: be well-known as…; have the reputation of…
9. 吸引：attract
总结： 1. 作文中关于介绍地方的一些有用的短语： （尽量回想，并默写下来） 1.be located by/in/at=lie in/on(位于/坐落于)； 2.has a total length of（总共有---长）； 3.cover/has an area of（有--面积）;4. has/with a long history；5. be known for/as；6.has a population of(有----人口) 2. 可以尽量用非谓语动词、从句、not only …but also…把句子变成长句。
Foshan, which is located in the middle part of Guangdong Province, is the neighbour of the capital city Guangzhou City. With a population of over 7million, it covers an area of about 3800 square kilometers and enjoys a mild and rainy climate. Foshan, which has been famous for its trade and business for about 1000 years, is experiencing rapid economic development nowadays. Foshan is not only a historical and culture city with many ancient buildings and other historical sites but also the hometown of Huang Feihong and Bruce Lee.
Covering an area of about 3800 square kilometers , it has a population of over 7 million and enjoys a mild and rainy climate.
3. 是一座历史悠久的商贸名城,经济发展 （economic development）迅速。 Foshan, which has been famous for its trade and business for about 1000 years, is experiencing rapid economic development nowadays.
10.国内外游客：tourists from home and abroad
英语周报
假设你是李华，你的美国必有汤姆给你发来电子 邮件，向你询问你所在的城市—广东佛山 （Foshan）的情况。请你根据以下要点，给他写 一封回信。 1. 位于广东省中部，面积约3800平方公里，人口 700多万； 2. 气候温和多雨； 3. 是一座历史悠久的商贸名城、文化名城，经济 发展（economic development）迅速。 Dear Tom,
5. It is also the hometown of Huang Feihong
and Bruce Lee.
合成一句：Foshan is not only a historical and culture city with many ancient buildings and other historical sites but also the hometown of Huang Feihong and Bruce Lee.
Best wishes, Li Hua
1．位于广东省中部，它与广州市相邻；
1.Foshan, which is located in the middle part of Guangdong Province, is the neighbour of the capital city Guangzhou City. （用定语 从句）
4. 它还是文化名城 Foshan is also a historical and culture city with many ancient buildings and other historical sites.
With a population of over 7million, it covers an area of about 3800 square kilometers and enjoys a mild and rainy climate.
==It has a population of over 7 million, with an area of about 3800 square kilometers and enjoys a mild and rainy climate.
Located in the south of China, Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province. Known as the “City of Flowers”, large parts of Guangzhou are covered with trees, flowers and grasses. There are many places of interest in Guangzhou, such as Baiyun Mountain, Yunxiu Park and Guangzhou TV Tower. Guangzhou has a long history and is the center of Lingnan Culture. Besides, there is plenty of great food here so you can not only enjoy delicious dishes but also have a taste of many different kinds of dim sum and snacks.
==Located in the middle part of Guangdong Province, Foshan is the neighbour of the capital city Guangzhou City. （用非谓语动 词—过去分词作状语）
2. 面积约3800平方公里，人口700多万；
介绍地点
学习目的:
1. 学会使用在作文写作中关 于介绍地方的一些有用的短 语. 2. 学会可以尽量使用非谓语 动词----过去分词和定语从句 来把句子变成5句话作文。
1. 位于：be located in /on…; be situated in/on…; lie in/on… 2. 与……为邻：neighbour…;is bounded by; its neighbouring country is… 3. 占地……平方公里：It covers an area of…; Covering an area of…, it has… 4. 人口/ : it has a population of…; with a population of…; it has a history of…; with a history of…
5. 排名：rank the first; get the second place
6. 气候：It has a… climate 7. 以……出名: be famous for/as… 8. 享有……的美誉: be well-known as…; have the reputation of…
9. 吸引：attract
总结： 1. 作文中关于介绍地方的一些有用的短语： （尽量回想，并默写下来） 1.be located by/in/at=lie in/on(位于/坐落于)； 2.has a total length of（总共有---长）； 3.cover/has an area of（有--面积）;4. has/with a long history；5. be known for/as；6.has a population of(有----人口) 2. 可以尽量用非谓语动词、从句、not only …but also…把句子变成长句。
Foshan, which is located in the middle part of Guangdong Province, is the neighbour of the capital city Guangzhou City. With a population of over 7million, it covers an area of about 3800 square kilometers and enjoys a mild and rainy climate. Foshan, which has been famous for its trade and business for about 1000 years, is experiencing rapid economic development nowadays. Foshan is not only a historical and culture city with many ancient buildings and other historical sites but also the hometown of Huang Feihong and Bruce Lee.
Covering an area of about 3800 square kilometers , it has a population of over 7 million and enjoys a mild and rainy climate.
3. 是一座历史悠久的商贸名城,经济发展 （economic development）迅速。 Foshan, which has been famous for its trade and business for about 1000 years, is experiencing rapid economic development nowadays.
10.国内外游客：tourists from home and abroad
英语周报
假设你是李华，你的美国必有汤姆给你发来电子 邮件，向你询问你所在的城市—广东佛山 （Foshan）的情况。请你根据以下要点，给他写 一封回信。 1. 位于广东省中部，面积约3800平方公里，人口 700多万； 2. 气候温和多雨； 3. 是一座历史悠久的商贸名城、文化名城，经济 发展（economic development）迅速。 Dear Tom,
5. It is also the hometown of Huang Feihong
and Bruce Lee.
合成一句：Foshan is not only a historical and culture city with many ancient buildings and other historical sites but also the hometown of Huang Feihong and Bruce Lee.
Best wishes, Li Hua
1．位于广东省中部，它与广州市相邻；
1.Foshan, which is located in the middle part of Guangdong Province, is the neighbour of the capital city Guangzhou City. （用定语 从句）