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近五年高考英语广东卷基础写作解读

近五年高考英语广东卷基础写作解读
蒸 胜
近五年高考 英语广 东卷基础 写作解读
■符 曼静


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广东英语高考之基础写作指导
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广东高考英语基础写作备考策略

广东高考英语基础写作备考策略

广东高考英语基础写作备考策略一、命题特点近几年的广东高考英语基础写作题都是控制性作文,要求考生在10分钟内(考纲所提供的参考时间)用5个句子表达所提示的全部写作内容,且要求做到句子结构准确、信息内容完整、篇章结构连贯。

下面选取3年的基础写作题的特点和涉及到的语言基础如下表:07 08 09形式表格提纲提纲体裁调查报告介绍文采访报告话题偶像崇拜奥运项目学生近视教育树立正确的偶像观关注奥运爱护自己的眼睛句长平均17个词平均15个词平均18个词主体时态1.一般现在时2.一般过去时1.一般过去时2.现在完成时1.一般现在时2.一般过去时短语或搭配1. do /make /conduct asurvey2. choose…as3. rank the first4. the same as5. the percentage of…6. as for sb.1. as a means of2. develop into3. an Olympic event4. at the end of 19thcentury5. return to6. compete in /participatein1. have an interviewwith sb2. according to3. slightly more than4. rank the first5. be related with/to主要句式1. The survey shows that…2. As the data shows, …3. …while (而)…4. …, but…5. However, …1. be contested/suspended2. be allowed to do3. grow steadilyfrom…to…4. It was not until…that…1. so…that….2. He pointed out that…3. He suggested that…4. He reminded usthat…从上表可以得出以下几点结论:1. 话题贴近考生生活,时代感强,且寓思想教育于考题之中。

广东高考英语基础写作题解读及备考策略

广东高考英语基础写作题解读及备考策略
广东高考英语基础 写作题解读及备考策略


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广东高考英语卷基础写作指导

广东高考英语卷基础写作指导

广东高考英语卷基础写作指导(系列1)第一讲记叙文:如何写人一、写作指导高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍,可以用第一人称(如写求职信),也可以用第三人称,时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时,具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。

写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题:1.人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面,但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写,包括所给的全部信息点,既不能遗漏,也不能随意添加。

2.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。

重点信息通常是写作的目的所在,比如求职要重点突出学历、经历,新闻报道要重点突出事迹,介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点,等等。

3.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。

4.注意运用正确的时态。

描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时,而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。

二、常用词语外貌特征:beautiful, big nose, black eyes,fat, good-looking,handsome, healthy, near-sighted,ordinary-looking,pretty,short,strong, tall,thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired,1.80 metres tall, etc.性格特点:absent-minded, attractive,bad-tempered,be ready to help others, bright,charming,confident, diligent,friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous,independent, kind, kind-hearted,lazy,narrow-minded, naughty,patient,think of others, smart,talk ative,warm-hearted,wise,etc.出生年龄:a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , d uring his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.兴趣爱好:be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.教育背景:be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test,a master’s degr ee, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, ,go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a d octor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in classwhen at college, etc.经历事迹:become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneselfto one’s business, do sth with gr eat determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’slife for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to dosth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.他人评价:an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, consider sb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.参考范文:Dear Manager,I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years.I studied computer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E,and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.I am waiting for your reply.Thank youYours TruelyLi Hua参考例文:Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player. He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music while Liu Xiang likes singing.参考范文1. Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. When she came to school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English language study. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Ming is very strict with herself in her work and daily life,and is always ready to help other people.2.请根据下面的英文短诗,展开适当的想象,写一篇短文。

广东新高考英语作文指导

广东新高考英语作文指导

广东新高考英语作文指导随着广东省新高考改革的推进,英语作文对于广东考生来说变得更为重要。

本文将为考生提供一些指导,帮助他们在新高考英语作文中取得好成绩。

1. 理解题目要求在写作之前,首先要仔细阅读并理解题目要求。

注意关键词,了解所要求的主题、角度以及要求的文体。

这样可以帮助你更好地掌握写作的方向。

2. 确定立意在写作之前,要先确定自己的立意。

可以通过思考、头脑风暴等方式,找到对于所给主题最合适的观点或主张。

立意要明确,确保思路清晰。

3. 选取合适的素材写作过程中,选取合适的素材可以使文章更具说服力和可读性。

可以通过举例、引用数据、引用名人观点等方式来支持自己的观点。

但需要注意的是,引用的内容必须经过确认,避免引入无法确认真实性的内容。

4. 合理组织文章结构文章结构的合理性对于作文的质量至关重要。

可以采用“提出观点-列举理由-总结观点”的结构,或者根据具体情况选用其他结构。

段落之间要有过渡自然,保持逻辑的连贯性。

5. 注意语言表达作文中使用准确、生动的语言表达可以增加文章的表现力和吸引力。

要注意使用恰当的词汇和句式,避免重复和冗余。

注意语法和拼写错误,确保语言准确无误。

6. 增加亮点在写作过程中,适当增加亮点能够引起阅卷老师的兴趣,提升作文的质量。

可以通过使用比喻、修辞手法、适当的幽默等方式来增加文章的亮点。

7. 注意篇幅控制在新高考英语作文中,篇幅控制很重要。

要根据题目要求合理安排文章的篇幅,控制在适当的字数范围内。

以上是关于广东新高考英语作文的一些建议和指导。

希望以上内容能对广东考生在新高考英语作文中有所帮助。

加油!。

广东高考英语基础写作技巧指导

广东高考英语基础写作技巧指导

Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作步骤:
第1步 审题
1 体裁格式 2 内容 3 人称、时态 4 信息点的整
合和排列
写信 描述高三学生现状。 第一人称。一般现在时。
6项
第2步 整合信息, 译成英语。
1) 每天在校时间约10小时。每天完成作 业时间3~4小时。
Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons. We spend at least three to four hours doing our homework. 2) 每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。
2、如何做到句式灵活? 1)并列句 2)复合句
(定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句) 3)强调句型 4)非谓语动词 5)倒装句 6)其他句型及结构
Ex:按要求改写下列句子。
1) English is widely used in the world. Most business letters are written in English. (合并为并列句)
5) (合并为定语从句)
6) July 11, when Zheng He began his famous voyage, has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005.
5) I will not be able to meet you at the airport. I have some experiments to do that day.(合并为状语从句)
a. We hardly have any time for relaxation.

广东省高考英语写作技巧和范文

广东省高考英语写作技巧和范文

高三英语写作指导资料——“读写任务”专题指导一、常用文章开头、睁开及结尾的句式:1. Summary:1).In this passage, the writer (author) explains/writes about......2).The passage/article points out/presents/states/compares/introduces/mainlytells us......3).We can learn from the passage that......4).The passage tells us a story of......, who........ Through the story,theauthor presents an idea that...... (记述+寓意)5).As can be learned from the passage,6).The passage compares the benefits of A with B. Some argue in support of A,believing that..., while others prefer B, stating that......(谈论文)7).The writer sets some examples to tell us2.过渡句:1).I can’t agree more with the author.2).I agree with what is presented above.3).The view sounds right /reasonable but it is hardly practical.(谈论文)4).Personally, I prefer ......5).Different people have different opinions on this point.Some...,.. Others.....(两种看法)6). In my opinion, it is right for sb. to do......7). This story reminds me of an accident that I witnessed.8). Another example that jumps into my mind is......9).I have a similar (the same) experience.10).What Peter did reminds me of a story that happened two years ago.(记述文)3.结束段(句):1).In conclusion/short/brief,...2).As is stated above, sth.has both advantages and disadvantages.My opinion isthat...(响应文章主题或标题)3).In a word, we have to strike/achieve a balance between A and B.Only if/when/after/by/in......, can we do......4).From what has been discussed above, we may safely (讨论两种事物经常用)draw the conclusion that...5).Taking all the above-mentioned factors into consideration, ..4.解题技巧:A. 标题:一般要有, 07 高考写信无法再拟标题。

谈谈怎样教广东高考英语基础写作

谈谈怎样教广东高考英语基础写作

谈谈怎样教广东高考英语基础写作摘要:2007年高考英语广东卷体现了新课程改革精神,有浓厚时代特色,综合考查学生能力、情感、态度和价值观,重视对英语学习的最终“产出”(output)层面的考查,写作占的全卷分值比重大。

本文旨在分析广东高考英语基础写作的特点并对如何进行基础写作的课堂教学提出自己的见解。

“写”的活动是高级认知活动,是一个人思维能力的最完美体现。

广东高考英语写作题由基础写作和读写任务两部分组成。

其中,基础写作题要求用五句话来表达题目所给的全部信息并组成连贯的短文,属于带指引的写作(Guided Writing)。

本文将从基础写作的特点和课堂教学建议这两方面来探讨怎样进行基础写作的课堂训练。

一、基础写作的特点。

广东高考英语基础写作的目的还是考查考生最基础的书面表达能力,即用词的合理性、句子结构的复杂度、语法运用的正确性、信息内容的完整性、句子之间的连贯性等。

评分时强调了句子的复杂性、准确性、完整性和连贯性。

1、写作内容半开放。

写作内容被规定,考生必须把题目要求的所有信息完整地表达出来,但可以自主构建信息的先后次序及表达方式。

2、文章限用五句话。

基础写作要求用五句话,超过或少于五句话都要扣分。

这就要求考生有较强的信息组织能力及良好的句子表达能力,能熟练使用并列句、复合句等句式来表达多个信息点。

高考大纲说明中提到,英语科考试强调考查考生对英语语言基础知识的掌握和理解程度,注重考查考生在特定的语言环境中运用语言完成任务的能力和综合运用英语语言知识的能力。

二、课堂教学建议。

下面以一范例来探讨怎样进行基础写作题的课堂训练。

基础写作:假设你是王强,拾到电子词典一部,请失主前来认领。

[写作内容]时间:2008年11月11日晚地点:学校图书馆阅览室特征:新、白色、比名片稍大、杂志般厚联系地址:C楼305房联系电话:28250001[写作要求]1. 标题:Lost and Found2. 必须用五个句子介绍全部所给内容;3. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。

高考英语基础写作解题技巧的指导

高考英语基础写作解题技巧的指导

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广东高考英语科读写任务写作指导

广东高考英语科读写任务写作指导

广东高考英语科读写任务写作指导常见的,也是老师比较容易接受的结构安排是四段式(开头概括,中间两段,加总结),中间写两段是为了清晰地向阅卷老师表明题目给你的要求你都写了。

其实本来是三段,只是为了“捞分”,补上一句总结做末段,顺便show 一下漂亮表达。

一.第一段1.引入As is mentioned in the passage,…According to the author / article / passage,…(当下文又要用As isknown to us all,…时,为避免重复可换这个表达)2.概括内容说明文,抓住关键句稍做改动就可以,一般是每段的首句或尾句。

议论文,只需在论点和简要原因上灵活变化就行。

注意:议论文的要点归纳,假如文章中没有其他的论点和中心,可以出现作者论证其观点的例子。

记叙文,记叙文的总结必须体现与议论文不同的一点:只把故事的主要情节简述一遍,不理会其他枝节,直奔主题。

也就是说,我们只要“写与自己的文章主体内容中心一致的情节”!二.第二,三段(一)第二段开头(1)议论文的第二段开头承接:当材料中作者旗帜鲜明时,接下来就作者观点阐述自己的看法,那么,可以在第二段开头这样写:As far as I’m concerned, what the author said / mentioned above is true. 表赞同时还可以用:From where I stand, I couldn’t agree more with the author’s opinion. 或In my conception / From my perspective, I am in favor of the author’s opinion.“从我的角度/观点,我十分同意作者的观点”。

当材料中出现两种看法时,或者前面有出现“一些人这样想,一些人那样想”,接下来就几种观点阐述自己看法时,可以这样写:As far as I’m concerned, the former / latter view is true. 如Some people have the idea that …..Other people, however, think it better to….. As far as I’m conce rned, the former view does sound true.(2) 记叙文的第二段开头承接:“What the author mentioned above reminds me of one of my personal experience / my friend’s experience…)用于联系自己亲身经历或他人经历。

广东高考英语写作基础题备考策略

广东高考英语写作基础题备考策略

广东高考英语写作基础题备考策略一、基础写作题的特点高考设置基础写作题目的目的是要检测考生最基础的书面语言表达能力,如用词的合理性、句子结构的复杂度、语法运用的正确性、信息内容的完整性、句子之间的连贯性等。

因此,基础写作题与往年的书面表达依然会有很多相似点,但也会出现一些新的特点。

1. 写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活。

历年来高考作文题的题材都非常贴近考生的学习和生活,如校园活动、校外见闻、交友、旅游,和考生有关的话题讨论等。

可以预料明年高考写作题的题材还会在这些范围之内,并为所有所考所熟悉。

2. 写作的体裁主要是故事性描述和应用文。

基础写作题的体裁主要有故事性描写和应用文写作两大类。

命题形式可能是看图写故事、看图表说明、根据表格信息完成一封短信或一份通知这类的应用文等。

3. 内容呈现的方式具有半封闭性。

作文试题逐步走向开放将是大势所趋。

但是,基础写作题还只能是半封闭的,其特点是写作的内容是被规定了的,考生必须将文章所规定的信息点完整、全面地表达出来,但对于语言表达的方式、信息组织的先后秩序、需要补充哪些必要的信息等,考生又有一定的自主构思空间。

4. 用5句话表达。

这是基础写作题与往年书面表达题最显著的不同点。

往年是规定字数(100词左右),句子的数量不作规定,所以很多考生为了不犯句法错误总是用一些简单句。

而基础写作只能用5句话来表达题目所给的全部信息点,但所给的信息点与往年的书面表达相比并不会减少,所以,用5个简单句很难完成任务,必须使用复合句或并列句来综合多个信息点,而且还要照顾句子之间的衔接和语意上的连贯。

从这一点来说,基础写作题对考生运用语言能力的要求大大提高了。

二、基础写作题提出的新要求由基础写作题的特点可以看出,它对考生提出了一些新的要求。

1. 信息组织能力。

笔者认为,信息组织能力包括信息归类、信息排列和信息表达三个环节。

对于题目所提供的各种信息点,考生首先需要依照一定的标准将信息进行归类,并初步计划将哪些信息放到同一个句子中;其次是将信息进行合理的排列,排列必须依照一定的标准,如时间顺序、空间顺序、因果关系、递进关系等;第三是选择信息表达的秩序,确定句子之间的先后关系,这既要考虑语法上能否衔接,还要考虑语意上的连贯。

广东高考英语作文写作指导实用三篇

广东高考英语作文写作指导实用三篇

广东高考英语作文写作指导实用三篇广东高考英语作文写作指导 1~+名词blame the teacher 抱怨老师blame the weather 归咎于天气blame tools 抱怨工具~+副词blame often 经常责备blame pletely 彻底地责怪blame deservedly 有保留地责怪blame hastily 草率地责怪blame highly 备受指责blame morally 有教育意义地责备blame specifically 明确地责备blame unfairly 不公平地责备blame unjustly 错怪blame unthinkingly 不假思索地责怪~+介词blame for 因为。

而责怪blame for doing sth 因做了某事而责备blame sb for his negligence 责怪某人的`怠慢blame sb for the failure 因失败而责怪于某人blame on〔upon〕把。

归咎于。

广东高考英语作文写作指导 2(一)掌握技巧:(1)注意篇章结构,合理布局开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。

正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。

结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,内容完整、连贯。

前后呼应,祛除与主题无关的内容.(2)确定主题句主题句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨。

它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。

通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头,而后,全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释,扩展。

写主题句应注意以下几点:①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点②提炼出一句具有概括性的话③主题句应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。

(二)巧用连接词要想使文章有整体性、连贯性,就要学会正确使用连接词表示罗列增加First, second, third,First, then / next, after that / next, finallyFor one thing 。

近五年广东高考英语基础写作题分析

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照对区爱民学校高考英语卷基础写作指导

照对区爱民学校高考英语卷基础写作指导

照对区爱民学校广东高考英语卷基础写作指导(系列1)要求:1. 不得照抄短诗原文。

2. 必须突出短诗的主题,结构完整,语意连贯。

3. 短文不能写成诗歌形式。

4. 只能使用价值个句子表达全部的内容。

广东高考英语卷基础写作指导(系列2)高考英语基础写作指导(II)第二讲记叙文:如何叙事?一、写作指导叙事类记叙文通常要将时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等六个要素交代清楚。

好的记叙文具有描述事件具体、人物逼真形象、故事生动感人、材料表现中心和写作主旨明确等特征。

高考英语基础写作中的叙事类短文也需要具有记叙文写作的一般特点,但要求相对比较低,其考查重点在语言运用正确、句子连贯通顺、信息点表述完整等方面。

写作时要注意以下几个方面的问题:1. 严格按照基础写作的要求完成各个信息点,不要为了文章的生动而随意添加信息。

2. 信息点的表述不要完全按照题目所给的顺序,要适当重组信息点。

3. 记叙文写作的时态多数是用一般过去时,但也要注意灵活运用其它时态。

4. 叙事类记叙文的话题通常和中学生的生活阅历有关,如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等,平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。

二、常用语句1. 表达时间a long time ago, at six o’clock in the morning, at the end of, at the wee kend,before he came here, by the end of last term, during the summer holidays, in a few years’ time, in the past, in the old days, in the past ten years, in Augu st 2002, inwinter vacation, in weekdays, last month, next week, on Sunday morning, on October 1st, since early in the 20th century, so far, up to now, not…until, while , etc.2. 表达地点at the crossing, at the end of the street, at the airport, at the village, at t he foot of the mountain, at the bottom, at the top of, be located in, behind th e park, besituated in, five kilometers to the north of Guangzhou, in the south of Guangd ongProvince, in the middle of the park, in Class 3 Grade 2, in the front of the b us, infront of the bus, in the tree, in Guangdong, in China, lies to the west of Sichuan, onthe other side of the street, on both sides of the road,on the east coast of the Pacific Ocean ,on the right, etc.3. 表达因果as, as a result, because, because of, for, in the end, cause, result in, conse quently, originate from, since, so, therefore, It is clear that… , It turns out to be… , The primary reason is … , etc.4. 事件话题(1)学校生活及学习成绩be active in class, be interested in, be interesting to sb., be fond of, be g ood at ,be poor at , be tired of one’s work, be weak in, do one’s homework, do sports afterschool,do well in; education for all-round development(素质教育), examination-oriented education system(应试教育), fail in the test, get a doctor’s degree, get on well with English, get an “A” in the exam, get 90 marks for English, giv e sb. a passing grade, have a good command of the language, have eight class es every day, help with each other, lay a good foundation in, learn…by heart, major in history, make friends with sb., make progress in, put one’s heart int o, pass the examination, study in groups,succeed in doing sth., take an active part in the activity,take several courses at school, work out a problem, work on a maths problem , work hard at, etc.(2)师生关系及其活动be friendly to sb., be kind to sb, be a strict teacher, be strict with one’s pupils, be strict in one’s work, be satisfied with , blame sb. for sth, correct th e students’homework carefully, devote all one’s time to work, fo rm a good habit of, get on wellwith sb, give advice on, give sb a lot of work , help sb with sth, mak e one’s lessonslively and interesting, praise sb for sth., prepare for tomorrow’s lesson, question sbon, teach sb. English , teach sb how to do sth., etc.(3)课余活动及周末生活do some reading, enjoy a family trip, enjoy doing sth., go swimming, go for an outing, go to the cinema, have an outing at the seashore, have a swim, have dances on weekends, have a picnic at the weekend, have a party, hold a sports meeting,Internet bar, net friend, online love affair(网恋), play the piano, play chess (ba sketball), see the sights of Beijing, spend one’s time in many different ways, t each in afamily, etc.(4)交通情况a big traffic jam, a traffic accident, be very crowded in the street, be seri ouslyinjured, by bus (train / ship / boat), drive a car, flight No. 2130, in a small b oat,give sb. a lift, keep right, lie on the street, meet sb. at the station, on the bus (train),on board, on one’s way to London, on the journey, one way only , pic k up sb., ride a bike, ride a horse , see sb. off at the airport, self-service tick et , take a flight to New York, traffic light, travel through China, turn right, e tc.(5)度假旅游New Year’s Day, Women’s Day, May Day, Youth Day, Children’s Day, Tea chers’ Day, Mid-Autumn Day, National Day, valentine’s Day, the Spring Festiv al, a hot spot, a place of interest, a tourist destination, a five-star hotel, a goo d restaurant, a return ticket, a single ticket, a city with a long history, a quiet village, a three-day tour, an experienced guide, Beijing 2008 Olympic Games, beautiful scenery, in peak touristseasons, natural attraction, on one’s way to France, on the back way , one of thegreat wonders of the world, spend one’s holidays on the sea , the 11th Asian Games, travel agency, the tour route, the inner-ring road, travel to England, the Great Wall , the Summer Place , Zhongshan Park , etc.(6)环境保护a good environment, area pollution, air pollution, air quality standard, Antarctic Circle, atmospheric chemistry, a heavy rain, a heavy snow, be polluted, be hot, be cold, be cool, be cloudy, be rainy, be sunny, be flooded, climate, carbondioxide(CO2), chemical change, chemical cleaning of coal, climate change, dirty, drought, dry, flood, early warning system, environmental behavior, environmental quality, feel comfortable, global warming, minus 20 degrees centigrade(-20°), 30 degrees above zero(30°),sea level, warning center, wastes, water surface , water treatment, water pollution control, weather, windstorm , etc.三、典型例文参考范文:Dear Jane,I am very glad to tell you something about our school, Guangdong No. 3 Middle school. It lies in a small town about 15 kilometres away from the sea and it has a history of over 80 years. Our school, covering an area of nearly 150 thousand square meters, has more than 200 teachers and 3000 senior stud ents It has three teachingbuildings and six dormitory buildings, with many flowers and tall trees all aro und, soit’s very beautiful. In our school we learn Chinese, mat hs, science, English, co mputer,PE, arts and some other subjects.We warmly welcome you to visit our school in the summer holidays.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 参考范文:A brief Introduction of the Chinese Spring FestivalThe Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar Year, which is usually in February. There is a name for each year, such as th e dog, themonkey, the tiger or one of the twelve animals, and this year is the year of t he pig.Before the New Year’s Day, the Chinese people usually give their houses a good cleaning and on the last evening of the old year, all the members ofa family willget together and have a big meal. On the first or second day of the new year, peopleusually go to visit their relatives and friends and give some lucky mon ey to children.I wish you have a good time during the Spring Festival.参考范文1.On July 27th2007, Friday, we 18 classmates, including John from Britain, Sinba from India and Keith from the USA, went to Lee Farm to help the far mers. Westarted off at 8 o’clock in the morning, and after an hour’s ride on the bus, w e walked for another 15 minutes. Lee Farm is about 60 kilometres northwest t o our school. A few days ago it was hit by a strong tornado, and many apple s were blown ontothe ground, so we helped to pick up the apples and put the good ones in the baskets.We felt very tired after the work, but all of us thought it was a great help to thefarmers.2. Last Wednesday I gave a lecture about China’s culture and history to t he 7thstudents from 9-11:30 in the morning. This is the first time I gave a lesson, s o I felt very nervous and great pressure. I presented for one and a half hours, introducingfrom the dynasties in ancient times to the revolutionary in recent times, but I spent a lot more time on present China, the renovation, the open policy and th e economicdevelopment. In the following hour we exchanged ideas and had a good discus sion,but I was sorry to find that they knew little about China and raised a lot of s trange questions. I think we need more cultural exchange of this kind, because we can get more practice and the foreign students can understand more about China.广东高考英语卷基础写作指导(系列3)第三讲如何写图表类说明文一、写作指导图表类作文一直是高考的热点,其体裁可以是记叙文、议论文或说明文。

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广东高考英语卷基础写作指导(系列1)第一讲记叙文:如何写人一、写作指导高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍,可以用第一人称(如写求职信),也可以用第三人称,时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时,具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。

写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题:1.人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面,但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写,包括所给的全部信息点,既不能遗漏,也不能随意添加。

2.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。

重点信息通常是写作的目的所在,比如求职要重点突出学历、经历,新闻报道要重点突出事迹,介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点,等等。

3.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。

4.注意运用正确的时态。

描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时,而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。

二、常用词语外貌特征:beautiful, big nose, black eyes,fat, good-looking,handsome, healthy, near-sighted,ordinary-looking,pretty,short,strong, tall,thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired,1.80 metres tall, etc.性格特点:absent-minded, attractive,bad-tempered,be ready to help others, bright,charming,confident, diligent,friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous,independent, kind, kind-hearted,lazy,narrow-minded, naughty,patient,think of others, smart,talk ative,warm-hearted,wise,etc.出生年龄:a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , d uring his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.兴趣爱好:be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.教育背景:be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test,a master’s degree, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, ,go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in classwhen at college, etc.经历事迹:become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneselfto one’s business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’slife for sth, have a go od way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to dosth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.他人评价:an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, consider sb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.参考范文:Dear Manager,I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years.I studied computer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E,and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.I am waiting for your reply.Thank youYours TruelyLi Hua参考例文:Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player. He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music while Liu Xiang likes singing.参考范文1. Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. When she came to school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English language study. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Ming is very strict with herself in her work and daily life,and is always ready to help other people.2.请根据下面的英文短诗,展开适当的想象,写一篇短文。

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