高考英语基础写作练习

基础写作——句子结构准确，内容完成、连贯（A studying plan）新星高级中学熊德智前言：2007年广东省高考英语试卷结构已经作出重大改革，其中作文题由原来的1篇变成2篇、分数由原来25分增加为40分，与阅读（含信息匹配）等值，因而有专家认为“得写作者得天下”。

I. Decide whether the following passage is a good writing.（Students are required to read aloud together or read silently individually）I am in great need of your help. I am filling in my wills about universities soon, including my faviourite Zhongshan University, but I am wondering which one should be put first. The former one recruits more students than the latter one, which seems to give me more hope to go there. However, it takes 1 hour to go to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University. What’s more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses are taught in Chinese as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in Jinan University.Looking forward to your advice and thank you very much.Yours truly,Du Li(07潮州市质量检测卷, 收集于东莞教研网) 学生判断所读内容优劣的依据是：2007年《考试大纲说明》对基础写作的要求：1.句子结构准确 2.内容完整、连贯3.________（笫3点不属于《考试大纲说明》中的内容，但学生应自主猜测（内容为“卷面整洁”）II. 如何做到句子结构准确？（学生主要从写作中常用的几种句型入手：简单句，复合句，并列句等）1.如果是简单句，句子结构是否符合简单句的5种基本结构。

哪5种？1),_________2),_________3),________4),_______5),________（Key 1）请从简单句的基本结构分析并找出下列句子中的错误（注意谓语部分）。

a. I afraid that I can’t pass the exam.b. Most students against buying gate tickets when entering the park.c. My favourite subjects including English and Chinese.2.如果是复合句，句子结构是否符合复合句的相关结构。

什么是复合句？_______________________________________(Key 2)英语写作中常的复合句有：A.名词性从句，包括1),_________2),_________3),________4),_______ (Key 3)●常用的引导名词性从句的引导词：____________________________________________等。

(Key 4)●特别注意不要将that 和what混用，该如何区别？_____________________________(Key 5)用that 和what填空。

1.It worried her a bit ____ her hair was turning grey.2._____ I need is more time.3.My brother isn’t ___ he used to be.4.____ he has become a rich man is known to all in our town. (Key 6)B. 定语从句（常用关系代词：which…, that…, who…, whom…..,whose…, when…, where…, why…等）C. 状语从句（常用引导词：when, where, before, after, because, so that, if , though, although, as if , as though, unless,as soon as, once…等）●使用复合句时，注意引导词的运用。

注意下列句中划线部分的错误。

a. Before went to bed, I used to watch TV for a while.b. Though English is hard to learn, but I’ve managed to learn it well.c. When stayed in the country , I made a foreign friend.1.如果是并列句，检查并列连词(常用：and, but, however, nevertheless, while(而)，or, otherwise, for, so, therefore, not only…but also…, either… or…, both…and…, etc)是否使用正确，并列结构的主语和谓语有没有混用。

1).并列句与复合句的区别：(在括号内填上并列名或复合句)a. T hough English is difficult to learn, I’ve managed to learn it well.( )b. English is difficult to learn, but I’ve managed to learn it well. ( ) <Key7>(并列句是句与句之间的并列，对等，平行关系；复合句是包含与被包含的关系，即：主句包含从句、从句被主句包含)2.在基础写作中，祈使句和感叹句用得比较少，但如使用，必须做到结构正确（祈使句常以动词原形开头，e.g. Finish your homework quickly. Don’t eat snacks in the class.）如果是感叹句，请正确使用how , what e.g. How hard our English monitor studies! What a hard-working girl our English monitor is!●试分析以下5个句子是否结构准确，并找出句中的一处错误，在错误之处划线，并改正在后面横线上。

1.I’m Lu Shumin, and born in Dongguan in August 1988. __________________此句结构为：_______________________________________2.From 1994 to 2000，I studied in Dalang Primary school , going to Donghua Middle School of Dongguan thefollowing one year, then I came to study in New Star School 5 years ago.__________________此句结构为：_______________________________________3.The main subjects included Chinese, maths, English, physics, politics, chemistry and computer that I studiedat school. __________________此句结构为：_______________________________________4.I like English and piano best or I am very good at them.__________________此句结构为：_______________________________________5. In my spare time, not only do I enjoy listening to music, playing piano, but also I love driving a car.__________________此句结构为：_______________________________________<Key8>III. 如何保证内容完整？1.尽量利用好原材料的要点信息（按序给出的句子、列举的要点或提供的图片），以便节省时间。

2.据要表达的内容自己重新组织安排要点，尤其是表格题。

Example 1.（From潮州市质量检测卷），将笫一，笫二句合成一个要点。

“梅州市位于广东东北部。

总人口491万（2003年）。

”写成：“Meizhou City is situated in the northeast of Guangdong Province with a population of 4.91 million.”Example 2.（From潮州市质量检测卷）将笫四句拆分成二个句子。

“客家人的祖先源自中原, 素来崇文重教。

”写成“The ancestors of Hakkas migrated southward from Central China. Education has always been regarded as an important matter in the hakka community.”Example 3：笫四部分表格中，“车程所需时间”一栏，用一个句子（However, it takes 1 hour to go to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University.），而“课程设置”一栏却拆分成二个句子（What’s more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses are taught in Chinese as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in Jinan University）附：07潮州市质量检测卷:梅州市位于广东东北部。