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radios can be very noisy. ▪ C.根据主谓一致确定单复数
▪programs
▪ There are branch library in many villages.
▪ 2)冠词的错误规律和改正方法 libraries
A.根据冠词的基本用法确定冠词的错误
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▪ As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain
same roof.
the
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▪ 3)代词的错误规律和改正方法
▪ A.根据主语确定错误
▪ The Smiths did his best to make me feel at
home.
their
▪ B.根据句意确定错误
▪ The day before the speech contest English
with all kinds of plants and animals. a
▪ B.根据名词前后的修饰部分确定冠词的错误
▪ Each player must obey captain, who is the
leader of the team.
the
▪ C.根据惯用法确定冠词的错误
▪ We may be one family and live under a
How to correct a composition
Revision of senior grade 3
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▪ 短文改错的错误类型
▪ 1.词法错误 2.句法错误 3. 用词错误
▪ 4.惯用语，固定词组的使用错误5.逻辑错误
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7__主__谓__一__致______
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1-1 About one month after this photo was taken, I entered my second year of high school and bbecoame a new member of the school music club. 1-2 We can lie on the grass for a rest, or ssaitt by the lake listening to music.
1-5 The instructor kept repeating the words, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “TTuurrnning left!” 1-6 My dream school loookks like a big garden.
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1-7 We can choose between staying at home and ttaakkineg a trip. 1-8 Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are useindg for cooking. 1-9 One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, hhavaivneg our barbecue. 1-10 When summer comes, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables. 在pick前面加to 1-11 Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.
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(2) 系统掌握非谓语动词的句法功能.
(3) 前后联系，整体把握 .
五、 代词格，细领悟
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形第容 二人
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years
19 were the most difficult time for me.
1. 理清可数与不可数名词之间的区别与 联系 .
2. 记清一些用于固定词组中名词的特殊 用法 .
3.结合语境认真分辨同义名词或近义名 词.
三、还要注意形和副
1. 形容词和副词混用，2. 三级错用
１修饰名词，be动词，系动词要用形容词 ２修饰动词，形容词，整个句子用副词 ３比较级和最高级的使用 (2016全国Ⅰ卷)Instead, he hopes that his business will grow steady.
(2012课标卷) I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.
less
(2009大纲Ⅰ卷) The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our old middle school are gone.
(3) 前后联系，整体把握 .
五、 代词格，细领悟
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形第容 二人
词物高性主 考称my链接yoy6uor：u his yhoeur its yoouur youyr outheir 代词 I hearhdethathMimr. Wang would 名性主词第t词物代ea三称mc人ihneouuysosruhiErtesnhgilsishhheietrtrshiiststehoruemrys .youtrhsetmheirs
years
19 were the most difficult time for me.
1. 理清可数与不可数名词之间的区别与 联系 .
2. 记清一些用于固定词组中名词的特殊 用法 .
3.结合语境认真分辨同义名词或近义名 词.
三、还要注意形和副
1. 形容词和副词混用，2. 三级错用
１修饰名词，be动词，系动词要用形容词 ２修饰动词，形容词，整个句子用副词 ３比较级和最高级的使用 (2016全国Ⅰ卷)Instead, he hopes that his business will grow steady.
(2012课标卷) I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.
less
(2009大纲Ⅰ卷) The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our old middle school are gone.
公开课短文改错课件
短文改错
试题分析与技巧点拨
高考短文改错的考察方式
Unnecessary
word
1. I can go to home now.
Missing word 2. I like playing∧ piano.
the
Wrong word 3. I am fond at English. of
测试点分布
1、名词 2、动词时态/语态 3、代词 4、从句 5、形容词、副词 6、冠词 7、连词 8、介词
was
二、名词数
指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。
2007陕西卷：Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting.
lessons
2006福建卷：
If you have interests in it, reply to me
soon.
interest
I stayed here for one and a half hour.
(2009全国卷2)
分析：. hour改为hours
One rainy day while I was walking home
with one of my friend, a trunk came to stop
beside us.
flew Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is
someone to rely on.（2008 全国）
needed
I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国卷2)
试题分析与技巧点拨
高考短文改错的考察方式
Unnecessary
word
1. I can go to home now.
Missing word 2. I like playing∧ piano.
the
Wrong word 3. I am fond at English. of
测试点分布
1、名词 2、动词时态/语态 3、代词 4、从句 5、形容词、副词 6、冠词 7、连词 8、介词
was
二、名词数
指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。
2007陕西卷：Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting.
lessons
2006福建卷：
If you have interests in it, reply to me
soon.
interest
I stayed here for one and a half hour.
(2009全国卷2)
分析：. hour改为hours
One rainy day while I was walking home
with one of my friend, a trunk came to stop
beside us.
flew Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is
someone to rely on.（2008 全国）
needed
I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国卷2)
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learned
▪ D.根据连词的对称性原则确定时态
▪ I remembered her words and calm down.
▪ 5)语态的错误规律和改正方法
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▪ 语态的错误主要是该用被动语态时却用了主 动语态.例如:The librarian will write to you,
and let you know when the book you want
has returned.
been
▪ 6)非谓语动词的错误规律和改正方法
▪ A.根据动词的基本用法确定错误
▪ I had always wanted return to the village
after moving away.
prepare for it.
preparing
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▪ 7)形容词和副词的错误规律和改正方法
▪ A.根据形容词和副词的基本用法确定错误
▪ I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. wonderful
▪ B.根据形容词和副词比较级的用法确定错误 As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.
teacher talked to me.
my
▪ C.根据代词的基本用法确定错误
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▪ And I can’t forget the good food you cooked for I.
▪ 4)动词时态的错误规律和改正方法 me
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attention and inspired to me to join in activities.
2012天津卷： I just want to thank you for
helping me becoming a different person. become
五、 代词格，细领悟
1. 人称代词，物主代词的使用． ２．反身代词oneself 的使用． ３．人称代词的主格和宾格． ４．不定代词的使用． ５．Both, all, either, neither, none的使用. 6. Whose 和who’s， its和 it’s的区别．
主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知 识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多 词、少词和搭配错误。
catch a sight of lose my heart
on in hurry a in Sunday afternoon
∨
express us such many people
ourselves
so
七、句子成分多分析
night. After supper, Fwreidwaoyuld play card games of all sort sorts
in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons,
b“ut n名o词m作att定er语ho修w饰m名an词ay”tim，e这s I种a现sk象ed在to英w语at中ch比ing较t常hem,
（ 2010全国Ⅱ）Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him.
her
2012陕西：
2012天津卷： I just want to thank you for
helping me becoming a different person. become
五、 代词格，细领悟
1. 人称代词，物主代词的使用． ２．反身代词oneself 的使用． ３．人称代词的主格和宾格． ４．不定代词的使用． ５．Both, all, either, neither, none的使用. 6. Whose 和who’s， its和 it’s的区别．
主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知 识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多 词、少词和搭配错误。
catch a sight of lose my heart
on in hurry a in Sunday afternoon
∨
express us such many people
ourselves
so
七、句子成分多分析
night. After supper, Fwreidwaoyuld play card games of all sort sorts
in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons,
b“ut n名o词m作att定er语ho修w饰m名an词ay”tim，e这s I种a现sk象ed在to英w语at中ch比ing较t常hem,
（ 2010全国Ⅱ）Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him.
her
2012陕西：
高考短文改错公开课课件
cups
3.After learning English for several years, I have made a great progress. 4.If I choose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for
the
another 30 minutes. 5.All in all, Joey is a very special dog because he has overcome unpleasant start in life.
Therefore
convinced that I can keep the class organized and lively. 5.We gave our thanks to our teachers who had been educating us patient.
patiently
归纳总结
left
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are There 固定句型 three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t don’t 动词 need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with for 介词 much 形容词 after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school hours 名词 look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees looks 动词 冠词 around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and sit 动词 to 动词短语 helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
3.After learning English for several years, I have made a great progress. 4.If I choose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for
the
another 30 minutes. 5.All in all, Joey is a very special dog because he has overcome unpleasant start in life.
Therefore
convinced that I can keep the class organized and lively. 5.We gave our thanks to our teachers who had been educating us patient.
patiently
归纳总结
left
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are There 固定句型 three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t don’t 动词 need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with for 介词 much 形容词 after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school hours 名词 look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees looks 动词 冠词 around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and sit 动词 to 动词短语 helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
短文改错公开课Ding课件
全文改错练习
总结词
提升综合语言运用能力
详细描述
全文改错练习需要学生对整篇文章进行阅读、理解和修改，有助于提升学生的综合语言运用能力，培养整体语言 感知和表达能力。
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课程总结与答疑
课程总结
本次公开课主要讲解了短文改错的基 本技巧和常见错误类型，通过实例分 析和练习，帮助学生掌握短文改错的 方法和技巧。
实际案例分析和练习
课程安排
2小时的课程时间，分为40分钟 理论讲解和40分钟实践练习
邀请有经验的英语教师进行授课
提供课程讲义和练习题，方便学 生复习和巩固所学知识
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短文改错技巧
常见错误类型
名词错误
名词单复数错误、名词所 有格错误等。
形容词和副词错误
比较级、最高级、词性误 用等。
代词错误
代词指代不明、代词使用 不当等。
课程还注重培养学生的自主学习能力 和合作精神，通过小组讨论和互动交 流，激发学生的学习热情和创造力。
课程中重点强调了语法、词汇和语篇 三个层面的改错技巧，并通过实际操 作练习，提高了学生的实际操作能力 和语言敏感度。
学生提 问
部分学生对于某些特定语法点和词汇用法存在疑惑，通过提问得到了详细的解答和 指导。
再次通读全文，确 保修改无误。
改错实例分析
原文
I enjoy reading books, especially those written by Charles Dickens. ( 名词错误)
分析
修改
I enjoy reading the books, especially those written by Charles Dickens.
动词错误
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Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I jobs
would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman,
whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in cool
practice
1.Not only the students but also the teacher like
the film.
likes
2. When they came here, I will show them. come
3. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups
quite different from mine.
3. His father looks much more happier today.
4. So I grateful accepted the offer. gratefully
四、非谓语，细辨别
这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现 在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。
冠词连词常光顾．
一、动词形
1.动词的时态和语态错误.
高考链接1：
I didn't realize how right my parents are until I were
entered high school. (2018 全国2）
When summer came,they will invite their students comes
生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。 写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。
Proof Reading 短文改错
朱伟莲
What’s the main trouble when correcting a composition?
1. 看不出句子有错。
2. 看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正。
3. 知道改正句子错误的地方, 但答案不正确。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
短文改错设错的基本原则
短文改错题设错为：多一个词(约1题)、少一个词(约1题)、错一个词(约8题)。
3.These machines look the same,but they are of
different kind. kinds
4. There are two girls from my course here and I
plan to make friend with them. friends
after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to was
help people in need.
测试点分布
词法
1、名词 2、动词 3、代词 4、冠词 5、介词 6、形容词、副词
句法 行文逻辑
近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表
考查内容 动 名 介 连 冠
2.But not all information are good to society.
is
3.非谓语动词 错误
高考链接:
As a kid,I loved to watching them,my parents would watch
not to let me.（2018全国卷2）
When summer comes,they will invite their students˄ to
Do you know the steps of correcting a composition?
改错步骤
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）
2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the grammar mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行 找错） 3. Read the passage again, check your answers. （检查核对，敲定终稿）
高考链接4：
2018全国1卷：All the football players on the
patient.
deal of time to read. (2009 陕西卷)
2．比较级的混用或误用. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables
early
together.(2017全国卷2）
solution
(1) 熟知形容词和副词的句法功能 .
not be served… Having
二、名词数
高考链接2：
Besides,they often get someful informations from
the Internet.（2017全国卷2）
information
If we go on a trip abroad,we can broaden our view
to pick the fresh vegetables!（2017 全国2）
2. 主、谓不一致的错误.
高考链接:
I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure
that the girl were all right. (2009 全国卷2) was
appeared in proof reading. • be sensitive to these kinds of mistakes
while correcting a composition.
设错方式？ 改错格式？
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你 同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I fifth
liked my English teacher too much. so/very
When I studied chemistry˄high school, I reconsidered
时间
词 词词 词 词
2015年 2016年 2017年 2018年 2019年
3 11 1 1 4 10 2 1 2 11 1 1 4 21 1 1 1 11 1 0
代 形容 数词 词词
副词
12 0
11 0
13 0
10 0
15 1
A Limerick
请先念一遍 咒语吧
动词形，名词数．
还要注意形和副． 非谓语，细辨别 代词格，细领悟 介词短语须关注． 习惯用法要记住． 句 逻子 辑成错分误多需分关析注．．行句文法逻辑
my goal or decided to be aind/oacttor. They were two
reasons
afonrdthe
decision.One
was
There that I was
amazing
at
amazed the fact that a sick person could feel much more better
三、还要注意形和副
１．形容词和副词的误用
高考链接3：
Dad and I were terrible .（2015全国卷2） terribly
I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly bcak to the hard
playground. （2019全国卷1） He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great
practice weather, fun, news,
information, advice
绝不可数名词
1.Don’t loseehqeuaiprmtse,nytou’ll be successful in time.
……
heart
2.I need some more informations.
information
(2) 理清短文中形容词和副词比较 等级的 关系 .
(3) 结合短文内容，准确使用形容词和副 词.
practice
1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. angrily
2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is clear
pick the fresh vegetables!（2017 全国2）
Solution
(1) 通读全文，搞清文中动词时态的主 旋律 .
(2) 结合语境，灵活运用时态形式.
(2) 仔细审查，主语管制 .
(3) 认真推敲，准确把握谓语与非谓语.
(4) 格外审视，主动语态与被动语态的 混用，尤其被动语态中分词的词形.
and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. (2016全国2卷k）nowledge
指名词单、复数形式及可数名词与不可 数名词的用法错误。
After supper,we would play card
games of all sort in the sitting room.