高中英语短文改错课件 公开课

解题步骤
1. 通读全文，掌握大意
2.整句理解，上下兼顾 3.复读全文，
检查验证
A
Limerick
动词形，名词数． 还要注意形和副． 代词格，细领悟 介词短语须关注． 请先念一遍“咒语” 吧 习惯用法要记住． 冠词连词常光顾．
还要注意形和副
高考链接：
Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another （2012 浙江卷 Unfortunately
We lived in a comfortably double- room with a big bath.(2012陕
comfortable
Practice practice
1. Some students may also save up for our college or future use . their
2. I was learning to express me in simple English. myself 3. I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 4. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.
五、介词短语须关注， 习惯用法要记住．
高考链接：
Two years before, I travelled to Brazil and I rented for a car.(2012 浙 江卷)
I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. with
高考链接2：
It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.
（2011新课标全国卷）
luggage
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks.(2011辽宁卷） week
everything
it
五、介词短语须关注， 习惯用法要记住．
1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。
2.介词的多用，漏用和误用 3.时间状语前有指示代词this, that或one, next,last等修饰时不用介词.
eg. He paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon
1. I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light. and 2. He will stay there one and two days. or 3. Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying. 4. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella. an
一、动词形
1.动词的时态和语态错误.
高考链接1：
However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday. (2011 全国） flew
Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.（2008 全国） needed
——Chairman Mao’s words
怎么改？？？？
His salary is paid by an hour. Lihua hit me on a head. He always has dinner at the table. The teacher said the earth ran around the sun.
四、 代词格，细领悟
1. 人称代词，反身代词，不定代词 2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误. 3. it作形主、形宾、指代时有缺漏 (make, find, think)或固定搭配.
高考链接4： With the help of Katia, a roommate of me… (2011 重庆卷） mine It was only when we did their chemistry project together our that I began to understand … (2010 辽宁卷） He found difficult to learn math well. it
高考短文改错的考察方式
Unnecessary word
1. I can go to home now.
Missing word 2. I like history of China.
∧
the Wrong word 3. I am fond at English. of
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误 的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并 在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面 写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 3. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。
一般以三种题型出现:增加,删除或修改。
设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑。
从错误比例上看，
2：1：7 或者 1：1：8：
多 缺 错
A
Limerick
动词形，名词数． 还要注意形和副． 代词格，细领悟 介词短语须关注． 请先念一遍“咒语” 吧 习惯用法要记住． 冠词连词常光顾．
复杂句子不放过.
Practice practice
1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. angrily 2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is clear quite different from mine. 3. His father looks much more happier today. 4. So I grateful accepted the offer. gratefully
Practice practice
1. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. at 2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill. 3. When a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .
2. 主谓不一致的错误.
高考链接:
I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国卷2) was
3. 非谓语动词 错误
高考链接:
I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷） buying I was really disappointing and about to leave when he disappointed walked out of a building. (2011陕西卷)
likes
4. I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules.
5. He used to getting up early to take physical exercise.
∨
exciting
get
二、名词数
指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。
七、复杂句子不放过
The smaller piece is that you want, right ? what It is known to us all, all efforts will be paid.
As
Practice makes perfect, that is very important for us . which
Practice practice
1.Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.
2. When they came here tomorrow, I will show come them. 3. They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. were
for 4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the
money. on
六 、冠词连词常光顾
１. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误．
２．连词but，and，or, so和although的逻 辑性用法错误． 高考链接６：
He was right here in the front of me. (2011陕西卷） I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor. and
How to do Proof-reading
短文改错
Class 7 Senior 2 Miss Zhou
In our everyday lives, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them,
and then we are still a good fellow.
五不改原则
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 单词拼写不改 . 大小写不改 . 词序不改 . 标点符号不改 . 原意不改.
考 查 目 标
1）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力 2）综合运用英语知识的能力 3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻 辑的能力
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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误 的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并 在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面 写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 3. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。
Practice practice
不可数名词
1.Don’t lose hearts, you’ll be successful in time. 2.I need some more informations.
heart
information
3.These machines look the same,but they are of different kind.
progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, information, advice ……
kinds
三、还要注意形和副
１．形容词和副词的误用 2．比较级和最高级的混用或误用.
高考链接3：
When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.（2011 浙江卷） slowly The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009陕西） faster