高中英语短文改错课件 公开课
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短文改错公开课PPT课件
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1-1 About one month after this photo was taken, I entered my second year of high school and bbecoame a new member of the school music club. 1-2 We can lie on the grass for a rest, or ssaitt by the lake listening to music.
1-5 The instructor kept repeating the words, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “TTuurrnning left!” 1-6 My dream school loookks like a big garden.
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1-7 We can choose between staying at home and ttaakkineg a trip. 1-8 Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are useindg for cooking. 1-9 One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, hhavaivneg our barbecue. 1-10 When summer comes, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables. 在pick前面加to 1-11 Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.
高中英语短文改错省公开课获奖课件市赛课比赛一等奖课件
word
1. I can go to home now.
Missing word 2. I like playing∧ piano. the
Wrong word 3. I am fond at English. of
四、 代词格，细领悟
1. 人称代词，物主代词,反身代词旳使用． 2. 代词指代旳人或事物前后不一致旳错误. 3. it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏 (make, find,
parents∧singing
and _d_a__n_c__e_ happily. § dancing
动词形
were
Practice makes perfect!
Homework
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July and August. We will travel for about two months but will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We have decided to camp because it does not spend as much as vacationing in hotel, but we had to plan carefully. I think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also some food for picnics. I'm
高中英语短文改错PPT课件
How to do Proof-reading
短文改错
考查目标
1）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力 2）综合运用英语知识的能力 3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的 能力
高考短文改错的考察方式
Unnecessary
word
1. I can go to home now.
Missing word 2. I like playing∧ piano. the
faster
practice
1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. angrily
2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is clear
quite different from mine.
三、还要注意形和副
１．形容词和副词的误用
2．比较级和最高级的混用或误用.
高考链接3：
When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and
gave it back.（2011 浙江卷）
slowly
The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009陕西）
从错误比例上看，
2：1：7 或者 1：1：8：
多 缺错
写在最后
经常不断地学习,你就什么都知道。你知道得越多,你就越有力量 Study Constantly, And You Will Know Everything. The More
You Know, The More Powerful You Will Be
短文改错
考查目标
1）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力 2）综合运用英语知识的能力 3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的 能力
高考短文改错的考察方式
Unnecessary
word
1. I can go to home now.
Missing word 2. I like playing∧ piano. the
faster
practice
1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. angrily
2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is clear
quite different from mine.
三、还要注意形和副
１．形容词和副词的误用
2．比较级和最高级的混用或误用.
高考链接3：
When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and
gave it back.（2011 浙江卷）
slowly
The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009陕西）
从错误比例上看，
2：1：7 或者 1：1：8：
多 缺错
写在最后
经常不断地学习,你就什么都知道。你知道得越多,你就越有力量 Study Constantly, And You Will Know Everything. The More
You Know, The More Powerful You Will Be
高中英语短文改错公开课课件
One of the questions are：Who will you go in times of trouble? (2021全国甲卷） is
解决方案
(1) 通读全文，搞清文中动词时态的主旋律 。 (2) 结合语境，灵活运用时态形式 。 (3) 认真推敲，准确把握主动与被动 。
单句模拟：
三、还要注意形和副
1. 修饰名词，作宾补及连系动词后用形容词； 2. 修饰动词，形容词，副词及整个句子时用副词； 3. 比较级和最高级的使用。
高考链接4：
One was that I was amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.
knowledge
单句模拟：
易考不可数名词
1.Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would
like to do.
2.I need some more informations.
information
3.The instructor kept repeating the
7 7 4755
代 冠介 词 词词
1 11 1 11 1 11 1 11 1 11 5 55
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .
（浏览全文，掌握大意） 2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.
home
to
college.(2016
解决方案
(1) 通读全文，搞清文中动词时态的主旋律 。 (2) 结合语境，灵活运用时态形式 。 (3) 认真推敲，准确把握主动与被动 。
单句模拟：
三、还要注意形和副
1. 修饰名词，作宾补及连系动词后用形容词； 2. 修饰动词，形容词，副词及整个句子时用副词； 3. 比较级和最高级的使用。
高考链接4：
One was that I was amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.
knowledge
单句模拟：
易考不可数名词
1.Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would
like to do.
2.I need some more informations.
information
3.The instructor kept repeating the
7 7 4755
代 冠介 词 词词
1 11 1 11 1 11 1 11 1 11 5 55
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .
（浏览全文，掌握大意） 2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.
home
to
college.(2016
高考英语短文改错公开课优质获奖课件
buy some furnitures.
information, advice
furniture
equpment……
5.We walked into the bar and ordered two coffee.
coffees
6.Three days journey made all of us tired.
3.It was raining heavily. Little Mary felt cold, so she stood closely to her mother.
close
2．比较级的混用或误用
6. I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. 7.This luggagleesiss much more heavier than that one.
their ours,
theirs
3 反身代词
myself, yourself, himself, herself, itself, ourselves, yourselves, themselves
4 指示代词 this, that, these, those, such, some
5 疑问代词
who, whom, whose, which, what, whoever, whichever, whatever
days'
III. 区分形和副 （搭配P1名, P词ar、t 2系, E动x.词1,用2,形3,容6词,7；） １.形/副混用 修饰动词、形容词、整个句ed quite perfectly.
perfect
《高中英语短文改错》PPT课件
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错误类型6
代词错误 1）代词四大类 2）反身代词
（myself/yourself/himself/herself /themselves/ourselves） 3）代词的单数和复数 4）多余的代词和少代词
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① If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.
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错误类型5
形容词和副词错误类 1) 系动词后用形容词
（be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/ 感官性动词 smell /feel） 2) 词性的误用 形容词修饰名词，副词修饰实义动词， 副词修饰形容词、副词、过去分词。
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① I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.
合运用英语的能力； 5.短文改错要从语法和逻辑的角度。
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误区诊断
错误顺序 错误类型
错误根源
1
代词
混淆人称
2
名词
忽视了名词的单复数
3
冠词 没弄清楚元音辅音字母开
头
4
介词 没弄清楚固定搭配的用法
4
误区诊断
错误顺序 错误类型
错误根源
5
连词
忽视了行文上的逻辑错误
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非谓语动词 没弄清主语与动作的关系
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连词
② My pronunciation was terribly.
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① I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.
（time是名词，要用形容词wonderful修饰） ② My pronunciation was terribly.
错误类型6
代词错误 1）代词四大类 2）反身代词
（myself/yourself/himself/herself /themselves/ourselves） 3）代词的单数和复数 4）多余的代词和少代词
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① If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.
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错误类型5
形容词和副词错误类 1) 系动词后用形容词
（be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/ 感官性动词 smell /feel） 2) 词性的误用 形容词修饰名词，副词修饰实义动词， 副词修饰形容词、副词、过去分词。
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① I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.
合运用英语的能力； 5.短文改错要从语法和逻辑的角度。
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误区诊断
错误顺序 错误类型
错误根源
1
代词
混淆人称
2
名词
忽视了名词的单复数
3
冠词 没弄清楚元音辅音字母开
头
4
介词 没弄清楚固定搭配的用法
4
误区诊断
错误顺序 错误类型
错误根源
5
连词
忽视了行文上的逻辑错误
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非谓语动词 没弄清主语与动作的关系
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连词
② My pronunciation was terribly.
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① I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.
（time是名词，要用形容词wonderful修饰） ② My pronunciation was terribly.
《高中英语短文改错》课件
Communications clearly
Proofreading and editing demonstration at a level of professionalism and attention to detail
Buildings credibility
Common types of errors in correcting short texts
Detailed descriptionInappropriate vocabulary meaning: Students may have chosen words that do not match the original meaning, resulting in a deviation in sentence meaning.Insufficient contextual understanding: Students may not fully understand the contextual context, resulting in a mismatch between the meaning of the sentence and the overall content.Chaotic logical relationships: Due to unclear logical relationships between sentences, readers may be confused about the overall meaning of the paragraph.
Regularly correcting errors can improve one's language skills and writing ability
高中英语短文改错讲解-高中精选 PPT课件 图文
1. 人称代词，物主代词的使用．
２．反身代词oneself 的使用．
３．关系代词的使用.
４.不定代词的使用．
５．Both, all, either, neither, none的使用.
6. Whose 和who’s，its和 it’s的区别．
高考链接４：
I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English
studies have been shown that global
warming has already become a very
s_e__r_i_o__u__s__l_y problem. The a__i_r_s__we breathe in is
serious
air
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getting dirtier and dirtier. M__u__c__h_ rare animals Many
the art to their teachings.
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七、连词常光顾
逻辑关系，包括并列连词 (and, but, or)、 状语从句（when/while等状语从句） 名词性从句（that, what等名词性从句） 定语从句（关系代词who、that、which、as，关系副词when，
where，why）
修改同桌写 的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句 中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出
该加的词。 删减：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的
词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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规范答题，否则不得分！
２．反身代词oneself 的使用．
３．关系代词的使用.
４.不定代词的使用．
５．Both, all, either, neither, none的使用.
6. Whose 和who’s，its和 it’s的区别．
高考链接４：
I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English
studies have been shown that global
warming has already become a very
s_e__r_i_o__u__s__l_y problem. The a__i_r_s__we breathe in is
serious
air
27
getting dirtier and dirtier. M__u__c__h_ rare animals Many
the art to their teachings.
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七、连词常光顾
逻辑关系，包括并列连词 (and, but, or)、 状语从句（when/while等状语从句） 名词性从句（that, what等名词性从句） 定语从句（关系代词who、that、which、as，关系副词when，
where，why）
修改同桌写 的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句 中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出
该加的词。 删减：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的
词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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规范答题，否则不得分！
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七、复杂句子不放过
The smaller piece is that you want, right ? what It is known to us all, all efforts will be paid.
As
Practice makes perfect, that is very important for us . which
四、 代词格，细领悟
1. 人称代词，反身代词，不定代词 2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误. 3. it作形主、形宾、指代时有缺漏 (make, find, think)或固定搭配.
高考链接4： With the help of Katia, a roommate of me… (2011 重庆卷） mine It was only when we did their chemistry project together our that I began to understand … (2010 辽宁卷） He found difficult to learn math well. it
everything
it
五、介词短语须关注， 习惯用法要记住．
1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。
2.介词的多用，漏用和误用 3.时间状语前有指示代词this, that或one, next,last等修饰时不用介词.
eg. He paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon
How to do Proof-reading
短文改错
Class 7 Senior 2 Miss Zhou
In our everyday lives, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them,
and then we are still a good fellow.
Practice practice
1. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. at 2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill. 3. When a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .
一般以三种题型出现:增加,删除或修改。
设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑。
从错误比例上看，
2：1：7 或者 1：1：8：
多 缺 错
A
Limerick
动词形，名词数． 还要注意形和副． 代词格，细领悟 介词短语须关注． 请先念一遍“咒语” 吧 习惯用法要记住． 冠词连词常光顾．
复杂句子不放过.
Practice practice
1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. angrily 2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is clear quite different from mine. 3. His father looks much more happier today. 4. So I grateful accepted the offer. gratefully
Practice practice
1.Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.
2. When they came here tomorrow, I will show come them. 3. They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. were
五不改原则
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 单词拼写不改 . 大小写不改 . 词序不改 . 标点符号不改 . 原意不改.
考 查 目 标
1）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力 2）综合运用英语知识的能力 3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻 辑的能力
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误 的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并 在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面 写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 3. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。
progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, information, advice ……
kinds
三、还要注意形和副
１．形容词和副词的误用 2．比较级和最高级的混用或误用.
高考链接3：
When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.（2011 浙江卷） slowly The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009陕西） faster
for 4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the
money. on
六 、冠词连词常光顾
１. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误．
２．连词but，and，or, so和although的逻 辑性用法错误． 高考链接６：
He was right here in the front of me. (2011陕西卷） I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor. and
1. I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light. and 2. He will stay there one and two days. or 3. Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying. 4. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella. an
高考链接2：
It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.
（2011新课标全国卷）
luggage
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks.(2011辽宁卷） week
likes
4. I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules.
5. He used to getting up early to take physical exercise.
∨
exciting
get
二、名词数
指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。
五、介词短语须关注， 习惯用法要记住．
高考链接：
Two years before, I travelled to Brazil and I rented for a car.(2012 浙 江卷)
I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. with
解题步骤
1. 通读全文，掌握大意
2.整句理解，上下兼顾 3.复读全文，
检查验证
A
Limerick
动词形，名词数． 还要注意形和副． 代词格，细领悟 介词短语须关注． 请先念一遍“咒语” 吧 习惯用法要记住． 冠词连词常光顾．
——Chairman Mao’s words
怎么改？？？？
His salary is paid by an hour. Lihua hit me on a head. He always has dinner at the table. The teacher said the earth ran around the sun.
还要注意形和副
高考链接：
Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another （2012 浙江卷 Unfortunately
We lived in a comfortably double- room with a big bath.(2012陕
comfortable
2. 主谓不一致的错误.
高考链接:
I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国卷2) was
3. 非谓语动词 错误
高考链接:
I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷） buying I was really disappointing and about to leave when he disappointed walked out of a building. (2011陕西卷)
高考短文改错的考察方式